My Untouched Desire (Mayur) pt 18 pg 88 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Hey it was fab
Plz update soon
Liked that Nupur was cool n clam her
She is too mature also
Lets c wat happens next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
gr8 update...continue it soon...thnx 4 pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
loved this concept


as well as the cs


continue soon


hey pls ad me to ur pm list


love pebbzzii
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Fabulous start Pooja...

Loved it dear.....
Continue soon!
Nups in 2nd year... Hmmm.....
Waiting for more nok jhoks....
Love
Mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
gr88 start..!!
i'm eager to know what happens next
do continue soon
plz add me to the PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Hey gal it was awesum update.........
i loved it thouroughly............simply amazing one.........Udhay is such a nice bro........
N nupur is so lovely..........
do cont sooooooon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Hi Pooja

I read ur first part.

It was just wonderful

Loved Nupur a lot.

She scared that she lose everyone she love .

That's why she didn't express it.

Poor Nupur.

Nups bade ma, bade papa , bhai-bhabi every one was so nice.

They clearly understood her.

They knew why she didn't express her feelings.

Loved their family bonding.

So the gang try to ragging nupurs. And thy wanted that nups sing a song for at her very first day at college.

And when nupr sang it brilliantly then everyone was shocked.

Specially Mayank- he was mesmerized by her talent, beauty and innocence.

I really loved this part.

U written it beautifully.

Now I m looking forward for the next part.

Plz try to update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
haayeelaaaa hawwtt haawwtt hawwt!
cantt waiitt to reaadd aheaaddd !
:D:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
perfect song choice...... love it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Nice start dear

Amazing update

do cont soon

Plz PM me when you update

Luv
Nidzy~

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