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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

nice update daksha....

mayur n anjali were cute....😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Whew Daksha...
Lovely update
*hugs*
It was awesoem raeding it!!!!
Continuee soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
luvd d update daksha...👏
luvd d convos betwn Mayur & Angel😃...
pls update soon...
best of luck 4 ur exms.👍🏼..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
You rock dodi...
Amazing update i love it alot!

spcly Anjali part ..Happa ...happa.....😆 SOOO sweet!
Everything was good!

Cant wait for next ome,

Love,
Aisho<3
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

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sorry for the delay ,due to my exam ,congrats for your new thread
lovley work daksha and nice banner to ,lovley work with your vms and pencil sketch too.
i admire your style ,
sorry for not commenting on your previous part...
well i love this part very much cute but lovley scene between sammy and gunjan


(she was a bit mingled up with the household job and was speaking this in anger): Mere ghar mein toh bhuke rakshas rehte hain…..kisi ko nahin dikhta main subah se kaam kar rahi hoon….Happa happa….arre nashta bana rahi hoon….tabhi toh laaungi…..



lvoely dialouge yaar mera to khud ka mann happa happa ker raha hein
lovley dialouge





N: Haan ab toh Mayank film banayenge Main Aur Mrs. Sharma…

lovley update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Too great update!! I loved it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Awwww really cutee update sweetyy!!!!👏👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
heeeyyyyyy really lovelyyyy partttt yaaar plsssss dooo cont sooon withh more sajan partttt and best of luk for the exams
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Scene: Office

In the designing department….Dia was meeting with everyone….she is very proud, boastful person and this is always visible on her face…..no one liked her……then enters Indu (the clerk)…..he gave some files to the colleagues…..Dia left from there as Samrat hadn't arrived till then so no further work could be done……

I: Rhea and Aman…..tum dono ko naye Ad ke slogan par kaam karna hai…..

R: Iss naye ad mein ye kaam karegi na…. kitni proudy hai….. isske liye to koi machhar bhagane waali coil ka ad hona chahiye…… par humaare yahaan to bade bade hotels hain…..khair chodo thodi der mein kaam karenge…..

A: Haan…waise hi issne aakar mood kharab kar diya……

R: Kal maine Fanaa movie dekhi….usska wo dialog accha hai na….Mere dil mein teri saanson ko…..

A: Kya idea hai Rhea….. dekh ek slogan…..Mere bill mein tere paison ko jagah mil jaaye….warna hotel ke bartan maajte maajte mere haath kale na ho jaayein….

And they both start laughing….

R: Sahi hai….isske liye aise hi slogan hone chahiyein……

Then enters Samrat…….there was a complete silence…..

S: So how is the work proceeding guys…..

And he goes to his cabin…..He calls Mayank……

Mayank enters and sits on the chair…..

M: Toh…..Samrat how was the holiday…..

S: Fine…Mayank…..aaj papa ki tabiyat phir kharaab ho gayi….mujhe darr laga rehta hai…..

M: He'll be fine Samrat…..

S: Accha ye sab chodo…aur mujhe batao meeting mein kya kya hua…..

They were talking about everything….about the deal…..

M: Haan toh bas ab ek advertisement shoot karna hai….humaare customers ko nayi cheezon ko baare mein bhi toh pata chale…..

Then enters Indu….

I: Sir….Gupta enterprises ki meeting shuru hon mein bas 5 min hain…..

S&M: Hum aa rahe hain…..chalo…..

They leave for the meeting……

After few hours….its night time…..and also its raining in the whole Mumbai….

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Mayank enters the house……whole wet….

M: Aaj to baarish ne hadd kar di….. car se nikalne mein hi poora bheeg gaya……

N: Kapde badal lo warna thand lag jaayegi……phir cheenkte rehna……aanchu aanchu…..main towel le kar aati hoon……

She leaves for the balcony…….and when she returns……..Mayank started laughing seeing her……She was too fully drenched out with water……..

M: Tum bhi…..

N: Tum bhi kya…..jab bahar itni tez bearish ho rahi hai to koi bhi bheeg jaayega na……issmein hansne ki kya baat hai……..

Nupur gave the towel to Mayank….and she went inside the bedroom…….Mayank removed his shirt……wearing his black vest he always looks so hot…… his muscular toned arms were shining because of the water droplets sliding over his shoulders……

He entered in the bedroom…….

Nupur was changing her saree……her wet hairs were falling over her shoulders……..Mayank was looking at her admiringly…….after Nupur was done……she was going outside…..Mayank was standing and she shakes up her face in a manner of asking "Kya hua"…..and Mayank nods his face in replying "Nothing"……Nupur moved forward but Mayank grasped her hand and pulled her towards himself……..

Removing Nupur's hairs to the back of her ears that were interfering between him and his wife, Mayank said….

M: Aaj bohot sundar lag rahi ho…..

And moved her more closer to his body…..

N: Accha….toh kuch naya bataao warna main jaa rahi hoon……

M: Ek pal ke haseen lamhe humein pasand nahin……usske baad tum chale jaao ye humein manzoor nahin……

His fingers were interwining with the Nupur's hairs…….both were looking into each others eyes……then Nupur interrupts……

N: Achha…..ab main jaa rahi hoon……

Nupur leaves herself from the grip and tries to leaves but Mayank holds the pallu of her saree…..nupur stops with a jerk….she turns and sees it is Mayank…..but Mayank pulled her again and the pallu fell off from her shoulder……Mayank removed Nupur's hair falling on her shoulder and kissed on her collarbone…..Nupur grasped Mayank's shoulder more tightly……then Mayank kissed on her forehead……..on her cheeks and then on her lips……Nupur was holding Mayank's arms more tightly…..her fingers were impressing hard on his shoulder…..both were lost into each other they were completely dissolved into each other…..Mayank then breaks the kiss and picks her up in his arms…….both were looking into each other eyes…..Mayank placed her on the bed….switched off the lights and then……….

In the same time……..

Scene: Sehgal House

Samrat entered the house…..he went directly to his Dad's room…..

His dad was resting on the bed his eyes were close and Gunjan was sitting beside him…..reading aloud "Geeta"…. Speaking the verses in her beautiful voice…. Samrat stopped at the door and was looking at Gunjan…he was happy to see that Gunjan is looking after his dad so responsibly……Gunjan was busy reading….she didn't noticed him…..while turning the page when she looked up she saw him……firstly she imated that the dad is resting and imated to tell Samrat to go out…..but Samrat was standing there…..he then imitated to tell Gunjan to come with him…..Gunjan nodded her face in No……still Samrat was standing….then Gunjan mouthed "jaao" and he nodded his head in No…..after a while when Gunjan assured that Dad was slept….she stood up and walked out of the room……

Outside the room…..

G: Aap bohot ziddi hain…..apni baat manwa kar chodte hain…..

S: Wo toh main hoon….ab Dad ki tabiyat kaisi hai……

G: Ab acchi hai….

S: Tum itna khayal jo rakhti ho unka……

Gunjan looked down and was blushing……and then she heard the voice og sneezing "aanchu"

She looked uo it was Samrat…..she then noticed his hairs were wet…..

G: Chaliye jaldi se kapde badal lijiye…..warna tabiyat aur kharab ho jaayegi…….

In the room……

Gunjan took out Samrat's clothes from the almirah and gave it to him……

G: Ye leejiye……..

And she moved out but Samrat stopped her by holding her by her waist…..she blushed…..

G: Chodiye mujhe…..mujhe jaana hai…..neeche maa intezaar kar rahi hogi……

Samrat pulled her towards himself…… Gunjan jerked Samrat's hand….

S: accha……

Samrat was moving forward and Gunjan was moving backward…..Samrat moving closer to her and Gunjan away…..suddenly Gunjan was stopped by the bed and she fell over there……Gunjan couldn't find a way out….she picked up a pillow and gave it to Samrat…..

Samrat felt a push of pillow….before he could react further Gunjan was at the door….

G: Abhi issi se kaam chalaiye……

And she leaves out laughing…….Samrat lied down on the bed holding the pillow smiling…….

Scene: Adhiraj's House

A: Maine wo room saaf karwa diya hai…..tu apna saamaan wahin arrange karle….

D: OK bro……

She went into the room……and opened up the almirah…….It was left to be cleaned….dust particles were moving in the air……Dia removed them with her hands and shouted….

D: Bro……yahaan bilkul safaai nahin hui hai…….

Before she could close the door she found a photo album……she picked it up…….removed the dust……

D: Ye album yahaan kya kar rahi hai……

She opened it up……and found Nupur's and Adhiraj's engagement photos in that…….

Adhiraj too arrived till then…..

He found that Dia is looking at the album turning the pages……

Then she finds Adhiraj has come….

D: Bro……ye tumhaari sagaai ke photos hain…..aur….aur ye ladki toh wahi hai jiski photo aapki wallet mein thi…..ye kya chakkar hai……

She turns a page and finds Mayank's photo too…..

D: Arre ye toh Mr. Sharma hain…….

Thats for now....... Please comment karna......mujhe accha lagega agar aap bataayenge ki ye line acchi nahin thi ya ye dialogue boring tha...... compliments dena par criticise bhi karna OK.....aur jo Like button press karke chod dete hain ek baar comment bhi karo boss....Please
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yupiee first to comment...
aa the sajan scene was sssoooooo adrable.. sammy has allen in love with gunji.. owoww amaizng too godd i just hope adhiraj aur dia koi probmlem na create kar de...

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