jannat jahaan... 'mayur ss'...

okk guys.. i know you all wanna kill me... coz i m not updating my ff's regularly and mein naye banaati jaa rhi hoon.... and especial thanx to adi_gupta jisne mujhe encourage kiya mere doosre naye ff mein mujhe "idea ki mahaarani" kehkar... thnx adii .. aur yeh padkar mene socha ki jo concept mere dimaag mein bahut dino se hai usse post kar hi deti hoo,,

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ohk.. so here goes one more ff on mayank and nupur..

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the story is sumwat lyk this...

mayank and nupur... the best couple ever... made for each other lyk. school mein saath the... college mein saath saath pade... girl frnd - boy frnd bane..... love shove hua....

dono ek doosre se completely different hai..... jahaan mayank is rude, aggressive, dangerous, ... wahi nupur is calm, quite, sensitive....

inki story kuch iss tarah hai..

mayank ke gusse se duniya mein koi nahi bach sakta.... ek baaar usse gussa aa gya to samjho "gyi bhens paani mein"... aur uske punishments to itne strict hote hai ki kya bataaya jaaye..... yeh sach hai ki mayank is tooo rude , usse smile karte huye aaj tak kisee ne nhi dekha... haan dekhaa to hai but sirf nupur ke saath jab wo rehtaa hai baaki to...... huh!!!😡

agar mayank ke gusse se koi bachaa hai to bas nupur.. (obviously exceptions are always there) aur agar kisi ko mayank ke gusse se koi bachaa sakta hai to sirf NUPUR....

but nupur ke saath hi yeh exception kyu?? reason number one, wo nupur se love karta hai... reason number two, nupur mayank se bahut hi alag dhang se deal karti hai...... over all mayank ki lyf hai nupur..... bachpan se aajtak nupur yeh karo, nupur wo karo, nupur plz, nupur samjho, and the most common "dekho nupur"...

college mein sab intki cute si nok chok ka bahut mazaaa lete hai... saath hi romance ka bhi..... log to itna shocked reh jaate hai jab mayank nupur ko manaata hai.... yes nupur naaraaz bhi hoti hai.. wo bhi bahut badaa waala naaraaz..... aur mayank ko usse manaane ke liye sau paapad bhi belne padte hai...... aur end mein wo maan bhi jaati hai....

mayank ki mom, usse to bas apne bete ki shaadi ka intezaar hai.... aur unhe nupur bahut pasand hai... mayank apni mom se bahut pyaar karta hai but usse yeh bhi pata hai ki wo adopted hai... dil ke ek kone mein usse iss baat ka dukh bhi hai..... haalaaki usse kabhi iss baat ka aihsaas nhi hone diya gya... but.. sach to sach hi hota hai....

in sab ke chalte mayankk aur nupur ek doosre ka sahaara bante hai..... mayank baahar se jitna strong dikhta hai wo andar se utnaa hi weak hai..... uss ke man ko keval ek hi janaa samajh saktaa hai NUPUR....

mayank ki life mein nupur ki bahut aihmeeyat hai .. yeh to aap sabki pataa chal hi gya hogaa... but koi bhi story ek twist ke binaa to aage nahi bad sakti na.. mayank aur nupur ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hai...... mayank to kuch zyaada hi pyaar karta hai.....

but wat will happen jab mayank ko..... apne issi pyaar ko..... uss nupur ko jisse wo itna zyaada pyaar karta hai ki apni jaan bhi de sakta hai............. uss nupur ki jaan leni hogi...... usse maarna hoga...... kese maaregaa wo apni nupur ko...... kese........ nupur saamne ro rhi hai..... aur usse nupur ko maarna hai..... uske haath mein pistol hai..... kese goli chalaa paayega mayank,,,,,, kese..... kya wo usse maar paayegaa....?????

yehi sab hogaa iss ff mein..... kese, kya, kyu, kab, kisliye......... sab ke jawaab jald hi mill jaayengee aapko.......

yeh ek ss hai aur iske keval fiva parts honge.... plz comment/critisise.......

PART - 1

oHK guys i updated finally...... the section B........scroll down...........

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Section A

iin the college......

mayank and nupur are walking in the corridor........

mayank held nupur's hand ..... and tighten his grip.....

nupur smiled at mayank.......

far away dia and benji were watching them......

b: dia,, abhi to inka jhagdaa hua tha aur abhi.......

d: dumbo...... mayank nupur ko humsehaa manaa leta hai na.......

cuming back to mayur

m: nupur aaj tum ghar chalna.........

n: thik hai mayank..... but aaj kch special hai kya?

m: nhii.... bas aise hi.....

n: thik hai.........

wen samrat cums.......

samrat is mayank's step brother...... but they both are more than brothers....... their bonding is awesome

s: hey bro..... wats up....

m: thik hoon sam...... aaj subah hi to mile the ghar pe yaad hai.......

s: yupp yaad hai......

tabhi sheena aati hai......

sh: samrat tum isse itne pyaar se baat kyu karte ho.......

s: sheena..... kyuki wo meraa bhai hai......

mayank aur nupur bhi wahi khade hai........

sh: oh...... but kahaan tum aur kahaan yeh.... yeh to kisi orphanage se tha na aur tumhaari mom ne isse adapt kiya.........

s: shut up sheena.....

sh: but sam mein sahi to keh rhi hoon......... aise logo ko acchi tarah se jaanti hoon.......yeh bahut mean hote hai....

n: kyu sheena tumne AISE logo pe phd ki hai kya?

sh: tum beech mein mat bolo miss out of fashion......

n: oh you shut up sense less creature......... aur jahaan tak mayank ki baat hai to uske liye hum sab hai yahaan pe..........

sh: samrat mujhe yakeen nhi hotaa tum kin type ke logo se contact rakhte.......

n: haan samrat tum kin kin type ke logo se contact rkhte ho.....

to which samrat giggled......

sh: yeh sab iss mayank ki wajah se ho rha hai....... mujhe tum humeshaa se hi pasand nhi the....

n: issi liye tum pehle mayank ke saath itna flirt karti thi?

sh: tabhi mujhe pataa nhi tha ki yeh sam ka step brother hai real nhi......

s: sheena stop it......

sh: kyu samrat? mein kuch jhoot to nhi bol rhi..... yeh tumhaara real brother nhi hai........

s: sheena......

samrat got aggressive and was going to hit her wen mayank stopped him.....

m: rehne do samrat......

s: but bhai.....

and mayank went from there....... he was really upset.,,,,,,,,,,,

sheena too went from there.......

s: nupur...... i m really sorry ..... yeh sheena humeshaa hi.......

n: koi baat nhi samrat........ i think mujhe mayank ke paas jaana chahiye....... wo bahut upset lag rha tha.......

s: hmm.........

nupur went from there ,,,,,,, she searched for him everywhere and then reached the terrace........ where he was sitting on the edge of the roof............. looking at the sky........

npur went to him and sat next to him......... she saw a tear on his cheek...... and put her hand on his sholder.......

m: nupur........ i am so bad na.......

n: kesi baatein kar rhe ho mayank.......

m: sab meri galti hai nupur........ har janaa maa ko aur sam ko sunaata hai...... meri wajah se........

n: nhi mayank........

m: haan nupur...... samrat ke frnds usse door chale jaate hai........... meri wajah se...... maa society functions mein nhi jaa paati kyuki wo mujhe allow nhi karte....... kyuki unhe meri caste nhi pataa hai........ (one more tear escaped his eyes)

nupur hugged him........

,n: mayank.......... tum khud ko kyu blame kar rhe ho?? samrat ke frnds? konse wo sheena?? by god mayank agar tumhaare saath rehne se sheena jese log samrat se door rehte hai then isse khushi ki baat aur koi ho hi nhi sakti....... aur maa...... wo to yahaan indian society ke functions mein nhi jaa paati na....... US mein to hum sab jaate hai na....... wahaan to koi rok tok nhi hai..... jabki wahaan bhi sab tumhaare baare mein jaante hai ki tum adapted ho....... to mere hone waale patidev international stock aissee local jagahon pe wese bhi nhi aana chahiye...... aur tum to international piece ho...... tum aisee choti choti jagahon pe jaao to yeh tumhaari izzat ke khilaaf hai........ aur haan..... meri bhi.....

mayank chuckled at her words.......

m: tumhe baatein ghumaanaa kitni acchi tarah aata hai na........

n: haan bahut acchi tarah.........

they laughed........

m: i love you nupur.........

n: i love you too.........

at mayank's house....

shilpa" arrey nupur beta....... aao na andar....

n: namastey aunty.......

and she entered..........

n: hmmm......... pizza banaaya hai aunty???

shilpa: haan beta....... lo tum bhi lo.......

and she served nupur,,,,,,,

n: yummy,,,,,,,,,,

wen mm fell on the ground and went unconcious.........

n: aunty,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

and all were around her......

they took her to the hospital.....

after sum tym,,

the doctor came out..

m: doctor..... maa ...... maa ko kya hua hai??

doc: dekhiye aapki mother bahut serious hai,,,,,,, unhe heart attack aaya tha...

to which mayank was just SHOCKED..... and samrat too.......

both were unable to say nything

n: par doctor aunty thik to ho jaayengi na...........

doc: abhi kuch kahaa nhi jaa sakta......

and the doctor went......

nupur was unable to see two sons crying for their momsi mom,,,,,,, but she too was crying.....

samrat went from there but mayank was still standing in front of her...... lost.......

n: mayank..... mayank sab thik ho jaayega..

she made him sit on the bench........ and started consoling him....................

n: mayank..................

and mayank started crying........ crying lyk anything...........

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part b

n: mayank yeh rone ka waqt nhi hai....... dekho dekho agar tum hi aise ro oge to maa ko kon sambhaaleggaa??? and samrat?? uska kya hoga???

mayank gained sum consiousness..........

m: samrat.... samrat kahaan hai???

he started looking for him......

wen samrat came running from the door....

sam: bhai... bhai hum maa ko US le jaayenge..... mene saari araangements kar di hai........ wo wo....... accha doctor... aur maa thik ho jaayegi.......

he was on the verge of crying................

wen the doctor arrivess........................

doc: shilpa sharma ke guardians mein kon hai??

m: jee..... jee mein.... kya baat hai doctor.??

doc: dekhiye we are really very sorry but hum patient ko nhi bachaa paaye......... she is no more........

the world stopped there....... the world started moving round and round.......... he fell on ground.....

sam: par abhi to.... abhi to aapne kahaa ki............. yeh sab kese???

samrat started crying....... badly.......

nupur: dr. aisaa kese ho sakta hai? abhi to aapne kaha......

doc: dekhiye mein kuch nhi kar sakta .. unka bp high ho gya and.....

sam: (started shouting) aise kese bp high ho ygya? aapke paas thi na maa..... maa........ kuch der ke liye nhi sambhaal paaye maa ko....... mein..... mein aap pe case kar doonga......... zaraa si der....... tumne meri maa ko maar daala................... maar daalaa.......

samrat caught the collar of the doc...... wen nupur came in between.......

n: samrat yeh kya kar rhe ho??? chodoo usse.......

sam: nupur tum beech mein mat aao...... issi ne..... issi ne maara hai meri maa ko....... issi ne.....

n: samrat........

the doc leaves..................

wen both samrats and nupurs attention went to mayank who was still....... both of them knew very well that maynak loved his mom lyk anything.......

n: mayank....... mayank............

and b4 mayank cud gain consiosness, a blunder took place............

a big blunder...........

a boom.......

a noise was made......

and a bullet came and hit samrat..........

sam: aahhhhhhhhhhhh......... (and he fell)

we see his shirt bcuming red........ and his eyes growing wider................ and he fell on the floor.........

nupur was shocked......... not able to bear so many shocks at a tym she was unable to understand anything...................

mayank was just too weak to understand nything...........

wat was happening?????

nupur looked at the direction of the bullet ....... no one...............

instead people gathered around them.......... and started shouting.......... and running..............

nupur was thinking wat to do? go to see mm or tace care of mayank or take samrat to the doc./////

finally she chose to take sam to doc.........

she started shouting......... "DOCTOR.,, DOCTOR........ SUMBODY HELP.........."

but no one was there to listen.........

where as mayank was just trying to get wat was happening..............

sumthing was weird ,,,,,,,, he was feeling it.............. sumthing wrong. sumthing unusual......... sumthing was goin to happen....... but wat?

NOW WAT??ab kya ho sakta hai? ab kya baaki hai? ab kya aur ho ga? yeh kaafi nhi hai kya?

puzzled in the above thots he was unable to react......... either cry, shout or anything........ he was puzzled....... PUZZLED....... PUZZLED..... PUZZLED........................................!@#!$#^%*&(

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ab kya baaki hai? kya hoga ab? kyu? kese? kab ? kahaan??????????????????? kya yeh jahaan kabhi mayank ke liye jannat ban paayega??????????????????????? jaanne ke liye padte rhiye........ JANNAT JAHAAN...............

part 2

as mayank was puzzled but nupur was not..... she called the doctor...

n: doctor isse isee........ (showing the do. samrat and making him know that he shud admit him)

doc: yeh.. yeh police case mein ismein kuch nhi kar sakta...... (he said all scared and ran from there)

soon the whole hospital was emptied.........

as the bullet was there still in samrats stomachh......

only 3 people were theree in the hospital............. samrat, mayank, nupur and mm's body......

nupur rushed to mayank/////

n: mayank..... mayank kuch karo...... samrat...... samrat ... (she said shaking him...)

m: samrat........ samrat......... OH MY GOD...... samrat......

nupur started crying badly, samrat was crying in pain......

wen the door of the corridor opened.......... with a man standing there............

it was none other than..........

DHRUV............. (ohk firstly this man was to be RV but since the dhruv was more likely to be a villian so i changed rv to dhruv)

dhruv: mayank sharma.................

m: tum.........

n: mayank yeh kon hai?

m: yeh......... yeh paagal hai nupur...... yeh paagal hai......

dhr: mein paagal nhi hoon...........

m: samrat............ (he again went to samrat) uth jaao samrat plz......

dhr: tch tch tch tch......... bechaara samrat....... kitna tadap rha hai na............ ek kaam karta ek goli aur maar deta hoon yahi mar jaayega............... (taking out his gun)

m: nhi...............(mayank shouted)

n: plz plz ............. humaari madad karo/////// (she was crying like nything)

dhr: ohhh............ aap....... nupur.......... mayank ki girl frnd.......... hmm accha hai accha hai.......... (he started moving towards nupur) aapse milke khushi huyi mujhe................... (he was touching her now........ on her face)

she hugged mayank who was next to her.........

m: isse haath bhi mat lagaana.....

dhr: ohhh.......... to tum rokege mujhe............ mujhe????? ranvijay ko............... dhruv ko aaj tak na koi rok paaya hai na rok paayega....... samjhe........

and he started moving round and round nupur............. looking her from up and down........ nupur started crying and getting scared..........

n: mayank yeh kya..............

and here samrat was unconsious now...................

m: dhruv...... kya chahte ho tum........... kyu mere saath aisaa kar rhe ho.......

n: mayank yeh sab kya ho rha hai.......

wen dhruv went from there....... as if rushing to sumwhere..

n: mayank yeh kon hai......... aur tum....... tum........... aur samrat......... samrat.......... samrat ko kya ho gya ...............

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to be edited........... pms later/////////