Mini AR FF:BEYOND THE SKY , PART-2/6 PG 5

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jenifer

@blue-jen

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ishwariya

sorry yaar.... woh bool gayi... next time i'll surely pm u

thanks so much..

yaar muhje bhi usak ka climax pasand nahi aaya 😭

u knw i too love that dialogue.... esp where ganesh says naatla yevalo ponnu irundhum.. nee yen da jessy ah love panna.. but where simbu says athan sir enakum theriyala ...

i laugh at this dialouge.. even i imagine this with KAJEN n only wrote.... coz i cant c either shilpa or sukirit in the place of jessy

its ok yaar..i too dont like that climax....they could have finished the movie with Anbil avan song..i think they have ended the movie in a gud way in telugu.
this is the best story for KAJEN.Do u know i want ridz to say the dialogue which jessy to karthik b4 the anil avan song..i like the way the two people emoted the scene..wow..😛😳😳
😳😃 ok coming to the point continue ASAP😊😊😊. eagerly waiting..
luv
jeni

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Aishwarya sharma

@Ishia

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: blue-jen

its ok yaar..i too dont like that climax....they could have finished the movie with Anbil avan song..i think they have ended the movie in a gud way in telugu.
this is the best story for KAJEN.Do u know i want ridz to say the dialogue which jessy to karthik b4 the anil avan song..i like the way the two people emoted the scene..wow..😛😳😳
😳😃 ok coming to the point continue ASAP😊😊😊. eagerly waiting..
luv
jeni

ya sure jenny .. yup in Telugu. vtv is till anbil avan only .. about KAJEN i love them ...

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Aishwarya sharma

@Ishia

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

First of all My apology to all for being so late i'll update it within a Hour
Sorry for being late in updating it...
I know its been two months since i've update.... sorry the present track of DMG pissed me off n AR not being together... was more added to it,.. n i got busy in my life,..New Job new environment...
i finished writing this FF But will post Based on ur comments
From now on on every Saturday Sunday n Monday u can except my update
n i'll surely update all my three FF on these days

Love
Ishu....

Edited by ishuKSGKAJEN - 15 years ago

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Aishwarya sharma

@Ishia

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Its been 2 week since i've met her, Nor she was in her home or she came home to meet Muskan, I felt as if a part of mine is missing. i felt i was the reason y she left me, was i wrong in telling her that i loved her, where did I go wrong Saying that i loved her or saying i loved her in the middle of our street, will she hate me, will she ever see my face, Oh Man what I've done, At least i would have asked her a hand of friendship...

Armaan what are u thinking......

Ammy where the hell ru ....

Riddhima I'm extremely sorry i shouldn't have said that i love u that to in the middle of the street

Armaan mein Muski Hoon Riddhima nahi.. 😆 Tumari behan

Kash na hoti

What did u say...😡

Kuch nahi woh Riddhima kahan hai muski...

Riddhima.. 😲 Wait Armaan ru planning to .. love shov ka chakar Hai toh chod de.. kabhi work out nahi hoga. Tum baad mein baut sari problems face karna hoga Ammy

Areey Muski.. Shub shub bol.... Mein ne isi liya poocha that she's been missing for past two weeks she did not even came to meet u so i thought of asking u where did she go..

Oh. She went to kerala Will be back after one week. Armaan Just an advice i know that u love her n i saw the way u told ur love to her, I'm just warnig you bekar ki problem hogi n don't even have a idea of going to Kerala

B4 she said i decided that i'm going to kerala. I know i've to say sorry to her

IN KERALA

Armaan U are sure that u'll find Riddhima in this big city

Arrey Shubukanr sir Aap bhi na B+ve...

B+Ve.. Armaan we are hear for past 4 days n till now we haven't found her aur han remember that i've to go back If not that producer will make the hell out of me...... I'll give u a suggestion.
call up ur sis n say her to ask detail about riddhima n her whereabouts

Aur u mad sir uski baap Mujhe Zindaa hi Mardega....

Aur mujhe bhi naa maa Bollywood mein achi naam hai mera

aab bhi na sir so silly acha good ni8.. feeling sleepy.. aur aab bhi sojayeh....

ok Good ni8

SIr sir.. get up.....

Kya hai armaan itna raath ko..

Sir kal Sunday hai na...
Ji nahi kal Monday hai.. Buddhu.. Saturday ki baath Sunday hi ayega....😆

Ha ha ha very nice joke.. I cant control my laughter 😡

Acha kya hai bolo

Sir kal Sunday hai aur Riddhima Christen hai aur woh Zaroo church jayegi..

Armaan Chirsten sirf Church jathey hai Mandir nahi 😡

Ha sir.... She will surely came to church 2mrw... aur hum ussay wahi par millingay......

For ur kind info MR Malik is sher me Ghar se Zayad Church's hi Zayada. hai.. aur aap har Church dooingay kay usko... 😲

aab jeyah don't disturb my sleep..... kal mujhe riddhima ko millna hai i should look fresh

hello who's disturbing who's sleep...

Chal tha hai boss..

tu sach mein pagal hai

han riddhima ki pyaar mein.....

Next Day

Ru sure this the one Armaan

S, sir this the church which every Sunday she comes for Mass & I've a complete research about it..... 😉

Ru u sure Armaan

U don't believe me sir.. 😭

Unless n Until we both don't land up in Jail

Of fo sir u don't trust me....

You know what Armaan luck favor's the brave.. Aur will u be able to stand up for ur love..

Small correction sir Luck Favor's the intelligent... Aur chaliya Mass shuru honey wali hai

Sir.. dekiya she's there in that Yellow sir...

Kahan yaar

Sir wahan sir there she's is next to that Aunty in pink.

Armaan kya figure hai yaar seriously u can give ur life for her... She's Dam Pretty yaar... 😳

Ni sa re sa ri ni sa...

Oei woh Bombay film ka tune hai aur usmein manisha Muslim thi...

AR;Sir pyaar mein koi cast sab nahi dekthay Pyaar mein "Sirf ek hi cast hai Ek hi Music aur EK hi language Aur Armaan kay liya Sirf Riddhima Sirf aur Sirf Riddhima.....

AR:Agar aap ko doubt hai toh i'll count till 10 aur woh mud kar dekay gi...

Sh;yeh kuch Zaya nahi hai Armaan.....

AR;Sir....

Sh;acha ok

Sh:Ah one
ah two
Ah three
ah four..

Ar;turn turn....
AR;sir woh wahan riddhima ne..

SH:What Man u said ten.. she turned with in 4..... Aur uski Eye...Koi arrow hai kya So much power n aur itna nasha hai uski eyes mein

Han han sir 😍

RD:😃
A: Hai..

Sh:acha ok chal bahar chal they. come we will meet her out...

AR; Hai riddhima.....
RD; hai 😃

Ar; Sorry , That day i was totally mad, I thought i made a mistake .. I'm sorry I know you will be upset so came her to say sorry to u...

RD; oh ok ok....

AR; well Riddhima this is shubankar sir Jab we met camera man...
Riddhima: Hi ..

Riddhima..

RD; Wait i'll introduce u as my class mate.....

Gm. arru ana mole ithu(who's he my child)
RD; Acha amma enda friend annu ithu Armaan( grand mom he's my friend college met armaan)
AR; Hello Dadi..
GM : ithra periya alu nida Friend oh...( this big man is ur friend also)
RD; Acha aam eh alu armaan oda friend( no no he's armaan's friend)
RD; this is my uncle Geroge
Rd; uncle this is armaan aur uski friend shubankar....

Un: how about lunch riddhima . bring them home.. tell them our house address....

R: kalapura kal Alapyee,,
AR: ru sure....
Rd; ya pretty sure i''ll handle it....

phew.... i know this part is short,but i'll promise i'll update a big part next time... sorry if i bored with this part, but it was very much needed.........

Love
Ishu

please leave ur valuable comment....

Pm's later...

Edited by ishuKSGKAJEN - 15 years ago

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ffkhan

@ffkhan

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Nice dialogue written. Loved AR convo.

No problem if it's short update or not. The actual matter is the Part is very well written.😃

Keep it up.

And continue soon.😊

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Ridi

@GuDiYa...

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Awesome part .

Loved it .

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Hey ishu

just read ur FF dear ...its really different .. hmm .. south indian movie concept?... sounds nice... as such most of their movies are amazing ... it will be nice reading ur FF ... 😃

Gosh! this armaan is so madly, deeply in love with ridz... wonder wat will happen to their relationship... caste n all differences are really a big prob ...though m sure new generation doesnt believe it but unfortunately, our elders still do...!! 😕... anyways, looking forward to the update...
cnt soon... thnx 4 d pm.. .

love
Vini