~~~Ehsaas~~~[AR] updtd pt 2 pg 24 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kash-kasu-kajen

hey kirni and pari

the character sketch was awesome
luved it
but now plz can u update part 1 soon
plz add me to ur pm list.
thnx
jia

thnk u!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww great intro and CS guys.....continue soon and add me to that PM list...lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
plz pm me the next time u update,cool storyline.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey krini paari
amazing intro n skecth
continue soon
love habs
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luv Kirni and Pari ❤️
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Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

awww great intro and CS guys.....continue soon and add me to that PM list...lol

luv Kirni and Pari ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princess52

hey krini paari

amazing intro n skecth
continue soon
love habs

😃 😃 😃 😃
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One fine and awesome day starts and in Gupta Mansion..

Tring Tring Tring Tring

Girl- Itni Subah kiska Phone hai… and picks up the phone

Hmm.. Hello

Phone- Riddhima inti der tak so rahi ho kya

Riddhima- Sid!! Itni subah phone kyun kiya

Sid- Itni Subah time to dekho!

Riddhima- bas 11 hi to hai!!

Sid- Riddhima tum kuch bhool to nahi Rahi

Riddhima- Kya?

Sid-Hume milna tha aaj 11 30 ko!

Riddhima- oh!! Haan mein to bhool gayi!! Mein abhi aati hoon

Sid- Riddhima kabhi to life ko seriously liya karo.. hamesha itni careless hoti ho aur tumhe hamesha yehi lagta hai ke tum jo chahti ho waise hi hota rahega

Riddhima- come on Sid tum bhi Dad ki tarah lecture dena mat shuru karo!!

Sid- Riddhima ab tum bas niklo ghar se koi behes nahi karni hai mujhe!!

Riddhima- haan tum Cafe Green mein rukho mein bas pohunchti hoon!!

Sid- mein Wahiin par dus minute se hoon Riddhima

Riddhima- aati hoon rukho

Riddhima cuts the phone and goes to get ready!! And goes downstairs

Riddhima- Driver gadi nikalo

Shashank- Riddhima kahan ja rahi ho?

Riddhima- woh papa mein…

Shashank- Sid se milne right?

Riddhima- Haan papa

Shashank- Riddhima tum kab samjhogi Sid Accha ladka nahi hai Riddhima

Riddhima- Dad aapko koi galat faimi hui hai dad woh bahut accha hai

Shashank- Riddhima beta mein Sid Ke baare mein Bahut hi acche se Jaanta hoon pata nahi tumhe kab samaj aayega

Riddhima- Papa bas aap sid ke baare mein kuch nahi jaante mein jaa rahi hoon bye

Shashank- Shayad meri hi galti hai meine tumhe bahut hi lad pyaar se bada kar diya aur tum itni bigad gayi! Kabhi na kabhi tumhe Sid ke sacchai to zaroor pata chalegi.. bhagwaan na kare tab tak der ho chuki ho..

Riddhima- bas papa mein jarahi hoon

Riddhima goes in the car and sits..

Riddhima- Driver Caf Green chalo!!

Driver- Ok mam

Riddhima reaches the caf and searches for sid

Suddenly she finds sid sitting and goes and does and closes his eyes and tells- bolo mein kon hoon

Sid- obviously Riddhima

Riddhima-tumhe kaise pata chala?

Sid- aur kon hoga

Riddhima- accha bolo ab kyun bulaya mujhe yahaan?

Sid- Riddhima kyun tumhe mein bula bhi nahi sakta kya?

Riddhima- aisi baat nahi hai sid par..

Sid- to kya hai riddhima jab bhi bulata hoon yahi sawwal pura din to kuch karti nahi ho aur mujhse milne bhi nahi aa sakti

Riddhima- bas Sid tum bahut bol chuke

Sid- Riddhima mein sach hi bol raha hoon

Riddhima- to theek hai mein jaati hoon jakar kisi aisi ladki se shaadi kar lo jo tumse sawaal na pooche aur jo poora din kaam kare

Sid- Shaadi?? Shaadi kab meine to tumse shaadi ki baat kabhi nahi ki

Riddhima- Sid kya??

Sid- haan riddhima mein aisi ladki ke saath kaise shaadi kar loon jo sirf apne baare mein sochti hai aur jo itni ziddi hai mein us se shaadi kaise karoon

Riddhima has tears- Sid par tumne vaada kiya tha na

Sid- Mujhse galti ho gayi Riddhima please I am sorry and please just gimme a break (sid tells this and moves out)

Riddhima to herself- Papa aap shayad theek keh rahe the Sid ek accha insaan nahi hai!!

PRECAP

Riddhima and shashank go to India

Thank u guys for all ur lovely comments!!
Lots of love
Kirni and Pari!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

wow guys awesome start

arghh hate sid hope now ridzi realises and listens to her dad
cont sooooooooooooooon
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey kirni n pari
soo sorry for late comment
very nice character sketch
do continue soon
thanks for the pm.

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