MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 52

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ak12

dONT REM IF I'VE COMMENTED.
Neways,
Lovely update dear..
I am loving it...
Please do continue soon..
Akansha

Hey Akansha...
nope sweets...u didnt comment b4...bt thank u so much 4 ds one...😳
i luv it wen u ppl luv da update....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy kiran
Amazing update yaar
Finally mayu ne keh diya
Hope nupur maan gayi ho
Do Continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyyyy kiran
Amazing update yaar
Finally mayu ne keh diya
Hope nupur maan gayi ho
Do Continue soon
N thanx for pm

Hey Seema...🤗
thank u so much..
haan yar...finally he said it...
n 4 Nupur--wo toh maan hi jayegi...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello guys...😉
Hope all kool in ur lives....
thank you so so much for all the comments....love love reading them...🤗-----waise apni tareef kisse pasand nahi aayegi...😆
luv u all...
Part-13:
After a long while of sobbing silently in Mayank's arms, they finally parted to keep a little distance between them. Mayank wiped her tears and said slowly:"rula dia naa?"
Nupur smiled and nodded while wiping her own tears.
Mayank:"Sorry..umm...ghar drop kar doon?"
Nupur nodded again and the two headed towards home. A walk in the rain..hand in hand. Both had similar reasons of holding hands. Both couldn't believe that they actually had the love of their lives with them. Mayank didn't want to let go of her and so did she. But for Nupur...she was quite a little scared too. She didn't trust her life for all it had shown her. She held Mayank's hand a little tighter so that she would let go of him..she didn't want to lose him...she wanted to believe that for once life has been kind to her. The two were in their own thoughts..thoughts that occupied none other than each other....and walked silently...
1:00am....!!!
Late at hour of the night, when the door bell rang, Armaan was quite a little not expecting it. Dressed in black vest and trousers, he opened the door to find Ridhimma in front of him. Her hair wet...her eyes teary...her face tired...her expressions regretful...
Armaan had never seen Ridhimma this way before. He was surely concerned. He just called out her name:"Ridhimma??"
A word that put in all questions and worry he had in mind.
Ridhimma walked into the house without uttering a word. Armaan closed the door and followed her inside.
A:"Ridhimma?Tum ye?"
Ridhimma looked at him for a while and then hugged him...hugged him tight..broke down in his arms...that one place in the world that made her feel that everything was fine...
Armaan took a moment to understand that she had read the letter. He closed his eyes for a while to thank God for giving him his Ridhimma and then wrapped his arms around her tightly. His hand on his hair.
A:"Sssh...bas...!!sab theek hai..."
R:"Kuch theek nahi hai Armaan.."she said while crying:"Kuch bhi theek nahi hai.."
She seperated from him that moment...for she felt she wasn't worth him and not worth all his love.
R:"Main...main bohat buri hoon Armaan.."
Armaan knew this was so not true. He nodded his head in a no and tried to give her an explanation but she wasnot ready to listen..
R:"Main toh...main toh wo Ridhimma hoon hi nahi...main Armaan ki Ridhimma nahi hoon..."her sobs hindered her speech but she carried on:"Sab meri galati hai...aur tum?Koi itna acha kaise ho sakta hai Armaan?Kaise koi kisi se itna pyar kar sakta hai?Tum...tum mujhse nafrat kyun nahi karte Armaan..tumhari zindagi asaan ho jayegi...aur...aur mujhe meri saza mil jayegi...mujhe toh...mujhe toh mar jaana chahye..."
At this Armaan immediately placed his finger on her lips to make her silent while a tear in his eye..her words were too fearful for him to say anything.
She gently moved his hand and fell to the ground. She helplessly cried:"Main tumhare layak nahi hoon...nahi hoon main tumhare pyar k layak...just..."
Armaan sat down..opposite to her and gently cupped her face...wiped her tears and moved the hair on her face.
A:"Ridhimma!"when she didn't look up to him, he emphasised more:"Ridhimma...dekho meri taraf.."she looked at him with tears rolling down her cheeks...
Armaan continued:"Pehli baat meri Ridhimma buri nahi hai..."
Ridhimma looked down again...why on earth couldn't Armaan put all the blame on her?Armaan moved her face a little to make her face him again...he consoled her like she was a little girl:"Hey...hey Shona...koi galati nahi hai tumhari..ye toh sab haalaat ki galati hai...aur tumse kaise nafrat kar sakta hoon main..huh?bolo..tumhi toh meri zindagi ho toh kia zindagi se koi nafrat kar sakta hai?bolo..aur kia bol rahi thi tum...wo...main tumhare layak nahi hoon and all...tumse achi ladki toh koi mil hi nahi sakti mujhe...tum ho toh main hoon....aur please dobara kabhi apne marne ki baat mat karna..."He couldn't stop the tear that came into his eyes:"Mujhe aisa lagta hai k jaise...jaise meri saansein jaa rahi hain Ridhimma..."
R:"Armaan..tum...kyun nahi samjhte k..."
A:"Sssh...bas...kuch nahi...ek baar tumhein kho chuka hoon Ridhimma..."his voice lowered as he thought of it:"Ab agar tum mujhse door gayi naa...toh...toh main toh....main nahi seh paonga Ridhimma..."
Ridhimma looked at him as he wiped the tears in her eyes and no more tears came in her eyes then. He moved nearer and nearer to her and Ridhimma felt her heart skip a beat. His lips touched her cheeks gently and a gentle kiss that was readily accepted by Ridhimma and which made her face glow....it assured her that Armaan was back to her...her Armaan was back to her life...forever. Armaan moved a little away and stared at her lovingly while she was too shy to look up. She managed to look up to him for a moment and then hugged him suddenly to escape his looks. Armaan smiled at his shy sweetheart and hugged her smiling for what gift he had got. And Ridz---she smiled sweetly...her eyes closed...the smile that had come to her after a long long gap of 5 years...
Armaan whispered:"Love you Ridhimma.."
Part ends...
Ok...I accept it that this is really short...but I promise to give you all a long update next time...sorry friends...really need some sleep now..very tired🥱😳...love you all...and please please do comment and make use of the "LIKE" button..
Kiran😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow..loved the after confession walk by MN...:)
Loved the way u described how N held his hand tighter for she had had an unpredictable life..
Continue writing beautifully Kiran 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks 4 the awesome update
loved it
love mayur/AR chemistry
con soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part di
loved AR =D
<3
cont soon
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part soo cuteeeeeeeeeee update soon n a longer prt n plzzz pm me on ur nxt update n if possible update regularly 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey kiran

beautifully written!!

just amzing i loved the MN scene

awwwww how cute she was holding his hand tighter because she didn't where her relations wud go next....that was extra sweeettttttt😳 love it cont soon and i liked kash bit also!😃

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
MN confession walk was so cute............

amazing stuff, do write more

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