~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

i thought so.........

see the last post of page 93

ya i saw it

its fab yr

loved it

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

ya i saw it

its fab yr

loved it

glad you loved it........

so are you updating today??

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

ya i saw it

its fab yr

loved it

ya i am updating it

till 12 am

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#614

didn't want to quote again because quotes were getting to much......

you update and after i read it......

then i will go and sleep

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
didn't want to quote again because quotes were getting to much......

you update and after i read it......

then i will go and sleep

exactly yr

i have started but it wuld take time

if u wanna sleep go ahead

suba parhlena

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

exactly yr

i have started but it wuld take time

if u wanna sleep go ahead

suba parhlena

no ways.......

subah school hai......

kitni der lagegi.......

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#617

tht was shoking promo samrat slap gunjan manyak want trap gunjan

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

no ways.......

subah school hai......

kitni der lagegi.......

total 45 minute

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#619

part 14

recap

sanu fight

gunjan happy

episode begins

samrat and gunjan skiped lunch and dinner . all tried to convince them but all end in vain

both were unable to sleep and fighting with thoths

N:(thots)

mjhe shayad haq hi nhe ke kisi se dosti karne ka but kia samrat sach me mjhe itna bura samjhta hai kia me itni buri hu .......nhe samrat aisa nhe soch sakta ................but gunjan ne to yehi bola tha wo kyu jhuth bolegi ...............bus ab shayad mjhe yaha nhe rukna chaye .Its impossilble to live in thiz country any more . kal subah hi main bro se bt karke wapis chali jaoge ab yaha rehna mushkil hai ..... ab samrat kabhi meri waja se problem me nhe ayega

its tym to go nupur u have to go

( while wiping her tears)

meanwhile nupur turned and found mayank there having slight tear in his eyes as he heard her plan to go but he didn want her to go

m: ye tum kyu karhe ho tum kahe nhe jarhe ho rite plz yr dont go

n: nhe mayank ihave to go me buhat kharab hu tum bhi mjh se dosti tor do me buhat buri hu gunjan thik hi keh rhe thi

( let me tell you tht gunjan has came to nupur and said all fake thingsto nupur abt sanrat that he hates her )

then she telll him abt it

flashback

g: hey nupur tum ne khana nhe khaya ?

n: nhe bus moood nhe hai

g: dkho tum us ki waja se nhe kharhe ho aur wo kitna khushi se kharha tha

n: kia sach me

g: ha wo to keh rha te k acha ha tum se jan chuti

flashback end

m: kia but...............

n: choro mayank me jaaanti hu he dont lyk me he hates me

then she suddenly hugged mayank

m: (in mind) to ye sab gunjan ne kia but kyu lekin jo bhi ho mjhe ye larai khatam karwani hi hogi

jald se jald but kaise lekin one thing is for sure i cant lose her but kyu shaya i like her may be but she is my friend and i cant lose her a any cost

then they recovered from hug

m: dekho nupur plz mat jao sab thik hojaye ga

n: nhe mayank kch thik nhe hoga u knw jab me choi thi tab hi mere momdad mjhe chor k chale gaye the tab bro aur samrat ne hi mjhe sambhala tha ab samrat bhi mjh se nafrat kart hai is liye behtar yhi hai k me chali jao atleast dur rahogi to kisi k liye musibat to nhe bnugi na

m: nhe aisa nhe hai

n: bus mayank let me go plz but i will be ur frnd na

m: obviously but will misss you

m: me tooo

N:(in mind( kyu aj mjhe is se dooor jane ke naaam se taklif horhe hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, bus nupu tu kch mat soch u r goood for nthing

m: to kab jaaane ka plan hai

n: kal subah

M: wht itni jaldi phir tumhari internship ka kia hoga

n: me whe join karluge

m: ok but dont forget me

n: tumhe aur tumhari cute smile koi kaise bhul sakta hai

m:>.....................................( he has tear in his eyes floeing rapidly)