Kuch Ankahee Jazbaat-MaYur FF Updated LAST PT p35

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: neelresh

@Nikkiiii....wow tumhe meri FF pasand aayi 😲 great yaar. I watch your posts in MJHT forum..I think those are the most cheerful ones!! aise aise emoticons lagati ho na tum ke har kisika mood lift kara deti ho!! 😆 😆 Thanks for reading...continue aur comment deti rehna. I have added you as well.

-Neela

hehe.......u also r familiar wid my posts??????thank u...........n yea emoticons ke bina i donno knw to open a post....n it feels sooo gud when each time u hear tht ur posts alwz make ppl happy...u r d l8est one to say this....thnxx a ton yaar.....🤗🤗🤗🤗..........

comin to this update....yaar bahut ho gaya......nw this is totally goin unfair on mayu's side...nups shud stop playin this hide-n-seek game...plzz yaar..plzz kuch karo....

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

nupur willl come

she has to just for her mayank

cont sooon

loved the update

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: -afsha-
I said na Nups nahi aayegi
Liked the update

Really wen Mayu asked that question to CJ evn i felt he was unwell😆

The convo between Uday n Mayu was Fab😆

Sam's advise was really good one

If she wants to meet she will cum n meet him

Liked the update

Afsha....yaar tum to meri kahani ki climax ka bhaanda phorr rahe ho 😆 😆 anyways tumhe yeh kyun lag raha hai k Nupur aayi nahi?? shayed woh aayi thee per Mayank ne pehchana nahi!!! ho sakta hai na?? 😉

btw thank you soo much for your lovely comment. yeh Uday ka character kabhi nahi sudhrega 😆 Keep reading....

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: mina_18secret
hey neela...

excellent work dear..... par aaj koi phone conversation nahi tha...

main to usi ka intezaar kar rahi hu ab!!!!

pls jaldi update karna anad thanx a ton for the PM...

love

mina

(Jab tum pure hindi aur urdu main update dogi to mera comment hindi aur urdu mein hoga... aur agar english mein update dogi to english mein comment milega....)

me eagerly waiting for your next part!

Mina...thanx for the compliment. haa..aaj koi phone convi nahi tha but don't worry...u'll get plenty of that. I was just experimenting something outside the convis. ermm...Mina tumhe bohat saare comments pure hindi ya urdu me dena hoga aanewale dino me...convis me english nahi hoga to updates bhi waise hi honge. I look forward to your comments as much as you are for the next parts. Bless you!

@sunshine (your name is Hina, right?) thanks for your comments.
@achoose thanks and keep reading
@Tasnim glad you liked it yaar...thanx

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: mayurarti
Hey Neela

gr8 update dear

but the part was short

I missed the mayur phone convo in this part

I hope Mayank finds her

cant wait for the next part

do cont soon

luv
Nidzy~

haila..😲 Nidzy tumhe yeh part short laga!!!! 😲 isse zyada likkhungi to keyboard shaheed ho jayega. yaar zara taras khau iss masoom si lappy per 😆 😆 convi will be coming back soon...no worries 😉 and thanx for the beautiful comments.

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces
nupur aayegi... zroor aayegi...
wo mayank ka trust nahi todegi,, ,and i m sure mayank usse pehchaan lega....

awwww.....pari...main kya kahoon 😕

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: nikki028

hehe.......u also r familiar wid my posts??????thank u...........n yea emoticons ke bina i donno knw to open a post....n it feels sooo gud when each time u hear tht ur posts alwz make ppl happy...u r d l8est one to say this....thnxx a ton yaar.....🤗..........

comin to this update....yaar bahut ho gaya......nw this is totally goin unfair on mayu's side...nups shud stop playin this hide-n-seek game...plzz yaar..plzz kuch karo....

Nikkiiiii....tum pakka Mayank ki fan ho. abhi to shuru hua hai kahani aur tum abhi se hi Mayu ka saath dene lagi!! Nupur ki bhi koi majboori hosakti hai na...Mayank bhi usse ghalat samajh raha hai aur Mayu k saath tum bhi!! ermm main kuch karti hoon 😉 Just keep on reading...

- Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis
nupur willl come
she has to just for her mayank

cont sooon

loved the update

Thanks Sehrish...there will be an update soon

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

~~~~~~Part 7: What happened? (Same day…) ~~~~~~~

Its late in the evening...Mayank had a tough day. He is angry, disappointed, lost and confused. What is happening to him? He cannot focus on his studies. Nupur lied!! She didn't show up at all. If she would have then Mayank would have definitely tracked her down. Why is she doing this? Then again, why is he so bothered???

M: Bhar me gaya sab kuch…(he throws away the book in his hand as he jumps out of his bed. Breathing heavily…he says to himself). kuch bhi ho…I have to get out of this. Bohat ho chuka yeh khel…bas…aur nahi. I won't let her play with my feelings like that..

just then…the phone rings..Mayank stares at the phone. No…he is not going to answer that. Phone continues to ring…NO!! I am not answering..(he says to himself) and then as if by some divine force he grabs the phone..

M: (in a loud voice) jhoot kyun bola tumne? nahi aana tha to bata deti.

On the other side…its Mayank's mum..Shilpa Aunty

S: Mayu…kya hua beta? tu yeh sab kya keh raha hai, kisse baat kar raha hai?
M: (Mayank was really embarrassed). Maa …tum? kaisi ho maa?
S: main to thik hoon beta per tujhe kya hua hai?
M: kuch nahi maa…woh studies ka pressure hai na…exams saamne hai
S: (Mum knows her son is lying to her. There's something wrong but he is not telling. But pushing him will not get her too far. so she dropped the subject). beta studies to zaroori hai per itna bhi nahi k khud ka khayal hi na rakh paye tu. main wahan pe nahi hoon to isska matlab yeh to nahi k tu apna sehet ka bilkul parwah na kare!
M: nahi maa…aisi koi baat nahi. main thik hoon
S: aur theek rehna bhi chahiye tujhe. tu kabhi bahar kyun nahi jaata apne doston ke saath? studies ke saath mind bhi fresh rakhna zaroori hai. teri koi girlfriend wirlfriend nahi hai kya? doosre larkon ki tarha?
M: maa…tum phir se shuru hogayi!!
S: hehheee…accha baba…jaake so jaa ab. aur apna khayal rakhna..thik hai? dehaan laga ker parhayi karna and as usual exams me top karna
M: haa maa…tum bhi apna khayal rakhna. main tumhe baad me phone karta hoon

Phone cuts off. Nupur did not call that day…or the next …or the next…or the next…..

-Neela

promo: what happened actually? Why didn't Nupur come? and why has she stopped contacting Mayank? Is it all over? I have yet to think over and you to read..

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Yp ma name is Hina😊............Btw hamein itni curiosity mai chor kar u r gng on a leave thats so nt fair😆😆.............jaldi update karna..............😳

Edited by Sunshine Girl - 15 years ago