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PART 3



Ohhh weeee aaahhhh…
Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya(smrat)
Haann…(he pulled her to dance)
Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya(gunjan)
(Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai) ……2(smrat and gunjan)
Irradon mein tu hai
Yehhh…we could fall in love
I say… I could fall in love
Yehhh…we could fall in love
And i say… I could fall in love with you(smrat)
Koi bhi aaisa lamha nahin hai
Jisme mere tu hota nahin hai
Mein so bhi jaao raathon mein lakin
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai(gunjan)
(Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai) ……2(both)
Irradon mein tu hai
Yeehh…
Ohh…
Hai teri innayat tujhse mili hai
Hoonto pe mere hasi jo khili hai
Usse mera chehra chupa bhi na paye
Tujhe paake hasil huye jo khushi hai
Tujhe paake hasil huye jo khushi(smrat)
Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai(gunjan)
Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya(smrat)
(Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai) ……2
Irradon mein tu hai(both)
they both danced.the depressing mood of gunjan changed into a happy one.now her face was lighting like 1000 watt bulb.they both were seeing lovingly.
when gujan again saw her family her face become dull.smrat noticed that.
s:chashmish hmne bauji ka ashirwad nahn lya tha kal wo jaldi cahle gay the ab le lein
gunjan thought a bit and then nodded in yes they moved towards her bau ji.
s:namaste uncle
and they both bend to touch her feet but he moved back.a tear drop from gunjan's eyes
g:bau ji.........
b;bau ji kehne ka haq tm us din kho chuke the jb ghar chor ke gaye the
g:lakin bau ji........
shena cutted her and said wasey yeh khayal tmhey kal dad ke dushman ke baete ke sath shadi karte huwe nahn aya tha jo ab un se ashirwad le rahe ho wasey bhe dad to tmhe kab ke family se nikal chuke hain chalen dad hm to yahan srf r.v ke dad ke waja se aey the warna hmey konsa shok tha yahan ane ka
they all went from there and gunjan crying badly went to their room
as it was late so everyone went back and after saying everyone to good bye he goes to their room
he entered in the room and saw gunjan near window and she totally lost in her thoughts and tears were countinuosly coming from her eyes smrat was hurt a lot she went near her
he hold her from sholders and was about to say when
gunjan said:smrat kya mein ne galt kya hai kuch ? smrat mein apne sare zindage kase barbad karte?bau ji agar khain aur kehte to mein shadi kar bhe lete lakin us shaks sey kase karte jis ke nazar mein aik larki ke koi ezat nahn hai koe value nahn jo aurat ko joti ke nok par rakhta hai smrat btao kya mein ne inkar karke kuck galt kya?agar mein ne un ke aik wish complete nahn ke to kya is sey hmara rishta tot jata hai?kya wo pyar wo trust wo sb kuch jhot tha ya yeh jhot hai?

smrat:chashmish tm khabhe galt ho he nahn sakte jis ne aj tak koe galt kaam ya faisla nahn kya to wo kasey apni zindage ka itna bara faisla galt kar sakte? tm ne bilkul teek kya shadi se inkar kar ke asey sahak ke sath zindage kase guzare ja sakte hai jo janwaron se bhe batar(bura) ho chashmish wo un ka pyar wo tm par trust jhot nahn tha wo pyar sacha tha lakin yeh bhe sach hai ke wo lalch mein andhe ho gaye hain aur unhey yeh nazar nahn a raha ke unho ne kya khoo dya hai abhe unko aehsas nahn hoga lakin bd mein wo pachtaen ge ke unho ne sb se qemti chezz kho de hai aur chashmish hm ne mohabat kar ke ya shadi kar ke kuch galt nahn kya. agar galt he kya hota to hm yun sb ke samne na jate galt kaam hamesha dusron se chup kar kya jata hai hm ne sb ko bula kar sb ke samne ye rishta jora hai aur jis rishte mein kuda ke marzi shamil ho wo rishta jhota ya galt kse ho sakta hai chashmish jb kuch galt kya he nahn to pachtawe ke ansu kis leyE bahana?
g:smrat yeh pachtawe ke nahn bulke dukh ke hain jin se itna pyar kya jin ko apna jana unho ne he paraya bna dya....
s:chashmish shaid yeh kehna bohat asan aur karna bohat mushkil hai ke un ko buhl jao lakin chashmish mein tmse wada karta hoon ke tmeh kabhe un rishtoon ke kamme nahn hone dn ga tmhay itna pyar don ga ke tmhey un paloon ke yaad ke jhalk bhe nahn ae ge
g:smrat tm mjhe un ke trah chor to nahn do ge?
s:jb taj sans rahe ge har pal har qadam pr tmhara sath don ga mout bhe hamrey rastey alag nahn kar pae ge
gunjan hugged him tightly
s:chalo chashmish dair ho gae hai ab so jao
they went to the bed and slept in each other arms
next morning was new staring in their life.smrat got up first he saw gunjan slepinng peacfully in his arms he thought she was looking like a sleeping angel he kissed her forehead then goes to bath room.hecomes back after taking bath gunjan has woke up
s:gunjan jaldi se tyar ho jao hamey nashta kar ke khain jana hai
g:khana jana hai?
s:its surprise mam jae aur jaldi se tyar ho jaen he said smilingly
gunjan goes to get ready whereas smrat went downwards
after a while gunjan also came down smrat was spell bound of her beauty she called his name several time but he didnt react at last she callad smrat in loud voice in his voice
s:chashmish
g:kya chashmish itni dair se bula rahe hon sun kuin nahn rahe ?
s:jb tm itni kobsorat lago ge to mein apne hosh ho hawas kase kaim karon ga ?
she blushed a little then changed the topic
g:smrat hm ja khana rahe hain?
s:chashmish wait karo sabr ka phal hamesha metha yani smrat hota hai
gunjan smiled smrat gave her a bite and then gunjan gave him they complete their brake fast and set on their destination
smrat's surprise
precap :surprise
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Edited by meerrii - 15 years ago
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awesomeeeee ud dear..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzz do cont soon..
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awesomest update dear
waiting eagerly for the surprise dear
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veryyy nicee update dearrr plss conttt ssonnn
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part 4
surprise

the car stopped in front of a very very big mansion.tis beauty was eye catching.
g:smrat yeh ghar kitna kobsorat hai lakin hm yahan ae kuin hain?
s:utro abhe pta chal jaye
they both goes to the main gate.it was written on main gate
welcom to MR AND MRS SMRAT SHERGILL
gunjan red that and turned to look at smrat who has broad smile
g:smrat yeh hamara ghar hai lakin........
s:shhhh swal bad mein abhe andar chalo
they enter from main gate to prooced towards the gate of enterance .it was a path between garden on both side there was a waterfall on one corner.garden was awesome gunjan was memorized by its beauty
they stood in front of house
smrat opened the door gunjan was about to step in thenn
s:chashmish aik mint ruko
g:kuin ?
s:bus aik mint ruko
smrat disappeared and come after few seconds there was a big rectangular plate and she placed it infront of gunjan
s:mein tmhara is ghar mein phela kadam hamesha hamesha ke lye yaad rakhna chahta hn
g:hmm to ao mere sath
they both tried to engraved their footprints but was not suucced they hold each other hands in this attempt and was suceed there was two footprints on that plate(it was same sene in gajni as i love this sene thats why i put it)
they entered in the house.it was a big sitting room on one wall there was huge painting of smrat and gunjan's wedding.smrat having a hand on gunjan shoulder (in painting)
s:to kaisa laga mam
g:tm ne abhe pora to dkhaya nahn aur mere tangein bhe thak gaye hain main gate se ate ate car pe nahn la sakte the
s:ohhhh koi baat nahn mam ap ka gulam hazir hai
smrat lift in her arms
g:smrat kya ker rahe ho mjhe neche utaro
s:tmhey ghar dkhane laga hn geee
they first entered in kitchen then the guest room then they proceed to their room upward it was written on their room
MR AND MRS SMRAT SHERGILL ROOM
gunjan smiled they enter in the room and flower of petals start to fall down on them they were enjoying
g:smrat bus ab mjhe neche utaro mjhe hamra room dkhna hai
s:wasiey chashmish tmne room ankhoon se dkhna hai aur mjhe asey bohat maza aa raha hai
g:smrat plz
s:apka hukam sar ankhoon pe janb
she roamed in the room it was a big room pics of them was on all 4 walls most of them were of gunjan.
she opened the cupboard and was surprised to see her new soo many dresses
g:smrat yeh
smrat huged her from back and asked kya huwa ache nahn hain kya?
g:nahn bohat achi lakin yeh sab
s:chashmish yeh ghar dad or mom ne meri shadi ke leye bnwaya tha un ke ye wish the ke mein yeh apne hone wale dulhan ko as weding gift don aur mere bhe is ghar mein aik alag he baat yahan tmse phele mere elawa koe nahn aya
g:suhanni bhe nahn
s:han
g:smrat thanks yeh mera sb se acha aift tmhary baad
they both smiled and hugged
they broke hug then
s:chashmish yahan koe nahn aya to is ley mein ne hmarey sare friends ko invite kya hai tea pe
g:hmmmm phr to bohat maza ae ga kuin smrat
s:ge mam kuin nahn
g:acha phir mein prepartions karte hn
s:abhe khan mam apne abhe pura ghar khana dkha hai
g:smrat baad mein dkh looon ge
s:nahn mam chalo mein tmhay sb se special jaga dkhat hn
they entered in a room it was music room so every instrument was there
s:chashmish yeh hai music room tmhey music acha lagta hai na
g:han smrat yeh bohat acha hai
then they procced towards study room and with abig library there was everywhere books books
g:ye bhe mere lea smrat phr to tmke pasand ke bhe koe cheez hone chahey
s:hai na tm
they had an eyelock
g smrat
s:acha baba chalo dkhata hon
now there was a basket ball court
s:bus kush
g:han bohat
then they go at the back of house there was a pool it was increasing beauty of the house
then they move towards sitting hall and sat thein on sofas as they are now tired
smrat was nuzling his nose on gunjan shoulder and had hold him on from wrist
g:smrat kya ker rahe ho?
s:romance mam aur kya?
he kissed her on shoulder she shivered
g:smrat baad mein karna romance chalo tyar ho jao wo log ane wale hon ge
s:hmmmm chalen
g:han
he lift her again
g:smrat
s:tm thak gaye ho na chashmish to uper kase jao ge?
g:tm nahn thake
s:mere thakan to tmhey dkhte he utar jate hai ge they enterd their roomthey got ready was now in sitting room just then all the gang appeared
all:wah wah kya ghar hai
nuper:ghar kya khao mehal hai
s:thanks ab tm log andar to ao
suh:nahn bhae phele mjhe ghar dkhao
g:acha teekh hai smrat tm inhey ghar dkhao mein chae banate hn
s:chashmish marne ....
g:smrat aende aesa bola na to mein tmsey khabe baat nahn karoon ge
smrat kissed on her fingers and pulled her such that smrat was huging from behind gunjan was blushing like hell
every one was enjoying the sight
s:promise kbhe nahn bolon ga
gunjan smiled
suh:chalo bhae ab dkha bhe do
s:acha meri behan chalo everyone was seeing their phot just then smrat kissed gunjan on cheeks
gunjan blushed adn run away towards kitchen
m:isey kya huwa ?
n:jo tmne nahn dkha
m:kya nahn dkha
suh:mein btao bhae
now smrat was blushing
a:kya btana hai
s:kuch nahn kuch nahn chalo ghar dkhata hn
girls gigled wereas amrat gave them angry look
after sometime gunjan was seting table when they all come back
n:smrat is sey bara ghar nahn bnaeya gye mere tangein dkh gaye hain
suh:bhe ghar bohat kobsorat hai aur ap logon ka room sb se perfect hai aur sbse acha us mein bhabhi ke pics hain
g:thanks yeh lo chae
she served them all and now they were sitting idle when
n:kuch khelein?
suh :han
adh:truth or dare
m g and s han tekh hai gunjan goes and brought a bottle
now girls was on one side amd boys on other gujan infront of smrat
they spined bottle it was onnnnnn
mayank and nuper
n:truth ya dare
m:dare
to guys kya dein mayank ko dare
g:bhe ap babhi ke leye gana gao
m:kya
s:han aur wo bhe romentic
m whispered smrat beta tere bare ae to shae phr mein btata hon
mayank sings tera hooone laga hoon
nuper was blushing
now bottle spind and it was adhraj and suhani
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awesomeeeeeee ud...
it ws amaazingggggg..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzzz do cont soon...
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