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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yash.dilse

Hiiiii,
Lovely update yaar...........I love d way u write using pics n allll.................gr8 going
Bt I am a bit confused...............kaun kiske bache hai............itne saare bache hai ki main confused hoon..............Angel is Nupss daughter dats clear bt evry1 else .........is sooo confusing

ANYWAYZZZ..................AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!



angel is nupur and mayank's daughter

sanaya and mohit are sajan's kids

rati is dia and benji's daughter

arjun is uday's and c.j's son
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 10- PAGE 55

PART 11

MONDAY

MAYANK:- (on phone) ok sir

He then goes to the kitchen where nupur and the kids are having breakfast.

ANGEL:- Good morning, uncle
KIDS:- Good morning
MAYANK:- Good morning
ANGEL:- Aap itne subah ready ho gaye??..
MAYANK:- Main hamesha jaldi utta hoon?.. college ke dino se???.
ANGEL:- Really??
MAYANK:- Really?. Waise bhi mujhe office jana hai? aur first day par
ANGEL:- Kabhi late nahi hona chahiye
NUPUR:- Sir, aapko toh office ka rasta pata nahi hai?
MAYANK:- Actually ranveer ne kahan ki tumhare saath office aaa jau?.



NUPUR:- Ok

Everybody finishes their breakfast.

They go outside the house. Nupur sits on the driving seat And mayank sits next to her. Sanaya, mohit, arjun and rati sit on the back seat.

ANGEL:- Muma??.. main hamesha aap ke saath bathti hoon??
NUPUR:- Aaj picche baath jao na??? plzzzzzzzz
MAYANK:- Angel, tum meri lap mein baath jao
ANGEL:- Ok?
NUPUR:- Par??..
MAYANK:- Nupur, angel meri friend hai?.. kya mujhe itna bhi hakh nahi hai uske upar?
NUPUR:- Thik hai
ANGEL:- Thx muma

So angel sits on mayank's lap. All the kids, nupur and mayank talk on the way. They reach sunshine school. Nupur kisses all the kids and they go inside the school.

Nupur and mayank proceed to office. On the way the c.d starts playing the song 'tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam' from the movie ddlj. Both nupur and mayank try to increase the volume at the same time and their hands brush against each others.



MAYANK:- Sorry??. Woh
NUPUR:- Its ok, sir??..

The remaining journey and day goes uneventful. As usual nupur leaves office around 1 to pick the kids up and then goes home. She spends the whole day with angel. Late at night she works in her room. Mayank dosen't get time to talk to her.

TUESDAY

Mayank and nupur go to the office as the same way as the previous day. Mayank gets some free time in the office and decides to go and talk to nupur. He enters the cabin and bumbs into her as she was going out. Both fall on the carpet and both get lost in each others eyes.



NUPUR:- Mayank??.
MAYANK:- Bolo nupur?..
NUPUR:- Woh mujhe baccho ko pick karne janna hai??

Mayank comes back to reality and gets up. He then helps nupur.

MAYANK:- Nupur who mujhe kucch baat?..
NUPUR:- Sir, I need to leave

Before mayank could say anything nupur leaves.
They remaining day passes as usual.

WEDNESDAY

Mayank and nupur again go to the office together.
Mayank around 12 goes to the lift and nupur was already there.

MAYANK:- (entering it and when the door of life closes) nupur, main tumse kucch baat??.

Suddenly the life stops and the light goes off. Nupur hugs mayank out of impulse. Mayank hugs nupur back.



Nupur realizes wat she is doing and backs off.

NUPUR:- Sorry?. Mujhe
MAYANK:- (cutting her) tumhe kucch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai??.. mujhe pata hai ki tumhe andhare se daar lagta hai??.
NUPUR:- Tumhe yaad hai?
MAYANK:- Tumse juddi har baat yaad hai?.
NUPUR:- Aab hum kya kare?. Tumhare paas phone hai?.. mera phone cabin mein hai?
MAYANK:- Mera phone bhi cabin mein hai??.. humme alaram ring kar??.
NUPUR:- You are right (rings the alaram)?? pata nahi kitna time lagega??.
MAYANK:- (to himself) kitna accha mokka mila hai nupur se baat karne ka??
NUPUR:- Kucch kaha
MAYANK:- Nahi?.. tumne kucch suna
NUPUR:- By god mayank?.. tum badloge nahi??.
MAYANK:- Tumhi yehi mayank pasand hai na, isliye nahi badal sakta??.. nupur, main tumse yeh kehna??.

But before he could say anything they were rescued from the lift.

MAYANK:- Nupur??
NUPUR:- Sir, i'll talk to you later??.. I have to submit some files.

She leaves and as usual the reamaining day passes uneventfully.

THURSDAY

Nupur enters mayank's cabin to give a file and bumbs into him. Mayank holds her by waist with his both arms. Her duppatta gets stuck in the door. They both are lost in each others eyes.



NUPUR:- (coming back to her senses) ankhen hai ya button dekh kar nahi chal sakte
MAYANK:- Woh main actually tumhare paas aa raha tha??
NUPUR:- Kyun?
MAYANK:- Kucch baat karni thi.
NUPUR:- (giving him a file) your file?..
MAYANK:- Thx par main?.
NUPUR:- (cutting him) I need the accounts file?..
MAYANK:- I'll just get it.

He goes and gets her file.

MAYANK:- Yeh lo (giving her the file)
NUPUR:- Thank you
MAYANK:- Main woh
NUPUR:- Oh no (looking at the time)
MAYANK:- Kya hua??
NUPUR:- I am getting late.

She rushes out of his cabin. Again mayank was unsuccesful in talking to her.

FRIDAY

Mayank, nupur and ranveer are working in nupur's cabin.

RANVEER:- Ok guys!! Got to go?? you carry on?? the project submission is next Saturday?.
NUPUR:- Sure, sir

Ranveer leaves.

Mayank walks towards nupur to talk to her but crashes with the cupboard and falls down. He gets badly hurt.

NUPUR:- Mayank (rushing to him)
NUPUR:- Tum thik ho na??..



MAYANK:- Haan?..
NUPUR:- Kya haan?. Dekho kitna khoon nikal raha hai (in tears)
MAYANK:- Nupur main?
NUPUR:- Chup chap bathon?? main first aid box lati hoon??.

She gives him first aid. Mayank starts smiling.

Tum smile kyun kar rahe hoon?.
MAYANK:- Main god ko thank you keh raha hoon
NUPUR:- Kyun??
MAYANK:- Mujhe choot jo laagi??.
NUPUR:- Kya??
MAYANK:- Mujhe yeh pata chal gaya ki tum mujhse abhi bhi pyaar karti ho???
NUPUR:- Aisa kucch nahi hai??.



MAYANK:- Par??.
NUPUR:- Mujhe kucch kaam yaad aa gaya??.. mujhe jana hai??.

Nupur leaves from there.

MAYANK:- Nupur, tumhe toh main apni zindagi main wapas lakkar hi manuga.
PART 12:- PAGE 71
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mayur part...just i have missed many parts..just read it in one go...mmmh where to search for words...yet i felt bad for not commenting nor reading these dazz sorry for that...u no nah hw lazy i am??well u just keep on pm me me lazy fellow will defintely catch all ur parts and pm u....as mayurian am enjoying ur ff...do write more on mayur...i luv to read...

keep rocking mahi chweety...
loads of love
jeni
sorry for late comment...
i missed out am the 1st one to comment hey give me a treat buddy
Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lods of MAYUR pal
Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 15 years ago

OMG lots of MayUr its was Magical yaar...............loved it to the core😳😳😳

Do Con Sooon with the same lots of MayUr
Edited by ArTiToTheEnd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyy mahima
really nice update
ohh mayu didnt got opportunity to talk to nupur
he will get one soon i guess
plzzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Mahima!!!
awesummmmm upd8 dear!!!
but wotzzz dis???
mayank ko to time hi nai mil raha hai nupur se baat karne ka...
it's been 1 full weekkkk!!!!!!
well....next's sat...then sunday....
kuch to batao!!!
nupur ne kyo kaha ki wo mayank se pyar nai karti???
wot had happened b/w them???
pls pls pls do cont soooonnnnnn
thanx 4 d pm... :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for a lot of mayur scenes dear,... nice update..
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Posted: 15 years ago
luvd d update dear...😃
frm d whole week mayu tries 2 convey his feelings... bechaara😒....
hope he talks 2 nupur in next update...😉
waiting 4 d next update👍🏼...
luv u lots....🤗
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow mahima,
awesome update.
the picture and the dialogue everything match perfectly.
loved it.
keep updating

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