Mayur Married -- My Style Os 4 pg 37

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Sunly
HI.......NIDZY. IT WAS VERY NICE YAR👍🏼. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONT.................😊 AILNA HERE😛

Hey Alina

Thanks sweety

im glad you like it

will cont soon

luv
Nidzy

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

OMG... NIDZY.... it was a bombshell update.... Totally loved it.. woh roothna aur woh manana.... WOW.... can't ever imagine anyone else doing these scenes apart from Mayur..... And then their hands and gestures... classroom romance...ab yeh Mayu kabse sudhar gaya..... I totally loved the part where he traces I LOVE YOU on Nupz palms... and then our Kabab mein Haddi Shukla Sir.... unka aana kya zaroori tha? And then Shriman and Shrimati Sharma.... **class mein dhyaan dijiye, log dekh rahe hain**..... Totally loved it.. ek baat bata... itni achchi tarah se kaise likh paati hai.....😲. Beautifully written swthrt....🤗

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: nikki028
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nidzyyyyyyyy..............this scene ws uff....😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍...........esp tht class room moments.....tht ws i lovd d mosssssssssssst...........kahan se milte ho yaar aise ideas????uff.......*hats off to u*.......srsly u shud hv been there in MJHT writin dept.......😳

plzzzzzzzz post ur next update soon

Hi Nikki Di

Thanks for commenting

Im glad you liked my work

im overwhelmed now MJHT writing dept

he he he chahu tou bhi possible nahi hai

I'll continue soon

Love you
muahhhhhhh
Nidzy

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

hey nidzy awesome man👏

kya yaar this many claps are also not enough

simply awesomee

specially writing i love u opn the palm

pls do write more

thanxfor the pm

love pebo

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Aparajita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Hi Nidzy :) Just read both ur OS for the married Mayur...and wat do i say??? 😍 They were just tooooo gud!!! I wish something like this happens tooo... I loved dat Aata goondne wala scene in the first OS...reminded me of the clay scene...😳 And OMG!!! da scene in the classroom in the 2nd OS where he's writing on her palm wid his finger and both lost in each other...hayye!!😍 And den Shukla sir's "Shriman and Shrimati Sharma" 😆 Loved both of them....Keep up da gud work!! Hoping to read more n more such awesome OS....:) Luv Aparajita

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

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awesome nidzy

simply good

specially writing on the palm

love pebo

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Anamika.5

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

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Heyyyy, Nidzy, Very good. I hope episode me ese hi small tiff ho, serious fight na ho. Your update is superb.

He, eh Shukala sir ko hamesha ese hi chhatra milte he. 😊 😊 😊

Edited by mayurlovers - 15 years ago