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Part 18

@Next Day, Morning. Hotel Kingston, Girl's Room.

Nuts: Shayadh mere shaadi ka khayal..mann mein aaya ho..issliye Mere Aunty ne aaj humien lunch ke liye bolaya hai

Ridzi: kyaa?? 😕

Nupur: Aunty? tere aunty kaha se ah gaye? 😕

Nuts: arre wo Italy mein rehte hai...

Ridzi: wo feather wali aunty?

Nupur: feather wali?? 😕

Nuts: haan wo humesha hat pehenti hai jismein ek feather hota hai.. wohi aunty.. tum log mere sath chal rahe ho na? Tayyar ho jao! 😉

Ridzi: Okayyy! 😛

Nupur: Naii! Tum dhono jao... i am felling sick.. thoda feverish

Nuts: Kya hua tujhe achanak?

Ridzi: Fever? Ok, tho main bhi nai jaati... I'll stay with Nupur Di!! Nuts, tu jaa

Nuts: akele???? ek kam karte hai program cancel karr dete hai

Nupur: Oh No Gals... I am fine.. U both go! I can take care of myself but Nuts wont be able to take care of herself.. I am sure she will get lost if she goes alone so Ridzi, tum jao uske sath... 😊

Ridzi: are u sure?

Nupur: confident...lock karr dho

Nuts: Pakka?

Nupur: haan baba! freeze kiya jaye!

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

*Ridzi-Nuts dress up n leave to another place in Italy (where Nut's Aunty lives). While Nupur stays back in hotel as she wanted some alone time with herself*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Train (Ridzi-Nuts are in a train)

*After 2hrs covering some distance*

Nuts: Ridzi, mujhe washroom jana hai

Ridzi: Yaha? Washroom ? train mein?

Nuts: Haan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ridzi: Station aane de... waha ka Lo use karr lena

*station arrives. Nuts gets down n goes to the washroom*

Nuts: main bass yuh gayi aur yuh aayi

Ridzi: come soon!

*Ridzi looking at the watch n waiting for Nuts*


Nuts@Station *in the washroom*: jaldi karr... *looks at mirror* arre mera tho pura lipstick nikal gaya.. *takes lipstick n applies..then takes powder etc starts doing up her make up*

Ridzi@Train: Patha nai yeh Nuts ki baachi kaha reh gayi?

*Nuts gets out of the washroom but by the time she comes, train has almost started in slow motion..so she runs n gets into other compartment which was near to her in order not to miss the train...So, Ridzi doesn't see her n thinks Nuts missed the train*

Ridzi to herself: Oh noo... Nuts aise karenga.. patha tha! kya karo... let me also get down varna main kaha poch jaogi aur Nuts idhar reh jayengi *She gets down. Train leaves station n Nuts goes*

Ridzi @ Station *wipes her sweat thnking*: Bal bal bache! varna aaj tho ghum ho jaate *goes to the washroom to search Nuts, while Nuts is searching Ridzi in train*

@Train

Nuts *asks a man*: hello, aapne Ridzi ko dekha hai?
Man: What?
Nuts: u saw any girl?
Man: Ya, I saw many girls
Nuts: terko zyaadha samaj ah raha hai kya? Girl means.. a girl in red top..blue jeans?

Man: Ya ya.. she is in the next compartment

Nuts: thank u *She goes searching Ridzi in the next compartment*

Ridzi @ station *checks the full washroom for Nuts but doesn't find her, goes n starts searching her on station.. here n there.. but doesn't find her anywhere! full panic* Nutssssss... Nutsssssss!!! Where are u???? Oh No!! *holds her head*

Nuts @ train: Ridziiiiiii.. kahin uthar nai gayi.. yeh ladkiiiiiiiiii!!!!! kyun aapna dimag fukat mein use karte hai.. patha nai :S

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Meanwhile...

@Hotel Kingston..Girl's Room

Nupur reads a magazine, then watches tv..gets bored n offs tv n looks out of the window.. Roams the whole hotel..Specially around Mayank/Ammy's room.. looks at Mayank's room door up n down n thinks to herself:

"Yeh Mayank kaha chala gaya? varna idhar udhar mill jaata tha.. India wapis gaya??? Huh! MUJHE KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
*then twist her face n goes. Comes back to her room.. again switches on tv n switches it off... again looks out of window... TOTALLY BORED!

Nupur: mujhe Ridzi n Nuts ke sath jaana chaheye tha... fever bhi chala gaya.!🥱 *yawns* I AM GOING MAD ALONE *thinks for 2mins* SHOPPING!!!!!!!! 😛 *dimag ka batti jala* I'll go shopping shopping... n get something for Ridzi n Nuts too..superize them!!!.. but 😒 I dunno anything about this place/city... No Probs 😛 patha karr lenge... chotti bachi thodi na ho... as if I will get LOST! *goes gets ready n leaves hotel*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Train

Nuts: Patha nai where this girl*Ridzi* got Lost? 😕

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Station

Ridzi: Nutssss is losttttt.... Oh No *suddenly realizes* OMG! even I am acctually somewhat Lost? No No No... I am not lost!! I'll take a Taxi n go back to the hotel.. But Nuts?? I'll have to search her first..she will be somewhere around here... *goes out of station... searching in all stores/shops etc*

~ ~ ~ ~

Meanwhile...

@Nupur's Side

*Nupur takes a taxi n leaves the hotel... she sees a lane with many small small shops with attractive items... gets down n goes shopping there*

Nupur *finds a heart shaped cute pendent in a shop*: Wow, that's beautiful.. How much is this for?

Shop Man: 20$

Nupur: Whatt?? 20$ for such a small...little..itna chotu sa pendent? Look, I am new here but not that stupid.. 😡

Shop Man: Hey No, thats the original prize... we dont cheat! It's a special Italian Love pendent..

Nupur: Love pendent... where is Love in it..? just because its heart shaped? 😕

*Shop Man..takes the pendent n breaks the heart into two*

Nupur: Ouch! 😲

Shop Man: u keep this one piece of heart n give the other one to your beloved... this will remind u'll of each other n get u'll closer*

*when he says these words...for some unknown reasons... Mayank's face flashes front of Nupur's eyes*

Nupur *snaps out*: No No! I dont want this Love Pendent!!!!!!!!!!! give it to your wife! *walks out of the shop*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Ridzi's Side

*Ridzi looks for Nuts in many shops... searching for Nuts... she comes a far way away from the station to some unknown place... still looking n hoping that she finds Nuts*

Ridzi *gets tired n sits down on a bench*: "Damn it! phone? lemme phone Hotel n ask Nupur for help.. but what's the hotel's ph no 😕 ??? Should I go back to the hotel...? But I wont leave from here without Nuts 😕 *confused*

A lil boy comes selling some bells: Mam, would u like to buy this?

Ridzi: No! Go please *tensed*

Boy: Buy them.. It will help u get your true love..

Ridzi: What? Goo.. I dont want them nor I want any love

Boy: Pls Mam! if u would buy them... it would help me purchase food for my lil sis..

Ridzi: food...sis? Oh... Okay.. give me one bell! how much?

Boy: 20$

Ridzi: what...20$ for this bell?? Look, I will give u only 5$.. not more..

Boy: Pls Mam... My sis is hungry

Ridzi : Ghosh, yeh emotional attyachar karne pe kyun tula hai??? Buy it Ridzi...May be he is telling the truth... help him..May be Bhagwan will help u *She checks her purse.. has only 23$... but buys the bell for 20$.*

Boy: Thank u, Mam...May u get your true love. *goes*

Ridzi to herself: GOOD! bewakoof bana ke jo paise tha wo bhi le gaya... ab beth ghanti leke...ghanti baja ke betho! Hotel wapis jaane ke liye bhi paise nai..*gets up* Ek last try marte hai.. Nuts ko dhundne ko *goes more further to search Nuts*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

*Nupur finishes shopping, 10bags in hand... managing them but cant manage herself.. Almost about to fall but balances herself..calls for a Taxi/Cab*

Cabbie: where to?

Nupur: Hotel Kingston

Cabbie: Which one.. West one or East one?

Nupur: there are two.. Hotel Kingstons? Okay.. umm... this side one *points to her left direction*🤔

Cabbie: thats south? u mean east? 😕

Nupur: No acctually this side one..🤔 *points to her right direction.. confused herself*

Cabbie: west?? 😕

Nupur: ummm??? 😕 which one is haunted? 😕

Cabbie: Both!

Nupur: kyaaaa?? u mean they r acctually haunted? 😲 No, take me to west one... 🤔 no wait wait..east one.. 🤔 kash mera geography acha hota tho direction yaad rehta... anyways...akad bakad Bombay *points left-right-left-right n..* boo..*left*... ya west one.. 😛 *randomly chooses*

Cabbie: Okay!!

Nupur: Hope its the same Hotel.. 🤔

Cabbie: 😕 *starts driving*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

*Late Evening, Almost Night*

@Ridzi's Side

*Ridzi tired searching Nuts everywhere the whole day but didn't find her. She feels like crying: 😭

"Nuts, tu mill jaa... marr dalungi tujhe... *it starts raining* OMG, ishe ki kami thi... *runs back to the station for shelter.. then decides to go back to the hotel, finally*

Ridzi: Next train for Rome? *asks at a ticket counter*

Counter lady: It just left..

Ridzi: Ohh! when is the next one?

Counter Lady: In about an hour..

Ridzi: thanks *relived. Sits down, looking at the rain pouring heavily*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Nupur's Side

*Nupur too watching the rain from her cab/taxi window n singing: Rimjim Rimjim..Rumjum Rumjum.. bheegi bheegi ruth mein.. tum hum..hum tum...chalteeeee haiiiii 😍

Cabbie(taxi-wala): Mam, are u all right?

Nupur: Yupsss! *ans n conts singing* chalteee hai.....hoo chalte hai...ane wala koi tuffan hai bada!!! (Suddenly thinks to herself: Yeh kab se drive karr raha hai.. aate waqt tho itna time nai laga tha... jaate waqt kyun lag raha hai... east ka west tho nai ho gaya??? Am I going the wrong way??? 😕)

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Ridzi's side

*Ridzi waiting for her train at the station*

Announcement: *on the station loud speaker* All Trains have been cancelled due to heavy rains!

Ridzi: 😲 WHATTTTT?????

Announcement: Heavier showers predicted over the next 24hrs!

Ridzi: train cancelled?? *goes to the ticket counter* how can the trains get cancelled this way???? *fully irritated* when is the next train?

Counter Lady: Sorry Mam, u would have to wait 24hrs as all the trains have been cancelled.. for your own safety!

Ridzi: *just holds her head*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Nupur's Side

Cabbie: your destination... Hotel Kingston! 10$

Nupur *gets down looks at hotel*: OHHHHH NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! its not the one where I am staying 😕 Mine was the east one

Cabbie: 10$

Nupur: *goes to pay him 10$ but cant find her purse* my..purse?? *searches in cab n in all her hand n shopping bags but doesn't find it.. She remembers that she forgot it in a store* OH No... I think I forgot my purse in a store... I am really very sorry... u take me back to that same place.. then I will pay u..

Cabbie: Give me my money...

Nupur: Look, can u understand what I am saying???

Cabbie: No No No excuses please... I want my money.. give me my money

Nupur: I dont have any money.. I cant give u anything... u take me to Hotel Kingston east... I wil take from my friend n pay u

Cabbie: I dont trust.. I dont trust! Pay me my money now! or I shall call the cops 😡

Nupur: Hey... tu pagal hai kya... ya samaj nai ah raha tujhe? What I am saying... are u getting me?

Cabbie: Give me my money!

Nupur: *bangs her head* I will give u this dress, this shoes...*starts to remove things from her shopping bag* give your wife but please spare me the money... I really dont have

Cabbie: I dont want this dress..u keep it..give me money.. do u understand?

Nupur: kya ratho parrot jaise ek hi ratt laga ke rakha hai... give me my money..give me my monet *teases him irritatedly then looks here n there, takes all her bags n starts walking with speed*

Cabbie *follows her*: heyyy heyyy... where are u going.. u have to pay me... 10$... I call cops for u

Nupur *walking in the rain with all heavy bags..starts walking more fasttt...faster...managin all the bags... almost running...looks behind at cabbie n dishhhhhhhhhh...she falls flat on her face with all the bags on top of her*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Ridzi's Side

*Ridzi sitting at station.. 1 by 1 all people start vanishing.. very few people left. After sometime station is almost full empty.. no one except Ridzi all alone.. hardly 1 or 2 people here n there. She looks here n there..getting lil scared:

"darrne ki kya baat hai...? koi baat nai! yeh abroad hai Ridzi... safe hai! *looks at the Love-bell in her hand n remembers the lil boy's (from whom she purchased the bell earlier) words that with this bell..u will find ur true love. She smiles to herself n Ammy's face flashes over her mind*

Ridzi: 😲 NO NO! What am I thnkin..Stop it, Ridziiiiiiii! *brushes off Ammy's thoughts* Hope Nuts is fine wherever she is! umm I am hungry.. *checks her purse 3$* 3$ hai...shoul buy sum food?!!!.. *goes out of the station in the rain.. covering her head with her scarf.. searching for some food store*

*Its Pouring Rain.. Heavy showers.. non-stop!*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Nupur's Side

Nupur: ouchhhh *manages to get up jaise taise but injured her head n hand..due to fall*

Cabbie: are u okay? *asks her*

Nupur: ya, I am fine

Cabbie: efse te me the cho the ro jo mein see mei the no ke che fe reth.. *starts yelling at her in some weird language*

Nupur: kya bol raha hai?? same to u... tu bhi khuta.. kamina.. ek bechare ladki ki maddat karne ke bejai..cheek raha hai.. khuta gadha ka baccha.. ullu da patta.. *she also starts yelling at him in Hindi*

Cabbie: *gets more angry at her n starts to yell more* nefe..sethe..noo no..yepee YOU..NOW!!!!

*Nupur again manages her bags n herself n starts running from him..in heavy rains.. he follows her but she runs runs n runs n sum how manages to escape his eyes.....hiding in a dark corner. Cabbie searches her but as he doesn't find her, he goes away*

Nupur *wipes her sweat*: Oh.. chala gaya..finally! *she is all wet n head slightly bleeding* ouch! *holds her head*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Ridzi's Side

*Ridzi finds a small mini bar cum food joint... goes there n buys a burger. Sits on the bench n starts to have the burger*

Shopman comes n gives her a coke: your having plain burger so I thought.. u would be thirsty so..here u go *gives her coke*

Ridzi: Oh how thoughtful *sarcastic smile* thanks.. how much?

Shopman: free for u

Ridzi: (😲 not againnn!! why are all men's such jerks...????) No, thanks *gives back the coke*

Shopman: *opens coke can* have a sip!

*Ridzi gets up n starts to walk ahead.. there she sees a group of boys staring at her.. She feels awkward n walks more ahead from there... keeps on walking.. walking.. ! She feels somone is following her... she doesn't turn as she gets scared that it is one of all those jerks...! Her steps get more faster... n the person following her walks more faster too...Almost near her...! Ridzi breaks into tears*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Nupur's Side

*Nupur standing in dark corner*

Meow!!!!!!!!!!! Meow Meow!!!!!!!!

Nupur: OMG 😲 whose here... *she finds herself between many cats.. all wild cats start jumpin near her* aaaaaaa.......mummmmmmmmyyyyyyy..... *she takes all her bags n starts running in full speed... cats run behind her..* mummmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaa

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Ridzi: *running from the jerk*

N other side...

Nupur: *running from the wild cats*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Ridzi to herself: No, don't get scared..u are a strong girl... 3 months karate *marshal arts* sekha tha na... ab waqt ah gaya to use it...

*she turns n with full force punches the person who was following her without seeing his face*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

*Nupur is crying bitterly... running not looking ahead..drops all her bags etc.. n She dashes into a person... looks at his face... its Mayank*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

*Ridzi punches the person with full force without seeing his face again...n then she sees his face.... It's Ammy!*

Ridzi: 😲😲😲 Aa..a..Arman??

Ammy: *still in shock of the punches...standing straight without moving*

Ridzi: ARMANNNNNNN....😃 *feels a sense of relief n safety. Hugs Ammy tightlyyyyyy.....cryinggg... She was never sooo happy on seeing him*

Ammy: Rid-hi-ma??? *double shocked to himself*: pahele punch phir hug 😲 *hugs/holds her back*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Nupur looks at Mayank.. crying n hugs him tightly.. feeling the same sense of safety n security n happiness

Nupur: MAY...MAYANKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!! *she never took his name soo excitedly before this*

Mayank *shocked*: Nupur?????!!!!!! *hugs/holds her back tightly*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

*@This Side- Ammy Ridzi hugging.. @That side- Mayank Nupur hugging. So now lil song = their thought process*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Mayank hugging n dreaming: of Nupur

*Thinking of the first time they shake hands*

❤️❤️❤️~Hath mera thamlo...sath jab thak ho~❤️❤️❤️

*Thinks of Nupur's non-stop-bak-bak (talk-talk)... n feels like hearing this Nupur radio life long*

❤️❤️❤️~Baat kuch hoti rahe...Baat jab jab thak ho~❤️❤️❤️

*Imagines, Nupur's face..her smile..her eyes*

❤️❤️❤️~Samne bethe raho tum...raat jab thak ho~❤️❤️❤️

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Ridzi dreaming: of Ammy

*thinks of the fights they have... n first she could fight with him but nowadays looses front of him.. why??*

❤️❤️❤️~Nam kya de..kya kahe..dil ke mausum ko~❤️❤️❤️

*Thinks of his kidishness, stupid dances.. m why she gets dazzed out when she see Ammy?*

❤️❤️❤️~aag jaise lag gayi aaj shabnam ko~❤️❤️❤️

*Hugs Ammy more tight...feeling safe in his arms*

❤️❤️❤️~aisa lagta kisne chu liya humko~❤️❤️❤️

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Nupur: her mind tells her to stop hugging Mayank n move away from him but she cant

❤️❤️❤️~Tum chale jao zara... hum sambhal jaye~❤️❤️❤️

*Her heart beats more fast*

❤️❤️❤️~dhakanien dil ki kahin.. na machal jaye~❤️❤️❤️

*All the times they spend together..flashes in her mind*

❤️❤️❤️~waqt se aghe kahin na.. hum nikal jaye~❤️❤️❤️

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Ammy: he feels a sense of strong attraction towards Ridzi.. thou he loves to hate her

❤️❤️❤️~Hum mein tum mein kuch tho hai..kuch nai hai kya?~❤️❤️❤️

*For the first time...His heart beats fast for her..as he is holding her*

❤️❤️❤️~aur kuch ho jaye tho..kuch yakeen hai kya?~❤️❤️❤️

*Looks into Ridzi's eyes...intensely...with love*

❤️❤️❤️~dekh lo yeh dil jaha tha.. yeh wohi hai kya?~❤️❤️❤️

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Song Over!!!!!!!! Back to reality....

@Mayur Side: Mayank lightly pushes Nupur away from himself

@AR's Side: Ridzi moves lil far from Ammy

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️lOvE iS iN tHe AiR❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hope u like it
Kindly, Please do leave in your comments 😳
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Thanks For Updating 😊

Awesome Update, Mindblowing

Bechari Nupur Aur Woh Pagal Cabbie 😆

Mayank Ki Hero Entry was gr8 😎

Beautiful Part 😍

Continue Soon !!!!!!!!
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Fantastic update Ritu
Please continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm 😊
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great part ritu!
continue soon x
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awesome update

loved it

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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adorable update ritu!! continue soon!!

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