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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Wow wonderful part.
OMG nupur fainted- now i want to c mayanks reaction.
looking forward 4 ur next update.
plz update soon

thnx for lkin

i m updating nxt part now

hope u will lyk that too

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: Tasnim2623
nice..
liked it..

thnx dear for likin

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#293

part 7b

recap: nupur fainted and taken to icu and then to operation theatre

s: dr plz nupur ko dekhiye pta nhe use ka hogaya hai achanak se behosh hogaye ( while saying he had a tear in his eyes)

dr sid: ye to wahi patient ha na jin ka last month accident hua tha

s: i guess it right us ka accident to hua tha

dr sid: me ne in se kaha tha k rest kare zyada work na kare ab choriye me assess kar ke batata hu whts the problem

mean while samrat was in shock and tension

s: ye nupur ne pehle kyun nhe btaya k use aisa hua hai kyun is ne mujhe ye nhe btay k wo itni takleef me hai me bhi na idiot hu us ki baat maan leta hu kyun gaya raat ko use akela chor k mein bauhat bur dist hu ab to armaan bro and ridzi di bhi nhe hai me kia karu

(saying this he broke down)

mayank who was passing from there saw him and hurriedly aproaches him and in worried toe

m: kia hua tum is halat me

samrat quickly hugged him

s: wo.....nu..pu..r be..hos.h hog...ye hai

m: kia hua use ( in a concerned tone)

s: wo dr keh rhe thay k last month us ka jo accident hua tha na to wo abhi tk thik nhe hui

meanwhile doctor came out

d sid: jis baat ka darr tha wohi hua

s and m : kia hua dr

dr sid:us ke ankle mein sprain hua jis ki waja se she cant walk fo one week but serious thing is that her head injury had been deepened we have to operate her

m:(in mind) ye sab meri waja se hua hai kitna galat kiya na maine i am so bad i shuld get a punishment

s: ab kia hoga dr wo thik to hojayegi na

dr sid: abhi kuch bhi btana thik nhe hai operation ke baad hi actual position pata chale gi

s: oh god nupz ko kcu nhe hona chaye main use kuch nhe hoga wo mjhe chor k jaa sakti

meanwhile nikki come in

dr ni; sam kia hua nupur ko

s: dr wo nupz ko head injury.... di wo thik to hojayegi na

ni: kaise hua sab kuch

mayank explained her all the matter

nikita tried to console samrat but all ended in vain

ni: mayank plz samrat ko sambhalo main aur sid operation start karne jarhe hai

m: ok ma'm

mayank make samrat sit on chair and make him drink water

s: me bhi ktna bara idiot hona kyun maine use akele duty dene chor dia

m: kia matlab tumhara

s: yr nupur ne puri raat akel duty ki ( h narrate whole nite scene to him0

mayank was feeling shame on ownself becoz somehow he was the reason for her condition

mayank went to mandir near hospital and bent down and prayed for her health and also promised that he will never hurt her again

after 3 hours peration was over and it was succesful

gunjan cam to mayank who was still busy in prayer for nupur

g: mayank nupur thik hogye she is now fine

m: really thank god

he quickly hugged gunjan

g: really she is fine iam glad that she is now allright

m: chal us se milke ate hai

g: chalo

sene shift

in icu

nupur slightly pened her eyes

n:sa....mmm

s: nups to thik hai na thnk god tu thik hogaye me to darr hi gya tha k kahi tujhe khona dooo

n: sam me... thi..k ...hu

s: ainda me teri baaat nhe sunne wala samjhi hamesha tu aisa hi karti hai

n: sorrry( making puppy face)

s: chal ab itna innocent face bnane ki zarurat nhe hai

thn dr keerti enters

dr k: kaise ho

n: mam i m ok

dr k: me ne kuch zyad hi tuff punish kia na sorry mjhe samajhna chaye tha n angel

n: arey ap kyun sorry bol rhe hu ap ki koi galti nhe haiab to me thik hu

dr k: ha but u need rest ab tum chup chap yahi raho and one week tk no duty and u will have to take complete rest now sleep lyk a good girl

and samrat resume to your duty

n: ha sam duty pe ja

s: thik hai but apna khayal rakhna

n: ok

dr k: dr mayank ko bol dena k unhe yaha duty deni hai

nurse : ok ma'm

n:(in slow voice) oh no ab wo mera khayal rakhega kia hoga mera by god

kia hoga nupr ka

precap:

mayank apologized to nupur

they became friendz now thistym from heart

some cute eye locks and nok jhok

sajan tooo becum friendz

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friendz do read it and leave ur precious comment

i will try to update nxt part till thursady hope fully

and will update a promo y tommorow

and next part will be totally on mayur

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: pebolovesmayur
hey sehru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kya update tha yarr

dill mein garden garden ho gaya

nupur fainted - bechari

waiting to se mayanks reaction

sanu were cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im waiting for tomm

i want the update tomm

ok continue dear

u have to post it tomm na

start working on it

loved it veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much

keep updating

love pebo

thnx foe likin it

i have posted nxt part d oread it hope u will lyk

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#295

sehru im first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yay

just loved the update yaar

mayu was concerned and

mayur becomes frnds

we get cute scenes and nok jhoks now

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

oh im sooooooooooo happy sehru

that u update soon

thanks a lot

love u a lot

pebo

Edited by pebolovesmayur - 15 years ago

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: pebolovesmayur
sehru im first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yay

just loved the update yaar

mayu was concerned and

mayur becomes frnds

we get cute scenes and nok jhoks now

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

oh im sooooooooooo happy sehru

that u update soon

thanks a lot

love u a lot

pebo