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funkybratz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#701

di where is the part yaar!!!!!!??????????

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mansibharti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#702

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kuhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#703

diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
i m speechless di....
3 bar pad chuki hun hu.....
2-4 pad lun fir comment karungi bada sa...............

edited.............................
finally 3 bar aur padhne ke bad me kuch comment kar sakti hun........
i reallly loved the part di......

awesome ,superb,Breathtaking ,chumeshwari part tha ek dam........

ridz diary pad rhi thi aur muze lag raha tha jese me uske sath pad rhi hun armaan ki ....
and when she said

" I... I.. My iron man "

" Haan Armaan, bahut mushkil hai... Bahut mushkil hai aise jeena... Tumhare bina... I give up Armaan, I give up... Main haar gayi... Main nahi reh sakti tumhare bina... I need you, I need you everyday of my life..."

" Yes, Armaan I love you... Only you "

aisa laga jake ek tight si hug dun use....................

armaan ne accha kiya jo usse bat nhi ki 10 din warna ridz samaz hi nhi pati ki she loves him.....
but di plez mere armaan ko jaldi thik kar do.... aur unki saari probs khatam kar do.... dmg me to wo vese b rota rehta he hamesha..... plez yahan inko jaldi se milwa do.... aur bahut bahut bahut saare lovey dovey moments b chaiye muze.....

" I will Armaan.. I'll be with you ,for you.. For us.. Forever..."

it is the best line ridz ever said.... it touched my heart.....

love u ridz ......

and mansi di ......
i have no words to describe how much i admire you... you have written each and every line amazingly i can visualize every scene in front me.....nearly ek month wait karne ke bad update mili and it was worth waiting....aap itne tension me ho padhyi ke fir b aapne hamare liye likha thnx di.....
u r a amazing writer....
love u ...........
muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

kuhu

Edited by kuhus_era - 15 years ago

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namita

@namita18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#704

hey mansi di.......

sorry for being late as usual.... finally my lazy bones has started working, so m here to comment on dis awesome part.... first abt the part~~~ it was awesome, wonderful,amazing, and romantic part.. so a big applause for u 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i really loved every bit of it... finally our ridhima has realised her feeling, and they both are together now...... and those page of diary were sooo amazing... u will kill me sumday girl with ur romantic and passionate writing.. , how u always do sumthing like dis, that made me speachless.....

specially these lines

" Pata nahi kyun magar Ridhhima ko chhede bina raha hi nahi jaata. Aaj walk ke bahane uska haath pakad liya, kya karun dil se majboor ho gaya aur Ridhhima huh... She tripped me ! pata nahi sabse jyada kya dukha chhot ya uske saaf karne ka tarika.. Jaanta hun Ridhhima ka dard uski nafrat ki wajah hai magar main bhi kya karu main majboor hun.. but thank god atleast usne mujhe blood to nahi dekhne diya meri to himmat hi nahi hoti ki main khud dressing kar lun...."

" Mujhse bahut badi bhuul ho gayi... Maine jo Ridhhima ke saath harkat ki agar uske baad wo mujhe zindagi bhar bhi maaf naa kare to bhi main usse koi shikayat nahi kar sakta, main apni saari had paar kar jaata. Damn ! Main gusse main kya karne chala tha. Mujhe Ridhhima se maafi maangni hogi aaj jo uski haalat hai uska zimmedar sirf aur airf main hun.. "

" Aaj main bata nahi sakta ki main kitna khush hun Ridhhima ne mera dosti ka tohfa accept kar liya, I hope ki yeh hamare rishte ki ek nayee shuruat ho. Main ab use shikayat ka koi mauka nahi dena chahta... "

" Ridhhima itni udaas rehti hai, Shashank uncle se, khud se waada to kar diya ki uske chehre par hamesha hansi rahegi, muskurahat rahegi magar ab kya karun wo to theek se mujhse baat bhi nahi karti... Maana galti meri hai magar hai to uske liye naa ab kya karun...

Got it ! Jokes ... Girls like men who make them laugh... Main Ridhhima ko khuub hasaunga phir dekhta hun wo kaise mujhse naaraaz rehti hai..."

She continued... " Ab jokes kaun sikhayega...? No problem main joke book le aauynga... No main kisi si mangwa lunga best joke book.. Yupp "

" Hey bhagwaan ! ya to yeh jokes bekaar hain ya mujhe theek se sunana nahi aata... Ab mujhe to itni hansi aati hai phir pata nahi Ridhhima kaise nahi hansti..."

" Huuh koi baat nahi main phir se try karunga, chahe kuch bhi ho... Main Ridhhima ko udaas nahi dekh sakta.."

" Yeh waqt kisi sapne sa lagta hai dil to chah raha tha ki sab yahin ruk jaaye aur hum eksaath aise hi baithe rahein. Kal jab Ridhhima ne mere chehre ko chhua to ek alag sa ehsaas hua bas dil kiya ki uska ehsaas hamesha aise hi mere saath bana rahe , khud ko ek pal ke liye bhuul gaya aur phir jis mushkil se apne dil par kaabu paaya wo main hi jaanta hun. Pehle to bahut hairani hui ki Ridhhima ne mujhe kaise pehchana jab koi bhi aisa nahi kar paaya, laga ki shayad yehi dil ka connection hai magar phir Ridhhima ne raaz khola aur saara credit diya mere dimples ko... Ab main samjha ki wo mujhe bas muskurate rehne ko kyun keh rahi thi, wah kya kamaal ka dimag paaya hai "

" Aaj Ridhhima se jaana ki aisa kya hai jo use aur Vivek ko jodta hai ek dusre se.. Socha, aur darra ki wo yehi kahegi ki unka pyaar ek dusre ke liye magar hairaani aur usse jyada khushi hui jab usne kaha ki sab Vivek ko chahte hain isliye aur wo use chahta hai magar ek chhoti si baat par usne shayad gaur nahi kiya... Usne yeh nahi kaha ki kyunki wo usse pyaar karti hai.. Aur isi ek chhoti si baat ne ek baat to bilkul saaf kar di hai. She may be impressed or even infatuated by him but it's not love... Aaj main behad khush hun kyunki ab main use mehsoos karwaunga ki sachhe pyar ka ehsaas kya hota hai..."

" Aaj Vivek se baat hui, mann to kiya jis zabaan se wo Ridhhima ka naam le raha hai use kheench lun. Kis haq se ab wo Ridhhima ke baare main pucch raha hai, he don't deserve her . Magar main ab soch chuka hun ki aage kya karna hai. Vivek ab zindagi bhar Armaan Malik ka naam yaad rakhega.. Rahi baat Ridhhima ki to wo meri hai... I won't loose her at any cost..."

"... Shayad kabhi to kahunga ki Ridhhima, When I first met you....I never imagined that I would have such strong feelings for you.. I never thought that I would have dreams about you or miss being by your side or get buttterflies in my stomach when somone mentions your name... when I first met you I never thought that I'd love you as I do now "

" I thought my heart was as strong as iron before I met her and then... I found my magnet... All the strength was unable to keep me from the pull I felt..."

She smiled reading it, the words were simple yet they touched her to the core of her heart. She smiled with tears welling in her eyes. It was one of those moment of life, the one when you have tears in your eyes, yet you feel you were never so happy ever in your life...

" I... I.. My iron man " she chuckled lightly at her thoughts ,wiping her happy tears.

" Duniya main taqat se kya nahi kiya ja sakta magar saari duniya ki takat kisi ke mann main kisi le liye pyaar paida nahi kar sakti..

....Kitna asaan hota hai ek jhuti hansi dikhana aur kitna mushkil hai apne aansoo rokna. Kitna asaan hai ki keh dena ki I don't miss you aur utna hi mushkil hai iss baat ko accept karna. Kitna asaan hai kisi se duur ho jaana magar sabse mushkil hai uske bina jeena..."

There was no doubt now.Everything cleared.. She didn't like Armaan.... She loved him...

" Yes, Armaan I love you... Only you "

these lines have stole my heart di....

u wont beleieve , i have read dis part, already 10 times.... actually i have saved it in my phone, and wenever, i 'll feel down and low, den i read dis part, and become totaly lost in these lines...

thankuuuuuuu soo much for writing dis awesome part...

and now abt u

thanku soo much for update and to update as promised.... and a biggg huggg for u and muahhhh

pls update soon and m eagerly waitng for the confession and but i know, u r devill and will nt give us confession soon ,widout any twist and turns....

but plssssss updateeeeeee soonnnnnn...

and sunday is cummming😉😉😉😉 so be ready wid another awesome part ( but i already have a feeling dat, u would not update dis sunday. m i right??)

pls update soon...

luv u

Edited by namita18 - 15 years ago

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 15 years ago

#705

Hey Di 🤗

M soooooooooooooooooooo damn Happy today ... Ur update made my day would be an understatement ... I swear it feels soo heavenly now ... You know i feel like ..like... as if i can do anything out of sheer happiness.....aapki koi wish ho toh bata do..kya pata me poori kar doon .. 😉😆😆

Finally Ridz read his diary , though not the big one, but still she knows NOW dat Armaan loves her ... N its more than enough to get a wishful turn in the story now ... Waise i want to ask if she knows dat Armaan knew abt Vivek before their marriage coz i think ridz didnt knw before and now it was written in d diary, isnt ? N about the worsening condition of both dat happened after being separate made me remind of age old saying ," Distance alwaz gets you closer " ..

M certainly loving the confession on ridz part... it cleared her cloudy vague thoughts , moreover got a determination too .. M now sure armaan will be fine coz his medicine is with him .. As long as ridz's dere he ll get recovered soon... I really wish ridz to come across the other diary too .. .Hoping to see a new beginning now .. n ya, the dream dat ridz had was perfect replica of their lives...

Cnt soon ... hope to see amazing update ahead *fingers crossed* ..

Thanx 4 d pm... (m soo glad for it)

Love
Vini / Vinz

P.S : hws ur examz goin ? All d best !! its the last one na? 😛

Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#706

Awesome update
so gald ridzy realised that she loves armaan
can't wait for the next update
fingers crossed that u will update next Sunday
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Edited by kashndsel4eva - 15 years ago

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 15 years ago

#707

woah Mansi its really rocking so ohh so cute at last she realize she luved him & also with him yaa sad he is not well but now she is with him den no need to worry he is going to be f9 soon & i want to dance omg yupieee she is in love with him AR together plz continue it & thanks for the pm & Best of Luck for ur exam u made my day with such a wonderful Update

http://i.b5z.net/i/u/424807/i/my_first_teddy_russ_bear_62653_lg.jpg

Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#708

AWESOME AWEOME AWESOME part.....m sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy finally both a vry clear abt ther feeling.....too good.....nw hopefully everything will be good....waiting eagerly for the next update.....continue soon n thnx for the pm....bt the way hw r ur xmz going...?? best of luck for ur last paper...

Edited by crazy_4_karan - 15 years ago