It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 33

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Posted: 15 years ago
Di i totally loved this update!! You know i just love how you so clearly portray teenage behaviour and mind. I remember when i was in junior high, guys were exactly like that. You know, stupid, egoist, mean and cocky. Not that they arent in high school but junior high always has the most drama. I feel seriously bad for Kripa and whats up with the "indian nerd" thing? LOL Hmmm Angad is so funny. The AK scenes were extremely cute and Josh is really annoying me now and that Matt annoyed me as well. Susan is such a betrayer. LOL. Well di please update soon and PM me. Thanks for the earlier PM.
Love,
~Jot~
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi



ur wink m@kez me think she might luv @ng@d......bt she alw@yz givez him cold shoulder wen he is wid sus@n..?

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Posted: 15 years ago

the thing that u said in the beginning is correct... coz here students do everything when they are in college... when they get freedom... they don't have any time and chance in the strict environment of school.

its nice that angad managed himself not to be like the bad boys while they were present in his surrounding in the alternate school... otherwise in that age boys usually adopt bad habits of others easily.

felt really bad for kripa, it really hurts when u hear something indecent about urself from the person u consider ur friend.. what angad said to his friend abt her was wrong of coarse, but that was according to his character/nature.. i mean, a middle school boy who considers himself to be a cool dude, hot & happening type.. how would he consider to attach with some nerdy girl

he was the attention seeker, and when he did not get that much attention from kripa, this really irritates him, they became good friends after playing chess and giving camera in a gift.. that's it! this is narrator angad, who is trying to make us realize that at that time how much wrong he was..

but now angad would feel a guilt bcoz he knew that kripa had listened everything... he is not in a position to give any lame excuse infront of gayatri and kripa.

despite the fact that this ff is a trip down memory lane of angad khanna, and other characters don't have much importance, but due to boy's POV it is interesting to read...



Edited by annu127 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

interesting update......waiting for the next asap.....and thnx for the pm

update soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
fab update!!
wow angad interested in photography(me too 😛 )....kripa's was d 1st picture he clicked n he still has those photos 😳
angad is so obsessed wid his image dat he said such harsh words bout kripa 😒
plz continue soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lilymay

Loved it !!!! once again, it was a great part. I loved the part @ the hospital...His first pic was of her...and he still carries those photos with him..How cute!!! The last bit was sad...poor Kripa. I've already said this before but I just love the first person narration of Angad. It just makes the story seems more real. Please continue soon...



thanks lilmay! Yeah,angad is a silent lover for sure....he does a lot of dhamaka otherwise but when it comes to kripa, he says all the wrong things at the wrong time😕
\I am glad ur liking this format of the story

[quote=vallanki]wanna read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why don't you post whole story at one time??? Can't wait for another four-five days!!!!! I repeat all praises I already said before. 😊[/quote]

thanks vallu! UR praise always means a lot....i wish i could write the whole story but u know without all ur comments, mera bheja nahin chalta😆
Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago



thanks bhavana! yeah, now they are middle schoolers and next will be in high school with proms etc to worry about😃 Yeah, i know a lot of young girls esp in mid school are Twilight fans. That love struck look on bella is so typical that i could not help including her here😃 Kittens and cottons😆😉....not everyone knows what that lingo means...yeah i have to keep up with the times now😆
UR parents would be proud of u if ur proud of ur Indian geekiness.....kaash sab bachche aise hote😃



so what does the lingo mean? tell me na di, i'm curious....😃
Edited by bhavana2692 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey di: Ok this was jsut a fantastic update....
The way you penned down Angad' feelings/emotions was brilliant..Hats off to you for that Sangeeta.....👏..... Loved AK's interactions in this update......so he discovered his other talents becuz of Kripa...how sweet.... Oh dear...the end was horrible....Kripa must be devastated hearing those words from his mouth....Poor girl.....how is she gonna react now to that.......😲.... Oh God pls pls continue soon....
Can't wait for the next update.....Pls pls pls continue soon....
Thanks for the PM Awesome......
Edited by ShelDev - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Di i totally loved this update!! You know i just love how you so clearly portray teenage behaviour and mind. I remember when i was in junior high, guys were exactly like that. You know, stupid, egoist, mean and cocky. Not that they arent in high school but junior high always has the most drama. I feel seriously bad for Kripa and whats up with the "indian nerd" thing? LOL Hmmm Angad is so funny. The AK scenes were extremely cute and Josh is really annoying me now and that Matt annoyed me as well. Susan is such a betrayer. LOL. Well di please update soon and PM me. Thanks for the earlier PM. Love, ~Jot~



thanks Jot! Yes, boys will be boys- whichever country they are in😆 Yes, junior high as all the drama because of puberty and raging hormones😆
Indians and Chinese in the US have developed a rep for being geeky or nerds because in general they are very good students and excel in math and science- it's more of a stereotype. Angad doesnot want to fit that image and that's why tries to be different

[quote=pearlz]ur wink m@kez me think she might luv @ng@d......bt she alw@yz givez him cold shoulder wen he is wid sus@n..?

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maybe that's her way of ignoring him so he will maybe sudhro fy😉...at least she hopes

[quote=annu127]he thing that u said in the beginning is correct... coz here students do everything when they are in college... when they get freedom... they don't have any time and chance in the strict environment of school.

yeah, generally jo US mein school mein hota hai, India mein college mein hota hai lekin there are a lot of schools in India also, jahan aisa sab kuch hota hai...have heard a lot in the news lately about how school kids do weird things like even sending bad photos of each other on cellphones😕

its nice that angad managed himself not to be like the bad boys while they were present in his surrounding in the alternate school... otherwise in that age boys usually adopt bad habits of others easily.

yeah, his dad probably helped him there...i did not highlight but angad mentioned that his father took charge at that time

felt really bad for kripa, it really hurts when u hear something indecent about urself from the person u consider ur friend.. what angad said to his friend abt her was wrong of coarse, but that was according to his character/nature.. i mean, a middle school boy who considers himself to be a cool dude, hot & happening type.. how would he consider to attach with some nerdy girl

yeah...angad is still insecure but hopefully with time he will accept his feelings and accept his desiness too

he was the attention seeker, and when he did not get that much attention from kripa, this really irritates him, they became good friends after playing chess and giving camera in a gift.. that's it! this is narrator angad, who is trying to make us realize that at that time how much wrong he was..

but now angad would feel a guilt bcoz he knew that kripa had listened everything... he is not in a position to give any lame excuse infront of gayatri and kripa.

despite the fact that this ff is a trip down memory lane of angad khanna, and other characters don't have much importance, but due to boy's POV it is interesting to read...

yeah, i am trying to restrict this story to angad and his relationship with kripa...it will be a short ff so other characters will stay in background unless they influenced him in a big way like gayatri etc

No cartoons today??

And congratulations to Federer once again👏👏 UR a big tennis buff, aren't you?

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[quote=akrock]fab update!!
wow angad interested in photography(me too 😛 )....kripa's was d 1st picture he clicked n he still has those photos 😳
angad is so obsessed wid his image dat he said such harsh words bout kripa 😒
plz continue soon.......[/quote]

thanks akrock! Yeah, u like photography too? Me too...but it's not my profession. Yeah, angad is an insecure teenager still😕


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavana2692



so what does the lingo mean? tell me na di, i'm curious....😃



he he...if u don't understand then aise hi rehne do...is forum par samjhaana mushkil hai😆

[quote=sheldev]Hey di: Ok this was jsut a fantastic update....
The way you penned down Angad' feelings/emotions was brilliant..Hats off to you for that Sangeeta.....👏..... Loved AK's interactions in this update......so he discovered his other talents becuz of Kripa...how sweet.... Oh dear...the end was horrible....Kripa must be devastated hearing those words from his mouth....Poor girl.....how is she gonna react now to that.......😲.... Oh God pls pls continue soon....
Can't wait for the next update.....Pls pls pls continue soon....
Thanks for the PM Awesome...... [/quote]

thanks shel! yeah, angad always says and does the wrong things at the wrong time😕 Poor guys his intentions are good but not his actions/words

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