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PART 6

Anjali and Muskaan went into the shopping mall. They were passing by the shops and were looking for some dresses.

A pajero car stopped in front of the mall.

A guy wearing suit came out from the car. He stepped into the mall and looked around for someone. Then he dialed a number in his cell phone and start speaking,

-"Mr. Sharma, where are you? I am waiting for you here."

- (the other voice) Mr. Atul, I'm here also. Did you complete that? [

- Yes, I have completed my documentary on the birds. I have the rush print with me. Where are you?

- I am near the ground floor's 121st shop Mr. Atul.

Atul was walking. He turned around and there a collision with Anjali. His cell phone and Anjali both were falling down. He grabbed Anjali and his cellphone fell on the ground.

Atul was looking at Anjali. She's so beautiful. On the other hand Anjali became furious.

"What a nonsense!" she said. "Can't you see while walking?"

Atul said, "What I see? I can see something that I should have seen before." He was memorized by her beauty.

Anjali thought, "Is the guy mad?"

She stood properly pushing him well. Then Atul came to his sense. His cell started to ring again. Atul picked up the phone and turned back to talk, "Yes, Mr. Sharma???.."

Muskaan came to Anjali running and started saying, "Ive seen there a very beautiful dress which will suit you very much."

Anjali went from there with her. After cutting the phone Atul turned around but saw nothing there.

Whatever, he went to the producer Mr. Sharma whom he wanted to give the rush print of a documentary. Atul loves animal very much. So he made a documentary on birds. This is his second documentary. The first documentary was also on birds. He also produced his first documentary and earned a lot of money.

Atul's aim was to be a big director in film industry. His father Umesh Joshi didn't wanted that. So he quarreled with his father and left his house so that he could achieve his aim. He gathered his money by doing as assistant director. Armaan wanted to help him in this case as he is Atul's best friend. But Atul wanted to stand by his own feet. So he didn't take help from any people. Now he's a director.

When he was making his first documentary, he liked cockatoo so much that he bought 12 cockatoos.

Wherever he went, he always took them with him. So, many people called him as 'mad'. But he didn't mind. Because he always wanted to do what he likes.

At the shopping mall, Muskaan and Anjali did their shopping till the evening. That not means that, they shopped many things. They bought a few things.

Atul's conversation was finished by the time. So he was following them.

Anjali stopped front of a jewelry shop. She was looking some rings there. She liked a ring very much. She asked the salesman, "How much the ring is?" "50000 rupees." He replied. She was disappointed and left the shop.

Atul noticed it. So he came into the shop and bought the ring from the salesman. Anjali didn't see this.

Anjai and Muskaan saw that Atul was getting in his pajero car. And the backside of the car there was a lot of cockatoos.

Anjali showed that to Muskaan and said, "Mad guy."

They left the shopping mall laughing.

(That day in the evening)

Armaan got some holidays after working nonstop shooting. He was so tired. It was a much needed break. He was thinking about Riddhima.

"I didn't contact with her for a long time. Don't know what she is thinking about me." Armaan thought.

He went out from the shooting spot and got into his car. He opened his laptop. But there was no charge in his laptop. So he couldn't contact with Riddhima. He switched on his mobile and called Atul.

When Atul was driving the call came. He picked up the phone and said,

-Hey Armaan, wassup? I called you so before so many times but your mobile was switched off. What happened?

- Actually I was too busy due to my shooting. I had to concentrate on my character wich is very challenging to me. So I didn't reply you. Anyways how're you?

- Doing well. What about you?

- I'm fine. What about your children (cockatoos)?

- They are also fine.

- Atul, there's many things to say you.

- What a miracle! I have also an important thing to say you.

- Then please come to our house tomorrow.

- Okay than. See you tomorrow.

They cut the phone.

When Armaan reached his house, he entered his house almost running.

"How're you, sir?" Umar bhai asked.

"Fine. What about you?" Armaan said.

But before hearing the reply he went to his bedroom and charged on his laptop and opened his computer.

He sent a mail to Riddhima, "Hello Riddhima! What's going on? Sorry that couldn't reply you earlier."

"Don't know how she will react." He thought.

Riddhima replied very angrily, "I don't want to talk with you. You go to hell!"

Armaan thought, "I couldn't imagine that she will be so much angered with me."

So he asked her,

- Why? What happened?

- What do you mean by 'what happened'? Amaan, you said that we are friends. Now you vanished without any news? What do you think yourself? A film actor?

Armaan astonished that Riddhima could understand film actor's attitude. He was amused. "She doesn't even know that I am a film actor but talking about that. Very funny." He said himself.

He replied,

- Oh I am so sorry. I was so much busy with my study. Actually I was following your advice and that worked.

- Oh that doesn't mean that you can take rest on my patience. You should have informed me at least once. Do you know that I have broken my favorite racket in this tension that what happened to you? Now I am not going to talk to you. Then you will understand.

-Sorry Ridz.

She didn't reply him and went offline.

Armaan understood that he hurt Riddhima very much. Because of him Riddhima broke her racket. So he planned something.

(In Riddhima's house)

Riddhima became very upset. She thought, "Why I behaved with Amaan like this". She felt that she should say sorry to Amaan.

Anjali and Muskaan came from shopping. When Anjali went to washroom, Riddhima told Muskaan about all these and asked her, "How can I tell sorry to him?" Muskaan gave an idea to her, "You can write very good poem. You better send him a sorry poem." Riddhima said, "Thanks Muskaan, that's a very great idea!"

So she wrote a poem and posted that to Amaan,

I AM SORRY

I'm sorry for everything you've been through
It must've been very hard on you
I'm sorry for all that's been said and done
I was the moon, you were the sun
I'm sorry for not making everything right
But the situation I was in, was very tight
I'm sorry for not lending you a hand
If only I could be a better friend
I'm sorry if it seemed like I didn't care
Lucky for you, your special- someone was there
I'm sorry for breaking your heart
For forgiveness, where do I start?

Riddhima sent this to Amaan and was waiting for his reply.

Edited by ffkhan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Me first 🥳

wow yaar👏
superb part
n the poem riddhima wrote was awesome....
thanks for the pm
ishu

Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
heyyy dear,
awesome part
try to write longer part
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Awesome! i particularly liked the poem, and needless to see, we too, are wating for his reply like Ridz! Update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
thanks 4 the lovely update
atual is such a sweetheart
love the poem
cant wait 4 armaan reply
con soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Hey
Awesome part
Continue soon
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Awesome part. Cannot wait for the next part. Plz update fast.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: laizu

Awesome part. Cannot wait for the next part. Plz update fast.

Thank you for the nice card ⭐️🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
awesome part
love the poem
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😃hey dear😃

lovely part....
AR was great😃
LOVED THE POEM😍
it's mindblowing😳
did u wirte it???😊.....
keep continue
thanks for the PM😃

lots of love
prinz😳
Edited by Prinnia - 15 years ago

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