My Untouched Desire (Mayur) pt 18 pg 88 - Page 3

Hey it was fab

gr8 update...continue it soon...thnx 4 pm...

loved this concept


as well as the cs


continue soon


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love pebbzzii

Fabulous start Pooja...

gr88 start..!!
i'm eager to know what happens next
do continue soon
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Hey gal it was awesum update.........
i loved it thouroughly............simply amazing one.........Udhay is such a nice bro........
N nupur is so lovely..........
do cont sooooooon
thanks 4 the pm

Hi Pooja

I read ur first part.

It was just wonderful

Loved Nupur a lot.

She scared that she lose everyone she love .

That's why she didn't express it.

Poor Nupur.

Nups bade ma, bade papa , bhai-bhabi every one was so nice.

They clearly understood her.

They knew why she didn't express her feelings.

Loved their family bonding.

So the gang try to ragging nupurs. And thy wanted that nups sing a song for at her very first day at college.

And when nupr sang it brilliantly then everyone was shocked.

Specially Mayank- he was mesmerized by her talent, beauty and innocence.

I really loved this part.

U written it beautifully.

Now I m looking forward for the next part.

Plz try to update soon

haayeelaaaa hawwtt haawwtt hawwt!

Nice start dear

Amazing update

do cont soon

Plz PM me when you update

Luv
Nidzy~