SAJAN FF-TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA-chp11 updt pg 83,84

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Posted: 15 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26
mindblowinggg updatee dearr doo contttt soon

hey thanks a ton tanyaa.dear....so sweet of u .😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: aashizin
hey meena yar please give me your autograph please then i will show it to all that mine friend meena is superb ,fantastic and wonderful writer with her creative mind i think cvs has to read this FF this is called creativity gosh girl you rock yar 👏 you put each and every emotions so well yar i mean gun's first love's realization was fab. yar and sam's fear and sajan's first time's proximity scene was mindblowing i mean both's depth and soul joint at their moment and from last i am scared for sajan please don't separate this beautiful jodi yar i can't bear it overall superb update can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm by the way i will read it again for sure

aashi meri jaan.....god mujhe maar dalne ka irada hai kya....autograph aur meri....kyun public me meri keech rahi sweety😆.......welll am touched beyond belief by ur word aashi....i cant tell u wat ur lovely comments mean to me.....my god ur words make it so much worth to write the updates even late in danight...thanks sweety...n this next chap one part is dedicated to ur reqst jaan...sorry i cud manage only two parts...remaing parts of this chap i will write during d weekedn or early next week😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: ---ishita---
awesome ff
many parts were pending due to my exams...!!

bt completed it..!!

u r one of the best writer here..!!

truly u take to entirely different sajan world..!

loved the update throughly dear...!

thanx for the pm

continue soon...!

hey ishita dear...thanks so very much for sincerely catching up with my ff🤗...hope ur exams went on all...all d best for ur resluts😃...thanks so much dear for liking my ff...am so very pleased😊

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meens1981

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Posted: 15 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani
meens beautiful update ... each emotions written pricisely the tug of war btn different emtions which are beyond mind and heart expressed wonderfully... i really like the way you explained samart's emotions where is fighting with his inner most feeling are too good .... we have always heard that when you are in love heart takes over your mind and you don't think abt whats right and whats wrong, you just want to live in present...

ok one think i did not understand was abt the relationship btn sam and his past neetha.... 😕😕 did i miss some part or its that he loved her and she left him or something that's little confusing .... i just read the chapter just once so may be i got lost some where i suppose.....😕😕😕 and me too waiting for their confession more from sammy b'cause i desperately waiting to know how he accepts that part himself first and i would also like a VM here when sammy accepts he is love and she is his life....

asking for a VM here is too much i know but i am still drooling over gunji's relatisation VM ...😍

aawww aarthi dear...thanks a ton...well am so glad u were able to connect with each of the emotions i tried portaying...thats my biggest achievement🤗.....welll u didnt miss ne part dear...neetha will be uncovered as i move along ...well confession as i said earlier is only towards d end....its when he feels tum bin jiya jaaye na literally but pls cont readinf...sure thing babes...there will be a vm...gina sweety is working on that😉

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meens1981

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Posted: 15 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy
awesome...awesome...awesome...
as always..loved it to d core..

wow yaar..u really rock..

i jus love d way u express things...

jus superb yaar..

amazing..

plzzzzz cont soon..

thanx for d pm..!!

thanks a lot charmee dear...aww am so happy that u liked it...god ur comments r making me blush😳...thanks so mcuh for liking ti n pls cont reading😊