(AR)Can u fall in love??Again?PART 2 pg 18 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

nice concept

plzz add me to ur pm list

hey sweety
thnks alot for commentinbg
yes ur definetly in my pm list
love u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: -Nina-

Hey sweety how are you ? ^^

Nice Concept plz plz plzzz udpate sooon ^^
Love, Nina ^^

hey nina
i m fine how r u ...???
i m glad u like the concept
n thnks alot for commenting
will surely update soon
love you
habs
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: choco_pie92

hey very sweet concept
update soon

love
debadrita

hey debssss....
thnks alot
i m gla du liked the concept
will update soon
love u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ashi.loves.ksg

do pm me when u update it
sounds really gud

hey ashi...
thnks alot for commenting
i m glad u liked it
will pm u for sure
love u
habs
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Hey friends'thank u very much for the lovely comments and the one who pressed the like button I just hope I live upto ur expectation.

here is the character sketch n part 1

CHARACTER SKECTH

Ridhima: shes 18 years old n studying in the best college.she is very pretty n sweet n bubbly girl. But really innocent. Her parents got transfered n live in dubai while she is in Karachi.

Muskaan: ridhimas best friend they were together since class 2. She knows ridhima in and out n has always been there for her.

Ok this is a really brief character sketch u wil get to know them as the story goes on ' n there r few more imp character which wil be introduced later

PART 1

" hey ridzzzz'goshh finally u are here kaha gayeb ho gai thi?or paper kesa gaya? Or tune MCQ mien second question me kya choose kiya? yes or no?n by the way tujhe wo ice coffee kese laggi???" said muskaan getting really excited finally to see her best friend after 3 hrs paper. "goshhh tht was a long time man" thought muskaan.
" oiii express train araam se chal breath in breath out breath in breath out'. Yeah very gud just like tht or tere sawalo ka jawab yes I m finally here me gayeb nahi huwi thi I was just discussing the paper, n paper went extremmly good, or mene MCQ mein yes choose kiya n yeah ice coffee was
scrumptious." Said ridhima licking her dry lips as she rememberd how delicious it was.
" so u ready for tomorrow? Packing kab karegi." Said muskaan a lil bit sad thet her best friend wont be here for the vacation.
" yeahhh I m really excited kitne saalon ke baad India jawugi n I will have kurkure" muskaan rolled her eyes seeing the love ridhima had for kurkure. " but then I don't wanna leave coz I wont be able to sit on internet over there as I just wont get time n wht if his online?????" said ridhima a bit worried abut missing the chance to talk to him whn he comes online.

" tujhe yaaad hai na ke teri bhabi ne kya kaha tha ? n I think shes rite as well soooo'." Muskaaan trailed of seeing ridz sad face.

" muskaaan mujhe yaad hai bhabi ne kya kaha tha but his my love I love him with all my heart but usne mere saath ese kyu kiya?u know I really miss him ajj bhi ye dil usiko yaad karta hain ,har pal uske bare mein sochti rehti hun, is pure ek saal mein essa ek bhi din nahi hoga jis din mene ye dua nahi ki hogi, har pal ek hi dau hoti thi hotho per ke bas wo ek baar nazar ajaye , bus meri usse ek baar baat ho jaiye . is saaal mien kya se kya hogaya ek time hota tha hum dono 24 hrs baate karte rehte thai ek din bhi esa nahi guzra hoga ke hamne baat nahi ki hogi or is saal hamari ek baar bhi baat nahi huwi mujhe yeh bhi nai pata ke wo kaha hain kya kar raha hain? Kya wo mujeh bhul gaya wo hamare saare pal jo hamne ek saath guzare the wo saare wade, qasme sab bhul gaya? Kya ab wo mujhse pyaar nahi karta?" said ridhima with tears running down her cheek.
" ridhima plzz ro mat, I m sure wo aj bhi tujhse hi pyaar karta hoga uski koi majburi hogi" she was said to see her best friend in this state.
" majburi? Esi kya majburi hogi muskaan kya wo itna busy hain studies main ke ek min ke liye bhi online ake msg nahi kar sakta tha? Muskaan mene uske liye kya kya nahi kiya roz ghar chali jaati thi ke shayed wo online hoga shayd uska koi msg aya hoga'mene eske liye hostel mein apna mobile layi or tujhe to pata hain ke agar kisi ne mujhe pakar liya to they wil rusticate me but still I did everything just to talk to him just to listen to his voice why me muskaan why me'?" she said breaking down on muskaan lap n hugging her tightly.

Muskaaan hugged her back n let her cry, all these dayz, weeks, months she wouldne talk abut him she wouldn't cry she would hide her feelings n put a fake smile n all this time she wanted her friend to confide in her tell her feeling share everything with her but no she just wanted other ppl to live happy n not worry abut her but no finally after all these dayzzz she just couldn't take anymore n broke down .

After coming out of the hug ridhima said " muskaan I think ur right I m going india I need to be happy I m finally going to meet my friends n family whum I haven't met since 3 years. I m sure once I go there I m going to 4get abut everything I m sure chal goodnite ."
With that she gave muskaan a fake smile n turned her back over here n pretended to sleep.
Muskaan sighed n went to close the lights so they could sleep peacefully as there were really tired after the exmas.

After 30 minutes whn she heared muskaan snoring she got up from her bed n went to the terrace. The sky was full of shining bright stars, she was trying to find something which was hidden beneath a cloud.

After a lot of attempt she found it. She looked at the shining moon n a lone tear escaped her eyes when she rememeberd something.

FLASH BACK

" when ever u miss me just come n look at the moon and talk to it u will find me there I promise." he caressed her cheeks wiping the tears away.

PRESENT

" tum kaha chale gaye mujhe is tarah chor ke? Tumne to mujhse waada kiya tha ke hum humsha saath hoge, aj pura ek saal ho gaya hain or tumne mujhse ek bhi phn ek bhi msg tuk nahi kiya ..kyu???? kya ab tum mujhse pyaar nahi karteeee bola jawab do mujhe kya ab tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte" she said tears running down her soft cheeks " huh ye waada bhi jhuta tha tumhara" she said pointing towards the moon.

IN THE ROOM

4:OO AM

" TRING" "TRING" " TRING"

" tchhh ridhima alarm bund kar yaaar exms pure ho gaye ab chaar baje uthne ki zarurat nahi hain" muskaan said sleepily tossing herself around. " ridhimaaa tchhh alarm bund kar"

Muskaan didn't got any answer so she woke up n looked towards ridhima whose bed was empty she started calling her name n looking in the washroom but couldn't find her.

" ye larki raat ke chaar bajje kaha ho sakti hain ? wo to mujhse pehle hi so gayi thi..? shuld I go n wake others n tell tehm tht ridhima is missing '??? Or shuld I just go alone n find her ?she mite be in the hall watching tv or sumthing,'.?" She said talking to herself " hai ye theek rahe ga mein khud hi jaa kar dekh leti hoomn."

Muskaaan searched everywhere kitchen, hall, tv room, game room just incase shes playing basket ball alone but couldn't find her atlast she came to the terrace where she found her best friend sleeping on a bench, hugging her knees n shivering a bit. She went towards her n softly called her " ridhima, ridhimaa 'uthhh ..ridhima" she woke up with a jerk n saw muskaan with a concerned face and spoke " muskaan tu yaha?"

" ye sawaal to mujhe tujhse puch na chaiye ke tu yaha terrace per kya kar rahi hain n by the way whn did u came her u don't sleep walk do u ?" she said lightening the mood as she could sense that something was wrong, something related to him as she has never behaved like this before.

" buss yaaar ase hi upper ane ko dil chaa raha thaa n pata nahi kab aankh lag gayi" ridhima spoke avoiding her gaze n looking at an old pair shoes as if talking to it. " acha chal niche chal yaha bohat thand hain, thnk god mene kisi ko uthaya nahi I was so bloody scared whn I found ur empty bed" muskaan spoke with her hands on her hips.

" awww sorry muskii" giving her a side hug.

" hum theeek hain theek hain lekin agli baaar esa nahi karna ok" sai muskaan with attitude pointing her finger towards her"

And suddenly both of them burst out laughing.

IN THE MORNING

" ridzz flight kitne baje ki hain?" muskaan said while brushing her hair.

" 2 baje ki hain" she said while playing PS3

" whatttttttt???? Its already 11 ur supposed to reach ther before 1 hr n its gonna take 2 hrs to reach"

" relax babes I will reach there on time don't worry"

Ridhima gave all the bags to the servant who worked in the hostel.

" chal muskaaan I m leaving I m going to really miss u n plzz hun keep in contact" said ridhima while hugging muskaaan.

" hey I m gonna miss u tooo ' n here don't think abut it too much just enjoy ur holiday so then after a month whn v meet we have lots of gossip to do 'bye love ya miss ya"

With tht ridhima went to the airport, excited to go Mumbai as shes gonna meet all her friends n family. Doesn't know wht india has stored for her.

MUMBAI AIRPORT

" oh my god I m here atlast. Atlast to india'.. I just hope this is the new beginning. And when I go back to Karachi everythings normal plz god make ma wish come true" saying tht she stepped out of the airport looking for her sister who had come to receive her.

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ok finalllyyyy the part is finish...whowww kaafi lamba hain 😆

please take out a minute and tell me if u like the part or not, Ur one comment is a lot for me so PLEASE leave ur comments, or just press the LIKE button. All the criticism and suggestions are welcome.

Luv

Habs

Edited by princess52 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
ohh ok ok here i m

hehe , madam , what a start yaar , i soo loved it you knew hyeee

lol's loved muskaan in her first scene , she didn't talked for 3 hours when she was giving exams lol's 😆😆😆😆😆😆 , i swear to much of time hai naa , bilkul mere taraah , this is the only reason i hate exams , kyonki 3 hours ke liyye keep quite hoona hoota hai 😕

chal chal comming ahead hmm , too madam is crying like anything , per madam ye tum and him kya tha m, us insaan ka name bhi add kar dete jiskee liyye bechaare riddhima itana roo rahhe the , hmm really wished aap likhtee and aww he had not contacted her once in last 1 year , poor she , i m soo waiting to read it ahead ki kya suspence hooga behind this hmm,

and then that terrace scene was awesome , loved it a lot , she remembering him and crying and all awww poor riddhima ,

well the end was good , finally she back to mumbai for holidays , and what future holds for her here lol's itana suspense create karte hai aap madam

and one think riddhima came to india , kurkarre khaane ke liyye 🤣🤣🤣🤣

kurkarre , madam tumhee aur kuch nahi millaa , ewwww i don't like them at all , you knew ,
🤣🤣

ab kurkare khaane ke liyye india aane ki kya jaroorat the hmmm 🤣🤣

chal chal waiting to read it ahead , got you , jaldi jaldi update karoo hmm , i knew main busy hu but you r not , and moreover main free hoo gayye na to tum soch loo ki tumhaara kya hooga , to its better you update soon

take care love you lots and miss you as well
simi

Edited by simi2 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
awesome....looking forward to this one....great!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
ok habz darling,
to kaha se shuru karu, duh shuruat se. lol. kk so back to ff. man it was really nice beginning. and i am really looking forward for the next part cuz i have a feeling that in next part armaan will be introduced and just can't wait for it. and aww muskaan is well nice freind. i wonder why riddhima's boyfreind left her. habz sweety u betta continue this quick girl.
love
sanzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
😃 😉😉 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 i'll b back
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Posted: 15 years ago
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pls dont seperate ridz and ammy in this ff, i know i am being silly here and i hope that armaan is the one who will fall in love with ridz again as in her 2nd love :)
but ya AN AWESOME ff and even if u seperate them i will still read it and pls add me to ur pm list

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