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Doyel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#411

wonderful!!!!!!! sorry for the late reply!!!
but this is tooo good!!!! 😳

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Lipsa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#412

Aww!! terrfic Update hun!! i love how you started off with rishte naate and Was this the starting of Mayanks realization? 😳

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#413

hey lina,. i loveddddddd the update.

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#414

hey lina..nice part..

mayank was just driving without know where he's going?..lol..n Nupur did'nt mind..but when she saw a pani-puri stall she asked him to stop..n he had to go with her..

she was really impatient..n mayank told her to chill..but she started comparing him to gunjan n just went on talking..he kept staring at her..good choice of song..

she asked him where he's lost..but he was still just staring at her..lol hw cute..

update soon

-aish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#415

hey CB

i read both the parts

and they are both just amzing

and awwwwwwww he was starring at her soo cute'

and song is soo lovely

and mayur are just soooooo cute here!😳

con't soon

-sanam-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: Shafoo
its nice

thankz alot🤗

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever
res
EDIT
Lina

😭😭😭

phir se?

you know what?

I litterally went running

running to get here

but my internet

was acting stupid

and kept on crashing

and it was my bad luck

that to the extend

I was second

kitni boori baat hai

but I loved the part

who said it was bad?

sach mein

also sorry

for editing this

at such a late time

I had this on

for a long time

but didn't get time

to edit it

anyways (need to stop saying that 😆)

continue soon! (that too😆)

Awwwwww dunn worry Sis

u will deffi be first next time na😉

n thank you sooo mcuh

luvv ya

m glad u liek it

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: -Pooji-
Hey
Great Nice
Awesome

hey thankzz alot

M glad u liked it

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: maria_awan
nice part dear

thankzz a lot na

Maria di

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: bhavana92
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*edit*
that was cute Linu!& guess what, that song 'rishte naate' is one of y favs too....& don't worry ur picturisation was gr8 yaar! 🤗

Awwwwwww u are sooo nice Bhaviii

luvv u loadzz

n thankzz a lot

really meant a lot to me🤗

-Lina-