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Posted: 15 years ago
Rahul's Dad: Kaha na kuch nahi badla...(he looks up at his wife sternly and she knows better than to argue with her husband)

Rahul's Mom: Jee theek hain...

...
Rahul and Nikki came back home laughing again. Muskaan's mom smiled at them n went upto them.
" itna hasna kis baat ke liye?" she teased them.
Both of them looked at each other grinning.
" maa..nikki bata rahi thi ki agar..meri ...aur..nikki ka kabhi shaadi hua toh.." he said between laughs.
" to phir kitna paagal aur weird hoga.." Nikki completed.
His mom's face fell upon hearing that, but she tried to look normal in front of them.
" i'll change n come.." Nikki said heading to her room.
" wait nikki am coming!" she said.
He too went behind her, and they both closed the room's door.
...
" tum change karke aao..i'll wait for u here..n also talk through the door.." he said happily.
" okay..par mujhe time lagega..i'll have to take a bath too.." she said. She picked up her towel and went inside the bathroom.
Rahul sat on the bed joblessly, which was right next to her bathroom. He could hear the water running inside.
" nikki to batao vahan tumhara koi BF tha?" he asked.
Nikki bit her lip, she did'nt know wether to tell him. Abhi was supposed to come with her dad, n it was supposed to be a surprise. So she decided to lie to him for now.
" nahi rahul..tumhare hote huye mera aur koi BF kyon hoga.." she said in a romantic tone.
" accha..main kabse tumhara BF ban gaya?" he asked intersted.
" bane nhi ho..aur kabhi ban bhi nahi sakte..i dont go out with losers.." she teased.
" yeah right!..remember you had gone out with that karan?!..nerdy glasses n braces..!" he chuckled remembering him.
" oh shut up!..u gave me that challenge..so i had to do it!" she said angrily.
" okay whatever...aur batao vahan sab kaisa hai!" he asked merrily.
" well vahan sab bahut acche hai..tumhari yaad to bilkul nahi aati.." she joked.
" accha?..mujhe to tumhari yaad aati rehti hai.." he said genuinely.
" aww!..obviously tumhari yaad aayi " she said.
Then the noise of the water was too loud, so he could'nt hear anything more. So he waited for it to quieten down.
..
okay i know that was short! Sorry..i was in a rush..
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nikki opened the door and put only her face out. She saw him right in front of her, so she asked him to pass the clothes.
He saw her, and was surprised. He took the clothes and went near her, but did'nt hand them to her.
" do na!" she insisted.
" nikki u actually look beautiful" he complimented.
" thanks..par ab to kapde de do.." she begged.
" nahi!..tum bahar aake le jao.." he teased.
" rahul!" she said irritated.
" nikki" he said imitating her.
" tumhe pata hai na maine kuch nahi pehna .." she said embarassed.
" thats why i'm asking you to come out!" he winked.
She was left with her mouth hanging open. She gave him a killer look and closed the door.
After 2 minutes, she came out with the red towel wrapped around her. He smirked looking at her.
" i hate you" she said.
" i love you!" he teased.
They both chuckled and she extended her hand asking him to give the clothes. He shook his head in a 'no'.
..
Muskaan was outside the Garewal house, she rang the bell now. Rahul's mom opened the door and looked at her trying to recognize her.
"ji aap kaun?" she asked.
" main rahul ki employee.." Muskaan said scared.
" ohh..kya kaam tha?" she asked rudely.
" voh unhe kuch dena tha.." she said not wanting to let her know what it really is.
" teek hai..voh nikki ke kamre main hai..go give it to him.." she said allowing her in.
Muskaan wondered what he was doing there, and ran to find him. She knocked on the door but got no reply.
...
" Rahul please do na.." she pleaded.
" nahi!..nahi..nahi!" he said .
She ran after her, and finally fell on him, but her towel started draping out. She got conscious, but she did'nt want him to see so she left it, and asked him to pass her clothes.
Suddenly the door opened, and Muskaan walked in and after the sight she saw she was shocked.
....
okay this was just an add-on to the last part..
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
I can just imagine Muskaan now:
Oye khotte de puttar!!!! Nalayak, kaminey, mujh par cheating kar raha hain???? Kutte Haramzaade ,Sewer ki aulad!!!! Tujhe to me dikhadungi!!!!!!!!! 😆

That wuz great!
and wait- if theyre planning RN's wedding- to bechare Abhi ka kya hoga??????????? (I luv Abhi!!! 😍 )
will he end up with Muski????
NAHIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hu's gonna continue?


you!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
seriously......if no one continues, you all are going to have to read my bakwaas!!!!!!
and my bakwaas is even more bakwaas than the worst bakwaas ever!!!!!!
😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

seriously......if no one continues, you all are going to have to read my bakwaas!!!!!!
and my bakwaas is even more bakwaas than the worst bakwaas ever!!!!!!
😆



why dont u continue 😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiii....
Why so EMPTY...?
lol...please CONTINUE....
I am DYING to know what happens NEXT.....?
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally cuaght up with the parts
u guys have done an awesome job!!!!!👏
I'll cont.
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Here it is its long and it didnt turn out as i had wanted it to,
srry for that.... I tried
Recap:

She ran after her, and finally fell on him, but her towel started draping out. She got conscious, but she did'nt want him to see so she left it, and asked him to pass her clothes.

Suddenly the door opened, and Muskaan walked in and after the sight she saw she was shocked.

Muskaan quickly turned around, and was trying hard not to cry, her eyes were already filled with tears. But she didn't know why she felt like someone jst stabbed her in the heart.

M: ( tere aankhon main aansoon kyun aarahe hai. Yeh saare mard ek jaise hi hote hai, aur main kitni paagal thi maine socha ki Rahul wld be the Mr Right. Aur tu yaha aayi hi kyun thi, mamma ne halwa dene ko kaha aur tu chali aayi, lekin mai itni aasani se isilye maangayi thi kyunki mujhe bhi Rahul ko dekhna tha. Haha dekhliya na ki tumhare Mr Right uss ladki kya naam tha ha nikki ke saath..... chi chi chi muskaan chali jaa yaha se tune already unhe disturb kardiya woh log kya sochenge tumhare bare main, aur tu hi na knock th karna tha na..........)

When rahul and nikki saw muskaan their nikki jst snatched her clothes from his hands and ran to the bathroom. Rahul didn't know what to do he felt really bad when he saw tears in muski's eyes right before she turned around. He slowly went towards her.......

R: mus..muskaan tum yaha, woh main aur nikki actually woh main tho bas

Muskaan wiped her tears and was angry now...

M: SIR!!!! Aap yeh sab mujhe kyun bata rahe hai, afterall main tho sirf aapki employee hun. Aap apne DOST ke saath job hi kahe yak are use mujhe koyi pharak nahi padtha hai. Main tho yaha sirf ye halwa apko dene aayi thi, woh mamma ne kaha tha ki apko bohut pasand hai.

She leaves the box on the bed and starts going out. When rahul tries to stop her by holding her hand.

R: muskaan ek baar mei baat sunlo, tum jo samajh rahi ho woh galat hai main tho sirf nikki ke saath .........

M: Mr Rahul Garewal na main aapki dost hun aur nahi kuch aur tho plz aap mera haath choddijiye.

R: lekin muskaan....

M: RAHUL kaha na haath chodo, tumse maine ab thak tameez se baat kiya iska faida mat uthao (freed herself from him and went running out of the room.)

Rahul mother heard muski saying the last line and went behind her..................

Meanwhile in the room rahul was crying how cld she say that, nikki who heard everything came outside to support rahul.

N: Rahul sambhalo apneaapko

R: nahi nikki muski aise kaise kehsakthi hai, she hates me, main kitna bura hun hamesha use rulaya hai. Last time tho usne mujhe maaf kardiya lekin a bab woh mujhse kabhi baat nahi karegi, I have lost her......

N: Rahul u love her don't u?

Rahul jst stared at nikki, love he never even thought of it, no how cld he luv her she is jst her friends or rather was...

R: nahi nikki

N: oh common main tumhari bestfriend hun, I knw u very well, aur jo dard ab tumhare aankhon main nazar aaraha hai, woh dosti khone ka nahi pyaar khone ka hai.

R: lekin nikki i have .. i don't love her .......... or do I?

N: Budhu u do love her actually u r crazily in luv with her, jab woh tumhare saath hothi hai tumhe acha lagtha hai na, jab woh muskurati hai u smile too, and jab woh roti hai then what shld I say i have seen it myself u cry tooooooo, yeh pyaar hi hai

R: Nikki u r the best .. he gives her a quick hug......... I do Love her I am in love with Muskaan....lekin lekin woh tho mujhe naraaz hai, she thinks ki hum dono........Oh god what shld i do woh kabhi meri baat nahi manegi

N: are main kisilye hun we will figure out something

Rahul was sooooooooo happy, his bestfriend was their to help him and he finally found out what he really felt for Muskaan He loved Her....................

They both sat in the room thinking of ways to apologise to muski to make her understand, that they didn't have any idea what was going downstairs............

Rahuls mom stopped muskaan right at the door and.......*Slap*

RM: teri aukath kya hai kit u mere bete par aisa inzaam dalegi aur tu ne kya socha ki koyi tujhe kuch nahi kahega? Tu sirf mere bete ki office main kaam karti hai, aur apne boss ko itna bhi respect dena nahi aata hai tujhe? Tum log aise hi hote ho, koi respect kuch nahi sikha kya........ agar ma baap ne sikhaya nahi tho tum kya sikhogi, kya ghar main tum apne papa se bhi aise hi baat ........

M: BAS!!!!! Main ab thak chup hun tho sirf isiliye kyunki meri MA ne mujhe sanskaar aur badho ka respect karna sikhaya hai. Aur baat aapke bete ka tho yeh jo aap sanskaar ki baatein mujhe batarahi hai na woh apne bete ko pehle bataye

And Muskaan leaves from the house crying.

That's it!!!!!!!!
comment or criticise😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pariiiiiiiiiii that was really well written!! 👏

Loved the emotional turmoil both were going thru, and OMG Rahul's mom made it harder for him to get apology now. 🤔

Thank you for continuing!!

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