Mahak's One-Shots #2: For Deepika [Mayur] : Pg 59 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Shafoo

THT WAS SOO NICE

thanks...........

Originally posted by: mina_18secret

Fabulous OS Mahak!

Do write more...

Love

Mina

thanks a lot mina,.....

i wud be writing more......

thanks........

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Amazing......Mind-blowing

Loved the way you described everything

thanks a lot yaar......

i am so happy that u loved the way i described!

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

<font color="#ff00ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Girl... Mahak... tere charan kamal kidhar hain.. i bow down to u in complete awe and admiration what a terrific and mindblowing OS.. if this is what you call boring, then I better re-define that word... Truly ecstatic and Fantabulous and totally Mayurble... ok.. i m also not going to ruin my comment more by words only by actions.. as Actions speak out louder than words and Silence is golden.</font>

<font color="#ff00ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">🤗</font>

<font color="#ff00ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">❤️</font>

<font color="#ff00ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">😍</font>

lol....di aap bhi na!

i am literally beaming with happiness after reading ur comment!

u think this was terrific and mindblowing?

thanks di!

ohk ohk,.....i wont ever call my oneshots boring now!

thanks a lot di!

now i am even blushing!

thanks...........

thanks di for such beautiful compliments and also thanks for such beautiful actions!

i am missing u!

thanks...............

Originally posted by: Senny

awwwwwwwww mahak that was sooo beautifully written and i remember that fromdivzzzzzz's FF, this all reminds me of Ronan keating's song, you say it best when you say nothing at all, i guess Annie made a fantastic Vm on it last week.

Nupur sure is a very lucky girl, wowwwww that was such a wonderful date, it didn't matter how many beautiful things were there, as we don't remember them so well, they just become a vague memory, what we remember is how we felt at that time.

I really loveddddd reading this man, do write more.

God bless.

thanks a lot......

hey i love this song tooooooooooooooooooooooo much!

yup u r right.......

thanks for loving this.....

i loved hearing from u!

thanks.................

i am writing more.............

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Awwww...

I am in total awe

it was sooo cute

wouldn't you want a guy like that

*sigh*

I wish!

I absolutely love the title

A Date to Cherish

It's so perfect for the setting

and the plot

Continue writing more amazing os!

thanks a lot........

i too wud want a guy like that!

thanks.......

i wud be writing more......

thanks...........

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

beautiful one shot!!

thanks a lot............

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

that was so sweeet

thanks for the pm

plz do writ more of them

thanks a lot.........

i wud be writing more.......

thanks..............

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Mahi
congrats for ur new gallery
and this os was so nice
so simple and so sweet
loved it
pls do write more

thanks a lot tapu for ur wishes........

thanks a lot........

thanks for loving it............

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

hey awesome os.....just loved it.........do write more such os.......

thanks a lot.......

thanks for loving it........'

i wud be writing more!