Kitani Mohabbat Hai (AR & AA & SG) last part@Pg138 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

nice part but itna short....

do cont soon wid a longer part... n plzz add some sajan scene...
thanx 4 d pm...




thank, just wait and watch!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved it
thanks 4 da pm
con soon




thnkx!! it's ok!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruba_siddiqui

Awesome part dear
plz cont soon



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#74



thnk you
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😊 Thankx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
part6:

after gollege, gunjan gift ghirad kar samrat ke ghar jati hai, samrat darwasa kolta hai
gunjan: hi samrat, kaise ho?
gunjan samrat ko gift deti hai phir samrat use hug karte huwe thanks bolta hai
gunjan: aaj college kyon nahi aye?
samrat: woh main ane wala tha lekin dil nahi raha
gunjan: tum har baar periods miss karte ho aur phir notes lene aa jate ho
samrat: tum to jaanti ho teachers ke lessons itne boring hote hai mujhe neend aa jati hai
gunjan: samrat aise kaise tum nahi aa sakhte?
samrat: ok miss lecture dena baand ki jiye mujhe neend aa rahi hai
gunjan: samrat!! (gunjan smile) samrat waise tume patta hai aise ladkon ko kiya bolte hai?
samrat: kiyaa?? (hero ki tarah expresion de raha hota hai)
gunjan: awara!!
samrat: yeah i kno, k... kiya? main awara?

gunjan baghti hai samrat uske piche piche, gunjan ka pair phisal tha hai
aur woh ghirne hi wali hoti hai use samrat pakkar leta hai, aur ek dosre ki
ankhon mein dekh rahe hai, aur phir anisa aati hai
anisa: excuse me maine tum dono ko disturb to nahi kiya na?

samrat gunjan ko chor deta hai aur gunjan piche ho jaati hai
gunjan: nahi woh mera pair phisal gaya, aisi koi baat nahi hai!!
anisa: gunjan ka pair bohot nahi phisal tha, kyon bhai?
samrat: han!! dekha jaye to anisa sehi bol rahi hai
gunjan: aab tum bhi!!
anisa: ney ney, gunjan tumari friend to hamesha tumare saat hai, com'on give me a hug!!

dono ek dosre ko hug karti hai, samrat bhi age hota hai gunjan piche ho jaati hai
anisa: kuch to sharam karo bhai
samrat: meri pyari behen tujhse kaisi sharam haar baar romance kharab kar deti hai
anisa: bhai, i think todha sa wait kar li jiye phir to romance hi romance hoga
samrat: tum jaa rahi ho thank you (samrat anisa ko hug karke thankx bolta hai)
gunjan: samrat!! uska matlab hai after mariage!!
anisa: han bhai aur waise acha huwa gunjan tum yahan aa gayee mera kuch homework hai
woh samjh ni aa rahi, help kardo gi?
gunjan: ya sure!! chalo
samrat: gunjan!!
anisa: ok bro bye!!

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Next day, it's a beautifull morning, ridhima so rahi hoti hai, achanak phone bajhta hai
ridhima: itni subhe subhe kisne phone kiya
ridhima utha thi hai to woh kisse ladke ki awaaz hoti hai
ladka: hello, main shilpa se baat kar sakhta houn?
ridhima: kaun shilpa? yahan pe koi shilpa nahi hai, waise tum kaun ho?
ladka: main aplish houn
ridhima: aplish?? "ridhzi think: kaisa naam hai shilpa and aplish?"
ladka: ji shilpa se baat ho sakhti hai
ridhima: time paas karne ke liye wrong number milla rahe ho, right??
ladka: great, you are smart!!
ridhima: yeh to hai, just shut up and phir call karne ki koshish bhi ki na to
ladka: to?? woh karne ke liye tume ana parega
ridhima: you... kash main aa sakhti phir tume batati
ladka: oh please cool, i"m just joking
ridhima: thatzz better!!

ladka aur uske piche se hasne ki awaaz ati hai achanak phone band hojata hai
ridhima: yeh aaj kal ke log bhi na!! just for time pass dosro ki neend kharab karte hai

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arohi ro rahi hoti hai kyon ki woh pyaz cutt rahi hoti hai, darwase par bell hoti hai arohi kolti hai
arjun: hi!!
arohi: hi!! kaise ho?
arjun: fine lekin tume kya huwa hai ro kiya rahi ho?
arohi: nahi aise hi yeh pyazz cutt rahi thi ankh mein pani aa gaya
arjun: oh to yeh probleme hai!! main bhi cutt tha houn lekin mujhe to kuch nahi hota
arohi: kehte hai ki ladkiye apna dard dikha deti hai lekin ladke dil mein hi
apne dard rakhte hai yeh dikhane ke liye ki woh gamzor nahi hai!!
arjun: i think you are right, lekin agar hum ladke bhi tum ladkyon ki tarah rone
laghe to phir ladkyon ko kaun sambaale ga
arohi: haan ye to sehi!!
arjun: yeah i know i'm smart!!
arohi: main abhi tyaar ho ke ayee phir college chalte hai!!
arjun: okk!!

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samrat aur gunjan ko kabhi romance karne ko mileiga??
woh ladka kaun hai jisne ridhima ko phone kiya??
arohi par kiya ghusre ki jab use arjun ke dokhe ka patta chalega??

Yeh janne ke liye parte raho!!

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i hope you all like it!!
agar aapko pasand hai
to please like button press karo
aur ache se comment do!!
ok, love you!! have a nice day!!
Edited by amira_saeed - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear great part loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
hey amira...thats aaweomse..luv the charcter sketch....wud love to read it.......do PM me wen u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
awesome.. loved it..
do cont soon... thanx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
tht was soooooo nice part

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