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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 19- PAGE 127
PART 20 (LAST PART)

15 years passed by. Everyone had shifted back to Mumbai from New Zealand about 14 years back. Mayank and Nupur also had a song whom they called Armaan. Toady their 22 year old daughter, their Angel was getting married to Nishant, Adhiraj and Suhaani's son.

Mayank and Nupur are sleeping peacefully in their room. Mayank's arms are around Nupur's waist. Suddenly the alarm sings and Nupur tries to get up but Mayank does let her get up.

NUPUR:- Mayank chodo na''.

MAYANK:-Nahi'..

NUPUR:- Maayank bahut kaam hai aur waise bhi aaj Angel ki bidai' (Nupur had tears in her eyes)

MAYANK:-Nupur'.. (wiping her tears) main hoon na''. aur Angel hamare dil se toh nahi jaa rahi hai na'..

ANGEL:- Absolutely right muma'.. (coming in the room)

On hearing Angel's voice both Mayank and Nupur get up from the bed.

Sorry main bina knock kare aa gayi'..

MAYANK:-Tumhare haq hai'..

Angel comes and sits next to Nupur on the bed.

ANGEL:- Muma'. I love you a lot'.. main hamesha aapke paas aapke dil mein rahugi na'.. mere paas ek aur solution hai'.. main shaddi nahi karti aur hamesha aapke paas hgi rahti hoon'

NUPUR:- Nahi'. Tu Nishant se bahut pyaar karti hai na''.

ANGEL:- Par aap se zyada toh nahi''

NUPUR:- Angel bacchop jaisi baate maat kar'. Aaj teri shaddi hai na'.. tu hamesha se issi din ka sapna dekh rahi thi'.. aab pura ho raha hai toh aisi baate kar rahi hai'..

ANGEL:- Muma'.. i'll miss you a lot''. Aapna khayal rakhna'.. aapko pata hai na ki mujhe aap ki kitni chinta rahti hai'' wo 6 saal jo papa nahi thae tab main hi thi na aapke saath''.

ARMAAN:- 6 saal??? (coming in the room)

MAYANK:-Armaan beta tum yaha'..

ARMAAN:- Haan wo mera aaj basketball ka final match hai na'' muma ne kaha tha ki wo mere saath jayegi'.. yeh kaunse 6 saal ke baat ho rahi hai'.

ANGEL:- Wo abhi papa 6 minute ke liye bathroom gaye thae fresh hone ke liye aur muma ke liye wo 6 minute toh'..

ARMAAN:- 6 saal ke barabar hai'.

NUPUR:- Armaan match ke liye chale'..

ARMAAN:- Yes mom'. Lets go

Nupur and Armaan leave the house.

ANGEL:- Papa'.. i'll miss you also

MAYANK:-I know beta'. Aur tum apni mom ki worry mat karma main hoon na

ANGEL:- Jaanti hoon'.. (in tears)

MAYANK:-(wiping away her tears) don't cry sweetheart''. We have to be strong for Nupur atleast'..

ANGEL:- (stops crying) yes for mom I won't cry'.. dad lets finish of the preparations''

Angel and Mayank start the preparations. Gunjan, Samrat, Benji, Dia, Uday, C.J, Shilpa aunty, Arjun, Rati, Mohit and Sanaya also join them.
After some time Nupur and Armaan come back home. Armaan has a trophy in his hand.

ANGEL:- Tum jeet gaye kya??

ARMAAN:- Trophy dekhkar pata nahi chal raha hai kya??

ANGEL:- Zaroori toh nahi hai na'.. trophy tum winner se borrow bhi toh kar sakte ho

ARMAAN:- Di'' aapko ko mujh par bharosa hi nhai hai'. (upset)

ANGEL:- Bahut bharosa hai tumpar' main toh bas akhari baar tumhe pareshaan rahi thi

ARMAAN:- Akhari baar kyun'.. main toh tumhe rozz phone karuga'.. tumhe pareshaan karuga' aur pareshaan karma ka mokka bhi dunga (in tears) i'll miss you

ANGEL:- (wiping away his tears) abhi yeh haal hai tera toh bidaai par kya karega'.. (in tears) i'll miss you too

Angel and Armaan hug one another.

SAMRAT:- Tum log thode aasu baad ke liye bhi baccha lo yaar''.. (trying to lighten up the mood)

ANGEL:- Ok massu'.. bakki assu baad ke liye'' (wiping off her tears)

SAMRAT:- Haan'. Warna ghar mein flood aaa jayega

ARMAAN:- Massu hum itna thoda nahi ro rahe thae (wiping off his tears)

SAMRAT:- Tum dono roge toh kay hum sab hassege'.. hum sab bhi roege na'.. phir toh flood aa hi jayega na

GUNJAN:- Samrat'. Baate karma koi tum se sikhe filhal kaam karte hai'

SAMRAT:- As you say chashmish

Everybody gets back to work. The marriage takes place. Everyone cries a lot. After the bidai Mayank and Nupur are sitting in their room talking to each other.

NUPUR:- Mayank'.. yeh saal kitne jaldi nikal gaye na''

MAYANK:-Haan pata bhi nahi chala'.

NUPUR:- Angel itni badi ho gayi'. Uski shaddi bhi ho gayi'. (in tears)

MAYANK:-(kissing her tears) Nupur' main samajh sakta hoon ki tum kaisa feel kar rahi ho abhi' tum Angel ke birth se uske first word bolne se uske chalne se uske shaddi tak'

NUPUR:- Mayank tum ne meri wajah se Angel ki life ke 6 saal miss kar diye'. I'm sorr''

MAYANK:-(keeping his hand on her lips) Nupur tumhare roses ne yeh baat keh di thi 15 saal phele' aur aab bhi keh dete hai'. (pointing to the seven roses in the vase kept on the dressing table)'. Yeh phool 15 saaloon mein bhi wais eke waise hai'. Murjhae nahi hai'. Esliye tumhe guilty feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai'.. aab thank you mat kahna'.

NUPUR:- I love you toh keh sakti hoon na'' ya phir wo bhi roses par chod du'.

MAYANK:-Haan wo tum keh sakti ho'..

NUPUR:- I love you Mayank

MAYANK:-I love you too Nupur

MAYANK:-Nupur main yeh soch raha tha ki aaj angel ki first official night hai toh kyun na hum bhi phirse aapni first official night'''

NUPUR:- Mayank' (blushing)

MAYANK:-Wah mrs sharma aap ka yeh haal hai toh Angel ka kya ho raha hoga'. Waise tum jab blush karti ho toh bahut acchi lagti ho'.

NUPUR:- Off ho Mayank'. Tum bhi na'.. aab so jao

MAYANK:-Nahi'' mujhe nind nahi aaa rahi hai

NUPUR:- Par'.

Nupur is stopped as she feels Mayank's lips on her lips. Mayank was kissing her passionately and she responds back within a second. They break off the kiss to take a breath.
MAYANK:-Nupur'..

NUPUR:- Haan Mayank

MAYANK:-Main soch raha tha ki kaal hum dono kahi ghumne chalte hai'. Sirf main aur tum

NUPUR:- Kaha??

MAYANK:-Surprise hai

NUPUR:- Thik hai jaan (kissing Mayank's cheeks)

Mayank and Nupur then sleep in each others arms thinking about the beautiful moments that they have shared in life.
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The next evening Mayank takes Nupur to a beautiful garden which is full of flowers and fountain.
MAYANK:-Nupur kaisa laga yeh garden'..

NUPUR:- Accha hai'..

MAYANK:-Sirf accha hai'..

NUPUR:- Haan'.. (with a smile playing on her lips)

Mayank is upset and goes and sits on a bench will Nupur starts playing with the fountain water. She sees that Mayank is upset and comes up with a plan.

Nupur goes and sits next to Mayank.

NUPUR:-
Aai Meri Subah Haste Hasate
Boli Aankhen Tere liye Sandesha hai
Haan hai
Jaagi aankhon ko bhi sapna milega
Koi khushi aane ka bhi andesha hai
Haan hai

Mayank side hugs Nupur.
MAYANK:-
Aan haaan
Gulabi si subah
Aan Haan
Sharabi si hawaa

Mayank stands and pulls Nupur into a dance with him.

MAYANK:-
Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Mayank twirls Nupur.
Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye


Mayank and Nupur go to have dinner in a lake side restaurant.
NUPUR:-
Raahein waahein bole baatein rumani
Aao Baitho suno baatein kahani hai
Haan hain
Tazzi tazzi lage humko rozana
Teri meri baatein yun to purani hai
Haan hai

Mayank and Nupur start walking home.
MAYANK:-
Aan haaan
Khayalon se paale
Aan haaan
Yeh zindagi chale

It suddenly starts raining. Mayank and Nupur start playing in the rain.


MAYANK:-
Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye
Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si

Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

NUPUR:-
Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi
Mein pyasi thi nirashi
Tu pani ki surahi
Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

MAYANK:-
Tujhe dekha to khila hoon
Teri chahat mein dhula hoon
Mile Mandir Mein khuda jo
Mein to tujh mein yun mila hoon
NUPUR:-
Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi
Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi
MAYANK:-
Aan haaan
Dhundhe na abb koi
Aan haaan
Mein khoya Tu Khoyi
Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye
Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye
THE END
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yipeeee... i am the first one to comment on the last part...

i didn't know this ff was ending mahima..

and i am a bit sad that this ended..

but most of all i am happy.... very happy to have got a chance to read this fantastic FF..

i enjoyed each part of this ff and it goes without saying that the last part was fantastic..

Loved armaan and angel.... They were cute..

Mayur were as always awesome..

I am going to miss this FF..

Keep writing hun!!!

Loads of love,
akansha
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mahi yeh tune kya kiya yar... 😲
Ek baad dusra bhi end kardiya.. 😭 😭 😭

Par ending ekdum perfect thi... 👏

Woo angel ki shadi nishant k saath...

Guest ki list to khub hai...

Mayur n angel talk vz cute...

Arman n angel scene vz nyc.

Samrat lightning d atmosphere vz g8.

Wow mayur itne saalaun baad bhi itne romantic hai. 😳

Song selection vz rocking..

Abhi tumhe naya ff likhne ka utna force nai karungi wapis aane k baad i hope we wil get new ff.

I wil miss u n ua ff's alot.. 😭 😭 😭

Luv
*kulsum*
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mahi is it true tumane ye ff end kar diya hai
i am shocked kaise kar diya?
tumane ek ff khatam kiya to humane kuch nahi kaha aur ab isko bhi
kyon i am very sad now
Coming to FF : Mayur are still so romantic loved it
Arman angel's bro and loved their bond
Mayank and Angel talk was too good
Mayur going out and the selection was amazing
but i am still dukhi
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Posted: 15 years ago

wow this was ausam

i thought it should be more longer
but it was nice with the happy ending
kyunki real serials main toh aisa kota he nahi hai
but it was fantabulous
and also enjoy your vacation
aud i miss u
main raat main mjht ke complain kiss ke saat karungi
aur baate bhi kis ke saat karungi
and when i need any help
main kiss se kahungi
so pls jaldi se aana
phir main mjht ke khub saari complain karungi
bye take care
Edited by SHINKI - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful update 🤣
wonderful ending n nice song
but little bit sad coz i didn't want u 2 end
anyways have nice holiday dear 😃
n wen ur back start new ff of mayur ofcourse
thanks hun 4 pme
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesoooooooome......
superb........
fantabulous.........
excellent.......
wonderful.........
just too good.....
thanx for the pm.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
awesome part
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh this one ended !! :O
nice update ..loved the way their story went ~~!! :)
keeo writing!!:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowowo really nice part and thx alot for the pm

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