mayur ff-every day is spcl...pt 16 pg 129! - Page 89

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapoor

jeni update kaha hai??????????????????????

i m waiting yaar

i havent started typing yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

i havent started typing yaar



jaldi karona yaar
main aaj se Saturday tak bohot hi busy rahoongi
shayad online nehi aa paoongi
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Posted: 15 years ago
evening i will update sis...i will start to type no ok yaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
madam ji update kaha hai ji????
aapne tho bola tha ki aap monday ko update karne wale hai aur kaha gaya update????
jaldi karna😡😡
i am so angry
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey i've updated my post in pg119..hv a gudday! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderfull dear plzz pme wen ur update thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
Jeniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
whats up?
where is ur next update.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update asap
try to update next monday/tuesday
becoz my exam goona to end on tuesday.
ao i want a fresh brand new mayurish updae.
plzzzzzzzzzzzz my sweet cute buddy update soon

and ya try to make it longer.
agar chota hua tou- main kya karungi abhi nehi btaungi.



so waiting for ur update.
take care.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thank you for commenting friends as am having very short time I couldn't reply you all, If I started to reply you all then I couldn't update now, but I loved your comments I read all of yours I simply loved it, but next time I would promise I would reply all your comments. Sorry for delay I know I took little longer time.am really for that…I don't know when am gonna update next, for sure I will try to update once in the next week….😃😃😃

Just keep smiling love you all..dont forget to comment ,.okay I stop here else I couldn't update, my cousins may come at any time….😆😆😆drag my pc then i could not update...😃😃

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 15

I thought to drag the confession part'yet as I know we mayurians are sinking on a sad boat as we have no proper mayur sequence and if any scenes are shown then its full of fight, so I had thought to make you mayurians smile in this part'special dedication to all crazy mayur fans who were dull enough!!hope your happy bit after reading my update!do leave comment friends!

precap

Wait you need time that's it I would give you 10 min then he said moving away said think sitting on this bench am not gonna disturb you but I will be here near you

Mayank she said in a total disbelief

Yup think nah your time is going on..he said sitting on the bench looking at his watch

Continuity....i hope you guys would enjoy this part...

nupur started to walk from there out of irritation

mayank too followed her without opening his mouth yet concentrating on his watch 😆

nupur looked at him watching his watch keenly opened her mouth in disbelief😉

3..2'1'.your time got over he said smilingly looking at nupur , now say what have you decided?

Mayank listen we are here searching bhaya and gunjan and please avoid such topics she said moving away from him said now just concentrate on searching them she turned towards him saying this having his glare on her

After knowing your reply we can search them happily now I want your reply nothing more he stopped her holding her hands

mayank are you joking?
nupur for you it look like i am joking with u, if then for you kind information am not playing or joking am serious enough..
Mayank , what do you want me to say she asked him trying free her hand form his firm grip

Just say yes, that's it our problem solved

If I said nooo she asked looking at him

I would make you say yes you can't lie to me nupur I can read your eyes, the love you holding for me

Stop blabbering

You think am I blabbering

He was right she knows she can't lie anymore, she feels him more special ....more than Sammy no one knows her deep enough....but he has spend some few weeks a very less time but he can read her heart, she feels more secure near him, she loves to fight with him, she love to spend more time with him is these the symptoms of love

He knuckled his finger making her come out of her dreamland "my dear dreamy girl "am still waiting he said in a rhythmic tone..i can keep on watching you dream but now i want your answer.

Mayank am not dreaming...then what am i doing untill now she bited her tongue and continued if I say yes then I have some conditions along with it too'

she was stopped by him as he pulled her into quick hug she never expected him to pull her in sudden...she lost her balance of him pulling, for balance she holded his shoulders tightly in the fear of falling down she had lost her balance on earth, she hitted her head on his shoulders went in loss of words surrendered herself within his shoulders'her heart beat raised heavily as mayank made his arms more tighter not willing to leave a little space within them. Mayank smiled at his craziness he has only for her, he know she had something she has not said anything yet the way she asked gave him strength to hug her.
After few minutes of staying there in the same position both had no intension to move yet nupur feeling shy tried to pull herself from him, he knowing her move once again locked her " ahhhha not that soon my darling"
She looked at him playing mayank I haven't completed yet please leave me

You can say your words now he had no mind to leave her from his arms as he loved to hold her close

Mayank see let me talk nah please she said pleading

Nupur ji I am holding you and not your mouth ji so you can continue ji she said like kid knodding his head now and then with a cute puppy face

Stop it ...mayank stop playing and leave me now else I would forget what I want to say she pleading him

I will help you nupur its simple you have forgotten to say I love you he said looking deep at her staring lovingly at her not wanting to leave her for whole life seeing her going red he looked at her with more passionate eyes

She stood there like a statue seeing his love, the passion he had for her , she can read it very well looking at him she tearfully mayank would you answer me question?

y not he said raising his shoulders pulling her little more close said am waiting to answer you life long..

What made you love me this much mayank?

you know what nupur, I too searching for this answer only nupur he said smilingly let us do onething , both of us will search an answer for your question ,what say? he raised his eyebrows mischievously.

Look let me talk she said moving back few steps back as he came closer to her cheeks.

He smiled moved faster dragged her into his arms once again made holding her in his arms said , I too wanted to say something in your ears only'by the way what you thought nupur your blushing like this... he asked with nasty smile appearing on his face

Nothing she said blushing looking down said just leave me

Your afraid of me huh few hours before he dragged his sentence shouted in sudden Sssshhhhh ahhhh and loosened her grip she moved away from him smiling at her victory

Nupur why did you pinched me

Mayank stay there don't come near me she said warningly

Am afraid he said smilingly ...nupur jokes apart , don't change the topic say me

What should I say mayank?

Nupur please don't make go mad'

Am waiting for my 3 words

Before that you haven't let me completed my sentence she complained like a kid

Ok baba am sorry he said holding his ears say I would hear he said sitting under a tree made her sit near him

Mayank If I had to say yes she continued from where she left

So you haven't said yes huh he said winking at her

Not again she said warning at him smilingly

He closed his mouth asked her to go on acting out in hands

I have some conditions

He just raised his eyebrows listened carefully looking at her saying seriously and absorving her cute litlle actions ,

if you want me to say yes then you should not touch me until we get married saying this she made a distance between them

What he shut his mouth continued to listen

Why are you shocked this much this is just my first condition she said proudly and continued with her list

We should not say any one we both are in love with each other

He listened as very good boy as she listed out more

No phone talks

Hello madam ji he stopped her but she was going on and on

Wait listen

Unless you stand on your own leg we are not going to talk about our marriage

He stood from there said see now am standing on my own leg come lets get married he said holding her hand

Mayank she gave a slap on his holding hand said you forgot my condition huh!

first You just say me whether you love me or not he said without holding on the patience

She smiled at him without yes, why am I putting the condtions she said clearly..smiling broadly

Mayank once again came forward for a hug stopped as she backed away warning him remembering her conditions if your not gonna follw those condtions then

He just ignored and pulled her into hug once again passionate hug!

As he himself backed away from him said nupur

first I cant keep me away from talking with you,
next you have to believe me I would never ever cross my limits'
thirdly others if they catch on our love story what can I do? He said curving his lips

By the way I thought you were modern enough but am totally wrong honey

What am I not modern she said looking a cool glare at herself from top to bottom

Your modern but

but what mayank! she asked sadly
hearing on your conditions list am sure your modern grandma

She raised his hands to beat him

Stopped as mayank got her hand pulling her close said yet i love this modern grand ma a lot! he smiled happily! he asked you believe me nah?

she just knoded her head as a yes!
now its high time say me those magical words which I am waiting for longer time

She slowly looking at his eyes said I love you mayank as he came more closer ..she moved away saying I will love you only you accept modern grandmas conditions she running as mayank chased her laughing out of happiness...

To be continued'.

You guys liked it huh'am waiting for your comments..i really wanted to know the review for this part...

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

i loved your surprise

mujhe laga aab kal hi update milega
but i really loved it
mera mood bahut accha ho gaya hai
the update was mindblowing
mayur confession was so cute
loved nupur's conditions
let's see how mayank follows them
i think it will be nupur who'll break these conditions
i know mayank will never cross his limits
loved mayur hugs
they were so passionate
continue soon
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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