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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: kulsumd

haan yar tumare drmz zarur swt rahenge,.mera b update padh k sone ka mann kar raha hai...par kya karun ye kambakht neend aaj jaldi agayi hai isiliye tum maze karlo.... 😭

ohhhh soooo sad yr
maine apni frnd ko upset kardiya hai
aynda is baat ka khayal rakhuge
but kia karu m a big cricket fan
ar abhi pakistan ka match arha so thts why my updte is slow
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

ok wait

i am still writing wuld updt in an hour

ok waiting for a sanu special update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Part 19

Samrat was getting ready in his room

S: aj to nupu k dil ka haaal jaaan kar hi rahuga

Thn he text to nupur

" hi get ready in 19 min m cming dnt be late like alwayz"

Nupur replied

"ok mr objection m already ready waiting for u to cum"

Samrat

" ok dnt b angry I will b there in 5 min"

Nupur

" ok janu"

Then samrat took nupur to their favourite hangout

Guess

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Beach

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Flasgbak

Samt==rat and nupur after getting their result of 9th standard went to beach

S: yr finally me paas hogya na mjhe to laga tha is baar to me gaya

N: kaise fail hota me ne tujhe parhaya than a

S:ha agar tu na hoti

Nupur cuts him

N: ha warna tu to bus larkiyo k saath date maarta basketball khelta aur phir raat ko apna lakta hua mooh leke ata k maine kuch nhe parha

S: yr tu mjhe itne ache se kaise jaanti hai

N: bus mjh se behtar the koi nhe jaansakta

S: acha but mjhe teri itni aadat hogye hai k darta hu us din se jab tu mjh se dorhajayegi kash wo pal hi na aye

N: me tujh jaise insaan ko kaise chor sakti hut u hi to hai jis ne mjhe btaya k dunya kitni hasseeen hai .mjhe ek best friend ki tarah pyar kia is se barh ke tune mjhe ek bhai ek maaa ek baap ki tarha pyar diya. Meri alone life ko fill kia

S: wo to mera farz hai aur tu ha hi itni pyaari but ek problem hai

N: kia

S: yhi k tujh jaisi nakchari k saaath shaadi kon karega mjhe to abhi se us bechare ki tension horhe hai bechara wo

N:hehehehe

Nupur start hitting her

S: oh ho abhi se apne un k liye extra posessive horhe hai kia baat hai

Nupur just faces down

S: oye hoye ap humari nups Sharma rhe ha but ek baat hai k me the miss buhat karuga

N: yr aisi baat mat kar abhi is bbaaat me buhat tym hai

Flashback ebd

Sanu were walking along the coast of beach

S: yaad ha nupur jab hum Canada me the hum roz beach pe jate the even hum to study bhi yhi karte the

N: ha yaaad ha aur us din to

Flashback

Nupur and samrat were studying at beach as their 11th class final was approaching

Nupur was holding stick with which she was hitting distracted samrat

As he was busy in flirting with sumgirl

And nupur always disliked his habit

N: samrat ab agar tum ne seriously nhe parha to I will kill u

S: tere haatho se marna bhi manzoor hai

N: hehe but ab seriously parh

S: acha but sirf ek sawal ka jawab de

N: acha bol kia

S: tjhe koi larka pasand hai ya nhe

N: agar hoga na to sab se pehle the hi btao gi aur abhi mjhe koi nhe pasand

S: promise

N: ha baba pakkka paakka promise

S: to thk hai ye deal rhe k jab bhi hume koi pasand ayega hum pehle ek dusre se hi share karege

N: ok pakka promise

Thn both hugged each other

Flashback ends

S: to the nhe lagta aj us promise ko nibhane ka din hai

N: ha shayad

S: to pehle kon btayega

N: well m not sure abt it but ?I dnt knw wht to say ???..yr I m so confused ???don't knw

S: ek kaaam kart u apni akhein bund kar aur dekh k the kon nazar ata hai

N: ok

Nupur closed her eyes

All flashbacks of their cums in front of her

Thn nupur opened her eyes and hugged samrat

N: sam mjhe pyar hogya hai m in love I cant believe it

S: relax dear bta to sahi k kon ha wo

N: guess!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S: mayank

N: ya

S: I knew it

N: cha lab teri turn tu apni aankhein bund kar

When he close his eyes he found gunjan in it

S: nups I luv gunjan

N: to dekh hum ne apna waada nibhaya

S: ha ab humei ye feelings un dono ko btani hai

N: rite but m hell nervous don't knw how to confesss it even mjhe ye bhi nhe pta k ki wo mjh se pyar karta bhi hga k nhe

S: mjhe to agta ha k he likes you

N: to kia karu

S: wait for rite tym

N: acha yr late hogya hai ghar hale

S: ok

Thn samrat dropped her home

And thn called mayank

S: dude kal k plan me kuch changes hai

M: kia

S: wo actually kal hi plan ko end karna hai

M: kia bt kaose

S:_-----------------------------------------

Samrat told him whole plan

Precap

Mayur confession in my way but with????????????????

Wait for surprise

Will updte soon as possible

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

sanutastic update by god.......

mazza aa gaya......
the phone convo was so nice.....
and going to the beach was awesome....
the way you potrayed their friendship was so cute.......
who says a boy and girl can't be best friends.....
i think you have proved everyone wrong with your update
the 9th class flashback was rocking
nupur had taught samrat so he had passed.......
how sweet
and the 11th class flashback was even cuter
samrat flirting with girls
and nupur scolding him
and the promise they made was so awesome
and finally their recent beach scene was so nice
nupur confessed that she loved mayank
samrat confessed that he loved nupur
i am so happy they kept their promise
i hope the sanu bond remains forever
i am so glad with your twist in plan
can't wait for samrat's plan
the precap sounds so tempting
waiting for the confession
i hope sanu bond is not lost after that
hope we get a cute gang scene after the confession
like everyone playing truth or dare......
continue soon
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
sorry to all for short part
wanted to give more but kia kare\cricket match jo dekhna hai
but nxt part wuld be sooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
re.
So swt of u .itni jaldi update karliya.
I wil edit it 2mwr readng it nw

*Edited*
Haey...dear.

Fablous part.. 👏

Tumne kitni khubsurati se sanu bonding ko potrayed kiya hai itz just awwesomme...

D phone talk vz nyc how dey calld each odr by their nick names..

So samrat took nupur to their fav hangout,..so chweet.
Bachpan ki yadien taza hogayi.

9th std fb is cute..
To samrat nupur k padhane par pass hogaya..

Lykd how sam vz teasing nups aur hamari nupur kumari to sharmagayi.. 😳

N d 11th std fb is rocking..

Nupus sam ko kaise warning de rahi thi

Aww how they made promised k koi pasand aaye to pehle ek dusre ko batayenge.

N den how they fulfilld their promised that vz beautiful.

Ab guru samrat ka nxt plan kitna intresting hai..dekhna hai.

Wow precap seems full of mayurish...cant wait do continue sooooon...

Luv
*kulsum*
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

sorry to all for short part

wanted to give more but kia kare\cricket match jo dekhna hai
but nxt part wuld be sooooooooon

koi baat nahi something is better than nothing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima


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koi baat nahi something is better than nothing

haan yar mahima ne theek kaha..
Im happy k mere sone se pehle mujhe update mill gaya...
Agli update bahut longer honi chaiye...finally ab muje theek se neend aayegi...update padhliya par commnt kal milega.. 😉 gud n8.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: kulsumd

re.
So swt of u .itni jaldi update karliya.
I wil edit it 2mwr readng it nw

ha yr socha k itna hi karlu
phir nxt to acha hi hoga i guess
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
Gr888 short part...
Hmm..
Next main confession...
Phir toh jaldii updt karro

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