FF Arjuhi:AlwaysYours|UPD p.18|CLSD - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: -Parm-

thanks a lot Mina

-Parm-

Anytime yaar....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
UPDATE

When I saw you for the first time

after so many years of Loneliness
I felt a warmth deep inside of me
slowly invaded my body defenceless.

Arohi's heart missed a beat ... Arjun was there ... to the girl seemed almost a dream, could not be true ... she saw him, was near the door of her room and had become more beautiful than before. These same hair, same eyes that always serious, he reveal his emotions with difficult ... yes, yes, it was him, indeed was a god, a god who was tall and dark in front of her.

For the two young people was an emotional moment, it seemed that the world around them no longer existed. Arohi could barely hold back the tears, the emotions she was experiencing were too strong. After three years there he was, in front of her. Her eyes were sad and sweet, the sweet look the same that he reserve only to her, the same faint smile that made her a feeling of immense joy ... The world no longer existed, there were only two of them.

I have searched among the faces I saw around me
I thought you were more elusive the more find you
sometimes you were really illusions
and I hear your voice even if you weren't near me

Arjun was really nice to hear her voice saying his name.
It sounded so sweet came from the lips of an angel, hearing his name made him so weak.

Arjun "Maybe I'm doing wrong to tell you everything now after a long 3 years but ....
I can not ... I can not and will not forget ... I tried ... but I never found anyone who was like you ... many girls have passed in my life ... what do you think I really care? In each of them looking for something about you ... but you are unique.
From the first moment you've struck me with your joy, your smile ... I have always been in love with you ... even if at first I tried not to think about it ... but every time I met your eyes ... every time you were near me ...every time I spoke to you, you made me feel like I'm in heaven ... I was in seventh heaven…soo

Why did you have to leave me?
Remember? You promised me that we were together. We will get married married ..
Were all lies, right?
You knew from the beginning what we were going to meet? You wanted to leave me. But I told you ... I'd be back already and I'm back ... Arohi I cannot live without you…I tried in all those 3 years but I failed due to well.

I see you again after so long, you're gone for no reason and I spent years chasing the hope of seeing you again. I walked down the street and even in the midst of many people, I felt alone. I realized to see your smile so bright that every time warmed my heart. I breathed deeply and felt your scent still on me. More than once I've trade someone to you, but as I ran behind the girl I knew she could not be you, but I clung to the vain hope that tore the heart, my heart. In every face in every person, every song I could see you, feel your presence, I heard your voice velvety and full of joy when you sings, when you call me running towards me."

He take a deep breath ... as if he had finally lifted a weight from his heart ...

Arjun "Now you know the truth ... and ... I want to know why you left, why you left me alone!?!!?"

Arohi's heart beat wildly.

My heart beat fast,
a sudden emotion,
a song of the night.

It a reminder of love
whispers a name as a
song of midnight.

A love A name

remains imprinted in the heart

as part of your life .

-Parm-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
nice update yaar...... your way of writing touches the heart.....
waiting for january.....
thanks for the pm.....
love
mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: mina_18secret

nice update yaar...... your way of writing touches the heart.....

waiting for january.....
thanks for the pm.....
love
mina

thanks Mina for the words🤗 mean a lot
mention not for the PM😃
-Parm-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
OOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMG I need to slap you arcroos the face as many times as possible ... why am i not in the PM list .. do i really need to ask you HAAN? Well Ms.Parm i think you need to learn a leasson your writing a FF on my FAv jodi and havent told ME *Rolls up sleves* do i need to complain to your mommy LMFAO

Okay Okay so Parm darling awsomeeeeeee writing skilss and totally prrofessinol, Your writing touches my heart yaar Too good. Love the way you explain everything it is awsomeeeeee .... and only read the tearser will read rest and leavve a better comment ... and longer.

Need to catch up on all chpaters ... So better not update until i am DONE readying the cometing hope i am clear.
Anyways awsomee FF and lovely writing too Good.
Keep rockingg Jaani

LOve Ms.Harsha
😳
Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: xoHarshaxo

OOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMG I need to slap you arcroos the face as many times as possible ... why am i not in the PM list .. do i really need to ask you HAAN? Well Ms.Parm i think you need to learn a leasson your writing a FF on my FAv jodi and havent told ME *Rolls up sleves* do i need to complain to your mommy LMFAO

Okay Okay so Parm darling awsomeeeeeee writing skilss and totally prrofessinol, Your writing touches my heart yaar Too good. Love the way you explain everything it is awsomeeeeee .... and only read the tearser will read rest and leavve a better comment ... and longer.

Need to catch up on all chpaters ... So better not update until i am DONE readying the cometing hope i am clear.
Anyways awsomee FF and lovely writing too Good.
Keep rockingg Jaani

LOve Ms.Harsha
😳

😆😆😆
oye Ms Harsha...forgive me meri jaani😳
your words means a lot...I'm speechless
add u in the PM list.
next update in on january so u have all the time to read it peacefully
and do leave your longer comment
luv
-Parm-
Edited by -Parm- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Okay Mee Back Again 😈
Comment for first Chapter 😃

"Parm i dont know how to tell you this but i hate you for being so good in writing ... your skills are off the hook bro *Sorry i love saying that even thou your not my Bro still you know LMFAO* okay anywyas this update was MINDBLOWING. 👏

I love how you show clear feelings of Arjun. Arohi left but i love that .... i mean then you get to turly see what he feels and love the way you describe what he thinks. This story is really intersting ... and i love how you explain in detail. But wana see Romance soon too most of all wana read more from you ... loved how he is talking to him self about Arohi and what she did and how he loves, turly shows his real feeling ... honeslty this is one of the best writing and story line FF's i have on IF ... turly awsome. 👏

Awweww love how he says will love you forever so could see thhat in real too ... wish these sscencs were on t.v. or something would drool over them hehe ... also totally love how you explain his feelings towards her .... Too Good. ⭐️

Anywyas let me read next part now So Will be right back WAIT.

Love Yaa Loaad
ds 😳
Ms.Harsha"
Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: xoHarshaxo

Okay Mee Back Again 😈
Comment for first Chapter 😃

"Parm i dont know how to tell you this but i hate you for being so good in writing ... your skills are off the hook bro *Sorry i love saying that even thou your not my Bro still you know LMFAO* okay anywyas this update was MINDBLOWING. 👏

I love how you show clear feelings of Arjun. Arohi left but i love that .... i mean then you get to turly see what he feels and love the way you describe what he thinks. This story is really intersting ... and i love how you explain in detail. But wana see Romance soon too most of all wana read more from you ... loved how he is talking to him self about Arohi and what she did and how he loves, turly shows his real feeling ... honeslty this is one of the best writing and story line FF's i have on IF ... turly awsome. 👏

Awweww love how he says will love you forever so could see thhat in real too ... wish these sscencs were on t.v. or something would drool over them hehe ... also totally love how you explain his feelings towards her .... Too Good. ⭐️

Anywyas let me read next part now So Will be right back WAIT.

Love Yaa Loaad
ds 😳
Ms.Harsha"

😳Awww my Ms Harsha.
😳for the words
Then It's me who have thank u for the words that you said... are words that pass through on their magic⭐️
for the romantic moments u have to wait😈 but I promise u will remain speechless😳😉
-Parm-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
hey...jus came across ur ff......luved it to d hepas.....do continue soon n do pm me wenever updt...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: kash_sajan

hey...jus came across ur ff......luved it to d hepas.....do continue soon n do pm me wenever updt...

Thanks dear for liking it.
yeah sure I'll PM you
-Parm-

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