~My Human Shield~(AR, AN, RM, AA) - My 2nd FF.....

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Nina

@-Nina-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#131

Awesomee part hun SUPERB totally ROCKING oooo okiii now we get why they KISSED OMG but it was quite AWESOME i likeedd the way she was feeling a bit jealous lol veryy welll, hun loovveeeee you for this part ^^

Wow the dresses were great aswell they must be looking PRETTY in them ^^

I just loved the way they met and then their convo lol Armi is just soo funyy LOL disgusting LMAO

It was SUPERB i just cant wait for the next udpate hun plz plz plzz update sooon ^^

Love, Nina ^^

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Indira

@bmtd18

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Hi Pearl,

I love your ff. It was very well written and like the concept.

Could you please pm me when you update.

Indira

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#133

it was really good
loved it
cant believe they kissed

con soon

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DulceTentacion.

@DulceTentacion.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#134

AWESOME part pearl! LOOOOVVED it!

"You know…my butt…i saw u staring…" Armaan said with a victorious smile. "Well…" Ridz who was pretty embarrassed said "Its not bad…well maintained i should say…"

LOL this part cracked me up 🤣 ROFL

omg omg omg they kissed! ☺️ i sooo love you for this part! LOL

i wonder how she will react when she remebers all this and if she doesn't then am sure armaan will be more then happy to remind her. hehe

plz plz plz continue soon! waiting eagerly for the next part!

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navtinder

@navtinder

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#135

awesome part. feel bad for ridz and wow, they already kissed.

thankgod she is safe. hope armaan and abhi don't loose thier job. will be waiting egearly for next part now

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Dhruvika

@dhruvikaluvsKSG

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#136

heyy dear

lovely part

loved it

n wow AR's fiirst kiss

cont soon

n thx for pm

luv dhruvika

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#137

Wow Pearl. Cool update. Poor Ridz is bearing the brunt of being a child of business tycoon. Firstly she is shown sad when her Dad does not call her, then she was thinking about her mom and final blow was guys ignoring gals in the pary.

Haha ... kiss thingy was weird. Ridz was all set to think that she would die and wanted to fulfill her wish. :)

Armaan is in soup ... and sorta his thoughts are right. But then pyaar kiya/huva to darna kya? Its not said that he cannot feel for person he is protecting. Though, these feelings should make him stronger rather than weak.

Lets see what you have further was us. Update soon and thanks for the PM.