Thanks for liking n commenting 😳Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee mind blowinggggggggggggggggggg fantastic part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
thx alot for the pm
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Thanks for liking n commenting 😳Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee mind blowinggggggggggggggggggg fantastic part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
thx alot for the pm
hy!!
very very nice update... but ek request thi tumse.. please mayank ko thoda romantic to banao.. itba romantic weather hota hai unke confessiob mein to usebhi uss weather jitn romantic banao... please.. very very nace update...Originally posted by: ritu1618
@bold, thats so sweet of u to say 😳 Thanks sooooooo muchhhh for likinggggg it 🤗 Hope u like the coming up parts too 😳
Thanks for such a lovely comment 🤗😳Originally posted by: Kajenrsmecxi
Simply beautiful! LOL i love your witty humour that you reflect in AR's character/ loved all the romance with Mayur and AR awwwwww they are just toooooooo cute seriously, I love ur writing style and the way u show the story/ stories hehe PLease UPDATE SOOOON! oh ya sorry for the late reply yaarr.
Thanks a lot for checking it !! I hope u like the story too 😳Thanks for the pm sweety 😊. I will read the story first and then i will comment. I liked the concept.😃
Mayank ko weather jaise romantic banao?? 😆 Will try to make mr kados more romantic 😳
hy!!
very very nice update... but ek request thi tumse.. please mayank ko thoda romantic to banao.. itba romantic weather hota hai unke confessiob mein to usebhi uss weather jitn romantic banao... please.. very very nace update...
Originally posted by: urmila_18
no need to say thanks i meant it seriouslypls do update next part soon
Thanks (no thanks) !! Posting the next part now...Hope u like it
Part 23
*Nupur n Ridzi reach their room same time*
Nupur: Ridziiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😛 *excitedly as she is very happy today*
Ridzi: Nupurrrrrrr diiii 😛
Nupur-Ridzi: Nutssssssssssss *both wake up a sleeping Nuts*
Nuts: kya hai? 🥱 *gets up, rubbin her eyes* Tum dhono kaha ghum gaye thi… pura din… kaha kaha dhonda tum logo ko? Meri tho kishe ko phekar hi nai thi 🥺 *makes a grumpy face*
Nupur: arre sorry yaar, I had a very important meeting
Ridzi: n I had very important work
Nuts: important work?? Important meeting?? I get it very well now
Nupur-Ridzi: what did u get very well.....now? 😲
Nuts: Yehi ki kya kichdi pakk rahe hai.. 😉 *teases them*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
@Guy's Room
Kandy: Kichdi nai, yaha tho pura ka pura biryani pakk rahe hai.. 🥳
Mayank: Kandy *hugs him tightly from front side* I am sorry !!!! If I ever hurted your feelings by my rude words
Kandy: 😲 w..whh..whhat? u telling-----me-----sorry??
Ammy: Kandy mere yaar *hugs him tightly from back side* gale lag jaa…
Kandy: 😲 *is in between Mayank n Ammy n is about to faint* Chodo Chodo Mujhe *pushes them, stares at both of them, opens the door n runs out*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
@Girl's Room
*knock knock*
Nupur: Now whose come? (Thinks: May be Mayank??)
Ridzi: (Thinks: May be Arman?? Yeh ladka bhi na!!!)
Nuts: Bhoot hoga.. I am sure bhoot hoga? darvaza open math karna
Nupur: shhhhhh *opens door n sees Kandy*
Kandy: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *yelling* Bachao..bachao..
Ridzi: what happen to u? 😕
Kandy: Mayank n Ammy are gone nuts..
Nupur: Patha hai!
Kandy: they are trying to flirt with me!!! 😲 (2 + 2 = 22)
Ridzi: flirt with YOU? 😲
Nupur: (Thinks: Mayank ko mujmein aur Kandy mein farak nai dekhta??? 😕)
Ridzi: (Thinks: tabhi tho kehte hai..love is blind…jab farak dekai na de 🤔)
Kandy: I am sleeping here! *goes n sleeps on couch* Goooooooooood night
Nuts: Oye!!! ullu ka patta, get up n get out from here
Kandy: *fast asleep*
Nuts: Idiotttttttttt !!!
*girls also go to sleep*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
:::Next Day, Morning:::
*Ridzi searches Ammy in the full hotel - in his room, upar neeche, terrace, garden n every place but doesn't find him anywhere*
Ridzi: excuse me *to a waiter* Did u see Arman Malik from Room No 303?
Waiter: Yes, I hd seen him early morning, He asked me for a good doctor's address in Italy, He was looking sick
Ridzi: 😲 Sick?? What, what happen to him? *worriedly* Could u please..give me the address of the doctor..which u gave him??
Waiter: Yes Sure!! just a min, note it down *gives address*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Meanwhile..
Nupur: *searching for Mayank* Did u see Mayank? Mayank Sharma? *to recep*
Recep: Ya, Sir !!! has gone for a morning walk
Nupur: Okay… thank u *goes out too, borrows a cycle from a little boy n goes looking out for Mayank in the hotel-park area*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Ridzi: *never saw him this way before as he is always happy n smiling but not today. She gets really tensed n rushes to him* Arman, kk..kya hua? u were ok yesterday..what happen to u all of a sudden???
Ammy: I am fine.. 😉 *thumbs up!!! but doesn't look fine*
Ridzi: *takes him in to doctor. Doc says he has high temp n weakness..thats all!!*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Mayank: *turns to see where the sound is from n shocked to see, Nupur tumbling down* Nupurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr *for a sec his heart stops n he freezes!! Yells n runs to her*
Nupur: *lands on ground, injured her leg, its bleeding* aaaaaaa *her leg is stuck in cycle wheel*
Mayank: *goes to her, immediately removes her leg from the cycle wheel then lifts her up n takes her to a doctor*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Ammy: hachuuuuuu *sneezes*
Ridzi: barish mein kisne kaha hero ki tarha bhegne ko..I dont know tumhe humesha herogeri kyun karni hote hai..normal behave karo 😳
Ammy: I am...hero..hachuuu..hachuu..hachuu
Ridzi: Hmmm... I can see that
Ridzi: *gets more panic, shakes him* Arman Arman.. please mazak math karo..I am warning u.. I dont like all this.. I'll beat u!
Ammy: I am serious patient.. I am still alive
Ammy: NOOOOOO.. 😲
Ridzi: YESSS.. Sit down n have.. chup chap
Ammy: Nooooooo..Soup! Bimar ko aur bimar banaogi.. tum tho!!!! I dont want.. I DONT WANTTTTTT 😳
Ridzi: Natak math karo..
Ammy: why are u behaving soooo MUMMYISHH??
Ridzi: why are u beahaving soo CHILDISH??
Ammy: u are my girlfriend not mummy
Ridzi: Ok Ok whatever.. Open ur mouth *ready with a spoon to feed him soup*
Ammy: NO !!
Ridzi: Ok Say aaaaaahhhhhh
Ammy: I wont say aaaaaahhhh *he does ahh as in opens his mouth not realizing n she feeds him* this is cheatin..!
Ridzi: *looks at him seriously with a sad face*
Ammy: What??? *realizes that she is worried for him as she really cares for him* Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh *opens his mouth, Ridzi smiles n feeds him*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
*Mayank takes Nupur to a hospital. Doctor bandages her n suggest bed rest strictly n no walking for few hours. Mayank takes Nupur back to the hotel, her room*
Mayank: *sits beside her on bed, scratches his head, looking tensed*
Nupur: Mayank, nothing to worry..bass u be with me..all izz well 😉
Mayank: *gets up from bed n sits far away from her on sofa, starring at her, lil angry* I have no words left to say to u, how careless can u be? always? 😡
Nupur: arre, thats my childhood prob aur jo hua.. Ab ho gaya.. See, I am all fine now... 😛 just thoda feet is twisted
Mayank: thoda? U dont care for yourself! right? But I care for u n your life is not your life, Its our life.. why dont u understand? I Dont know why am I telling u all this because u are not gonna understand so I better shut up 😳
Nupur: ya.. exactly!!
Mayank: *raises eyebrow*
Nupur: No No Not like that !!! Mayank??
Mayank: NO! I am not talking to u, so dont try talking to me!!!
Nupur: Mayank *goes to keep her feet on ground*
Mayank: DONT MOVE! SIT RIGHT THERE! 😳 *yells at her*
Nupur: *sits back* but if I cant move n if we dont talk.. then suppose I want something.. how will i ask u??? 😕
Mayank: *thinks for a min then takes her dupatta n ties one end to her hand n other end to his hand n sits back on the sofa* Just pull this when u need anything.. *Nupur lies on bed while Mayank lies on couch closing eyes*
Nupur: *thinks to trouble him a bit @ masti mood. Pulls the dupatta*
Mayank: what?
Nupur: I am Thirsty! gimme water *like a kid*
Mayank: *pours water.. gives her!!! Closes eyes n sleeps again*
Nupur: *after a min. Pulls dupatta again*
Mayank: hmmm?
Nupur: I am Hungry!
Mayank: what u will have? I'll order
Nupur: Chocolates.. 😛
Mayank: *takes a choco box which was on table n gives her n turns n sleeps on couch again*
Nupur: *after 2 mins, pulls dupatta again*
Mayank: now what???
Nupur: I am Bored......!
Mayank: *holds his head n stares at her, throws her TV remote* watch..if ur bored! *angry*
Nupur: Nooo !! Lets play dumb sharaz?? U have to not talk much to me also 😉
Mayank: NO ! 😳
Nupur: Kadus !!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
@Girl's Room
Ammy: I am really very bored.. let's do something intresting??
Ammy: Nooo Mummy !! its only 8'o clock
Ridzi: Go to sleep or..or or... I will tell u a barbie doll story
Ammy: Story???? NOOOOOO PLEASE *closes his ears n sleeps*
Ridzi: Ok Listen, Once upon a time..there was a beautiful princess like me..
Ammy: I am not listening to u!!!
Ridzi: she fell in love with a not so handsome prince like u
Ammy: Oye.. Hello?
Ridzi: The Prince also loved her, this is what she thought but then one day she came to know that the prince never loved her n it was only her imagination that she thought n felt that the prince loved her!! The Princess broke down n..... 🥺
Ammy: Stop.. *feels lil guilty that he also actually doesn't love her n is just doing time-pass*
Ridzi: kya hua?
Ammy: u really love me??
Ridzi: *pretends to think then nods yes*
Ammy: how muchh??
Ridzi: *streches her arms* shoooooooooooooooooo muchhh !!!
Ammy: ok then *hugs her tight n drops her on bed. Looks at a lovingly* u are veryyyy...swe..hachuuuu
Ridzi: I know! I am! *pulls his cheeks*
*Ammy falls asleep on Ridzi's shoulder while She stays awake taking care of him*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
*Nupur feels really bored because Mayank is angry n sleeping*
Nupur: (Thinks: idea! 😛 lets do some acting! 😈) aaaaaaaaa...uuuucchhhhhhh 😭
Mayank: *gets up quickly n rushes to her* what happen?
Nupur: Its really Paininggggg me veryyy muchhh 😭 *pointing to her right leg*
Mayank: but u had hurt your left leg na.. How is right leg paining?
Nupur: aa..umm..*confused* haan, pain is travelling..here to there..🤔
Mayank: Are u sure u dint hurt your head too? 😳 *comes to know she is acting so goes n sleeps angrily*
Nupur: Mayank.. listen..*gets up from bed stubbornly n takes a step* aaaa...uchhh
Mayank: *eyes closed* I am not listening..not gonna fall for your natak *closes ears then hears a loud falling sound.. turns n sees Nupur fallen on ground* Nupurrrrr!! *lifts her up n puts her on bed* I told not to get up 😳
Nupur: I was feeling bored n tum bhi mujse baat nai karr rahe
Mayank: *looks down, lost expression* OK listen..Whats This.. (dumb-sharaz/sign language: keeps his hand on his chest)
Nupur: Main !!
Nupur: (sign language: Holds her hand)
Nupur: Tumse? got it got it.. Main tumse pyaar karta ho? 😉
Mayank: No! I will beat u if u try getting up again 😳
Nupur: *looks at him seriously n hugs him*
*Nupur falls asleep on Mayank's shoulder while He watches over her all night being awake*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
:::Early Morning:::
@Guy's Room
*Ammy wakes up n looks at Ridzi sitting in same position as last night*
Ridzi: how are u feeling now? *looks at him, worriedly..touches him to check fever*
Ammy: Tum... soyi nai?
Ridzi: kaise soti.. itna tension jo diya tumne mujhe
Ammy: tension?? Oh!! sorry *honestly*
Ridzi: I don't want sorry..
Ammy: *just starring at her* I am very sorry
Ridzi: Kyun...kya hua?
Ammy: for hurting u.. *he is feeling guilty seeing that Ridzi really loves him so seriously n he was just treating her as a time pass n playing with her feelings. Looks at her with a pinch of genuine love in his eyes*
❤️❤️❤️~Ho aaj kal tanha main kahan hoon, saath chalta koi
Uski hame aadat hone ki aadat ho gayi~❤️❤️❤️
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
@Girl's Room
*Nupur wakes up n finds Mayank still watching her, wide awake while she had a good sleep*
Nupur: u.. u are still awake, dint sleep?
Mayank: had to watch u
Nupur: me? As if I would get lost 😕
Mayank: anything can be expected from u so i could not take the risk of sleeping *hits her head lightly*
Nupur: *smiles to herself thinking that he cares for me soo much n I am so stupid that i did not trust him. Looks at him lovingly.*
❤️❤️❤️~Woh jo mila hai jab se uski sauhbat ho gayi
Ek zara masoom se dil ki aafat ho gai~❤️❤️❤️
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
:::Later in day:::
Nupur's leg is allright now n she can now move around!!! Ammy also all fit n fine!!!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
@Mayank
Mayank: *he keeps staring into space, Thinking of Nupur. Getting down the stairs n is walking in his own world n he is about to fall but manages himself n smiles to himself. Asks himself* whats happening to me? I was never like this. Kandy was right..love is filmy!!! Love n Mayank Sharma? *confused* I am in love with Nupur!!!
❤️❤️❤️~Sun le zara, sun le zara
Dil ne kaha, itna bas mujhe pata hai~❤️❤️❤️
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
@Ammy's Room
Ammy: *takes his cell n goes to images folder n sees a pic of Ridzi laughing... He had clicked that pic..while they were playing truth n dare!! Remembering that night, he also starts laughing thinking about Ridzi n is wondering why is he thinking about her? n why does he see her everywhere? Poor Guy is damn confused*
❤️❤️❤️~I am in love, I am in love
Tu hi bataa jaane kya mujhe hua hai~❤️❤️❤️
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
*Both girls are in a very good mood. Recollect the time spend with their respective partners n also think about every move made by the guys they love*
:::Night Time:::
❤️❤️❤️~Dil ka shehar tu hai, acchi khabar tu hai
Fursat ki hassi tu hai, jo bhi thi kami tu hai~❤️❤️❤️
Nuts: Arm Arm.. Its night but humien sab dekhta hai :p *teases RA..MN*
Kandy: love is Italy!!! 🥳
:::Late Night:::
*Ammy enters Girl's room thru the window n stares at Ridzi who is sleeping with Nupur n Nuts*
❤️❤️❤️~Jaaga na soya hoon main, musafir khoya hoon main
Kuch sarfira sa hoon main, budhu zara sa hoon main~❤️❤️❤️
*Ridzi gets up from her half sleep n sees Ammy in front of her*
Ridzi: 😲 Am *goes to shout but realizes Nupur n Nuts will wake up*
Ammy: Hiiiiiiiii !! *whispers*
Ridzi: why are u come here??? *whispers back*
Ammy: I just came to say Hiiii !!
Ridzi: to say Hiiii?? *looks at him with wide eyes*
Ammy: Acctually, got u something.. *gives her chocolates* n *gives her a rose*
Ridzi: *smiles* yeh kal bhi tho de sakhte??
Ammy: choclates would melt n rose would die !! n one more thing... *gives her a gift wrapped box*
Ridzi: *stares at him with big eyes recollecting the gift wrapped cockroach incident n as this is a lil bigger box she wonders "ismein koi cat ya dog ko wrap karrke nai laya hai isne??" Opens the box n to her surprize finds a pink saari*
Ammy: Wear this n come to the pool side *whispers*
Ridzi: what?? wear this saari?? Arman, mujhe saari peheni nai aati aur tum chahte ho ke main iss waqt..midnight.. saari pehen ke pool side aao??? Areeeee u madddddd??? *whispers*
Ammy: Obvio, Im mad !!! u knew it, right?? I'll be waiting for u near the pool side 😉
Ridzi: But...
Ammy: But i got one more gift for u
Ridzi: what??
Ammy: *kisses her on her cheeks* Come sooonnnn..I giv u to 10mins !! *goes to the window n jumps off*
Ridzi: Armannnnn?? 😲 *runs behind him to the window but he disappeared. Looks at the saari* 10mins??? 🤔
Nupur: *pretending to talk in sleep* jao jao, main permission dete ho !! aur dont worry, humne kuch nai suna
Ridzi: OMG Nupur di 😲
Nuts: Maine bhi nai kuch nai suna 😆 *giggles*
Ridzi: *blushs!!! Somehow wears the saari ulta seedha/weird way n goes to the pool side*
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Mayank: *comes n holds her from behind*
Nupur: *she smiles n breaths peacefully that he is here n dint leave her n go, turns n looks at him with tears. Touches his cheeks n hugs him* U scared me to death!!!
Mayank: I scared u?? 😕
Nupur: Mujhe laga u left me n went
Mayank: Nupur!!! Tum itne insecure kyun ho?? 😕
Nupur: main insecure nai ho..bass i don't want to loose u.. *says hyperly*
Mayank: shhhhh *makes her rest her head on his chest n calms her down..hugging her tightly*
❤️❤️❤️~Tu hai mera, tu hai mera
Kuch main jaanu na, itna bas mujhe pataa hai~❤️❤️❤️
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