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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee ud dear..
it ws amazingggggg..
reallyy sweetttt..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzzz do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago

mindblasting update dear

plz continue soon
yaar kitna bhi padu kam lag raha hai
plz try to continue soon
n thanx for the pm
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeeee ud
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great Update!!!
Plzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was awesome....so cute....please continue!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sooo sweet update.....
Cont soon...
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part=11 the next day....morning... samrat opened his eyes...n put his hands on the other side..but felt that gunjan wasnt there..he then saw that the side was empty... s=ye chahsmish kaha chali gayi?? itni subhah subhah?? he turns to see the time n sees it was 8 o clock.. s=samajh gaya..madam gayi ha niche nashta banane keliye....aur kya??? ab jab thik hogayi ha to unki duties jo start hogayi ha... then samrat also gets up from the bed in a lazy way....n goes to the washroom...after half an hour he comes out being ready to go to office.then he goes down n sees gunjan making breakfast.....gunjan sees samrat coming to her.. g=uth gaye???? s=ha..ap to mujhe uthati nahi....khudhi uthna para... g=samrat...ma tumhe acchese janti hu...agar ma tumhe uthane lagti na...to jitne time me tum khud uth gaye...utne time me tum mujhe chodte bhi nahi..... s=kyu???? g=ab mazak band karo....kya tum nahi jante ke kyu???? s=janta hu par tumhare mu se sunna chahta hu... g=shut up...abhi chup chap jake betho..ma nashta lati hu..... s=chahsmish abhi nahi..ma office me jake kha lunga...abhi late horaha hu..wase bhi tumne time se nahi bulaya..... g=samrat please..dekho ma itnato jantihi hu ke tum office me jake kaam ke chakaar me bhul jaoge khana...isiliye abhi khalo..der nahi lagegi...tum jake betho ma bass lati hu.... s=par chashmish... g=smarat......jao... s=accha thik ha jaldi lana... then samrat goes to the table n gunjan brings paratha for him....... g=ye lo.khalo.. s=thanks.... then samrat ate his breakfats in a minute.. s=accha ab ma chalta hu..... g=are..thikse to khalo... s=hogaya..... g=ok.....bye... he went to the door n turned around... s=chahsmish ma kuch bhul raha hu.... g=kya??? briefcase lia ha...rumal bhi..cell phone bhi..aur gari ki chabi bhui...aur kya??? he comes to her.. s=kuch to bhul gaya hu.,.... g=par kya????? s=yaad aya...woh raha..... g=kaha??? samrat points to the other side...gunjan looks there n sam kisses on her cheek....n runs.. s=love u..... g=pagal kahika.....love u too.. later gunjan cleans the house...her room..as samrat had messed it up..made lunch....n was now cleaning samrats cupboard..when her cell rang.. g=hello... s=hi.. g=tum?? kaam nahi karraheha???
s=subhahase lekar abhitak kam hi karraha tha..bass abhi free hua hu..to socha tumse baat karlu..
g=kuch nahi tumhare saaf cupboard ko ganda karrahahi hu..
s=oh so thanks chashmish..par tumhe ye karneki kya zarurat thi????
g=samrat woh kya ha na ke..mujhe ghar ganda karneka bohot maan karraha ha isiliye..itne dinotak jo nahi karpayi.....
s=are par....
g=samrat itna ganda koi karta ha kya ghar?? apde thikse nahi rak sakte kya???
s=are chasmish..tum chupchap achi lagti ho..is tarahse nupur ki taarh chillate hue bilkul bhi suit nahi karti....
g=samrat tum bhi na..accha kaise phone kia????
s=aj sham ko kaam zyada nahi ha......to socha ke raat ko kahi bahar dinner pe chale???
g=dinner??? r u sure??
s=ha baba....
g=ok...
s=to tayyar rehna..ma lene aunga...
g=accha bye....
s=bye....
after that benji came there...
b=dude....aj shamko 4 baje new dealers ke sath meeting ha....
s=aj?? cancel nahi hosakta kya?????
b=nahi yaar...kyuki ye peechle hafte tha.aur tab to tu bahar tha..isiliye....
s=kabtak khatam hoga????
b=der nahi lagegi....woh apne preogress ke bareme batayenge aur hum apne shares aur progrees....
s=phr koi baat nahi ha..
b=tera aj koi programme ha kya???
s=ha yaar chahsmish ko bahar leke jaunga.....
b=coolll...phir to aur bhi jaldi khatam hona chahiye...
s=ha...
gunjan had completed her works in her home..n by then it was 5 pm..
g=5 to baj raheha....ma kapde nikal leti h..smarat ko wait nahi karwaungi..par kya pehnu??? saree....ya salwar kamiz??????
then after thinking she thought t wear a salwar kamiz...n took out a black one...with matching bangles n jewelary..n by then it was 7 pm....there samrat was in the meeting..his cell was off..n he was unaware of the time....n also forgotten about the dinner...gunjan was waiting for him.....
g=ab tak aya kyu nahi??? sare 8 baj rahe ha...call karti hu.....
she dialed his number but it was off....
g=phone bhi band ha....office pe try karti hu......ye koi phone nahi uthata ha....benji ka phone bhi unreachable araha ha...samrat kaha ho tum????? gunjan walked in the hall room of her house..from here to there...sometimes sat... read magazines...n now it was 9.30.....she was feeling sleepy..n so she sat on the sofa n kept her head on the sofa.....n when her eyes was closed she didnt realized....by now samrat's meeting was over...he came out..
b=dude..awesome..itni jaldi itni progress..
s=thanks yaar...
then he opened his cell...n saw 20 missed calls of gunjan..
s=chahsmish ke itne sare calls.....oh shittt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
b=kya hua yaar??????????????
s=benji meeting ke chakkar time ka pata bhi nahi chala..aur ye bhi bhul gaya ke chahsmish ko dinner pe leke jana ha...woh ghar par mera wait karrahihogi.....
b=mere cell me bhi gunjan ka missed call ha..
s=mujhe nahi pake..shayed tujhe call kia hogga...ma jata hu.....
he rushed to his home..n in 15 minutes he reached there...he went inside n saw gunjan was sleeping in the sofa..being ready.....she was in deep sleep.....
s=mere lie wait karte karte so gayi?? sorry chashmish...
he then went upto her.....n kissed on her forehead... n picked her up...
s=tumne mere lie wait kia aur mane...i'm sorry chasmish...
then he tok her to the room n laid her on the bed....
next morning.......
samrat came down n saw gunjan was in the kitchen..he went to her....
s=chashmish...
g=no response.................................
s=chasmish......
gunjan moved from there...
s=sorry baba...
g=nashta table par ha...khalo....
s=chahsmish meri baat to suno...
g=samrat mera dimag bohot garam ha..please mujhe abhi koi baat nahi karni ha....
samrat then caught her hand n turned her around..
s=i'm sorry....
g=kyu???????????
s=chahsmish tum janti ho..par.....
g=samrat agar kaal raat nahi asakte the.to kamsekam bata dete......ma istarahse....
gunjan then freed her hand...n went to her room.....
s=tumhara naraz hona jayaz ha....ok..fine ma bhi tumhe manake rahunga...
then he went to the office........after some hours..gunjan was cleaning the hall..when the doorbell ranng.
g=yes..
man=ma'm ye apke lie...
he gave her a flower buque.....
g=kisne bheja??????
the man left....
g=are par.....suniye.......
she kept it on the table..then again door bell rang...n another man gave it to her another flower buque...then one by one many men came there n gave her flowers...
g=are par...bhej kaun raha ha?????????
man=wahi jinse ap naraz ha......
g=ji..
n the man left..gunjan understood who did it..then she dialed smarats number..
g=samrat ye sab kya laga rakha ha????
s=kyu tumhe pasand nahi aye????????doosre phool bhijwayu???
g=smarat tumne wk ghante me ghar ko flower garden bana diya ha esa lagraha ha ke ye koi shergill mansion nahi balki red rose ki garden ha..
s=chasmish..tum to mujhse baat nahi karrahi..aur nahi sorry bolneka mauka dia ha..isiliye in flowersehi tumse sorry bolraha hu..
g=tum....
she disconnected the line...then benji comes..
b=dude...kya hua kaal raat...
s=kuch nahi yaar...gusse me ha..aur hona bhi chahiye....
b=dude..tune nashta kia?????
s=nahi yaar....chashmish ne bhi khaya to ma kaise???
b==kuch khale mere bhai..kal rata setune kuch bhi nahi khaya...
s=chashmish ne bhi nahi khaya......so its ok..
n samrat goes out...
b=koi kisise itna kaise pyaar kar sakta ha????
benji dials gunjan's number...
g=hello????
b=hji gunjan kaisi ho?????
g=benji agar samrat ke bareme bolna ha to....
b=gunajn isse kya hua h?????
g=matlab....
b=matlab ke ye tum dono me jhagra hua ha kya???
g=kyu????
b=are nahi..bass kaal shamse isne kuch nahi khaaya..aur aj subhah bhi bina nashta kie agaya,.,,,,isisliye mane pucha aur abhi lunch bhi nahi karraha ha...
g=kya???????????????
(in mind)=samrat ne kaal se.,...kuch bhi....
b=gunjan usne nahi khaya kyuki aal raat tumne uski wait karte karte kuch nahi khaya..raatko ake woh bhi bina khaye so gaya...aur subhah tum usse naraz thi isiliye........
g=benji....tum....
b=ab ma rakhta hu ok??? bye...
g=bye.....samrat ne.....
at night...
samrat comes home...
s=i hope chahsmish ka gussa kaam hogaya hoga...
he comes to his room n sees gunjan is standing at the window......he closes the door...gunjan turns around.....
g=samrat....
s=chashmish...tum kcuh kaho iske pehle ma tumse maafi mangna chahta hu..kaal sachme meeting ki wajase ma bhul gaya tha...aur jab aya to tum sorahi thi...i'm sorry chashmish...
g=its ok samrat........mane maaf kia.....
s=kya??? par tumto subhah...
g=samrat ma tumse kabhi zyada der tak naraz reh sakti hu kya bhala??? tumhara pyaar meri naraz gi ko dur karhi deta ha.......aur jab mujhe pata chala ke...tumne meri wajase kal shamse kuch bhi nahi khaya aur piya...me chahke bhi tumse gussa nahi reh saki....
s=tumhe kaisie pata???
g=tum kuch ulta sidha na kar sako isliye tumpar mane apna ek jasus rakha ha..jo bohot hi sweet ha...aur mera frend...
s=benji....
g=ha.....
s=chalo..ek accha kaam kia...par bataneki zarurat kya thi ke mane,...
g=bataya accha kia..tumto bataoge nahi...
s=par tumne mujhe maaf kia na???? sachi me???
g=ha baaba.......sach me maaf kia dilse...khush?????
s=i love u....
he hugs her....n falls on the bed..
g=samrat..tum bhi na...
s=kya???
g=bohot acche ho....
s=tumse nahi.....
then he kisses her eyes...her cheeks..n then kisses her on lips......
g=phir kabhi kia na to maaf nahi karungi...
s=esa mauka hi nahi dunga....
g=i love u too...
n hugs again....
enjoy guys.,......................
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Posted: 15 years ago

amazing update

loved it very much
superb job
continue soon
thhanx for the pm
Edited by ---ishita--- - 15 years ago

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