*Believe In Love* ~RN Short Story~ Part 10 pg 34 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: guglu088

Nice plot... and certainly different from others. Add me to the pm list. RN fic hai yaar. Aur Mana... tujhe kaun si Akshay kumar film ki yaad aa gayi???

yaar tujhe pm kardeti hoon...warna Khushi uske fic ka page waste karne keliye hum dono ko maar na de ! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

yaar tujhe pm kardeti hoon...warna Khushi uske fic ka page waste karne keliye hum dono ko maar na de ! 😛

kitni samjhdaar ho tum dono😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: golu_1677

interesting cont soon

thnx😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

part 1


Introduction of characters


KMA morning a fully dressed man opens the door n reaches towards the parade ground takes the salute of cadets n moves to his office.
a voice came from inside: oderly
oderly :yes sir
the man turns
he is non other than major rajveer singh


rajveer:call capt. ali immediately
orderly:yes sir
orderly goes n knocks the door
come in
ordely salutes
a man turns
he is capt. ali bheg

ali:bolo
orderly:sir apko majaor sir bula rahe hai
ali reaches to rajver's cabin n nodes
rajveer:sit down capt.
thy talkes abt their their work
ali was abt to leave
rajveer:ali
he turns
meet me with alekh n huda after the duty hours
ali:yes sir

ali reaches his cabin n calls huda n alekh n tell them to reach rajveer's house after 6 pm.


ali huda n alekh reaches rajveer's house
rajveer opens the door ali salutes but huda hugs rajveer


rajveer:ali this is not my office here we r frnds
huda:are sir ye moti bhudhi ko koi baat samjh nhi aati
alekh:tujhe to aati hai na
thy laughs
ali:aapne hume yahan kyu bulaya
rajveer:tum sabko ye batane ke liye ki m gng hme for few dayz meri leave letter accpt ho gya hai
huda:congrats sir
rajveer: ek min huda
n mere saath tum sab bhi ghar chal rahe ho
thy got happy
ali:but sir yahan
rajveer:dnt wrry ali yahan suri ji n dr. shalini sambhal lenge
alekh :theek hai sir

thy prepares to leave for home

part 1 continues.........
precap: entry of naina n naina rajveers first meeting

srry for the late n short update frndz i was very bsy with my studies dnt hv time
plz forgive n comment
i promise to update soon
thnku

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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Thanks for sharing...its lovely dear!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghaparti

Thanks for sharing...its lovely dear!👏

thnx megha😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

lovely update. very nice.

loved the conversation between raj, alekh,huda and ali.
continue soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
lovely update... waiting for RN first meeting.. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Okay....so the characters hav entered. Loved the sweet scene btwn Rajveer n others. And now as they r all going home...on the way Raj will meet Naina. Looking forward to that!! Pls continue soon.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
hmm.intro is gud jaan..
m wiating 4 raj n naina's 1 meetng

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