Mayur ss Pyaar ke imtihaan epilogue updt Pg 48 - Page 24

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurg2010

hey afsha update it soon dear
iam waiting

Updating today
Sorry for making u wait so long
Really sorry
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

great ff dear afsha plz add me ur pm list thanks

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Guys
Well i knw sum are ready to kill me n sum dnt care as its jus another FF for them
For those who are ready to kill me really sorry for not updating for so long
Actually i jus felt that no one is liking My FF n their jus reading it because im pming them
So for that reason i didnt updated for so long
Well my mind didnt changed yet jus thoght that if i strted sumthg i shuld finish it also
So soon wit 5 to 6 parts this FF will end
Ull get updates soon but once in a week
Sorry for boring ull wit more 5 to 6 updates
Plz do bear
Here goes the 6th part
Mayank went n sat on the beach seeing water n feeling the cool breeze touching his face
He was sad that he hurted her so much
He saw a couple there n saw the gal blushing n she was holdong sum Gift in her hand
Mayank assumed that it mght be boys bday n the gal got gft for him but he mght be asking sumthg else also;)
Smile came on his face n he went in the flashback of next day of his bday He cant forget that bday at all after all he got 2 2 gfts frm the person he loved the most now but at that time he wasnt aware of that thg
This flashback is continuation of last part's flashback
Flashback
The day after his bady he went to the college n was searching for Nupur
He really wanted to meet her he was so so happy it culd be seen he had that Dimple smile on his face
He knew she wuldnt had cum so early so lik always he was standing near her class the next class was always empty n he also knew that Nupus will pass frm
her only
Evryone was in the class he heard the footsteps it was cuming closer n closer n he knew it was Nups
He pulled her inside n pinned her to the wall
Nups was 1st scared but than recognized his touch n knew it was Mayank
N:Mayank kya kar rahe ho meri class hai i need to hurry
M:U can go jus tell me why did u kiss me Till day before yesterday u were finding reasons to not to kiss than
achanak was that my bday gift or somethg else he said wit mischief in his smile
Nups blushed remembering that moment she culdnt sleep due to that kiss she jus kept on remembering that moment it was as if it jus happened som secs ago for her
She remembered how nervous she was she got this idea wen day before yesterday Mayu was asking for a kiss n she said No
She wanted to say Yes but that moment only she remembered it was Mayu's bday next day n no gift wuld be better than this she was hell nervous
She evn tried changing her plan as she had also bought a gift for him its jus she knws how she did that she felt it was more easy to apper in 10th boards
than kiss sumone{Sorry want getting anythg much better than 10th boeards in my mind so wrote that} it was her 1st kiss n 1st time afterall She came out of thougths wen Mayu said:Will u answer me
Nups gathered som courage n looked in his eyes
N:Kya keh rahe the tum they were still pinned to the wall Mayu was holding Nups by her shoulders he was jus few meters away frm her face
M:Kya baat hai Nupur lagta hai abtak Kiss ka effect gaya nahi tabhi tumne mera sawal nahi suna
N:Aisa kuch nahi hai Nups said witout making eye contact because evn she knew Mayu was somwat rght
M:Tikh hai mein toh sirf ye puch raha tha ki tumne achnak se kiss kyun kiya mera Bday gft tha kya
N:Nahi yeh raha tumhara bday gft she removed perfectly wrapped gift frm her bag n gave him
Mayu was so happy he removed his hands frm her shoulder n took the gift n kept in his bag
N:Dekh lo kaise hai
M:I'll see that at hom now tell me the reason why u kissed me
N:Mayank ur mad 1st ur were the one who was asking me for a kiss n wen i kissed u ur asking me why i kissed Nups said showing him fake anger
M:Yup thats my quest wen i asked u said no than how u kissed me yesterday he said raising his eyebrows
N:Nthg u were pissing of as i didnt bought ur gift n u were even speaking a lot n i culdnt take it as u werent listening to me so jus to stop u frm
blabbering more i kissed u is that ok can i go to my class now im really getting late Nups said all this in one breath
Mayu was listening to her attentively he eagerly wanted to knw the reason while listening to her Mayu has loosened his grip on her shoulder n was staring at her she tried to move but Mayu stopped her n pinned her to the wall agn
M:If ur always going to make me quite lik this i swear i will never stop talking Mayu said simling whole heartedly wit a mischief in his eyes
Nups blushed at the comment n Mayu jus culdnt control himself because while pinning her 2nd tim he jus went to close to her their was
hardly any distance
Mayu strted caressing Nups cheek as they were turning red due to blushing Nups closed her eyes she was going weak at his touch
Mayu whispered to her his breath on her face
M:U werent blushing this much wen u kissed me
Nups jus opened her eyes n looked in his eyes wit lil shock
N:U observed me at that tim how u were toh busy in scolding me right all shock n shyness both on her face
M:Yup but wen u kissed me ur eyes were close not mine i wanted to make sure i wasnt dreaming n i saw ur face at that tim u werent blushing that much how much
ur blushing now
Nups jus lowerd her face she didnt had strength to watch in those eyes
She pushed him by her hands on his chest n succeeded as Mayu was more on adoring her he didnt expected this at that tim
She ran n culdnt be caught by Mayu she witout turning back said:Bye im getting late for my class while going ill be going wit Sam u can leave he has sum work wit me so Bye c u tomm
Mayu knew she was jus trying to avoid his gaze she was shy n he strted feeling sumthg for her really but jus brushed away his thougths
He kept his hand on his Heart n said:Haaye Marjawa
Nups while walking out listened this n blushed a lil more
Flashback ends
He had a smile thking about that but he had a lot of questions also
She was the same Nupur But wuld she evr kiss him agn wuld she ever allow him touch her agn wuld she ever give him wat he wanted frm her witout him asking
for her
Wuld she ever believe in him wuld she!!!! wuld she!!!!????? Mayu had thousands of quest but no answer to anyone
At that tim his Heart interuppted his thougths n said u will never knw until u give it a chance jus try it may be she allows u may be she will trust agn wats
the prob in trying one tim
Mayu got his answer after wat happened wit him n Nups he never dismissed his Hearts thoughts
He sat there adimiring the sea its waves n enjoying the breeze wit smile playing on his lips remebering his Nupur Yup his Nupur only his
On the other side Nups left for her house
While travelling wen she played the stero a song was going on FM
She was going to change it on CD but the words of the song caught her attention
She strted lisetening to song wit full concentration remembering moments wit Mayank n all sadness she got frm him
This is the song
Aye khuda tune mohabbat ye banayi kyun hai
Aye khuda tune mohabbat ye banayi kyun hai
Agar banayi hai toh mohabbat mein judai kyun hai
Agar banayi hai toh mohabbat mein judai kyun hai
Music
Kyun diya pyaar mujhe iski zarurat kya thi
Meri baarbadi mein shamil teri hiqmat kya thi
Meri raho mein toh khushbu ka safar rehta tha
Dil mein abad gulabo ka nagar rehta tha
Zindagi khar bhari rah me layi kyun hai a.........................
Zindagi khar bhari rah me layi kyun hai a
Aye khuda tune mohabbat ye banayi kyun hai
Aye khuda tune mohabbat ye banayi kyun hai
Music
Song ended Nups had tears in her eyes
She reached hom n jus throwed her self on her bad
She really wanted to sleep n forgot all the things the songs words Mayank their moments n all
She jus culdnt forget him
It wasnt easy for her she was finding it lil bit easy wen he wasnt in front of her but now he was in frnt of her how will she stop her heart frm
lovng him agn how will she not go weak on his touch how will she jus let herself not stare in those eyes the eyes that spoke volume how how???
She jus wasnt getting any answer Tears rolled down frm her eyes she wiped her tears n made her mind that she will not fall for him again not at all
She freshened up n had lunch as it was Sam's tim to arrive n take her wit him for marriage shopping
Sam was on time he called Nups n she left
She sat wit him n he motioned her Hi he was busy on cell talking to sumone
She sat n he strted the car he kept the call later but he didnt missed the hint of sadness that was on Nups face
Nups was busy staring out of the window She didnt knew wen Sam kept the Cell n was looking at her she was busy in her own world
S:Wat happened Nupur Any problem
Nupur jus turned n tried to fake a smile but Sam knew her more than herslf
N:Nthg jus didnt got sleep properly so lil tried
S:Why was thking abt that person all nght Sam said in anger n fastened the speed of car
He always hated wen Nups was sad due to Mayank he never liked that at all he hated Mayank to the core for wat he did wit Nups
Nupur jus turned her face
S:I dnt understand why the hell are u punishing urself giving torture to urself wen the mistake was his
Nups jus controlled her tears
Sam in anger strted driving rashly n as it was sunday roads were empty
Wen Sam put the 4th Gear Nups got scared she jus said
N:Sam calm down n slow the speed please
Sam listened to her n did that he jus stopped the car n lookd at her as if asking for the reason of sadness
N:Im not torturng myself but its not easy to forget 1st love Sam she said wit all teary eyes whch she was trying to control frm so long tim
Sam jus culdnt take those tears in her eyes he hugged her
S:I knw that but atleast dnt make ur self weak warna agn he will use u n go
Nups composed herself n said
N:Im not going to be weak this time Sam i Promise
Sam smiled they stayed in hug for sum more minutes as Nups was calming down n was letting all her worries go
Sam was jus patience all the tim n caressed her back to make her feel secure good n make her sure that he was always there for her
Nups broke the hug wit smile that reached her eyes said:ab chale ya phr shopping hi nahi karni hai
S:Plz yaar agar aaj shopping nahi ki toh kalse jo rasme hai un me mein kya pehunga mujhe khud ko nahi pata
Nups laughed at this n said toh jaldi choalo waise bhi aaj sunday malls jaldi band hote hai
S:Haan bhai chalo Sam said looking at Nups who was similing now
S:Smile kiya karo meri jaan u look too good
She smiled n through her eyes said Thanks to Sam
S:It my pleasure sweetheart he said winking at her n strting the car agn
Nups made herself comfartable in her seat n looked out of the window wit smile on her face
Sam was going on talking abt Gun n their college times
Nups was jus listening talking in between n all
Sam cracked sum jokes n Nups laughed on it
Excel gave her many bad memories but the best thg she got was Sam as her Big bro Best frnd A Guardian Adviser n many more in jus one person
She jus never wanted to loose him never ever
Thats it for today
Hop ull lik the update
Sorry for updating late Really sorry
Criticizism is more than allowed
Edited by -afsha- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
plz add me in ur pm list
Edited by love.mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part dear...wanted to know what mayu did with my nupzi.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
really nice part afsha..so good to see MN writers back t writing on MN :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi afsha fantastic update hun loved it
plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesoooooome.
superb....
fantabulous........
fantastic.......
lovely.....
wonderful...UD...........
and thanx for the pm too.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Afsha
i totally loved the update
just awesome n amazing
thanks for the pm

pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow this ff is too good
pls do me a favour add me to ur pm list

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