Kitani Mohabbat Hai (AR & AA & SG) last part@Pg138 - Page 11

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Part8:

after 4 days, it's morning

Arohi books phar rahi hoti hai apne ghar mein phir arjun aata hai


arohi: aaj to college nahi hai phir tum subhe subhe, koi zaroori baat hai?
arjun: haan, mujhe tumse ek bohot zaruri baat karni hai
arohi: karo na, sab thik to haina?
arjun: han sab thik hai

arjun arohi ko sab kuch batata hai aur phir arohi kehti hai


arohi: Nice idea!! ridhima ko sab patta hai
arjun: haan, to phir tum mere saat chalo gi?
arohi: main?
arjun: haan tum! saat jayege to zyada acha laghe ga


arohi think "arjun ko mere saat jana acha laghta hai" yeh soch kar arohi ko bohot acha feel hota hai

arjun: tumare paas koi saree hai?
arohi: naahi!!


arjun ke haat mein ek shopping bags hota hai usme se arohi ko saree nikaal kar deta hai, arohi saree pehan kar bahir aati hai arjun ek pal ke liye use dekhta hi reh jata hai, arohi chutki bajha thi hai arjun apne khayalon se nikal tha hai

arjun: sach mein bohot khubsuraat lagh rahi ho
arohi: arjun meine kabhi saree nahi pehni mujhe todhi se chalne mein probleme hogi
arjun: it's ok phir bhi tum bohot achi lagh rahi ho


arohi todhi si age hoti hai woh jaa kar arjun par ghirti hai, dono ek dosre ki ankhon mein dekhne laghte hai


arjun think "yeh mujhe kiya ho raha hai" woh apni ankhein niche kar leta hai aur arohi bhi


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gunjan aur ridhima shopping mall mein hote hai


gunjan: ridhima tumara achanak shopping karne ka kaise dil kar aaya
ridhima: tume to patta haina mera kabhi kuch karne ka dil karta hai kabhi kuch
gunjan: ridhima tume kiya hogaya hai pehle to tum aise baat nahi karti thi
ridhima: meine aabhi tume bataya na ki mera dil kabhi kuch karta hai to kabhi kuch


gunjan kabron wali dukhaan mein chali jaati hai aur ridhima phoolon ki dukhaan mein


gunjan ek dress ki taraf jati hai use woh bohot pasand aati hai lekin phir woh bohot mehgi hoti hai, zor se hawa ati hai gunjan ka dupatta udh kar ek ladke ke moo par pharta hai, gunjan uska chehra nahi dekh paa rahi hoti aur jab tak woh dupatta hatha thi hai woh ladka mudh chuka hota hai


gunjan: sorry woh hawa se
ladka: it's ok (phir chala jaata hai)
gunjan: mujhe ek pal ke liye aisa kyon lagha ki woh samrat hai, main bhi na woh mujhse kuch din ke liye dhur kiya huwa woh mujhe har taraf dikhne lagha hai


gunjan ko uske saat pithaye huwe pal yaad aa rahe hote hai aur uske honthon pe ek khubsuraat si mukuraat ati hai, jab woh samrat ka sochti hai to uske honthon par aisi hi muskuraat ati hai, gunjan chalte chalte ek mirror ke paas pohonj thi hai apni woh muskuraat dekh kar use ek baat yaad ati hai


*flashback*

gunjan mirror ke samne hoti hai, tab bhi woh muskuraa rahi hoti hai, piche se samrat aata hai

samrat: kasam se tumari is muskuraat par hi to main fida houn, aaj tum bhi mujhse ek kasam khao
gunjan: kaisi kasam?
samrat: kii jab main tumare saat nahi houn ga to tum aise hi mirror ke samne mere liye muskurao gi
gunjan: kasam se tumari gunjan tumare liye aisi hi muskuraati rahe gi!!


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yeh soch kar gunjan apne sar par halka sa marti hai aur phirse muskurati hai

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ridhima ek phoolon ka bouquet (white) utha thi hai aur uski khushbu leti hai


ridhima: sach iski khushbu itna sukoon deti hai


phir woh bouquet wahi rakh kar chali jaati hai, woh is dukaan se bahir phair rakhti hai aur ek ladka andher pair rakhta hai


Usne blue jean pehni hoti hai, uske basu mein ek bracelet hoti hai jis par A likha hota hai aur usne white t-shirt pehni hoti hai aur woh handsome lagh raha hota hai

dono ki basuye takkra thi hai woh bracelet jaa kar ridhima ke dupatte par ghir jaati hai ridhima ko patta bhi nahi chalta aur woh chali jaati hai

woh ladka sari dukaan gumta hai lekin use wohi bouquet pasand aata hai


ladka: excuse me, yeh bouquet kitne ka hai?
worker: ji yeh bouquet to 20rupees ka hai lekin shayad woh ladki ine ghirade
ladka: to aap une aisa hi dosre de dena
worker: yeh bouquet last hai
ladka: woh koi aur pasand kar le gi
worker: woh yahan jab bhi ati hai woh yehi leti hai kyon ki une iski khushbu bohot pasand hai


woh ladka un phoolon ki khushbu leta hai aur use bhi bohot achi laghti hai

ladka: bhaai sab aap 20rupees zyada le lijiye lekin mujhe yehi chahiye, armaan jo ek baar chun le woh le kar hi rehta hai (armaan paise nikaal kar deta hai)
worker: aapko pasand hai to le lijiye 20rupees mein hi
ladka: 40rupees rakh lijiye yeh soch kar ke koi armaan naam ka ladka aapke aur apki biwi ke armaan pure kar gaya
worker: tum aaj kal ke bachche bhi na

armaan bouquet le kar chala jaata hai aur phir uska dihaan uski basu par pharta hai

armaan: meri bracelet kahan gayee maa ne itne pyar se di thi! soch armaan soch!!


phir armaan ko yaad ata hai jab ridhima se takkar laghi thi


armaan: oh no! woh ladki, i'm 100% sure ke woh uske paas hi hogi lekin main use dhundun ka kahan meine to uske chehra bhi ache se nahi dekha, kaise main usse pehchaanoun ga


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