MJHT : MAYUR Special ff update on page 5 - Page 4

hey fariaaaaaaaa....no need of thanx yaar....i will be always there to support the great writers of this poem which includes aruna, u etc etc....i can only do that yaar,,......to support u...to encourage u...

very nice hope we get such scene in the show...............

Guys here s the update

hope you ll like it it again bit lenghty

here it goes

Exams are over

Sorry i forgot to tell you all

Now Mayank is the Faculty in the Excel just because of his performance

They all are done with there exams and planning for the trip as after one week all are planning to go home like adhiraj is planning to go Indore and other also have some work

All gathered at mayank's home

Suhani,Samrat,Uday,Benji,Nupur,Gunjan,diya,Mayank and Raj

Samrat is planning for the trip to Goa as they have got the vacation after the exam and after this will be scattered

Samrat : So guys kya khayal hai ho jaye ye trip

Suhani : bhai bahut maja aayega main to kabhi bhi Goa nahi gayi hu

Adhi: Haan samrat plan to achha hai

Benji : wow Goa ki Beach ,Maja aayega

Uday : Goa me mujhe kuch khane milega ya nahi ?????

Gunjan : Samrat pahle didi Jiju se bhi puch lo

Nupur is looking at Mayank

Mayank : sorry guys main to nahi ja paunga mujhe kuch aur din college jana padega

Agar Nupur jana chahti hai to ja sakti hai

Nupur is bit sad but she knows that mayank is not excusing the reason is very genuine

Nupur : Nahi samrat main akele nahi jaungi ek kam karo tum sab hokar aa jao hum phir kabhi challenge

Samrat : kya nupur chalo na maja aayega bahut

Gunjan : han didi plz chalo

But Nupur is nupur apne pati ke bina kaha manane wali thi

Nupur : Sorry dosto ab main akeli nahi hu shadishuda hu aur main mayank ke bina nahi jana chahti hu,isliye please tumlog enjoy kar lo,hum next time pakke se tumhare sath chalenge

Mayank : thik hai nupur mujhe koi problem nahi hai itna force kar rahe hai to chali jao

Nupur : Nahi mayank main thik hu ,smiles

Samrat : thik hai ab miya biwi ke bich kaise kahe

So guys hum is Sunday hi ja rahe hai get ready .

They all went for 15 days trip.

Mayank will be free only after a week this was the reason he did not go with them

In the night at Mayank's flat

Mayank and nupur are sitting side by side

They are talking with each other on some random topic

Mayank is feeling uneasy and nupur get to know about it

Nupur : Kya hua hai mayank?

Maynak : Kuch bhi to nahi hua hai

Nupur :jhuth mat bolo tumhari aankhen itni red kyon hai aur tumhe light fever bhi hai

Mayank : are kuch nahi thoda stress ho gaya hai college me bahut kam hai aajkal paper check kar raha hu ,socha jaldi kar lunga to tumhare sath samay spend kar sakunga

Saying this he keeps his head in Nupur's lap

Nupur : Mayank ka sir daba deti hai and mean while he sleeps

Nupur takes his head properly and puts one pillow and goes to the kitchen for dinner preparation

Once she is done ,she came to leaving room,Mayank is still sleeping and looking tired but peace is seen on his face.

Nupur uske pas aati hai aur uske balo me hath ghumati hai ,and kisses him on his cheek

Suddenly he is awake and looks that Nupur is staring him

They have a long Eye lock but it breaks as the phone tring tring

Nupur : Hello

Shilpa : Haa Nupur kaisi ho beta?

Nupur : main achhi hu maa aur Mayank bhi thik hai aap kaisi ho?

Shilpa:Main thik hu beta,tumhare exam ho gaye hai na?Soch rahi thi ki kuch din tumlog agar yaha aa jate to achha lagta tha

Nupur :main bhi yahi soch rahi thi maa par abhi mayank ko kuch aur din college jana hai uske bad hum jarur aayenge

Shilpa : thik hai beta ,main kal call karti hu Mayu se kahna ki mujhe kal phone kar le

Nupur : thik hai maa good night

Shilpa : good Night beta

After dinner they are just talking and slept as usual

Next day in college

Mayank : Mera sara kam to ho gaya hai aur maa ne kaha hai ki main aur nupur kuch dino ke liye Bangalore chale jaye ,Nupur ko bhi change milega

He calls nupur : haan mayank bolo

Mayank : Kya kar rahi ho nupur?

Nupur : Bore ho rahi hu?

Mayank : Are aise kaise ho sakta hai tum SRK ki movie dekh lo

Nupur : Nahi mayank akele akele movie bhi achhi nahi lagti hai

Mayank : Thik hai nupur main tumhe 5 min bad call karta hu

Mayank went to meet Principle

Mayank : Sir maise sare papers check kar liye hai aur kuch bhi pending nahi hai

Kya main kuch din pahle hi vacation par ja sakta hu

Prinici:Thik hai Mayank

Mayank : Thank you sir

Mayank is calling nupur

Nupur :Haan mayank bolo

Mayank : tum apna saman pack karo mujhe kal se hi vacation ke liye permission mil gayi hai

Nupur : Sach (Big smile)

Mayank : much

Chalo main aakar bat karta hu ,bye

In the evening time

Mayank : sari packing ho gayi hai

Nupur : haan maine mera aur tumhara dono ka sama pack kar diya hai

Mayank after seening nupur's luggage

Mayank : Nupur hum Bangalore ja rahe hai ya transfer ho rahe hai?

Nupur : matlab?

Mayank are itna sara saman ki kya jarurat hai,tum Bangalore me shopping nahi karogi kya (Just trying to lower the luggage)

Nupur : kya waha tum shopping karaoge ???wah mayank tum bahut sweet ho

Mayank : ha par ek shirt hai agar tum abhi kam saman logi tab hi

Nupur : Making a puppy face ,thik hai ek bag to permitted hai na?

Mayank : haan

Nupur : to main maa ko call kar lu

Mayank : nahi hum unhe surprise denge

Nupur : thik hai

Next day morning they start from Mumbai but not going Bangalore so soon

Mayank has plan to take his wife away from every one for -3 days (it is mahabaleshwar)

Nupur is not aware with this plan

They started in the early morning so jaisa mayank ne kaha nupur us bus me baith gayi

She was half sleepy so did not bother to look the bus board for destination

Mayank set next to her

Bus started and it is on the way to Mahabaleshwar

Nupur got up:Wah mayank kitna pyara rasta hai na dono taraf hariyali hi hariyali

Mayank is looking at her and not answering anything ,he is thinking she is too childish and innocent also

All the ways nupur was talking and suddenly she started feeling nausea mayank gave her a tablet and she slept again

They reached Mahabaleshwer

Nupur is awake : Mayank hum ye kaha aa gaye hai

Mayank : Mahabaleshwar

Nupur : par hum log to Bangalore ja rahe the na

Mayank : haan par maine socha ki shadi ki bad hum eek sath kabhi samay hi nahi mila ,her bar koi nayi musibat hi aa rahi thi

Isliye kuch din hum sath me rahenge aur iske bad Bangalore bhi challenge

Nupur :to tumane mujhe bataya kyon nahi?

Mayank : phir surprise kaha rah jata???? And Nupur loves surprises hai na?

Nupur : haan aur mujhe bahut achha laga

In the hotel

(Guys i do not know haw far is mahabaleshwar from Mumbai but in this they started in the morning and reached there by 2pm)

They freshen up and had they lunch

Mayank : Nupur ,tumhe vomiting ki wajah se tired lag raha hoga tum ek kam karo thodi der so jao

Nupur : thik hai mayank

Soon she sleeps and for this only mayank was waiting

As she sleeps he goes out of the hotel ,

(Actually he has booked the service apt ,where they can leave according to there wish)

He goes there and decorates the apt ,as nupur ikes it and comes back to hotel)

By now nupur is also awake and it is almost eve

(Guys ' mahabaleshwar is a hill station and in the eve it is bit of cold)

Mayank : ab kaisa lag raha hai nupur

Nupur : achha lag raha hai mayank ,par tum kaha chale gaye the

Mayank : main to aise hi tahal raha tha,haan nupur apna saman pack karo humo abhi chalna padega

Nupur : par hum thodi der pahle to aaye hai na mayank

Mayank : pahle tum chalo to nupur

Nupur : making a face thik hai

They both go to the service apt

Mayank : ek min nupur iske aage tumhe mail lekar jaunga

He takes one black cloth out and ties it on nupur's eye

Takes her inside

In the hall

IT is complete dark

In the background light music ,There is balcony which is near to the lake ,complete hall is having a fragrance and Candle's are burning ,all the walls are having the mostly Nupur photos from there fight to there marriage

Nupur is touched with this ambience

She goes to the balcony and feels the breeze

Mayank comes from the back and hugs her : Nupur tumhe ye achha nahi laga

Nupur has tears and throat is jamn she is damn happy but not able to utter a single word

Managing her self : Mayank maine to aisa socha bhi nahi tha ki tum ,mayank mujhe sab sapne jaisa lag raha hai ,I love you mayank and she turns towards mayank

Mayank : first he rubs her tears and says agar khush ho to ro kyon rahi ho?

Nupur : Main to mare khushi ke ro rahi hu with smile

Mayank : nupur main tumase kuch puchana chahta hu

Nupur : haan mayank kaho na

He hugs nupur and whispers into her ear

Mayank : Kya hum aaj Pati Patni ke us rishte me bandh sakte hai jo ab tak adhura hai ( Guys they were married but till now like the best friend only)

Nupur is feeling shy and does not know what to respond, listening this only she is shivering

Mayank breaks the hug

Nupur 's eyes are down she is not able to answer and sharm se pani pani ho rahi hai

Mayank : Tumane jawab nahi diya

And then she sees into his eyes and says yes with her expression

Mayank is happy to get an approval 😉

Mayank goes and gets fresh up first and then

He gives a gift wrap to nupur

She goes to freshen up

Before she comes out mayank has decorated the Bed room

With all the red rose, candles are lightning the room and music in the back ground

(no specific song ,any song which you guys like)

As Nupur comes out of the bathroom ,she is amazed by the decoration of the bedroom

It is decorated so well that she is totally mesmerized by this

(And the gift wrap which mayank gave to nupur was having the saree for nupur,

It is a red color chiffon saree ,bit of transparent )

When she looks at mayank

Mayank has wore the Brown color lower and the towel is hanging around his neck his hairs are still wet ,he is busy decorating the room for His lovely wife(he has not wore T shirt or the shirt not even his west ,best reference 'when the MJHT intro was shown that time mayank is getting up from bed)

Till now nupur can see mayank from the back ,but when he turns she is lost in him

When mayank looks at nupur he is not able to take his eyes off from her

Mayank's POV :

she is looking stunning hot in saree,her wet hairs are falling on her shoulder,she is no less than an angel, how can anyone look so beautiful without any makeup ,she is really beautiful , anyone will fall in love with her

Nupur's POV :

Mayank ki aankheo me kitni gahrai hai aur usme sirf main hi dikhai deti hu,he is really handsome , main bahut khuskismat hu jise mayank jaisa pati mila

And wind is blowing due to which nupur's hair are coming in the middle of mayank's vision

And the eyelock is broke

Nupur goes near to the mirror and tries tying the dori of her blouse

She is not able to tie and feels that mayank is standing at the back of her

They do not speak a word and he tries to tie it

He takes the hair of from her back ,his touch gives a sensation to nupur

And mayank can see her face in the mirror,her eyes are closed

Mayank ties the dori but could not control him self after looking her bare back.

He just moves his fingers on her back and nupur in not able to control her self ,

She turns back and hugs mayank.

Mayank is still running his fingers on her back and holding her from her waist

Nupur's grip getting tight on his back and he is enjoying this

After a while he too hugs here tightly and they are lost in each other

As of no one wants to brake the hug

Finally nupur brakes it and when she turns ,this time mayanks does not want her to leave

He hugs her from the back ,kissess on her neck and shoulder and then pulls her

He kisses her on the lower neck and then on her forehead , then cheeks then her eyes and proceeding towards his first lips kiss after their marriage.

Nupur is melting in his arms and rest is done by his lips

When he goes close to her lips they both are feeling warmth of the breath and their heartbeat is also running faster than ever.

He lightly brushes his lips on hers and she responds for this and this turns into a passionate one they both are not ready to go away suddenly they feel the need of air and broke apart.but still in each other arm, and then Mayank takes nupur in his arms and proceeding towards the bed

So guys i m done with the long update

Plz comment

wonderful update!!!!!!!!
it was really romantic........
loved mayur to the core.....kash serial mein bhi aisa hi dikhate...........
but no such luck.....anyway....awesome update
do write more.........thanks 4 the pm

wow dear it was soo soo romantic n awesome!!!

awesome update dear..
luvd it so much....
pls update soon...
best of luck 4 ur exams....
-supriya

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

awesome update dear..
luvd it so much....
pls update soon...
best of luck 4 ur exams....
-supriya

Originally posted by: shaaranya

wow dear it was soo soo romantic n awesome!!!

plsss do cont in please pm me wen u update

thanks for the comments

oops ..sorry....
-supriya