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DollyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyYYYYY

awesome update
loved it
continue soon
thanx 4 the pm

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

DollyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyYYYYY

gish u finally writting a FF

awww

I am soo happy

aur woh bhi such an interesting one

well

u alwayzz write interesting things😆

but a FF n this sounds soo interesting

I want to read this FF soo badly!!!

n itzz on Mayur + Sajan

awsome

plezzz plezz plezzz continue soon

n add me in ur pm list na

luvv uuuu sis

n ur siggy is sooo cute

n the title itzz mind blowing

the description about life n death is fab

n the character stetch about Mayu+Nupzs+Sammy+Gunji

so Gunjan sees bad dreamzzz

woowowowow

interesting na

sachi mein I love this FF starting to the core

this will a mind blowing FF
luvv ys sis

and continue it abhi ke abhi lol

tc

-Lina-

aagaya mera bacha my lil sweet sweet kid..

AMAZING FIRST PART!!!
Oh My God im like crying after reading this!!1
i think i have a guess at who the people are but i dont wanna be rite ='(
pllz continue soon
add me to ur PM list
THANKS!!!

Terrific start Simi... aur kitna bhayanak sapna tha... tune itne aasani se explain kiya... mere toh pasine choot rahe they yeh update padte waqt...

amazing.................

Super duper ud. I was reading it holding my breath and totally absorbed it. Dont know when it ended. The dream is so terrific. Waiting for next ud.

hi simi. you dont know me but your fnd dolly sent me link of your ff. if dolly coaxed you into writing this then i say three cheers for dolly because the ff is beautiful. i am at loss for words your ff touched my heart. it is melancholic and moving and i was silently praying that nothing should happen, everyone should get out the death house while reading the dream sequence. the sequence where mayank and nupur die in rickety house(i guess it was them) it was so well written and painful. that my heart ached. it was truly heart touching. pls continue.and pls send me a pm
@ dolly: i must say you are a wonderful friend. thanks a lot for sending me the link.and the banner is truly beautiful. take care and have a good day

WAT AN AMZING FF!!! I WAS LITERALLY IMAGINING D SCENE N CUD C DEM... BY GOD IT WAS 1 OF D BST STORIES... SOUNDS LYK 1 OF D FILM STORIES... WITH REALITY IN IT AS WELL... 😊