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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

cool....... catch ya later

sure😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Jenni... just read all parts of this FF... its great, part 13 was just awesome, plz update soon and pm me wen u do. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
you said you'll update one of your ffs today
which one are you updating??
and where is the update??
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pagli91

Hey Jenni... just read all parts of this FF... its great, part 13 was just awesome, plz update soon and pm me wen u do. 😃

thx dear...sure am ready to pm u...😃😃 loads of love
jeni😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

you said you'll update one of your ffs today

updating now!!!wait for just 20 min!! plzzzzz
which one are you updating??
this ff ur fav am updating
and where is the update??
ya ya coming coming

muahhh love yaa!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
mahima dear this part is my special dedication for you!!!😃😃😃
Part 14

He expected her to slap or to scold, but she moved away silently

Mayank what have you done? He scratched his hair thinking of a solution,

Isn't that wrong? he asked himself yet I love her nothing could be wrong he smiled at his thought of him kissing her , she to loves me yaar , so that's obiviously not wrong but I haven't even confessed her,

he followed her calling her name louder

Nupur!

Nupur stop!

He catched her hands stopped her from moving further, he turned her made her look at him..she gave no expression on her face, he couldn't guess what she is thinking on her mind!😛

Nupur please look at me…

No reaction she stood there looking down not wanting to talk nor look at him

Nupur look am sorry you the one

Not wanting him to continue she said sorry mayank I know it was entirely my fault she said trying hard to remove her hand from his grip she wanted to leave from there

Nupur he softened his voice

Mayank please leave my hands she said still looking down , She herself was confused😉

Nupur just look at me he said holding her chin tried to make her look at his eyes

She quickly removed his hands forcefully as he touched her, for now she wanted to be alone ,she wanted to move away from him she doesnt want him to come near her , she looked at his eyes pleading to leave his hold on her,

Mayank who got a bit irritated of her trial of pulling his hands shouted leaving her hold ohh its just your wish to come near seducing me right..you had made me go crazy for you , and if I hold your hands then it seems to be wrong huh..what logic you girls have.

She looked up at him angrily said don't talk about all girls, be specific she moved away controlling herself

Acha nupur am sorry he moved in front of her and stood blocking her way giving a naughty smile on his face said ok now i will be specific

Mayank leave way I want to go

I too wanted to talk with you nupur but your not giving me a chance

Nothing more to talk

I guess we haven't even started to discuss yet right then how you can say there is nothing to talk?

Seeing her nose and ears turning out redder (hello she is angry guys😃)

Look I know your angry on me but this reddish looks are not good, it only looks good whenever you blush, but now…I am sure it doesn't suit you

Gave a glare at him irritatingly,Mayank please stop irritating me

He made his hands hold her neck , he moved closer said am I irritating you nupur just am saying the true fact..he winked at her cooly

She tried to pull his hands out from holding her

he pulled her towards him forcefully not leaving a little space which they had bit before ,She dashed her heads on his strong chest looked at his eyes in a disbelief for his sudden act,

she can feel her heart beat raising at his nearness, she just wanted to be alone...nothing more she wanted..
Looked at her confused he continued softly and bit temping

Nupur listen

Mayank I know you guys take these type of acts as a time pass but please stop..

Time pass you think he was totally annoyed of her stupid statement….. he know she loves him but why the hell she is ignoring him

Mayank nothing to discuss now without finishing she tried to free herself from his grip

Let me talk first..he said holding her waist tightly not wanting her to move making her feel uneasy on his act

Mayank you better listen to me she continued as he was starring at her and allowed her to complete her sentence

I know it was my fault please let us not discuss on it more,

nupur remember you to kissed me back and you say just forget it, more over you will say let us be good friends very funny

We cannot be friends too , there is nothing between u and she said harshly pointing her fingers in front of his face

Ohhh sooo nothing…nupur..he said kissing her pointing fingers said ok chweety then let us be lovers…

What she said with blank look at him?

You didn't hear me I said let us be lovers

Lovers..she repeated his words

Why are you shocked like this nupur, he said kissing her cheeks

How dare you kiss me she rubbed out the place where he had kissed

Dare… which you had to seduce me nupur

Now you gonna leave me or not she asked finally

He nodded his head childishly saying no, If you say I love you then I would leave

Mayank don't play

It look like am playing very bad then it seems I should show you one more demo he came closer making their distance inches away..he looked at her lips smilingly

But he moved away controlling himself spoked nupur I really love you..

i love you!
i wanted you to share my life!
my happiness!!
my sadness!!
i love you he said looking at her eyes passionately...
I want to know your reply thats it, want you to believe me...
you should believe that am not passing my time with you like other boys do...
its my love...he stopped as nupur spoke up

Mayank if your not stop playing then I will say it to my bhaya she looked weirdly as mayank was laughing holding his stomach

Mayank why are you laughing

Nupur am loving you, not your brother seeing her getting furious he said in serious tone holding her hands that was left down I can catch your love in your eyes, yet I want those special words to be said by your mouth

Mayank am not…after long time of dragging she finally spoken out , am confused…I need time I couldn't decide

Wait you need time that's it I would give you 10 min then , he said moving away from her leaving better distance made her sit on the bench near by said...see nupur am not gonna disturb you for 20 min but I will be here near you sitting with my mouth shut but after 10 min you should tell me your reply...

Mayank she said in a total disbelief

Yup think nah, your time is going on..he said sitting on the bench looking at his watch

nupur was blank at his behaviour...
To be continued…hold on!!!

This part is really bigger than my other updates….ha ha ha ha ha ha I tried something but got the output as something sorry if u guys got bored…am really chorry…will update next part soon.

please leave your precious comments..i atleast expect you friends to scold me for a boring part...😆😆😆i love to read my friends comment..even its a criticism....... .....😉😉😉 comments please....

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

you dedicated the part to me....... how sweet of you

by the way you are such a cliff hanger
now i have to wait till the next part for nupur's answer..............
i know the answer will be.................

or maybe.......
but nothing else......... these are the two options i suggest
now coming to the update
i loved it....
it was fab.......
mayank trying to say sorry was great.......
nupur ignoring him was nice.....
but mayank is way too smart........
the way mayank was flirting with her was wow.......
i was blushing reading that part.....
nupur saying that she'll tell bhaiya was the best........
they way mayank confessed was so so cute.......
and he gave nupur 10 minutes to think the answer
woooo.... this mayank is fast
continue soon
luv
mahima





Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update
loved it
mayank confessed
waiting for nupur's reply
do cont soon
Edited by fanofmjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update
i really loved it
loved mayank and the way he is irritating nupur
bechari!!!
aur soon ka matlab 1 month nahi hota hai samjhi??
its a warning for u from me.........
agar update nahi kiya na ...........main tumhe............
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beg karungi........
please update soon not once in a month but atleast once in a week
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the nok-jokes between them...amzing update.............

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