Mayur ss Pyaar ke imtihaan epilogue updt Pg 48

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Tapoor
kiddo
its a lovely update dear
u r an amazing writer
mayur r married but separated
nupur is a business women
mayu ne keise nups ko dhoka diya?
Shilpa aunty called him majnu
i loved ti
hope hume koi accha mayu or shilpa unty ka scene milega
and pls next update me bohot sara mayur moment hona chahiye
keep it up kiddo
love u

Thanx a lott di

Apki behen hoon so tumhara asar toh aayega na

Paka MM n Mayur moment in next update

Do criticize also di

Plzzzzzz

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sana_sajan
awesome update dear

Thanx

Plz critcize also

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: myownarea
awesome start Afsha 👏

totally loving it :) do continue soon:)

Thanx di

Will paka cont soon

Plz do tell how u want the stry ahead n do criticize also

Plz di

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

anything you want but more of mayur

As u wish u'll get more of Mayur

Thanx n do criticize also plz

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
part 1-

awesome.......

can't wait for mayur meeet........

wonder wat had happened.......

do continue soon..........

Yup keep thking n tell me wat u feel the reason can be

Plz do criticize

Thanx

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: mayurlovers
Good dear.

Loved the first part.

All the best for your exams, too.

Continue as you get time to.

Thanx

I hav finished my exms

Will update soon

Do criticize also plz

Thanx agn

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: fariaa70
hey Afsha,
really very good start.
loved it.
plz add me to ur PM list.

Sure ur added in my pm list jana

Thanx

Do criticize also

Thanx agn

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: mina_18secret
amazing update....

it was short but nice!

waiting for mayur to meet again!

love

mina

Short but i felt it long whl posting n thought u'll will get bored reading so long will update long next tim

Thanx for liking it

Yup Mayur will meet soon

Do criticize also plz

Thanx agn

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey afsha

yarrrrrrrr it was soooo short

kyun!!!!!!????
make it longer next time okay

anyway the updt rocked

just superbbb

-sanam-

Thanx for liking it

Ur too good writer than me Sanam

Will update long one next tim

But i felt evn this was long n u'll will get bored reading lamba wala so jus posted this much only

Thanx agn

Do crticize also plz