Pyaar I-M-Possible(ammy-ridzi, mayur)FF pt31-pg110 - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ritu
nice update
kandy and lighter +gun smart han is ke pass bhi brain hai.(pata nahi tha) 😉
wow now 2 seedi saadi ridz and nupur are in flirting avtar hmmmmmmmmmm interesting.
now cool dude and hot dude r angry lets see what next .
plz update soon. 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very beautiful update
loved mayur a lot


good update
keep it up
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Awesome update
loved it
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awesome update dear thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ritu........... nice ff.... i just read all the parts... they were awesome.........
plzz add me to your pm list....
do continue soooooooooooon...............
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fantastic update plz plz pzl cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Originally posted by: ammuakhi

hey ritu........... nice ff.... i just read all the parts... they were awesome.........

plzz add me to your pm list....
do continue soooooooooooon...............

Thanks for liking it 😉😃
will PM 😉
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THANKS guys for reading..😃. love readin ur replies😳
-Ritu
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Part 12

{They reach the Island. It's a beautiful sight... sand, water, open-sky, mountains! But there are many tourists n camps are also put all over the place by many! Not a lonely place}

Ammy: whao wowwwww
Mayank: Ammy, lets set up the camp before sun-set.. its already 6pm
*Kandy n Nuts start running on the island in filmi style*

Kandy: yayyyyy…main azaaaaaad hoo!
*guys get down from the boat n go leaving gals behind as if they are not there/don't exist*

Nupur: hey..help us out!😕
Mayank: I thought u could take care of urself😕
Ridzi: Ya…but.. thoda sa courtesy tho dekhao😕
Ammy: BRO!!!..lets go🤢
*guys go away ignoring gals*
Nupur: hey…hello *Nupur winks at Ridzi 😉 in masti mood to do natak/drama*
Ridzi: aaaaaa 😭 *cries in pain*
Nupur: ouuu..maaa *painful voice*
*Mayank-Ammy turn n look at the gals...worriedly😲*
Nupur-Ridzi: *show them tongue in a teasing way😛 n give each other thali/high five*
Mayank-Ammy: grrrrrrrrr😡 *angry. Both go n start setting up the camp*
*gals come out of boat go to the guys*
Nupur: what are u'll doing???😃
Mayank: setting up a camp…as we have to stay here over-night!
Ridzi: OH! But we dint get any camp for us! 😔
Ammy: Oh so looks like..u'll will have to sleep down the open-open sky…anyways good change for u'll😉
Nupur: Can we share the tent/camp?
Mayank: it's a pretty small tent.. if we share it with u'll…we would have to squeeze in n sleep😉
Ammy: we dont mind that!!!😉 *says naughtily* u mind?
Ridzi: YES! 😲 we are fine…down the sky😳
Ammy: cool...as u'll wish😎
Nupur: come from here Ridzi! LETS GO! Where is Nuts?
Ridzi: There!!! *points out to nuts* she is playing at the shore..lets go to her *they start going*
Mayank: dont play in the water now!!! its getting dark…so it could be a bit dangerous..
Ammy: Yups…there are lots of sea-creepy-crawlies..n u wont be able to see
*gals still act stubborn!!! N Dont pay heed to guy's warning... n go to the shore*

Ammy: These girllllllsssss!!!…complicated cases!!!!!
Mayank: I swear! Just leave them…We cant always run behind them! lets set up the wood for the bonfire
*they start setting up the bonfire place. In sumtime they hear Nupur screaming in pain*
Mayank: what now?????????? 😕 *turns n looks at nupur.... who is a lil distance away..near the shore*
Ammy: nothing! They are just acting again😡
*Ridzi also starts screaming*
Ammy: There is a height of Drama...😡 Rakhi Sawant ki behen log humien kaha se mill gaye??? !!! 😡
Mayank: this is no Joke!😡
*both think gals are again doing drama! Guys walking in huff-puff anger towards gals*
*Gals are jumping n yelling with pain n crying also….SERIOUSLY!*
Ammy: whh..wha..what happened? *panic way*
Mayank: wats wronggg??? 😕😲

Nupur: my leg..my leg😭
Ridzi: my toeeee !!!!!!😭
*guys look down at the girl's feet n see two big fat crabs are stuck to their feet(😆)*
Ammy-Mayank: 😲(😆) *rush n get off the crab from their feet n throw it in water*


Nupur is almost fainting: Main marr gayi..😭Im dead🤢 *cryin bitterly* Jaan nikal de... uss kekde(crab) ke bache ne !!!😡
Mayank: *holds Nupur's leg which is bitten by crab* I cant understand trouble luvs u or u luv troubles😕😆
Nupur: huh? *wipping her tears*😕


*Ammy holds Ridzi's leg…which is also bitten*
Ridzi: paininggggg😭
Ammy: bad crab! I'll Beat him! Bite Ridzi?? Huh! 😡 *shouts in baby voice to crab so that Ridzi smiles*

Nuts*comes*: hawwww!!!!! Kya huaaaa guyssss???😲 *another drama queen*
Kandy: *also cums* ooooooooooooouchhhhh..that may be really hurting! Apply sum medicine *another drama king*
Ammy: from where do we get medicine here?
Mayank: Oh nothing! Just put some sea-water…it will b fine! Lets go to the camp n rest


*Ridzi-Nupur get up to go…trying to walk on one feet as other feet is bitten*
Ammy: ❤️*looks at Ridzi n lifts her up in his arms n walks towards the camp/tent. Ridzi feels lil uncomfy..pahele bar been carried this way, She looks at Ammy with a bit of love in her eyes n he too looks in her eyes... Both eyes met*❤️
Mayank: ❤️*carries Nupur …looks straight n walks…but Nupur cant help glancing at him with love in her eyes…She cant control her feelings..cant press them any more*❤️

{They reach the camp. Guys put the gals down near the fire n go get sea-water n put on the place where the crab bite}
Nupur: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!😲😭 *yells as the salt water makes the cuts/bitten-area pain more*
Ridzi: 😭 *cries silently as the salt-water is really burning the cuts*

Nupur: Are u mad?? Is this any cure or what?? 😲😡
Mayank: *puts his finger on Nupur's lips* shut up! I know more than u!!!😳
Ridzi: but its burning…..😭
Ammy: SHHHHHH!! kab se bole jaa rahe ho..n falling into troubles…Now u will shut up n let me do things my way😳 *wipes Ridzi's tears with his finger n Ridzi again looks into his eyes n both look into each other's eyes. Other Side, Nupur n Mayank also get eye-locked again*

Kandy again comes n waves hand between Ammy-Ridzi n Nuts waves hand between Nupur-Mayank
Nutss: helooooooooo guysssss 😕

Kandy: n galsssssss!!!!😕
Nuts: hello hello..koi hai yaha??😲

Kandy: anyone there😲
All: YEAH! *Ammy-Ridzi-Mayank-Nupur snap out of their dreamy-land*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

After Some Time.... {After Sun-Set}

{Mayank-Ammy light the bonfire etc}


*@Mayank starts roasting the chicken n veggies(barbeque)*
*@Nupur looking all around the place but avoids looking at Mayank*

*@Ammy goes n starts clicking pics of random things, sceneries, water n girls(with bikini) on beach*
Kandy: hawwww! he(ammy) is clicking nangi-pongi gals pics *giggles*
Ridzi: 😲 MAYANK! why dont u tel ur brother...Ammy sumthing *looking at Ammy clicking girls-pics* see what he is doing...SHOUT at him *jealous*
Mayank: *looks at Ammy n..smiles at bit* what can I do 😉 he is like that only
Ridzi: arreeeee but…*bit jealous* I am just coming!!! *gets up jaise taise..walks with one leg..towards Ammy*
Nupur: Ridziiiiiii, kaha jaa rahe hai??? ishe kya hua?😕 *looks at Mayank*
Mayank: *does 'dunno' ka expression n winks at Nupur*😉
Nupur: (Thinks: haw! Ankh mara? Ab isko kya hua?😕)
Kandy: hey lets go n explore the beach..come with me sumone!!!..Nupu is injured…Mayu is roasting..Ammu is clicking pics of nangi-pongi-gals…Ridu patha nai kaha gayi!!!….bacha kaun?? NUTU??
Nuts: main nai ah rahe…tu jaa na akela
Kandy: mujhe darr lagta hai..alone alone.. plss oh plss..polezzzz
Nuts: theek hai..finee…chal!
*Kandy n nuts go roaming roaming on beach*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Shore


*Ridzi goes to Ammy*
Ridzi: what are u doing huh?😡
Ammy: I??? what did I do now? 😕

Ridzi: dont act innocent! u know what ur doing!😡
Ammy: whhhatttttttt?? 😕
Ridzi: *points at his camera*
Ammy: This??? is my FAV job... 'clicking pics'😃
Ridzi: Of gals without proper clothes???😡
Ammy: WHATTTTTTT? 😲 NO NO NO! 😲 I was just cliking pics!!!! NOW these gals are clotheless..?? what can i do? 😈 *really not his fault :p*
Ridzi: oh realllllllllllyyyyyyyyy??????

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Camp/outside the tent

*Nupur looks at Mayank roasting the food stuff(barbeque)…she stares at him dreamily n un-awarely her feet takes her to Mayank😍. He is sweating due to the heat of the frie, Nupur wipes his sweat with her hand…unaware of what she is doing*
Mayank: *looks at her. Nupur still looking at him dreamily* What??
Nupur: hmmm?😍 *snaps out* s..s….sweating..............u were...........i ws jst.........jst..*lil darr ke/scaredish way*
Mayank: u were just just?? 😉 *feeds her a lil corn* is it cooked?
Nupur: hmmmmmm! *nods yes.. still un-aware of what she is saying or doing*
Mayank: *looks at her n presses his lips to suppress his smile*
Nupur: what?? *cumin in conscious now* ya ya ya ya…it is cooked!
Mayank: *laughin lil at her..but hidding it wit just a smile*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Shore

Ridzi: whats so funny?
Ammy: Come, I will click ur pics
Ridzi: chiiiiii…mujhe nai click karne apne aise gandhe nange poonge pics😡
Ammy: 😲 maine aise kab kaha? u have to misunderstand everything!!!!!😡
Ridzi: I dont wanna click pics…u go to the these nangi poongi gals n click their pics…BYE! *jealous*
Ammy: hey Miss Moong Wrath *pulls her hand* SMILE!
Ridzi: NO!*grumpy face*
Ammy: *clicks her pic* cute one!
Ridzi: NO! delete it..😡
Ammy: *clicks one more pic of Ridzi n gives her a naughty smile. He goes on clicking her different expression = 🤢😡😕😳😲 pics*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Camp

Nupur: can I try that(roasting)
Mayank: NO! I cant take that risk with U! u can land up getting burnt in this small fire..thou even a kid may not! 😳
Nupur: 😲 whatt?? Plss let me try one
Mayank: OK ONE! BUT
Nupur: But ??????
Mayank: I wil hold ur hand*gives her the roasting-rod/stick but holds her hand n both roast the veggies together*
Nupur: *gets more conscious..normally she would not but now things are changing..looks at Mayank then tells herself to focus on roasting n not on Mayank…doesn't look back at him but from her side eyes..she is aware that he is starring at her..which makes her heart really race*

Kandy: HEYYYYYYYYY IM BACK! *comes back along with Nuts*

Mayank: This guy n his wrong timings!
Nupur: huh!? *leaves Mayank's hand n goes n sits down*

*Ridzi-Ammy also come back to the camp*
Ammy: No ways… not gonna give u…I dont give anyone!!!..This is my jaan(camera..*hiddinh it from Ridzi*)
Ridzi: Ammmy...Arman!!!! I said show me that….i wanna see the pics *trying to pull camera from him* Mayank, tell him na

Mayank: what happen? Stop fightin like kids! Show her the camera, Ammy
Ammy: NO! 😳

Nuts: rehne de Ridzi.....ismein iske beach-wale-girlfriends ke pics hai..!!! chod
*Ridzi goes n sits near Nupur-Nuts*

Kandy: Hey come on come on..lets play a game 😃
Nuts: yaa…lets sing songs..everyone has to sing one of their fav songs 😳

All agree: Okay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mayank: ❤️ *starts off* Mere dil mein aaj kya hai...*He starts singin, suprizing everyone specially Nupur* mere dil mein aaj kya hai..tu kahe…*looks at Nupur*…tho main bata dhu? *Nupur's heart skips a beat*

But I cant help…fallinf in Love with u…..*still looking at Nupur*
As the river flows..gently to the sea
Darling so we go, some things are meant to be
Take my hand *comes front of Nupur n goes on his knees offers her his hand. She had to give her hand as everyone is looking at them*…take my whole life too *makes her stand n dance slowly with him*
For I…cant…help…*looks deep into her eyes n says*…fallin…love…wit…u ❤️

Nupur: ❤️*just starts singing lookin in Mayank's eyes unaware of everyone n even of herself*
Pyaar ko ho jaane dho…Pyaar mein kho jaane dho
Aetbar kiska hai…intezar kiska hai..
Pyaar ke bech hum nai ayyenge..jis taraf le chala dil..chale jayenga
Chain sa ah gaya..yuh laga dil gaya
Abhi na gaya tho phir..kabhi nai..kabhi nai❤️

Ammy: *Whistle*
Nuts-Ridzi: 👏👏
Kandy: *blushing as if he is in Nupur's place☺️*


*Mayank n Nupur snap out n bow down*: thank u…thank u!!!

Ammy: ❤️*starts singing* Hey baby when see me cumin.. u better run for cover
Coz u know when I find u…yeah, im gonna b ur lover *takes off his shirt n throws it n it falls on Ridzi's face…Ridzi: 😲*
Tujhe zamane ke aghe main chedoga..na chodunga..*goes to Ridzi but takes Nut's hand n dances with Nuts* ankhen churayengi..main tho milaoga *looks in Ridzi's eyes n takes Nupur's hand n dances with her too*
Husn ka ashiq..husn ka dushman…*starts doing his karate dance*..apne ada hai yaaro se juda
*goes sliding on his knees n reaches Ridzi*
Bachna ae haseeno..lo..main ah gayaaa !❤️ *opens his arms to Ridzi*

Ridzi: 😲❤️ Jaha main jaati ho wohi chale aate ho..*does puppet doll dance*
Chori choori mere dil mein samathe ho
Yeh tho batao ke tum..mere kaun ho? *looks at Ammy..as if she is questioning him*❤️
Ammy: ❤️ Hum tho tere ashiq hai saadiyon purane..*winks at Ridzi* chahe tu mane..chahe na mane! *goes n falls/sits near Mayank*❤️

Kandy: hush hush hush...papa is sleepin...:D Naughty *tickles Ammy* Naughty *tickles Mayank*
Naughty raat aai... Tu hai..Main ho..n lots of tanhai..
(goes n sit b/w Ridzi n Nupur* drama yeh bari padd gaya..LOVE mein kanta gadd gaya..jaane kab thak stayenga *Gals turns his ears… to turn down his volume*
Gals: shh shh shhh Volume kam karr..bobby darling ah jayengi 😛 *he runs n sits b/w Mayank-Ammy*

Gals: chad ke saare..haye kavariya..dilno laya ki bimariya..munda munda nal yaariya...kwaab da ma ka ujad gaya...ma da ladla begad gaya😛😆
*Mayank n Ammy were unconsciously holding each others hand..so they realize..gals r calling them also gay.. Mayank: 😲 Ammy: 😲.. (blink blink) they leave each others hand*

Nuts: Ab mera turn 😃
Ammy: Nuts... Nutsy *cheers for her*
Nuts: Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage….❤️*Ammy looks at Ridzi*❤️
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage…❤️*Nupur looks at Mayank*❤️
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage ❤️*Mayank looks back in Nupur's eyes*❤️
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage ❤️*Ridzi too looks at Ammy*❤️
Hone lage hone lage…❤️*Nupur-Mayank... Ridzi-Ammy... again reach dreamy-land😍*❤️
Bass itna hi *all snap out* ek aur game aaya hai dimag mein


All: kaunsa??

Nuts: arre, truth or dare game… yeh bottle round n round ghumenga aur jiske taraf rukhenga..ushe truth ya dare mein se choose karna hoga..simple!!😃

All agree: DONE!!

Cont Soon......

PS: Hope u like the part. Do comment!!!

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lovely updt
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