fallen in love with you forever(SG MN)part19 pg139

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Shivani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#611

wow

nice one

jaldi update karna

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: SHINKI
wow
nice one

jaldi update karna

yeah thnx........ 😊

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#613

PART 14

SAJAN
sajan came down to the car
the driver was there too to take them
D: samrat baba aaj bhi office jana hai kya
S: ha par tum mayank sahab se sath chale jao.. hum akele chale jayenge
D: par mayank sahab toh kab ka chale gaye
S:( to himself) chala gaya.. ( to driver) : koi bata nahi aaj tum chutti le lo
G: nahi.... chutti deni ki kya zarurat hai. hum office hi toh ja rahe hai
D: ha sahab mujhe chutti nahi chahiye
S(in his mind): ab main kya karu
sam got an idea
S: kya bol rahe ho tum... kal tumne itna kam kiya aur phir tumahri tabiyat bhi theek nahi thi na... yeh lo( he gived money) tum jao doctor ko dikhao ( he gives the driver the look to just go away or else he is dead look
D: theek hai.. thnkyou
G: par.
S( cutting off): kya hua? uski tabiyat kaharnb thi na
gunjan gives an angry look
S: chale?
Gunjan justs sits without a word and sam has a huge grin on his face

MAYUR
they were sitting in the car
nupur had an angry look on her face..
N: hum kaha ja rahe hai ( angry voice)
M: wohi jahan yeh gari ja rahi hai..( sweet voice)
N: dekho mayank tum muhe seedhe seedhe batao ke hum kaha ja rahe hai samjhe... mujhe tumahre saath ghoomne ka koi shauk nahi hai woh to sirf mummy ji ke wajah se.. warna..
M: bas.. tum kitna bolti ho nupur... kabhi kabhi ek ache drive ka bhi luft uthana chahiye.. woh bhi tab jab uske paas uska sabse acha dost ho
N: DOST? mayank tumne jo kam kiya hia na uske baad
M: main janata hoon... par nupur main sachi main baahut bura feel kar raha hoon.. mujhe pata hai mujhe tumhe pehle sab kuch batana chahiye tha par......... i am really sorry nupur
nupur didnt speak a word.. she just looked th other way and she had tears in her eyes which she wanted to hide...

SAJAN
in the car
silence no one speaks
then suddenlty samrat's expression changed to those naughty ones...
S: chashmish..
gunjan didnt understand that he was talking to her... and didnt even bother to ask what he was telling
S: chashmish main tumse baat kar raha hoon
Gunjan looked at him and pointed toewards her asking like u r talking to me?
sam blinked
gunjan gave a confused look
G: chashmish ?
S: ab ha... dekho na... tum hamesha toh chashma lagye huye rehti hoo isleye aaj se main tumhe chashmish bulaunga
G: nahi ( angry voice)
S: ha.... (strict voice) ........... woh bhi pyaar se( sweetly)
gunjan gave an angry look and turned
after sum time
S: main gaana chalu karu?
G: tumhe jo karna hai karo .. mujhse puchne ki zarurat nahi hai...
sam switched on the music player
the song: ladna jhagrana
jhagrke akarana
chodo chodo in baaton inse hoga kya?
choti choti baaton pe chidna bigarna
samjho samjho in baaton se kuch bhi nahi hoga.. ( this is a song from duplicate for those who dnt know)
sam was giving her look please maaf kardo
gunjan had that stern type of look and she changed the song
next song tum hum se kab tak ruthi rahogi ( its an old song)
gunjan again changes the song
song: gustkhi maaf karde aab toh insaaf karde apna dil saaf karde kehna tohg man le
hey jaane bhi de jo bhi hua
sam gives puupy look kimaaf kardo please
she just closes the music and looks to the window side... and uhhu not to forget... she had a small smile on her face... looks like sammy boy is succeeding

MAYUR
they came near a beach
N: mayank hum yahan?
M: hmm yahan.. tumheyaad hai nuur hum bachpan main roz yahan aate the..
nupur smiled... it was like all childhood memories coming back
nupur smiled[
N: mujhe toh yaad tha mayank... par tumhe bhi yaad tha... ( this time in a low voice)
M: mujhe kaiseyaad nahi rahega.. maine apne zindagi ke sabse khoobsurat lamhe yaho toh guzare hai..
nupur just looked at him..( sought off suprised)
mayank smiled
M: hum kahi bethen ?
nupur nodded
they went and sat
M: nupur,.. main woh
N: dekho mayank main is bare mai nabhi koi bat nahi karan chahti please...
M: theek hai..
after sumtime they saw two children playing...
M: nupur woh dekho un bachjon ko kaise meeti se khel rahe hai.. itna pyaarelag rahe hai
N: ha.. tumh yaad hai hum bhi...( she was happy) she lookd at mayank she for taht moment forgor taht she was angry with mayank and the again her smile disappeared
M: hum bhi aise hi khela karte the..
nupur just looked that way
Mayank got an idea
M: acha ke min tum yahi ruko main abhi aaya...
N:par tum kaha ja rahe ho?
M: bolna ek minute..
after sum time mayank came with two golas
M: yeh lo ( giving her fav flavour)
N: kis leye
M: bachapan main jab bhi tum bhi mujhse naraz hoti thi... main tumhe yahan lata tha.. gola delata tha... yaad hai...
nupur was suprised by his words...
N: mujhe nahi khana...
M: main tumhe mujhe maaf karnae ke ;iye force nahi karunga kyunki jo galti maine ki hai w\h maaf kelayak bhi nahi hai. par mera gussa is bechare gole par kyun... kha lo please...
nupur takes it from him.. both started eating and when nupur wa s engrossed oin eatoing myanak looked at her and smile
and when mayank got engrossed nupr looekd at him lovngly

thats it for now. i hope u like it.. next part coming soon.. the guys stillltrying to manao fy
mayank brings more childhood memories
and sajan in office.... tahts for the precap.. hope u guys liked it...

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#614

awesome mindblasting update

really waiting eagerlyyyyyy

for next update yaar

just too good

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aashi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#615

hey pragya superb and awesome update yar loved it to the core loved sayank's try for manaofy 😉 it was too cute and wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yar sam first time called her chashmish *fanit*yar 😳 and the way sam tried to coax gun with song was best part in this update and loved mayur's old memory kinda scene pragya i must say you ff is now becoming our addiction keep it up yar and can't wait for more cute scenes in next part and please write more sajan's part in this ff love u honey for this update and thanks for pm

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: sana_sajan
awesome mindblasting update
really waiting eagerlyyyyyy

for next update yaar

just too good

Thanku soo much sana 😛

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Aaru77

@Aaru77

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Posted: 15 years ago

#617

prags awesome update ....

ok loved the way sam was asking the driver to go... mayur convo of old memories were sweet.

the songs were apt .. pls ASAP the next update...

waiting for sajan office scene...

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: aashizin
hey pragya superb and awesome update yar loved it to the core loved sayank's try for manaofy 😉 it was too cute and wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yar sam first time called her chashmish *fanit*yar 😳 and the way sam tried to coax gun with song was best part in this update and loved mayur's old memory kinda scene pragya i must say you ff is now becoming our addiction keep it up yar and can't wait for more cute scenes in next part and please write more sajan's part in this ff love u honey for this update and thanks for pm

aashi itni tarif mat kar yaar.... please.. main le nahi paungi 😆 😆 well thnx a ton... i know i told u i am trying sumthing different i dnt knw wetehr every1 will like it or not... thnkyou sooo much..... and next upadte main more saja nscenes proimise.. it will be a bigger update i suppose.. i wanted to continue right now.. but due to sum reason i cudnt... soooo........ 😛 well thnx a gain a lot..luv u muahhh... 😊

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani
prags awesome update ....
ok loved the way sam was asking the driver to go... mayur convo of old memories were sweet.

the songs were apt .. pls ASAP the next update...

waiting for sajan office scene...

thnkuu soo much....
ya sajan had to be aone.. par yeh kambakt driver... lolz.... 😆 😆 😆 thnkuuu sooo much once again. will continue asap......... 😛