Love Has No Reason-MayUr Part 12 pg36 Note pg 37 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

awesome part.

bas Mayur ko separate na karna.
loved it.


Originally posted by: crazymayurian

amazing

now am surprised to see shobha and sameer




Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

lovely upate.

they love each other so much ...bt they cant acted so selfish ...n returned to their duties.
bdw, i was shocked to see shobha n sameer.
waiting for next update.
continue soon.
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Originally posted by: prachimishra85

Wow Sam looks sooo hot

The update was really very good
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Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Felt so bed for my Mayur 😭

beautiful update n well written dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 11

Shobha came to mayank

Shobha:I Never Thought I'll Be Able To See You Again

Mayank heard the door open behind me. He felt paralyze. Unable to move, he just stood there with the picture frame still in his hand.

Shobha:" Hey! You're awake! Do you know how worried I was? Why are you so careless huh? Why do you alw-- "

She stop talking when she realize he was holding onto a picture frame, staring at it intensively.

Shobha: whose pic is this

She asked still in shock and with a hint of sadness.He blinked a couple of times before answering her.

Mayank: she's my love

Shobha suddenly turn pale , He joke. Seeing the trouble look on her face, he suddenly turned serious.

Mayank:" Yah.. Are you ok? You look kind of pale.."
He walked over to her and show her the picture and continue, " She was my first love, my best friend, and also my family. We met each other in--"

Shobha interrupted: I trust u
She looked up at him and saw his shock and confuse expression. He opened his mouth, trying to find words to say but couldn't.

He didn't say anything for the first couple of minutes.
Mayank: Its too late, go to sleep
Mayank leaves n shobha was still standing seeing the picture frame , it was nupur n mayank in the frame, she trust him but still she felt bad.

Mayank goes to nupur

Nupur was standing near window nh thinking about old times...

Flashback

"Hey Nupur"
"hmm what Mayank?"
"I love you"
"haha Mayu I know! You've told me countless times already..."
"hey... nupur, don't forget me okay?..."
"what? How can I when I see your handsome face everyday hmm?"

Flashback over...

"why did you leave?" a voice came from behind
"didn't you say you love me?": nupur
"Yunho... You lied": mayank
"liar! I hate you so much why?": nupur
"... Why did you do this to me?...AHHH COME BACK!!!":

mayank""
"Yunho, you left me here alone to face this world":nupur
"but I didn't forget you.":mayank
"You, forgot Me.": nupur

thy look at each other for a while

Mayank: m sorry for all this
nupur(with a smile): u better be
mayank came to her n hold her hands : we'll be together again
nupur nods her head with a smile

Shobha was seeing all this n she quietly leave from there with a heavy heart, for all this time she was with mayank she knows , he dnt love her but still she's not aware with the truth.She felt asleep thinking abt mayank n nupur.

Next Morning

Shobha brings tea for mayank
Shobha: Gud morning
Mayank gives her a smile
Shobha: i hv planned a party tonite
Mayank looks at her : party
Suddenly there eye fell on nupur she was playing with varun ,

both are giggling loudly , a smile came on both faces, shobha is happy for varun n mayank for both
Nupur: gud morning both of u
Shobha takes varun : hope he dnt get u trouble
nupur kisses on his cheek : no ways
Nupur : so wat abt the party
Mayank: wat party are u both talking
Nupur: awww mayu u forget aaj varun ka 1st b'day hai
Mayank felt so bad n shobha was seeing the comfort b/w mayank

n nupur
Nupur: shobha u dnt wrry , m here , i'll organize a huge

party
n she leaves
mayank looks at shobha: m so srry shobha
shobha: its ok n she too leaves
Mayank: (to himself) tu abhi se baatein bhulne laga hai bhudape me kya hoga tera n he sits n drank his tea.

Nupur n shobha prepares for the party

Shobha was standing quietly in the pary n a voice came from behind

"Shobha, I advise you to not attend the party while looking like that," sameer said as he came forward " hiii"
Shobha looked at him strangely : hiii doc
Sameer " y r u standing like this , can we have a dance"
Sameer was trying to divert her mind from mayank n nupur, to let them spend sum gud time, he holds her hand n force her to dance
"Let me go!" shobha shouted as she struggled to get away from sameer.

As she moves away from him , he holds her hand tightly n strech her towards himself ...
he came close to her " u looking beautiful shobha"

shobha was shocked to see his behaviour towards her as she think herself to be a married women n its against ethics

Shobha: hv u gone mad , dnt u noe m mayank's wife
Sameer : I dnt care (n he gave a weird smile)... are m kidding y r u getting so serious n he start laughing at her pale face n leave from there...

Shobha was still there standing n feeling sumthing abt it , her heart suddenly start beating fast...

On the other side mayank n nupur are back to thr self fighting with each other on small things...

Mayank: nupur u r not going to drink liquor , she was standing near bar n mayu thought she was abt to drink but she was only giving instructions to bar tender...

Nupur looks at him strangely : y mayank , r u going to stop me
Mayank: yes nupur
Nupur: ha ha ha , i was not abt to drink but now i m gng to drink n she takes the glass
mayank grab her hand : stop it nupur
Nupur: leave my hand mayank

Sameer: stop it both of u , how can u both behave so childish in such a serious situation , do u know wat happen to shobha

Mayank got worried : wat happen

Sameer : she was not dancing with me

Nupur hits her on his hand : u scared me sameer

Sameer : nothing can be better than this nupur n he laughed , ok where's the b'day boy , can we have the cake plz...

Celebrations begins, cake cutting , etc.

Precap: Sameer suggests a psychiatrist for shobha.


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey u write also...
i nvr knew dat...
thanks for d pm...
m sure m gonna love dis...
love ya...🤗

off to read it...😉
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
God i am so late, have to read it from the start.
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part
loved it so much

--Ruchi-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
things are going to be fine...
cont soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesom update
beautifully written
please do continue and Thanksss for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice concept... looked forward too thnx for PM !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part
Feeling bad For mayur as well as shoba
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt
waiting for the next updt...
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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