MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 77

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Aranya

Great job Daksh..:))

Nice part...really enjoyed reading this!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

That was so beautiful.......hope jaldi se sb theek ho jaye...........continues soon.........

Aww Thank you so much for liking it
Sab kuch zaroor jaldi theek hoga
I'll cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Daksha loved ur OS to the core
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW.. Dakshu... too good yaar!!!Very beautifully written!!
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Originally posted by: arunabehere

Daksha loved ur OS to the core

please PM me next time plzzzzzzzzz

THANKS for liking it dear
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

WOW.. Dakshu... too good yaar!!!Very beautifully written!!

Thank you so much for liking my work Thanks a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago

UPDATED: Part 23

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Mayank comes and puts his hand over Nupur's shoulders………..

Nupur looks up and sees Mayank……starts wiping off her tears…….Mayank too sits on the floor……

M: Nupur….

Nupur wraps her hands around Mayank's waist and starts crying…..putting her head over his chest……

N: I am sorry Mayank……ye sab kuch meri wajah se…..

Mayank caressing her hairs…….

M: Nahin Nupur………kisne kaha……..chalo abhi utho……

He breaks the hug and and then both stand up and come to the dining area………

M: Ab yahaan aaraam se baitho…….main paani leke aata hoon…….

N: Nahin…..ruko main laati hoon……..

M(smiles): Koi baat nahin Nupur maine cake dekh li hai…….ab toh paani la sakta hoon na……..

After few seconds Mayank comes………

M: Lo paani pee lo…… aur abhi hum saath hain……tum akele kyun ro rahi thi……mujhe bula leti main tumhe company de deta……..(trying to lighten up the atmosphere)

N: Par Mayank……tumhaari zindagi mein meri wajah se pehle hi itni pareshaaniyaan thi……aur……ab ye…..mujhe kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha…….main kya karun (and she starts crying again)

Mayank sits beside her……..puts her head over his shoulders…….

M: Pehle to rona band……..bilkul…..hum aaraam se iss baare mein baat kar sakte hain na……

He then wipes off her tears……

M: Pehli cheez toh tum apne aap ko iss ka zimmedaar maan na band karo………bohot log hain duniya mein jinke paas apna kuch nahin hai…….par humaare paas hai na humaari Angel…… wohi hai jiski wajah se hum aaj saath hain aur humesha rahenge…….

N: Par Mayank tum har baat ko itni aasaani se kaise le sakte ho……. Kyun mujhe chup karaane ke liye apne aansoon pee rahe ho.kya maine tumhaari aankhon mei uss dard ko nahin dekha….. kyun koi apna bachha nahin chahega kyun……..kyun…..(and she again hugs him tightly crying)…….Mayank too controlling his tears looking up…….he cannot break……he has to be the support of Nupur…………

Scene: Sehgal House

Samrat's room…….

Samarat and Gunjan are packing their bags…….

Samrat's mom enters……..

SM: Beta sab tayaari ho gayi…….flight time par hai tum log jaldi se neeche aa jao…….

S: Haan mom abhi aa rahe hain…….

Gunjan pulling her suitcase……

S: Laao mujhe do main neeche le kar chalta hoon…….

Now both of them are ready to go they take mom and dad's blessing and leave……..

Both of them talk little but think more……. Where a girl is shy, excited and nervous for her honeymoon….the boy is trapped between his past and future because of which he is not able to enjoy his present……….but he will cope up soon…….

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Both Mayank and Nupur break the hug……… Nupur wipes off her tears……..

N: ab tum yaheen baitho chup chaap aur kahin mat jaana……….

Mayank smiles seeing her……and nods his head……..when Nupur leaves a drop of tear comes out of his eyes but he wipes it off……he can't let this situation be heavy on him…….

Nupur returns with the cake……

N: Ab iss cake ka surprise to bachaa nahin par…….ab khaake bataana kaisi bani hai……

When Mayank was going to cut the cake………sound of Anjali comes……arre usska morning alarm wo uth gayi…….

M: Uth gayi meri nanhi pari……..

Mayank goes and picks her up from the bed………kisses her forehead…….

M: Good Morning Angel………chalo cake khaate hain…….dekhen kahin mummy ne cheeni ki jagah namak to nahin daal diya………

Then he cuts the cake…….and Nupur places the first bite in Mayank's mouth……..

N (looking at Mayank curiously): Kaisi hai………

M: Maine toh mazaak mein kahaa tha kahin namak to nahin daal diya……aur tumne to sacchi mein daal diya…….

Nupur face squeezed and she licks her fingers……..

N: Issmein namak hai Mr. Mayank Sharma……haan……. issmein namak hai…….

M: Aur kya Mrs. Sharma……..aaj jo ek ek boond aansoon ka giraaya hai na iss cake par tumne Nupur usse sirf main mehsoos kar sakta hoon……

Nupur sees Mayank and hugs him……….

SINGAPORE…………

After the long journey Samrat and Gunjan reach Singapore………and they reach Samrat's cottage on the country side……..beautiful location……surrounded by greenry and mountains…….

Gunjan steps down from the car…….

G: Kitni khoobsurat jagah hai……..

S: Acchi hai na…..mujhe bhi yahi jagah sabse pasand thi……sabse……chalo andar chalein……

G: Haan…….

Inside the cottage……..

S: aapko fresh hona ho to bathroom uss taraf hai…….baaki main yahaan ke arrangements dekhta hoon…….

Gunjan takes out her suit from the suitcase and goes to the bathroom……In the meanwhile Samrat checks out the servants and other arrangements…….he opens the curtain and feels the sunlight on his face enjoying the greenery, mountains…….and then his eyes stops at the house nearby it was Dia's she used to live there…….but does she still lives there…..Samrat doesn't knows neither he wanted to know…….

Then sound of Gunjan comes……..

G: Kholo kholo…….

The lock of the door was jammed…..she was trying hard to open it up…….

Samrat reaches there……..

S: Ruko main kholta hoon……

Samrat is hitting the door from one side and Gunjan is pulling it……..and while Samrat was hitting the door…….it opens and he directly goes and fell over Gunjan……….Gunjan slipped and both of them fell on the floor with Gunjan down and Samrat over her……..Both of them looking into each other eyes………..dissolving into each other eyes……….. and then the bell rings and they both get back to their senses…….

Samrat gets up……….and then Gunjan stands up

S: I am sorry……aapko lagi to nahin……

G: nahin main theek hoon par bahar shayad ghanti baji hai………

S: Haan main dekhta hoon…….

There was a person at the door with a bouquet of red roses………

P: Roses for you Mr. Sehgal…….

S: Do I know you…..and the roses ??

He delivers the roses and leaves from there without telling anything………Samrat takes the bouquet and comes inside…..he saw a small card on which it was written "Welcome Back"

The moment he saw the card he understood that its none other than Dia……..but how did she come to know that I am here……he looks out of the window at that house……but was unable to figure out anything……..

He was sneaking through the window when Gunjan comes to the hall………

G: kaun tha……..

Samrat turns his body towards Gunjan…..he is holding bouquet in one hand and card in other……he quickly places the card at the back pocket of his jeans…….

Gunjan sees the beautiful bouquet of roses…….a big smile came on her face……she was not expecting anything like this from her husband who hardly talks to her…….

G (smiles): Ye mere liye……

Samrat looks at the flowers and then at Gunjan and smiles and gives the flowers to her…….

Gunjan takes the flowers……..

G: Bohot sundar hain sacchi……..

Samrat smiled……he was happy to see his wife smiling……. For the first time she was smiling unhesitatingly…….and Samrat was happy to see her like this……..

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Night time……..

Mayank is sitting on the bed with the laptop surfing some medical sites on the net…….Nupur enters and sits beside Mayank…….

N: Kitna kaam karoge Mayank………kal raat se nahin soye ho……chalo ab so jaao….

M: Do minute Nupur bas…….do minute……. Lo ho gaya baaki main sab subah dekh loonga……

N: Kya…..

M: Kuch nahin meri jaan…….maine kaha tha na hum umeed nahin chodenge to bas……..

He places the laptop on one side……..and then places his arms around Nupur's waist and they both go to sleep……..

SINGAPORE…….

After sometime both of them get ready to go out……..and after some shopping and sight seeing when they return back to the cottage…….. In the hall…….

They both find out it was very well decortaed with flowers and ribbons…….and the flowers were white roses Samrat's favourite…….

Gunjan is very happy to see the whole decorations…….she puts the shopping bags on one side and goes and picks up flowers and smells them…….

Samrat goes and ask the servant…..

Samarat: Ye sab kisne kiya hai……..???? Kaun aaya tha yahaan…….

Servant: Ji wo……wo…..Dia Madam…….aayi thi…….

Thats it for now guys.........

Do comment ki how do you liked the part......I included both Sajan and MayUr equally.........
Please do give comment they really encourage me a lot to do better
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic part.. please do continue!~
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update.thanks for adding Sajan in it.Please update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing part
me not like dia
but i'm glad you split up the part evenly

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