Kab Pyaar Ho Jaaye - Page 10

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part 1-

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Hey guys! I'm REALLY sorry for the late update! I promise this won't ever happen again! Actually, my computer crashed and I lost everything! That's why I made this part long! Just for you guys! Thank you my readers and silent readers for the comments and pressing the like button! Here is Part 2! I hope you like it! Don't forget to press the like button and comment!!

Part 2

Someone rings the doorbell at their house. Samrat goes and opens the door..He is shocked when he sees..BENJI at the door.

Samrat-Benji?? Tum yaha? Tum toh Goa gaye thee..

Benji-Haa dude! Aur bohot maza aaya! Mai kal hi aagaya. Mai yaha isiliye aaya hu kyun ke mujhe tumse bohot zaruri baath karna hai.

Samrat-Aacha! Teek hai! Aao andar.

Benji-Thanks dude! So what's up? Tu kaisa hai?

Samrat-Mai teek hu yaar, tu bata?

Benji-Mai bilkul teek hu! College ke liye bohot tayar hu! Itna maza aayega!

Samrat-Haa yaar! Yeh baath toh tu sahi bola.

Benji-I want to find the girl of my dreams!

Samrat-Tumhari sapno jaise larki kaise hai?

Benji-Woh khoobsurat hai aur bohot hi achi hai.

Samrat-Dude, tum apni sapno ki larki koh kaha dundo ge?

Benji-College mai!

Samrat-Yaar mujhe lagta hai ke tumhe yaad nahi hai ke hamara college sirf larko ka hai. No larkia..

Benji-Oh haa yaar yaad aaya! Darn it! Par mujhe woh zarur milengi. Mera dil kehta hai.

Benji closes his eyes and sees the girl of his dreams (She is Diya, but he doesn't know her)

Samrat-I hope you find her too yaar!

Suhaani comes downstairs.

Suhaani-Bhai, kya meri dost aayi?

Samrat-Nahi Suhaani abhi tak toh nahi.

The doorbell rings and Samrat runs to open the door and Avni is at the door.

Samrat-Hi, sorry maine aapko pehchana nahi..tum kaun ho?

Avni-Sorry, mera naam Avni Gupta hai aur mai Suhaani ki dost hu. Kya mai Suhaani se milsak thi hu?

Samrat-Ooh, andar aao. Woh tumhara intezar kar rahi hai.

Avni comes inside.

Samrat-Suhaani! Avni tumse milne aayi hai.

Suhaani-AVNI!

Suhaani hugs her best friend, Avni.

Avni-Hi! Kya kar rahi thi tu?

Suhaani-Meri choro, tum batao!

Avni-Mai Galaxy Mall ja ra hi hu apni dono behenei ke saath! Tum bhi chalo na mere saath!

Suhaani-That's a great idea!

Suhaani- Mai abhi bhai se puchti hu

Suhaani goes to her brother.

Suhaani- Bhai, Avni Galaxy Mall ja ra hi hai apni behenei ke saath, kya mai ja sak ti hu?

Samrat- Haa meri pyari behen, jao have fun!

Suhaani- Thanks bhai!!

Suhaani leaves to Galaxy Mall with Avni.

Samrat turns around and talks to Benji.

Samrat-Hey dude, toh tum mujhse kya kehna chate thee?

Benji-Dude mai tumhe baad mai bolunga.

Samrat-Teek hai kya tumhe Galaxy Mall jaana hai?

Benji-Sure! Chalo!

Samrat-Ok! Let's go!

Samrat and Benji both leave and go to Galaxy Mall.

On the other side at Pritvi, Sameer, and Varun's house. They all sat in Pritivi's car and are about to leave to Galaxy Mall.

Pritivi-Chalo guys! Jaldi karo!

Sameer-Hey bhaiya, kya hum meri gadi lekar ja sak thee hai?? Please!

Pritvi-Sameer hame der ho rahi hai! Ham tumhari gadi kal lekar jaayenge.

Sameer-Bhaiya please! Meri gadi bohot hi amazing hai!

Varun-Pritvi bhaiya aur Sameer bhaiya chalo na let's go.

Pritvi turns the keys and starts the car, but it doesn't start..

Sameer-Kya hua bhaiya? Aapke plan par paani phergaya! Haha! Kya aab hum sab meri gadi lekar ja sak thee hai??

Pritvi-Acha teek hai. Let's go in your car.

Sameer-YESS! Chalo mai tum sab ko Galaxy Mall lekar jata hu meri style mai.

Pritvi-Sameer, tu gadi nahi chalaenga. Mai gadi chalaunga! Ok?

Sameer-Teek hai..

Everyone sits in Sameer's car and leave.

While Pritvi was driving..

Pritvi-Tum dono itna waqt maat laga na. Maa hum sab ka intezar kar ra hi hai.

Sameer-Teek hai bhaiya. Aap fikar maat karo.

Varun-Haa bhaiya. Mujhe bhi ghar jaldhi jaana hai.

Twenty minutes later they reach Galaxy Mall.

Pritvi-Mai tum dono ko entrance par chor deta hu. Mai gadi park karke aata hu.

Sameer-No problem. Chal chotu

Varun-Sameer bhaiya, please don't call me chotu.

Sameer-Haha teek hai chotu uff Varun.

Sameer and Varun go inside the mall and Pritvi is in the parking lot.

Other side Damini, Avni, Roshni, Suhaani just reached the mall in Damini's car.

Suhaani-Thank you so much Damini for bringing me with you to Galaxy Mall.

Damini-Anytime! Mai gadi park karke aati hu.

Roshni-Bye Damini Di! Come soon!

Damini-Haha ok bye Rosh!

Damini is in the parking lot trying to find a parking space.

Damini-Woh reah! Sirf ek parking jaga bachi hai.

Damini speeds and goes to the empty parking space.

All of a sudden, on Damini's way to the parking spot Pritvi comes and they almost get in a car accident.

Damini-Aare! Andhe ho kya?? Dikta nahi hai! Meri gadi koh kuch ho jata toh?? Yeh meri parking space hai!

Pritvi-Dekho,yeh jaga meri hai.

Damini-Aacha???

Damini and Pritvi get down from their cars.

Pritvi-Tum samashte kya ho aapne aap ko??

Damini-Tum mujhe jaante nahi ho!

Pritvi-Haa aur mai jaana bhi nahi chata hu.

Damini-Tumhe tameez nahi hai.

Damini turns to leave.

Pritvi-Drive karna nahi aata hai. Pata nahi yeh logo ko license kaise mil jata hai?

Damini turns around and looks at Pritvi.

Damini-Excuse me? Tum aapne aap ko phele deko! Tum toh andhe ho!

Damini and Pritvi walk face to face and they have their hands on their hips.

Pritvi-Dekho mai ek larki se aur kya expect kar sak tha hu.

Damini-Aae! What do you mean by "ek larki se aur kya expect kar sak tha hu."

Pritvi-Tum ek larki ho.

Damini-Acha??Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ki mai ek larki hu! Thanks for telling me! (sarcastic) What's your point??

Pritvi-Mera mu maat kulao.

Damini-Whatever ugh! I hate guys like you!

Pritvi-Aur mai tum jaisi larkia se nafarat karta hu! Just take the parking space. You can have it.

Damini-Mujhe tumhari meherbani ki koi zarurat nahi hai! I'll find another one.

Pritvi-Dekho, mai ek gentleman hu. Yaha tamasha maat karo!

Damini-Ooh really? Aab tum mujhe sikaoge!

Pritvi-Agar zarurat parhi toh phir mai karunga.

Damini angrily turns around and she slips in a puddle of water! She's about to fall when Pritvi comes and she holds on to his arm. They look in each other's eyes and wind starts to blow their hair. They keep staring into each other's eyes. They are looking deep in each other's eyes for a few seconds and then a car behind them starts horning and they break the eyelock.

Damini-Thank you.

Pritvi-You're welcome.

Pritvi and Damini leave.

On the other side Nupur, Armaan, and Gunjan enter Galaxy Mall.

Nupur-By god!!!! Yeh mall itna bara hai.

Gunjan-Di, please jaldhi karna

Nupur-By god, Gunjan, shopping ko rush nahi kar sak thee hai.

Armaan-Nupur, tumhari dost kaha hai?

Nupur-Patha nahi. Mai usko phone karti hu.

Gunjan-Di usko please jaldhi phone karna. Aapko New Year Party ke liye kya lena hai?

Nupur-By god Gunjan. Mujhe pata nahi ke mujhe kya lena hai, par mujhe sabse khoobsurat lagna hai!

Armaan-Nupur, don't worry tum sabse zyada khoobsurat lago gi. Aab jao aur tumhari dost ko phone karo.

Nupur-Ok!

Nupur goes and calls Roshni. As she is talking on the phone, she bumps into a guy and her cell phone falls to the ground. She starts looking for it since she can't see it.

Nupur-Oh no! Mera phone kaha gaya?? Aab mai Roshni koh phone kaise karungi??

On the other side Riddhima, Adhiraj, Mayank, and Diya enter Galaxy Mall.

Riddhima-Diya, chalo lets go to that store. Vaha par ek bohot bari sale hai!

Diya-That sounds like a good idea! Chalo!

Adhiraj slips on Nupur's phone and picks it up.

Adhiraj-Yeh kiska phone hai?

Mayank-Pata nahi par joh koi bhi ho vo yeh phone ko bohot dund ra hoga.

Adhiraj-Haa bhaiya yeh baath toh sahi hai.

Mayank-Mai abhi jaakar yeh phone ko lost and found mai rak kar aata hu.

Adhiraj-Teek hai bhaiya mai Riddhima ke saath jaata hu.

Mayank-Teek hai. Bye!

Mayank leaves and goes to the lost and found. Nupur is right in front of him in line. Mayank was standing and waiting in line for half an hour. His brother, Adhiraj, kept calling him over and over again.

Mayank-Excuse me.

Nupur-Kya hai?!

Mayank-Kya aap jaldhi kar sak thi hai please? Meri behen aur mera bhai mera intezar kar rahe hai.

Nupur-Dekho mai apna phone dund rahi hu! Jab mujhe mera phone mil jayenga, toh phir mai jaongi. Varna mai yaha hei intezar karungi!

Mayank-Ajeeb aurat ho tum!! Can't you just wait at the side for a minute! Mere peche bhi aur logo hai!

Nupur-listen mujhe mera phone chahiye! Abhi!! Isi waqt! Samje?? Aur mai tumhari tarah bhuddhu nahi hu!

Mayank-ooh really?? Tum samajti kya ho aapna aap ko?

Nupur- mai tumse zyada smart hu!

Mayank-Acha?? Shakal dekhi hai tumhari?

Nupur-By god! Meri shakal tumse aachi hai!

Mayank-Haha mujhe nahi lagta hai..

Nupur-Mere paas abhi waqt nahi hai, par agar hota toh mai tumhe nahi chorti!

Mayank-teek hai...actually acha hai. Kam se kam mujhe tumhari bakwass toh nahi suni paregi!

Nupur-tum chup raho varna..

Mayank-Varna kya??

Nupur-Mai police ko bulakar tumhe iss mall se nikal dungi!

Mayank-Tum mai inti takat hai??

Nupur-Mou baand rakho!

Mayank gets in front of her in line and puts her cell phone down on the table.

Mayank-Yeh phone mujhe abhi neche mila.

Nupur-By god! Yeh toh mera cell phone hai!!

Mayank-Really?? Toh phir mai tumhe nahi dunga!

Nupur-Kyu? Please give me my phone!

Mayank-Phele tum mujhse mafhi maango..

Nupur-Dekho please mujhe mera phone dedo!

Mayank-Teek hai. Yeh lo.

Mayank gives the phone to Nupur and it slips from her hand and falls to the floor. Mayank and Nupur both bend down to pick it up and they hit each other's heads.

Nupur-Ouch!

Mayank-Ouch!

They look up at each other and stare in each other's eyes. Nupur's hair starts to flow and Mayank holds the hair that's bothering her and puts it around her ear. She looks at him and he looks at her. Then Mayank stands up and leaves.

Nupur-Ajeeb larka hai. Par mujhe kya hai, mujhe mera phone mil gaya! Ab mai Roshni koh phone karungi.

Nupur calls Roshni.

Roshni-Hi

Nupur-Hey Roshni! Mai Nupur bol ra hi hu.

Roshni-Nupur, tu kaha hai??

Nupur-Mai lost and found ke paas hu. Tu kaha hai?

Roshni-Mai food court ke paas hu. Jaldhi aajao.

Nupur-By god Roshni, mai abhi aati hu.

Roshni-Ok! Bye!

Nupur-bye!

Nupur hangs up the phone and calls her brother Armaan.

Armaan-Hello.

Nupur-Bhaiya, mai Nupur bol ra hi hu.

Armaan-Nupur! Tum kaha ho??

Nupur-Bhaiya mai food court ke paas hu, aap Gunjan ke saath mujhe vaha milo.

Armaan-Teek hai mai aur Gunjan aate hai.

Nupur-Great! See ya!

Armaan-Haha chal bye.

Nupur hangs up and goes straight to the food court to meet Roshni and her siblings.

On the other side, Samrat and Benji enter Galaxy Mall.

Samrat-Hey dude, tumhe kaunse store mai jaana hai?

Benji-Koi bhi. You choose.

Samrat-Teek hai. Let's go here.

Benji-Chalo!

Samrat and Benji walk into a store and see Adhiraj and Sameer talking.

Samrat-Aare! Sameer??

Sameer-Hey dude! Kaisa hai tu?

Samrat-Mai bilkul teek hu! Tu kaisa hai?? Bohot time baad ham mile!

Sameer-Haa yaar!

Samrat-Tu yaha kya kar raha hai?

Sameer-Mai New Year Party ke liye kapre lehraha hu.

Samrat-Me too! Tumhe kuch mila?

Sameer-Itna bohot nahi, par mai abhi bhi dundra ha hu.

Samrat-Acha!

Adhiraj-Sameer, tumhe konse color ka suit chahiye?

Sameer-Black. Ooh Adhiraj I want you to meet my friend Samrat. Samrat, yeh hai mera dost Adhiraj. Aur Adhiraj, yeh hai mera dost Samrat.

Sameer-Adhiraj, Samrat toh basketball ka star hai!

Samrat-Aww dude thanks for the compliment!

Adhiraj-Well, mai bhi basketball acha kelta hu.

Samrat-Shayad, par mai bohot hi acha hu. Mai apne high school ka number one hu!

Adhiraj-Teek hai, jab college shuru ho jayega toh phir ham dono kelenge.

Samrat-You're on!

Sameer-Nice guys! I can't wait for college to start. Sorry Adhiraj, par mujhe lagta hai ki Samrat jeetega.

Adhiraj gets really mad. He doesn't like Samrat.

Samrat-Haha thanks Sameer!

Benji-Hi guys! Mera naam Benji hai! Nice to meet all of you!

Samrat-Yes guys! Benji is my best friend!

Benji-Awh thanks dude.

Samrat-Aacha well I'll see you all later. Bye!

Sameer-Hey dude, mera kaam yaha katam ho gaya. I have to go to my brothers.

Adhiraj-...(he is rolling his eyes and ignoring Samrat)

Samrat leaves with Benji and go to another store.

Adhiraj-Samrat, you just wait and watch what happens..

Other side, Damini, Avni, Roshni, and Suhaani are walking into a store.

Damini-Guess what happened while I was parking my car in the parking lot??

Avni-Kya hua di?

Damini-Mujhe ek larka mila!

Roshni-LARKA?? Wow! Woh dikne mai kaisa tha?

Damini-Rosh! Woh bohot hi arrogant tha!

Roshni-Aacha...par woh dikne mai kaisa tha?

Damini-ummm acha tha, par woh arrogant tha!

Roshni-Awww, usne kya kiya?

Damini-Usne meri parking space cheenliya! We almost got in an accident! Aur phir usko laga ke MERI galthi thi! UGH!

Roshni-Uska naam kya tha?

Damini-Mujhe nahi pata hai!

Roshni-kya? Aapne pucha bhi nahi.

Damini-Nahi! Mujhe usme koi diljasbhi nahi hai!

Avni-Haa di, par aapko uska naam toh puchna chahiye tha.

Damini-kyu?? I hope I never see him again!

Avni-I hope so too!

Roshni-Par di, mujhe lagta hai ki woh apko phir se milenga.

Suhaani-Haa Damini, mujhe bhi lagta hai.

Damini-I hope not..

Hi guys...here ends my second part! I hope you like it! Sorry for the late update! Don't forget to comment! Kya Damini Pritvi se dobara milengi?? Kya Nupur Mayank ke bareme sochegi?? Kya Pritvi aur Damini ke beech mai pyaar ho jaayega??Kya hoga Food Court par?? Kya karega Adhiraj Samrat koh?? Kya hoga New Year party par?? Jaane ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka!

~Alisha~

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sorry for the Short comeent
It was awsum
Loved it.

superb .......thanks for the pm.........cont soon

amazing part loved it plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm