~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136 - Page 67

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95

awesome promo

contineu soon
thanx 4 the pm

thnx dear
will update tonite
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

awesome story
just loved it
continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi278

hey sehrish,
sorry for the late comment,
fabulous part....
loved it,
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 15

New morning

Samrat anger was now down

Samrat came for the breakfast where he found gunjan

G: good morning

S: ha gud morning(ignoring her)

Mean while mayank too cum over there

S: hi mayank how are you

M: me fit n fyn tum btao apna haaal kal khana mene o khaya ta tumhi ne nhe khaya aur nupur ne bhi

S: kia nups ne nhe khaya but kyu

M: is ka answer shayad tum khud ho

S:( confusingly) me kch samjha nhe

M: kal shayad tum se hi larai hui thin a

S: ha but phir bhi use khana khana chaye tha us ki health waise hi itni naazuk ha ab ise to aur beemar hojaegi

G: (in mind) ye mayank saara plan kachra karne ke iraade me lagta hai kch soch gunjan kia karu ???????????

G: arey tum log breakfast to kar lo phir baat karna

S: tum plx chup rho zaruri bt karhe hai na

Gunjan sits

M: ha to kal tumhi ne to ise kaha tha k tum meri life ki sab se baro problem ho

S: kia ye maine kab bola

M: tum ne gunjan ko ye bol k hi to nupur k paas bheja tha ( I knw gunjan isse tum hurt hogi but ye zaruri hai kyuki tum ne ek galat kaaaam kiya hai )

S: kia maine kab bheja gunjan ko ???????????( after thinking a lot ) yaaad aya match me bhi isi ne humari fight karwai thi oh shit maine ye kia kardia

M: ab jab tumhe realize ho gaya hai to jao nupur ko rook she is going back to Canada

S: kia

Mean while mayank is called by senior doctor so he left

Samrat fuming in anger approaches to gunjan

S: how dare you tumhari himmat hui kaise humari dosti torne ki

G: plx samrat meri baat to suno wo nupu jhoooth bolrhe hai me kyu

Before she culd say he slapped gunjan hard

And then nupur cums and see this

N: ye kia kaha ha tu

S: nups tu nhe jaanti ye kaise ha me to aj is o choru ga nhe

N: bas sam ye galat hai kisi bhi larki pe haaath nhe uthate samjhe

S: but is ne jhuth kyu bola aj is ki waja se meri dost meri sister meri life mjh se dur jarhe hai how wuldi live without you

g) (in mind) kia ye dono bhai behen hai oh shit! Maine kitna galat kia !!!!!

N: (tear brimming in her eyes) bus ab chor de

S: plx mjhe chor k mat ja

N: nhe sam mjhe jane de

G: sorry to interfere but ye kaaam maine kia tha I m so sorry plx mjhe maaaf kardena

S: tumhe to me kabhi maaaf nhe karuga tum ne harkat hi aise ki hai

G: but

S: plx leave us alone

G: ok ( she soooooooon left)

Now sanu

S: sorry nups I am really sorry ( guilty)

N: nhe ab der hogye hai m going

S: plx mat ja me ter bagair mar??

N: aj kaha hai phir mat kehna tu to meri life hai tujh hi se to jeeene ka hosla mila but ek promise karo k ye humari dosti kabhi tutne nhe doge mjhe kabhi nhe daaantoge mjhe kabhi nhe chor k jaoge

S: kabhi nhi tujhe chorne wala koi pagal hi hoga hum to tere liye larka bhi aisa dhundhege jo shaadi k baad humara saath rhe

N: hehehehe vey funny

S: plx nhe jana

N: ofcurse yr ma

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Nhe jarhe tujhe chor k

Hn both with teary eyes hugged each other

S: I luv you my sweet angel

N: I luv you tooooo

Meanwhile all people gathered fo breakfast and were really shocked k kak jo itna larhe the aj baahon me baaahe daaale khare ha

Dr.a: thnk god finally fight khatam ( he to has tears)

N: ha bro

drA: means k tu mjhe chor k nhe jarhe right na

N: kabhi nhe

Dr a: ab agar phir kabhi chrne kibd kin a to me ???????.

N: bro kabhi nhe choruge pakka

Thn she hugged him

Then they all ate breakfast sanu feeding each other mayank also feeding gunjan samrat forgiven her finally but one thing which sanu observer

S(pov) yaha kuch to badla hai mayank aur nupur k beech kuch to feeling hai but ye dono pta nhe kab samjhe ge

N(pov) ye gunjan sam ko like karti hai isi liye to is ne ye kia hoga

S(pov) mayank buhat acha hai beta samrat mission pe lag ja mission mayur feelings ko observe karne ka

(frndz this song sequence is samrat pov abt mayur)

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

(medical camp started all doctors were doing check ups and mayor were looking at each other from corner of their eyes)

S:pov : hmmmmmmmm nups ko kch to hua hai

Do Dill Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

(thn mayurs files dropped both sit to pick it due to which their hands met both shivered at the touch)

S: pov: dil me hai pyar kab karege ye log izhaar

Sabko Ho Rahi Hai

S: pov: dono lost hai ek dusre k thots me in ko koi btao k sab dkh rhe hai

Haan Sabko Ho Rahi Hai

Khabar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Thn both cum back to senses

Resume to their work

Saanson Mein Badi Bekaraari

Aankhon Mein Kai Rat Jage

Kahin Kabhi Lag Jaaye Dil To

Kahin Phir Dil Na Lage

Apne Dil Mein Zara Thaam Loon

N: pov: aj mayank itna pyarakyu lagraha hai dil me kyu ej ajeeeeb uljhan hai

M: pov: aj dil charha hai nupur ko apn paaas rakhu au rise apne dil ka haal bta du

Jaadu Ka Main Isay Naam Doon

Jaadu Kar Raha

Jaadu Kar Raha Hai Asar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Lunch break

All were chit chatting except mayur they wre just gazing ezch other

Samrat:pov: aj humari bolti hui nups chup hai wah ise to pyar hogaya hai

Aise Bhole Bankar Hai Baithe

Jaise Koi Baat Nahin

Sab Kuchh Nazar Aa Raha Hai

Din Hai Ye Raat Nahin

Kya Hai Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hai Agar

Honthon Pe Hai Khaamoshi Magar

Baatein Kar Rahi Hain

Baatein Kar Rahi Hain Nazar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

M:( thots) bus kal wapis Mumbai ja ke nupur ke dil ka haaal janne ki koshish karuga

S: ( in mind) bus Mumbai ja ke nups se bt karta hu wo to kabhi bhi ye nhe jaane gi k ye jo feelings us me hai wo mayank k liye its love

Frndz this is it

M tired of typing

Will cont soooon

Till thn comment and hit like tab if you liked it

Luv sehrish

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nyc update,..continue soon n thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear nice update do continue soon and thanks for pm by the way please add sajan's love story in it i would love to see their love story in you ff thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rads14

its awesome..!!
cont soon..

will update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsumd

nyc update,..continue soon n thanx 4 d pm.

will update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aashizin

hey dear nice update do continue soon and thanks for pm by the way please add sajan's love story in it i would love to see their love story in you ff thanks

ok dear in nxt part sajan luv story will too began
will update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update 😊 continue soon and thanks for the pm..........

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