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hi guys i am new to If and i am writing my first ff
STORY LINE

STORY BEGINS WITH TWO DOCTORS

GOING TO START INTERNSHIP

THIS STORY IS ABT HOW THEY WILL TRY TO IGNORE EACH OTHER AND WILL HATE OTHER TO THE CORE

ALWAYS READY TO INSULT OTHER

BUT WHAT IS WRITTEN IN THEIR FORTUNE

AND TWO SENIOR DOCTORS WILL HELP THEM TO REALIZE THEIR LOVE HOW ?????????????

SO KEEP READING THIS

HEY PEOPLE M NEW WRITER NEEDS UR COMMENTS SO PLZ COMMENT

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 15

New morning

Samrat anger was now down

Samrat came for the breakfast where he found gunjan

G: good morning

S: ha gud morning(ignoring her)

Mean while mayank too cum over there

S: hi mayank how are you

M: me fit n fyn tum btao apna haaal kal khana mene o khaya ta tumhi ne nhe khaya aur nupur ne bhi

S: kia nups ne nhe khaya but kyu

M: is ka answer shayad tum khud ho

S:( confusingly) me kch samjha nhe

M: kal shayad tum se hi larai hui thin a

S: ha but phir bhi use khana khana chaye tha us ki health waise hi itni naazuk ha ab ise to aur beemar hojaegi

G: (in mind) ye mayank saara plan kachra karne ke iraade me lagta hai kch soch gunjan kia karu ???????????

G: arey tum log breakfast to kar lo phir baat karna

S: tum plx chup rho zaruri bt karhe hai na

Gunjan sits

M: ha to kal tumhi ne to ise kaha tha k tum meri life ki sab se baro problem ho

S: kia ye maine kab bola

M: tum ne gunjan ko ye bol k hi to nupur k paas bheja tha ( I knw gunjan isse tum hurt hogi but ye zaruri hai kyuki tum ne ek galat kaaaam kiya hai )

S: kia maine kab bheja gunjan ko ???????????( after thinking a lot ) yaaad aya match me bhi isi ne humari fight karwai thi oh shit maine ye kia kardia

M: ab jab tumhe realize ho gaya hai to jao nupur ko rook she is going back to Canada

S: kia

Mean while mayank is called by senior doctor so he left

Samrat fuming in anger approaches to gunjan

S: how dare you tumhari himmat hui kaise humari dosti torne ki

G: plx samrat meri baat to suno wo nupu jhoooth bolrhe hai me kyu

Before she culd say he slapped gunjan hard

And then nupur cums and see this

N: ye kia kaha ha tu

S: nups tu nhe jaanti ye kaise ha me to aj is o choru ga nhe

N: bas sam ye galat hai kisi bhi larki pe haaath nhe uthate samjhe

S: but is ne jhuth kyu bola aj is ki waja se meri dost meri sister meri life mjh se dur jarhe hai how wuldi live without you

g) (in mind) kia ye dono bhai behen hai oh shit! Maine kitna galat kia !!!!!

N: (tear brimming in her eyes) bus ab chor de

S: plx mjhe chor k mat ja

N: nhe sam mjhe jane de

G: sorry to interfere but ye kaaam maine kia tha I m so sorry plx mjhe maaaf kardena

S: tumhe to me kabhi maaaf nhe karuga tum ne harkat hi aise ki hai

G: but

S: plx leave us alone

G: ok ( she soooooooon left)

Now sanu

S: sorry nups I am really sorry ( guilty)

N: nhe ab der hogye hai m going

S: plx mat ja me ter bagair mar??

N: aj kaha hai phir mat kehna tu to meri life hai tujh hi se to jeeene ka hosla mila but ek promise karo k ye humari dosti kabhi tutne nhe doge mjhe kabhi nhe daaantoge mjhe kabhi nhe chor k jaoge

S: kabhi nhi tujhe chorne wala koi pagal hi hoga hum to tere liye larka bhi aisa dhundhege jo shaadi k baad humara saath rhe

N: hehehehe vey funny

S: plx nhe jana

N: ofcurse yr ma

Nhe jarhe tujhe chor k

Hn both with teary eyes hugged each other

S: I luv you my sweet angel

N: I luv you tooooo

Meanwhile all people gathered fo breakfast and were really shocked k kak jo itna larhe the aj baahon me baaahe daaale khare ha

Dr.a: thnk god finally fight khatam ( he to has tears)

N: ha bro

drA: means k tu mjhe chor k nhe jarhe right na

N: kabhi nhe

Dr a: ab agar phir kabhi chrne kibd kin a to me ???????.

N: bro kabhi nhe choruge pakka

Thn she hugged him

Then they all ate breakfast sanu feeding each other mayank also feeding gunjan samrat forgiven her finally but one thing which sanu observer

S(pov) yaha kuch to badla hai mayank aur nupur k beech kuch to feeling hai but ye dono pta nhe kab samjhe ge

N(pov) ye gunjan sam ko like karti hai isi liye to is ne ye kia hoga

S(pov) mayank buhat acha hai beta samrat mission pe lag ja mission mayur feelings ko observe karne ka

(frndz this song sequence is samrat pov abt mayur)

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

(medical camp started all doctors were doing check ups and mayor were looking at each other from corner of their eyes)

S:pov : hmmmmmmmm nups ko kch to hua hai

Do Dill Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

(thn mayurs files dropped both sit to pick it due to which their hands met both shivered at the touch)

S: pov: dil me hai pyar kab karege ye log izhaar

Sabko Ho Rahi Hai

S: pov: dono lost hai ek dusre k thots me in ko koi btao k sab dkh rhe hai

Haan Sabko Ho Rahi Hai

Khabar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Thn both cum back to senses

Resume to their work

Saanson Mein Badi Bekaraari

Aankhon Mein Kai Rat Jage

Kahin Kabhi Lag Jaaye Dil To

Kahin Phir Dil Na Lage

Apne Dil Mein Zara Thaam Loon

N: pov: aj mayank itna pyarakyu lagraha hai dil me kyu ej ajeeeeb uljhan hai

M: pov: aj dil charha hai nupur ko apn paaas rakhu au rise apne dil ka haal bta du

Jaadu Ka Main Isay Naam Doon

Jaadu Kar Raha

Jaadu Kar Raha Hai Asar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Lunch break

All were chit chatting except mayur they wre just gazing ezch other

Samrat:pov: aj humari bolti hui nups chup hai wah ise to pyar hogaya hai

Aise Bhole Bankar Hai Baithe

Jaise Koi Baat Nahin

Sab Kuchh Nazar Aa Raha Hai

Din Hai Ye Raat Nahin

Kya Hai Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hai Agar

Honthon Pe Hai Khaamoshi Magar

Baatein Kar Rahi Hain

Baatein Kar Rahi Hain Nazar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

M:( thots) bus kal wapis Mumbai ja ke nupur ke dil ka haaal janne ki koshish karuga

S: ( in mind) bus Mumbai ja ke nups se bt karta hu wo to kabhi bhi ye nhe jaane gi k ye jo feelings us me hai wo mayank k liye its love

Frndz this is it

M tired of typing

Will cont soooon

Till thn comment and hit like tab if you liked it

Luv sehrish

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

part 17

mayank was following orders of guru samrat

but his badluck was with him

u knw why

he has been assigned to do duty with nupur

and according to him it wuld be o tuff

but humare guru samrat ka to kuch aur hi maaanna hai

s: wow! dude y to nehle pe dehla hua

m: kia wow ab to ignore karna aur bhi mushkil hoga

s: are dude saamne rehke ignore karo ge to zyada feeel hoga use phir to humara plan aur bhi zyada succesful hoga

m: shayad but pta nhe kyu mjhe ajjjeb si feeelings arhe hai

s: are main hon na dont worry aur ha cignore karna plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

m: ok dude(confusingly)

thn mayank left

on other hand sajan were also doing duty together

mayur

nupur was hell angry but she wanted to knew the reason why is he ignoring her

so she tried again and again but mayank kept himself busy in sum work so tht he dont have to face her

but his fortune was not with him

as dr keerti told them to bandage

so they have to work together

n: ab dkhti hu ye ab kaise mjhe ignore maaarta hai

m:(im mind) ab kia karu yr god save me

thn they strt bandaging

during it their hands were touched and there was a small eye lock but thn they cum back to senses

but this tym again mayank went away

and it brought nupur into disastrous anger actually jealousy

m:(in mind) sorrry nupur me kia karu majbue hu but ek baaar tum meri hojao phir kabhi tmhe tung nhe karuga its a promise

sajan

samrat and gunjan were doing their duty

gunjan went to take file when suddenly file dropped from her hand

her hair started flying in air

samrat get lost in her

s: wowwwwwwww kia beauty hai

mayank came to him as it was a lunch break

m: uncle mu band karo ye meri behen hai

s:(not realizing mayanks presence) but hai bari mast yr sooooo cool

m:kia

s: ( came back to senses) kuch nhe wo me ata hu nups ne bulaya hai

he left

m: too aag yaha bhi lagi hai(while folding his arms)

sooooooo frndzzzzzzz har jaga aaaaaaag lagi hai pyar ki

to kahi takraaaaar ki

kal mileygi ap ko angry nupur

and mayank flirting qwith other girls

ans ha

sajan bhi mileyge

lost in each others arm

frndz sorrry for short update

but m too tired

willlllll give u nxt part sooooon

mayb tommorow

with long part

till thn comment

luv sehr

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

part 16

all returned from the lonavla

and routine lfie and duty were continued

mayank and nupur both had started feeling sumthing for each other

mayank ha realised his love for her

but still nupur hadnot realised it

samrat knew about it

and was trying hard to make her rea new day

all interns were doing their duties

mayank was in locker room lost in his thots

m: kiia nupur mere baare me sochti hoge kia wo mjhe pasand karti hoge lagta to hai but koi signal bhi to nhe deti ?

s: ofcourse dude( cming frm back side)

m: tum yaha

s: ha me waise if u want my help i can

m: kaise

s: well me nups ko jaaanta hu wo relations se dur bhagti hai

m: to phr

s: phir kal se mission nupur shuru

m: ha mission nupur me kuch samjha nhe?????????/

s: are budhu kal se hum nupur ke dil ki bt jaane ki koshish karege

m: kaise

s: well its a 6 day program to knw her heart feelings

m: acha to kal mjhe kia karna hoga

s: day 1 ignoring nupur

m: thnx dude

s: mntion not

waise maine tmhe kubul kia apni angelic nups k liye us ka khayal rkhna

m: sure ye tumse mera vaada hai

s: to kal se shur hoga mission nupur but ek baat jaan lo kisi bhi tarah nups ko pta nhe chalna chaye warna wo din mera is world me last dy hoga

m(controling his laughter) ok dude me jaanta hu us ka gusa to aafat hai khuda hi bachaye

n: reall to mera gussa khatarnak hai

sayank were shocked at it as they thot that there plan has been revealed but luck was with them so nupur didnt listened all thing but listened last sentence by mayank

so now mayanks life in danger

n: ha to me khatarnak hu aj btati hu me kitni bhayanak hu just wait and watch . chalo gunjan

g: ha chalo ab dkh hai inko jo humari burai karte hai

now it was lunch time

all interns were eating lunch

girls were ignoring boys

sajan were trying hard to convince them

but all end in vain

s: plz sorry yr ainda aisa nhe hoga

( tillthn dia nupur and ggunjan hid sumthing at thier back)

n: acha but agar aisa hua to phir

m: nhe hoga

( now each boy was in front of one girl)

mayank-nupur

samrat-gunjan

diya-benji

n: thik hai but

all boys:(confused) but kia

all girls: ye(they hit cake on their face)

now it had started into a big fight all were throwing things on each other

didnt realised when dr kirti cameand thet also thruogh noodles on other

dr k: interns

no response

dr k:(with full pressure) internnnnnnnnnssssss...... kia horha hai

all interns came back to sense

d K: 1 hour baad sab mjhe sahe haaal me miley for overduties

all inters: but

dr k: no but sss aj to ap ko punish mileygi for sure

all interns heads down: jeee mam

end

i knw its short but i am tired now

but kal i will pakka give you long one

till thn enjoy it

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Posted: 15 years ago

part 14

recap

sanu fight

gunjan happy

episode begins

samrat and gunjan skiped lunch and dinner . all tried to convince them but all end in vain

both were unable to sleep and fighting with thoths

N:(thots)

mjhe shayad haq hi nhe ke kisi se dosti karne ka but kia samrat sach me mjhe itna bura samjhta hai kia me itni buri hu .......nhe samrat aisa nhe soch sakta ................but gunjan ne to yehi bola tha wo kyu jhuth bolegi ...............bus ab shayad mjhe yaha nhe rukna chaye .Its impossilble to live in thiz country any more . kal subah hi main bro se bt karke wapis chali jaoge ab yaha rehna mushkil hai ..... ab samrat kabhi meri waja se problem me nhe ayega

its tym to go nupur u have to go

( while wiping her tears)

meanwhile nupur turned and found mayank there having slight tear in his eyes as he heard her plan to go but he didn want her to go

m: ye tum kyu karhe ho tum kahe nhe jarhe ho rite plz yr dont go

n: nhe mayank ihave to go me buhat kharab hu tum bhi mjh se dosti tor do me buhat buri hu gunjan thik hi keh rhe thi

( let me tell you tht gunjan has came to nupur and said all fake thingsto nupur abt sanrat that he hates her )

then she telll him abt it

flashback

g: hey nupur tum ne khana nhe khaya ?

n: nhe bus moood nhe hai

g: dkho tum us ki waja se nhe kharhe ho aur wo kitna khushi se kharha tha

n: kia sach me

g: ha wo to keh rha te k acha ha tum se jan chuti

flashback end

m: kia but...............

n: choro mayank me jaaanti hu he dont lyk me he hates me

then she suddenly hugged mayank

m: (in mind) to ye sab gunjan ne kia but kyu lekin jo bhi ho mjhe ye larai khatam karwani hi hogi

jald se jald but kaise lekin one thing is for sure i cant lose her but kyu shaya i like her may be but she is my friend and i cant lose her a any cost

then they recovered from hug

m: dekho nupur plz mat jao sab thik hojaye ga

n: nhe mayank kch thik nhe hoga u knw jab me choi thi tab hi mere momdad mjhe chor k chale gaye the tab bro aur samrat ne hi mjhe sambhala tha ab samrat bhi mjh se nafrat kart hai is liye behtar yhi hai k me chali jao atleast dur rahogi to kisi k liye musibat to nhe bnugi na

m: nhe aisa nhe hai

n: bus mayank let me go plz but i will be ur frnd na

m: obviously but will misss you

m: me tooo

N:(in mind( kyu aj mjhe is se dooor jane ke naaam se taklif horhe hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, bus nupu tu kch mat soch u r goood for nthing

m: to kab jaaane ka plan hai

n: kal subah

M: wht itni jaldi phir tumhari internship ka kia hoga

n: me whe join karluge

m: ok but dont forget me

n: tumhe aur tumhari cute smile koi kaise bhul sakta hai

m:>.....................................( he has tear in his eyes floeing rapidly)

they both hugged each other

mean while armaaan came to knw her plan o going so he goes to her

a: angel maine sun k u r going but ku

N: bro i cant live here

a: but mjhe akele chor kr abhi to tm aye thi phir jarhe ho dont go

n: bro bhabhi hai na ap k saath aur me yaha nhe reh paugi plz dont insist me for it

armaaaan knws it imposssible to change her decision so he unwantedly acccepted

a: to kab jarhe hai mjhe chor k meri angel

n: bro dnt say thiz i luv you

a: i luv you toooo

n: bro i willl misss you

she thn hugged him armaan kissed on her forehead

a: to kia mjh ye haq milsakta hai k aj aaat me tumhare saaath raho

n: j bro me bhi yhi chati hu

thn whole ny armmaaan ridhimma spent nite with nupur

precap

??????????????

frndz this is new part

keeep guessing nxt part

will update nxr part by saturday pakka nd that wuld be longest one with sum interseting twist

till thn read i and comment

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luv sehrish

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART ONE

NUPURS ENTRY

codes will be

N for nupur

R for ridhimma

a for armaan

a girl is shown sleeping in her beautiful malik villa

suddenly someone came

and try to wake her up

person: chal nupur uth na!!!!

N: ridzi bhabhi sone do na

R: tujhe yaad nhe hai kya aj tera internshipship ka first day hai aur 7 baj chuke hai

(listening this she wake up alll of a sudden)

N: kia bhabhi itna der se uthaya bhaya to jogging pe chale gaye hoge na

R: tere bhaya kabhi tere baghair jaasakte hai . chal jaldi se fresh hoja armaan tera wait kar raha hai

N: oh ho bhaya ka naam leke itna blush

R: tu phir shuru hogaye

(nupur stand up and hug ridhimma frm back)

N: bhabhi you are the best

R: i knw tht

(suddenly a voice came)

A: kaha ho basket mera track suit to do na

N: bhaya bhabhi se milnee ki itni besbri horhe hai jao bhabhi bhai ap ko yaad karhe hai

(ridhimma goes away)

now its 7.30 nupur and armaan are out for jogging

suddenly nupur became sad and sat on a bench in park where they were jogging and armaan observe this he also sat beside her

A: kia hua angel (armaan calls nupur as angel)

N: bhai papa ki bauhat yaad arhe hai (she started crying)

A: angel mera pyar bacha aise rote nhe jaanu

N: bt bhaya aj papa ka sapna pura hone jarha hai me sonjeevani join karhe hu and bilkul akeli hu

A: kisne bola tu akeli hai main hu na tera bhai father sab kuch phir ku lonely feel karhe hai

nupur suddenly hugs her

N:bhaya you are the best

A: i knw that angel

N: ghar chale warna late hojayega

A: sure lets go

thts it for now

precap : mayanks entry

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all interns punished

girls angry over boys

boys were trying trying hard bit it of no use girls were not at all ready especially nupur

b: yr ye girls kyu itna gussa l ke chalti hai

s: ha benji in ko to maza ata hai ha gussa inki all tym hobby hoti hai gussssssaaaaaaaaaa

m: dude ab ye socho k karna kia hai

b: us nupur ko ek lagao sab thk hojayega

sayank gave him ha scary look

b: sorry me to bus aise hi bol rha tha

m: u better shut up(keeping his hand on his soulder)

s: ha my nups is best............. sorry our nups thik hai mayank ab kch plan soche

m: ha i thnk inko kch gift dete hai

s: nhe nups ko to gift dena hi mat wo to pakka usi gift se pitey gi

m: kyu

s: dude experince me buhat exoperienced hu in nupur matters samjhe dude

m: to tum hi btao kia kare mr experienced

s: hmmmmmmmmm.......... idea

why not a

"sorry party"

m & b: kia sorry party ye kaise party hui???????/

s: ha ye mast hoti hai dekhna ise girls zarur maaanjayegi

m: to karna kia hai

S: real me nups tum ko thik hi kehti hai

m: kia

s: idiot jab hundred budhu mare honge na tab hi tum born hue hoge

m: hehehe very funny hua kia

s: kia kia kia laga ke rakha ha jab bola k sorry party to phir kyu puchte ho kia karna hai

m: arey me to ye puch rha tha k kia aur kaha ha i means kase arrange karege

s: oh to suno

he told them wht to do.

after 1 hour

all girls were sitting in cafeteria

when one ward boy came and handed to them a letter

in which they were called in party room of hospital

all girls went there and were horrified as it was black completely

n: gunjan mjhe andhere se buhat darr lagta hai

g: mjhe bhi

n: plz yaha se chalo

d: ha babes chalte hai

as they tried to turn sum hold them by wrist

mayank to nupur

samrat to gunjan

benji to diya

and lites go on

as all girls were sared they all hugged then

but after 2 min all ended

all girls anger strted again

thn boys

started singing a song

O meri jaan na lele ke meri jaan
Teri ada 2
Jaan jala na tujhe pe deewana
Mein hoon fida 2

then boys hold their eyes and bow down to them

Gustakhi maaf karde
Abb to insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna to maan le

then they stand up

oooooo
Jaane bhi de bhi hua
jaane bhi de

( girls were controlling there smile as they dont wanted to show them that they are no more angry as they want them to do more to manaofy them)

Gussa tera jhootha
Jhoothi moothi berukhi hai
Jaanu main to jaanu
Teri naa mein haan chhupi hai

( thn boys bring the cake and asked girls to cut

but they refused)

Aye sanaam na kar sitam
Tujhko khuda ka vasta

( girls went to corner)

hey..
Gustakhi maaf karde
Abb to insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna to maan le
o
Jaane bhi de bhi hua
jaane bhi de

( boys in serious tone )

Tanha na kategi zindgani jaanle tu
Meri hi zarurat tujhko hogi maanle tu
Mar ke bhi na chodunda Teri baahien tera raasta

( all girl came to them hugged them as they were touched by this line and dont want to lose thm)

samrat nuour

mayank gunjan

benji diya

now they cut the cake

and feed other

s: to maaan gaye nnups

n: ha sam tu to jaaanta hai na mjhe k mera gussa kaisa hai sorry hum kch zyada gussa hogye

m: waise don worry bare bare shero me aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai

n: wah aj mayank filmy dialogues kia bt hai

s: to ghar chale m tooooo tired

n: ha chal

then all left

sanu went to nupur house

as samrat want to knw her feelings for mayank

n: tu yaha beth mecoffee leke ati hu

s: wow! coffee jaldi la cant wait

n: sabr kar yr

s: han a jaldi le a

s: (Mumbling) aj to is k dil ki bat jan ke rahuga pta to chale is k dil me u k liye kch feelings hai bhi k nhe

after 10 min nupur came with two mugs of coffee

n: le sam

s: really teri coffee to wrld best hoti hai and tu bhi

n: thnx yr aj ka din ktna tiring tha na

s: ha mayank bhi yhi keh rha tha

n: kia kehrha tha

s: kch nhe aise hi( samrat understood she is eager to knw abt him so he stated checking her feelings)

n: bta na sam plxxxxxxxx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

s: aise hi yr

n: ja nhe btana to bhau mat kha

s: acha baba btata hu

( nupur interestingly listening him)

s: wo kehrha k buhat thak gaya hai

n: bechara us ko rest karna chaye na

s: waise ti thk hi kehti hai

n: mai kia

s: k mayank buhat idiot hai

n: ha but itna bura bhi nhe hai sweet ha and caring bhi hai

(nupur gets lost in his thots)

s: kia hua

n: kuch nhe

s:(mumbling) to aaag yaha bhi lagi hai

n: kch kaha tu ne

s: nhe to acha its getting late me chalta hu subah ready rehna me tjhe pick karne aonga

n: ok take care love you

s: love you tooo

thn both hugged each other

nxt day

samrat came to mayank

s: so ready for mision nupur( thumbs up)

m: but kal itna mushkil se maaani hai phir naraz hogye to

s: to guru samrat kis liye hai bus aj tumhe use complete ignore karna hai samjhe plan me koi gharbar mat karna warna phir bhuljana nups ko

m: nhe me nupur ko khona nhe chata jo tum kahge whe karunga pakka

s: thts gud dekho wo arhe hai 1 2 3 ... start

thn gunjan and nupur came in

nupur said hi to mayank but he didnt replied

n:ajjeb insaaan hai jawab hi nhe deta lagta hai is me koi manufacturing fault hai

thn she again call him

again no repl

g: mayank nupur kch bol rhe hai

m: wo me ata hu

n: jao jao idiot stupid samjhta kia ha apne ap ko

she angrily left over there

g: kia mayank ye galat hai na

m: my swweet sister choro na usko

thn samrat share hi 5 to mayank

s: kch to aaag lagi hai dil me ab to nupur ko to maaanna padega

m: but dude agar wo mjh se pyar nhe karti hui to

s: relax yr guru samrat k hote hue no worry rite

m: ok ab tum pe hi bharosa hai

frndz this is it

well sajanians dont kill me

i will give sajan part in nxt update

pakka pakka

do comment and hit like tab

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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part 13 continuation

nupur came to samrat and

n: to tune jaaan much k mjhe out krwayan a how culd you

s: nhe maine kch nae kia

n: yr ab jhut mat bol galti maaanna sikh

g: ha samrat tum hi ne to bola tha k nupur ko aise hi out karskte hai

s: gunjan tum jhut kyu bol rhe hu

g: me nhe to

s: plx tum to chup hi raho

n: is ko chor tu mj se bt kr ya chor mje jh se koi bt hi nhe karni

s: karni padegi

n: kyu tu koi minister ka beta hai jo tu jo bolega wo mhi sb kare

s: ha hu koi problem hai

n:dkh faltu baatein mat kar plx

s: tu faltu baatein karhe hai samjhe

n: ha me to hu hi extra na ja mjhe tujh se koi bt nhe karni

s: mjhe bhi

thn they start splashing water on each other

dr armmaaan and ridhimmma came to them and asked

ye kia karhe ho tum dono

n: bhai isi ko samjhao isi ne mjhe dhoka diya hai

s: maine kab dia dhoka thk hai me hu hi itna bura actuallly i dnt deserve ur frndship

n: ti kyu me hi ksi ki dosti k layak nhe hu

s: (angrily) ha nhe hai ( without thinking)

n: thk ha if m wrong so sorrry to interfere in ur lyf m going

s: to jao na waie bhi tumhari ksi ko zarurat nhe hai

n: thk hai fyn

npur left with teary eyes and samrat went in angry moood

drA: ab kia kare

dr R: in ko chor do ye aise hi larte hai phir khud dosti hojati hai

dr a: ha but is tym case critical lagrha hai but dkhte hai kia hota hai

wht willl happen

will sanu frndship break forever

wht will be the future of mayur relation

for alll this wait tilll tomorow

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 2 MAYANKS ENTRY

a handsome boy is shown sleeping

suddenly sunlight ray drool over him and start disturbing him

then one lady came and try to wake him up

codes

M - mayank

MM - mayank mom

MD - mayank father

M: maa sone do na itna acha dream dekh raha hu

MM: oh ho (in a teasing tone) meri hone wali bahu k sapne dekh raha hai

M: kia maa ap phi shuru hogaye

MM: aj tujhe yaad hai k nhe tera and gunjan ki internship start hone wali hai. first day late hone hai kia

M: maa pehle gunjan ko uthayo phr me uthoga

MM: oh mr wo kab se ready hai aur ha us ka khayal rakhna tujhe to pta hai na wo kitni jaldi darr jati hai

M: mein hoon na to kuyun tension leti ho mein apni behen ko kuch bhi nahi hone duga

MM: acha chal tayar hoke aja mei breakfast ready karti hu

( gunjan come in)

G: mayu tayyar hue k nhe

M: yr mujhe koi dress samajh nhe arha tu hi dhundh de

G: tum kabhi nhe sudhroge

M: kia karu (he makes a puppy face)

then gunjan take out his black jeans with blue shirt

on breakfast table

MD: me aj bauhat khush hu k mere dono bache sanjeevani join karhe hai

then gunjan and mayank hugs his father and take blessings from their parents

NOTE: guy i knw this one is to short

but next part will be long for sure

do comment guys atleast hit lik button

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Part 11

Mayank and nupur wnt in car but

Car fuel ended near jungle

So now

M:ab yaha koi petrol pump nhe hai na hi hum itni raat ko kahi jasakte hai

N: kia mtlab(questioningly)

M: (while putting cotton buds in his ears) matlab ye k humein aj aat is jungle me guzarni padegi

N: kiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa???????????? rat tumhare saath mpossible me nhe rahugi plzzzzzzzzzz yaha se nikalnek koi raasta to hoga na

M: nhe hai but tum tension kyun lerhe ho hum subah hote hi nikal jayege aur tum daro nhe mein tumhe kuch nhe hone dunga

Nupur nodded and becum sad

N: mje jungle se darr lagta hai pta hai me jab bhi khojati thi samrat mjhe hamesha har mushkil se bachata tha bt aj wo mere saath nhe hai hai ab me akeli hu

( while saying this started crying lyk a 5 y small kid)

N: ( while crying) mujhe sam k paas jana hai mujhe bro k paas jana hai ?????????????.

M: deko plz chup hojao main hoon na

( she started crying more badly)

Mayank fully irritated

M: chup bilkul chup ab mat rona ( strictl ordered her)

She stopped crying

M: dekho kuch nhe hoga sach me . do you believe me

She noddedc in yes

M: to phir kyun darhe ho hum jaldi hi tumhare bro and samrat k paas paunch jaye ge pakka do plz don't cry

N: sachi subah paunch jayege

M: ha sachi

N hugge him and said thnx

M: chalo ab plz tum darna mat hum yaha rehne ki jaga dhundte hai

N: ha chalo

They started walking in search of place to spent night

But

Both get lost

Mayank was very tensed as he was aware that nupur wuld be very frightened

And he started searching her

on other hand

nupur was left dumbstruck she didn't knew wht to do and where to go she was extremely frightened and was repeating sum lines again and again

N: nupur darr mat all iz well all iz well?????????????????????..

Suddenly lightinening begins

NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA

(NUPUR STARTED CRING AND WAS CREAMING MAYAN K MAYANK)

JUNGLE HAI AADHI RAAT HAI LAGNE LAGA HAI DARR

( SHE STARTED SHIVERING AND THN MAYANK SAW HER QUICKLY CAME TO HER AND HUGER HER TIGHT SO THAT ALL HER FEAR CULD VANISH)

AAJA MERI BAAHON ME SOJA RAKH K SAR

BOTH WERE LOST IN EACH OTHERS ARM

SCENE SHIFT

LONAVLA

DR A: samrat angel kaha hai abhi tak to use ajana chaye tha achanak se kaha gayab hogae wo

S: bro me bhi yhi soch rha hu nups ko to waise hi raaat ke andhere se darr lagta hai ab pta nhe wok aha reh gaye

DR A: tum ne iska cell try kia

S: ha bro na uska cell se answer arha hai na mayank k dono pta nhe kaha phans gae

DR A: ek kam karte hai hum unhe dhundne chalet hai mjhe angel ki buhat fiar horhe hai waise bhi us ki tabyat buhat mushkil se thik hui hai'

S: ha bro chalo

Both were going out but were stopped y ridhimma and gunjan

DR R: kaha jarhe ho tum dono

S: didi wo hum nups ko dhundne jarhe hai pta kaha hogi wok is haal me itni der hogae hai

DR A: ha ridhimma angel pta nhe kaha kis haal e ho

G: ( in mind) ye nupur hamesha samrat ko mjh se door karti rehti hai kash wo kabhi thik hi na hoti to me aur samrat hamesha saath hote

S: kia hua gunjan kin khayalo me ho

G: me woo kuch nhe

S: dekho tumhare bhai ko kuch nhe hoga hum dhundne jarhe hai na

G: ha bus bhai thik ho

DR R: but itni raat ko tum unhe kaha dhundoge ek aam karo subah tk won a aye to dhundne chale jaana

S: ok didi

Tey all went inside their camps

But gunjan was on other hand was worried b?c nupur was coming back

G: mjhe kuch to karna padega npupr yaha jaise hi ayegi samrat us ke age peeche ghumna shuru kardega but me karu to kia karu

D: babes sojao aur plz switch off lights mjhe buhat neend arhe hai

G: (in mind) yaha meri neend urrgaye hai aur ye mjhe sone ka bol re hai stpid

( all girls were sharing one camp And all boys were in other and in third dr armaan and ridhimma wre staying)

They all doses of except samrat who was worried for nupur and was roaming here and there

Scene shift

They were stil in each othrs arm both were lost in each others arm

After sum tym both came back to their senses

M: tum thik ho na( while cupping her face)

N: tum kaha gayab hogae the tumhe pta hai me ktna darrgaye thi aur tum kaha gayab hogye the agar kuch hojata to

M:shhhhhhhh kum bola karo main tumhe nhe chorke jaoge aur waise bhi tmhe mere hote hue kzbhi kuch nhe hoga

N: promise

M: pakka promise

N: by god mayank hum stay kaha karege Canada me to aisa nhe hota tha

M: kyun tum waha k jungle me rehti thi

N: haha very funny idiot chalo rehne ki jag dhundte hai

But their luck was very bad

Becoz

It stated rainig heavily

Both ger completely wet

But their lick wasn't that much bad

They soon found a cottage to spend their night

They went inside cottage

Then mayank give her cloth to change (it was the same dress she wore on pehli baar song sequene) and mayank removed his shirt and was just wearing black vest looking damn hot

Tmayank lighten the fire

And both sat near the fire to get sum het as they both were feeling too cold

Npupur was drying her hair and mayank was mesmerizing her beauty and get lost in it

And he started moving closer to her

RAAT KA NASHA ABHI AANKH SE GAYA NHE

(thn he cum closer to her she shyly face down but mayank raise her head and kissed on her forehead)

Tera nasheela badan baahon ne chora nhe

(thn he cum more closer to her)

ankhe to kholi magar sapna wo chora nhe

(then he started kissing on her neck and back)

Ha wohi

Tu wahi

Honto pe rakha hua tere ankho ka sapna abhi hai wahe

raat ka nasha abhi ....

aankh se gaya nhe...

now both fell on grass

Tera nasheela badan baahon ne chora nhe

(thn he cum more closer to her)

ankhe to kholi magar sapna wo chora nhe

( thn she freed herself and went on other side)

mayank came to her and hugged her from back

raat ka nasha abhi........................

( thn he freed her she lay on a swing)

Tere Bina Bhi Kabhi
Tujhse Machal Leti Hoon
Karvat Badalti Hoon To
Sapna Badal Leti Hoon
Tere Bina Bhi Kabhi
Tujhse Machal Leti Hoon
Karvat Badalti Hoon To
Sapna Badal Leti Hoon

( thn she start aproaching to him)
Tera Khayal Aaye To
Balkhake Pal Jaata Hain
Paani Ke Chaadar Tale
Dum Mera Jal Jaata Hain

( she cum more closer)

mayank was just looking at her suddenly she says

N: mayank kin khayalo me ghum ho

mayank came back to senses

frndz this is a longest part i have ever written

so i hope u wuld lyk it

do coment and criticism is accepted

luv sehr

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago