Dream come true? -RN OS contest winning entry;2/13

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himalayanyeti

@himalayanyeti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Thanks everyone for your comments....

I will reply to all your comments soon..... right now, my priority is Dhoka though.... once the next update for Dhoka is out, I will turn to this one... 😃

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

congrats!

it was great!

fantastic!

no wonder u won!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

awesome yaar,😊 😊 😊
vaise to maine is ko vahan bhi padha tha par tab kuch reply nahi de paayi.
Now i am giving my view over it n that much late.
Really superb n the way u expressed Raj causally in front of Naina was just brilliant. Thank god he was like that otherwise i don't know what's gonna be happen. But whatever happened b/w them really lost my sensuous, can v ever imagine Raj in that way?
Probably we want to see him like that with Naina always and thank god here the fics r still going for them so that we can make them do whatever we want otherwise, jaane kya hota?
Rajveer gave her really nice punishment when she entered in his room without knocking n i think she loves that too, that's y she didn't protest Rajveer. He was really calm n cool with his passionate behavior. He understood that Naina was aroused and he was too when he saw her in that condition.
All was hot n really superb dear, well done g8 job. 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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