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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suzzane14




hahahhaaa....omg, gal dont beg me, cmon...ill be updatin real soon, hehe..!! 😆

i will if u dont...lol..but u better update soon...lol..u see this tells how much i love this ff.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
i knw ONE thing! it makes me WANT it
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abay pls yaar, dont make me wait long!
continue sooooooooooon
mwah
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Originally posted by: ksg_sonia

i knw ONE thing! it makes me WANT it

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abay pls yaar, dont make me wait long!

continue sooooooooooon

mwah

tc

luv sonia




no worries gal ye wont be waitin for long...!!!
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ok guyz part 18 is here for yous, k have fun...


PART 18


She sighed, respiring the fresh air, the streetlights lit up, augmenting the brightness on the streets as the afterglows of the sun was toning down the area, she felt a sense of contentment stirring within her, with him walking beside her and her hand clutching his muscular arm, she glanced at him, his hands tucked in his pockets and he gazing down at the
ground, lost in his own thoughts,
'armaan', she called out, shaking him out of his absent-mindedness,
'em yaah', he looked at her, his catena of thoughts interrupted by her,
she smiled, 'thanks for bringin me out', she mouthed,
he gave a side - hug to her, tittering at how ducky she was feeling by coming out in the fresh air,
'no worries...ye wanted ta see the sunset innit', she mugged his back, hugging him, finding the solace in his arms, she nodded, loving his touch to the core,
his heart skipped a beat at her devout face, glistening under the moonlight, engulfed in his warmth and the fragrance of his cologne,
'k the babes gettin all cheesy now', he joked, only to recieve a slap on his arm by a slightly pinkened ridhima,
'shut up...i was showing gratitude', she parted away, folding her hands against her chest, taking a gander at the mooring swanboats, surprised by herself and the sudden easiness between them, while he snickered at her actions,
'aahh so if thats how ye show the gratitude then i am all yers, do what ye want', he kept a hand around her waist, hauling her towards him, she shook her head, pushing him a bit,
'you armaan mallik, are not really on the roll here', she teased, answering back to him,
'talkin abou rolls eh, babes, all them gals die over me, they go insane', he boasted, pulling the black hoodie on his head, manifesting his hunky-dory and cool side to her,
ridhima looked at him, yes, heck, hot is nothing, those dimples incite crazy feelings within her, his manly features send chills down her spine, his broad muscular chiseled body excites her senses, stimulating the darkest of temptations, she lowered her gaze, crimsoning slightly,
'see ye are blushin too...ye know you like me', he nudged her, giving a hard time, she ogled at the calm sea, trying callously to stop herself from bursting into giggles at his frisky behaviour,
he smirked seeing her, godd she is such a dainty gal, he sighed,
'm only messin', he maundered, liking the reposing atmosphere, with only calmness and softness...



Muskaan looked out the window, the club night replaying in her mind, why does he hurt me everytime we try to talk out things between us, whe does he never give me a chance to explain anything, why cant he hear my part of the story, she sighed, keening on the way he just decided to part ways after confessing that he likes her, why did it stab my heart, why
did i want to stop him,
she sat down on her bed when suddenly her phone started ringing, seeing his name flashing on the screen, another set of tears made their way out of her eyes, she pressed the green button,
'muskaan', he called out on the other end,
'what is it rahul...i thought we had parted em ways..why ye callin me now', she hissed, trying to stop her tears, trying to be strong,
'muzz i'm sorry..i know i've been unfair ta ye..gal..i shuldnt even be sayin all dis, it was rude nd ye n i both know that it was insane..it was mad but i didnt mean ta do it', rahul clarified his actions,
'rahul..i know ye didnt mean to do it, but you did and...thats yer problem..ye are impulsive, ye dont think before doing anythin...forget me i am just a friend rahul buh what...what about dem gals rahul..that ye crushed, that ye...just', she mumbled in between her cries and atlast disconnected the call, giving up,
'muskaaan..muskaan', he heard nothing but the dead end, aaa man, she's cryin, f**ksake, he threw his phone on the couch in frustration...



He smiled and looked around to see the walkways nearly marooned, the bustling streets of boston casually inactivating bringing the day to an end, The cafes and shops mopping up
the work nonchalantly, he sensed the dilating rejoice stirring within him as they walked towards the charters, the incense and aroma of coffee and scones turning stronger, he got a
whiff of the distinctive odor of the brewing espresso, the blending hot chocolate,
'aa mai god', his mind reminded him about his favourite cafe, which was situated in those charters,
he grabbed her hand, jolting her out of her thoughts,
'arre armaaaaan', she maundered, but it had no effect on him, he took her to the charters,
'lets have sum hot chocolate', he uttered animatedly,

She stopped grumbling as the redolence of the concocting caffeine snuffled in her nose, she viewed the board naming the exquisite cafe 'intrigue',
'hmm...but you didnt have to drag me, its not like i would've refused to the idea...godd', she moaned,
'shush..lets go', he kept a hand around her waist, taking her inside, wanting to just have that scrumptious beverage,

she widened her eyes in amazement and licked her lips, seeing the chocolate fountain, outpouring to the next level, the aura of chocolate suffusing in the atmosphere, her eyes
glittered seeing the hot, scorched muffins and croissants, 'wow', she pursed her lips, craving to eat it all,
he tittered at her, he had made out on their wedding night, how barmy she is about chocolate, aaa who doesnt ammy, just see that fountain man, he glimpsed at the divine chocolate bubbler and sighed,

'ridhima..ye have to try their hot chocolate with marshmallows...its just fit for a king..totally', he raved,
'no armaan...even better hot chocolate with whipped cream and marshmallows..wow', she joined her hands in ardor, remembering how she used to drink hot chocolate back home, with
extra frostings and toppings,
he smiled seeing her sparkling eyes, man she is the craziest bird ever, he chortled and moved ahead to order, while she feasted her eyes with the ambiance of the posh cafe,


'oh god i just love chocolates', she murmured, sipping her hot chocolate and then nipping the dark Belgian chocolate that came with it, as a goody,
'i can see that', he cackled, tucking his one hand in his pocket, savoring the confection, looking at her, munching her chocolate in delight, her perky side rousing indulgent feelings
within him, she looked elegant with her sleek hair flying in that cool breeze, those plush lips nibbling chocolate, aaa so wanna mush the hell outta them, he sighed, duddde what the f**k,
he shook his head, his mind flashing back to their kiss,
they were back to the harbour, walking along the tranquil sea, the city lights were brightening up the whole town, he loved Boston, it was truly a best place to live, busy and yet so peaceful,

'yer bod tells me things', he cracked, arduously going towards his dirty side, knowing that she doesn't like it,
she shot her head up hearing his comment, 'my bod', she raised her eyebrows, grasping his nagging tone, a bit addled with the happenings,
'gal it spits out facts', he badgered, discerning the reaction he was awaiting,
'wat facts', she pried into his little chafing session,
'aaa..that ye are a big fat ma', he heckled, wiping the grin appearing on his face, feeling certain on what her comeback is,
'fat ma...yaa right..you havent seen me yet', she blurted out, wanting to retort an answer, but pursed her lips, registering what she said, the blush rushing back to her cheeks,
he smirked and leaned in towards her, apprehending that her answer was just a ramble, her breathing rate quickened its speed, his insides laughed at her trembling hands that held the
heavenly hot chocolate in them,
'yet', he raised his eyebrows, grinning at her coyly, she looked down in embarrassment,
'yes and you are never seeing it, she elbowed him, recovering from her little slobber, trying to out speak, she wanted to put an end to the awkwardness they share, she wanted to be free and open with him, ridhima ab tujhe iske saath hi rehna hai, kab tak apni saari feelings apne tak hi rakhegi, her heart asked, his much needed space would still be there, nothing would happen to it if she opens herself a bit, he wont find it unusual, he is a friend, her mind answered,
'aaa..i see it..infact i've got a better scene in ma imaginations', he flirted, seeing her widen her eyes, her cheeks reddening with his every comment, her heart loving the coquettish tone,
'armaan', she mumbled, her shaking hands cumbering the already melted chocolate in her hands as those butterflies started causing exciting sensations in her pit, she was now very
well able to cognize his dirty mind, she was aware of his lustful imaginations, his personality yammers this coy side of him,
'you are such a straight shooter', she looked at him, sniggering, his dimples deepening in, wanting to kiss him there, she shook her head to disrupt the urge,
'its all for ye ma love...all for ye', he muttered, slashing his cocky grin to a passing blonde, checking her out, scrutinizing her, while she eyed his utterly sexy looks,

ridhima noticed how he simpered coyly at her and smacked his arm, resizing his x-ray eyes, 'keep your fishy eyes to yourself armaan', she groaned, he doesnt even care that he's walking with me, she tucked her fringe behind her ears, feeling disfigured, ridzi you are not that pretty, kyun baar baar false hopes mein chale jaati hai, the disappointment rushed back, irking her once again,
'fishy eyes..that was such a sexxy gal, one is suppose ta check her out', he babbled, as if it was the most obvious thing in this whole world, heedless to her disgruntlement, swamped up
in his own world,
'keep your suppose ta's to yourself armaan', she groaned, annoyed with him, he rolled his eyes at her, a bit addled with her unusual comeback, why's she takin it seriously, he thought,
'as if ye never checked out people or got along with any for dat matter', he muttered, she hoisted her head up, hearing his comment, sensing that their little conversation is slowly heading towards a banter,
'i never had any boyfriend', she stared at the ground, feeling a bit embarrassed,
his frowned look changed into an astounded one, aa mai god, is she for real, she's the sexiest bird ever man, who wouldn't wanna be boyfriends with her, what the f**k, if we wouldn't have
been in dis damn situation, then she probably would've been like my girlfriend, his heart popped out confessing this little truth, yes, she fitted well into his category of girlfriends, hell, she's the hottest bit*h i'd have ever done,
'oh em..', he stuttered, wanting to laugh out loud, he looked down, trying to suppress his cackles,
ridhima caught sight of his red face, wanting to laugh his ass out, she slapped his head,
'get over it', she sighed and went towards the bench, sitting down on it, feeling gloomy, why would anyone be my boyfriend, i am ugly,
he bursted out laughing, 'ooo riddhu, why did ye neva have any boyfriend..this is crazy...godd', he sat beside her, calming himself, k dudde chill, the thing aint that funny, just see her
bugged face, aaa man, her hands were folded against her chest, that elevated with her every breath, fomenting lickerish feelings within him, dudde, he mentally smacked his mind for
dozing off,
'k i know i was being a jerk ova there', he apologized, turning towards her, the thought of her not having any boyfriends irked him, does that mean the chicks like clean and vanilla, his mind dinned, ya buh she aint yer bird idiot, stay away from her, its only a walk ammy, dont get all cosy, his mind threw light upon his decision and pact,
'buh why did ye neva have any boyfriends', he raised his eyebrows, wanting to know,
she looked down in blue funk and shrugged, 'i don't know...maybe i didn't pay much attention to all of that', she fibbed,
he gave a strange look to her, 'ye know dats weird', he mumbled, only to receive a smack on his arm,
'you are weird', she sassed and folded her arms, while he smirked, finding it odd and hard to believe that some people dont have fun in their adolescent years...


Anjali took a glimpse of the full moon, remembering those fancy days of vacation, she never thought that the vacation she would be going on would turn out to be an awesome one, she
never thought that india would be a really nice place, with warm hearted people, her mind went back to how rahul and she were tossing grapes at each other, giving atul a chance to catch it as well, the guy was a crack, she smiled, remembering his jokes, his behaviour, his intellect, he was such a sensible guy to talk to, she sighed, the vacation's over, cant believe it, those two months just passed like a lickety - split man, she wanted them to last for longer, atleast for a month, Atul was a really nice guy, totally genuine, she mumbled, reminiscing armaan and nikki's wedding, she had the best time of her life...



He sighed, seeing her stop, near the railings, clutching them tightly, getting an eyeful of the beautiful sea, a beautiful smile playing on her lips, aaa man, she'll make me crazy someday,
'ye love the sea dont you', he asked, standing beside her,
'yup the sea is beautiful and so calm, i am soo impressed by your mom's choice', she complimented, mentally saluting her mother in law's mind for panning out such creative thoughts, the sea, the homely feeling, giving the atmosphere a mollifying touch, this was the best place if one had to settle down permanently, she thought,
'yaaa....she worked really hard in this house', he agreed, now that he paid attention to the fact, he could see how much work his mum had put in the house to make it a home, his heart
admitted that he never thanked her for being in his life, he never thanked her for doing so much for him, he never thanked her for being the best mum ever, yes, he had the best mum ever, she was just perfect in everything, dudde, ok may be you miss behaved a bit, A BIT, dudde ye never cared about yer maa, his heart blubbered in admittance,
she looked towards him, noticing his lost, remorseful face, she kept a hand on his shoulder,
'kia hua armaan', she questioned in worry, interrupting his chain of thoughts, he drooped his gaze on the ground, in regret,
'parents are so important in yer life...buh we dont notice their importance, takin it as just an everyday thing', he spoke out his thoughts,
she smiled, 'you are right, we loose our patience, our anger, our frustration and sometimes take it all out on them, when its not even their fault, we misbehave with them but in the end
they always support us', she mumbled, her eyes moistening up, missing her parents, her mother,
he nodded his head, darkly, wanting to head home and just apologize his mother for ignoring her, for never answering those questions, for never sharing that family time, for never making
her happy, he cant remember a single moment when all of them sat together and shared their days' events, he shook his head, staggered with himself,
she looked at him, 'yo', she came infront of him, 'i've never seen you thinking so much', she joked, confused as to why he's a bit down,
he gazed at her, his heart bursting in ardor, seeing her grace, her cheeks glowed seeing him gaping at her, his mind snoozing off, his heart awakening with warmth, she graciously beaded her eyes, he kissed her cheek, lingering his lips there for a second, their hearts raced for beats, he hugged her, expressing gratefulness for her every help,
'thanks', he mouthed, she coddled his back, digging her face in his neck, happy with his softheartedness
'it's ok', she whispered, her heart jumping with zeal in the tender mood,
He parted away and intertwined his fingers with her, 'lets walk home babes', he announced, 'okie', she teeheed, tired from their long walk, she just wanted to lie down and roll her ankles, both made their way back, hand in hand, getting away from the cool gusts of wind, with something beautiful to memorize...




ok guyz, that was part 18, i know its real short but believe me all the scenes here are momentous and i needed to show this walk in this particular context...lol, it cant be all lovey dovey the whole time, there has been some developments and you'll see it, okay i know the coffee promo was a bit tooo exciting compared to this part buh aaa this is my technique to make yous all desperate...also i know i have been a bit late in puttin up this part..i just dont know what happened..i lost track of days...sorry...!! k dont forget to comment/criticize...ill put them into action
if you find something really wrong..!! thanks a lot, no like a tonne for commenting on the promo and the previous update...i loved them...cant wait to see what you guyz write for this one..!!



Edited by suzzane14 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yeah...guess im the first one to comment!!😃
a lovely update suzzane.....👏
AR where really cute😳😳😳.....in this part armaan was also being considerate.....he is starting to consider ridz special....ridz like always was such a sweethheart😳...
there was a small RM part...looking forward for thier story.....love your ff....update soon
-prajna😳
Edited by cezzuprerna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOOWW amazinnnggg
suzzane babes you've done it again ;)
i can never get enough of your stories...
armaan is slowly starting to like ridzii [AWWWWWW]

Thanks for the Update and the PM (:
Do Continue soon.
LOve yOu LoadSz.
Raviie.x ;D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Suzi!!!
da update was beautiful dear...
AR'z relation is taking new steps...its really nice 2 see dat..
but i still feel sorry 4 Ridz...luks like she's trapped in a place where she cant even breath freely..
Armaan shud be a bit more sensitive 2wards her feelings ....😕😕
i know he's da modern ANGREZI turned guy ....but still..needs 2 learn sum respect 4 his "GIRL's" feelings....but he doesn't even consider her close 2 him yet....i mean he's still feels its LUST !!!!
well em lovin their bonding so far...da cafe scene was really YUM...
u were rite....it was a YUMMY update...i was drowning in da HOT CHOCO....😉😉😉
hope 2 see a start of AR's luv life in da next update.....
plzzzzzzzz cont. soon dear....waiting eagerly 4 a LONGER update....😊
newayz ....thanx alot 4 da PM sweety..
tc....lots n lots of luv
JIA!!!!❤️
Edited by pinkss - 15 years ago
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the part was real cute
i loved it
thanks for the pm
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Hey SUZ.....wow so happy that u finally updated....was dying to read it....aww they had some cute moment on the walk....wow armaan is such a flirt....he is like straight up flearting with his own wife...lol..but still it was really cute....aww love the ending part when they realise the importance of their parents..i mean it was such an importatnt piece to put in ur FF...i mean on today's day teenagers usually forget the importance of their parents...so nicely written...and thankx so much for updating.....i know i can feel the feeling armaan have for ridz....his ego is stoping him to realise this love for her....i love it wen he calls her bebes...co cute....lol...update soon..means wenever u have time...thankx 4 the pm.....

❤️MONA
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wow so happy that u finally updated....was dying to read it....aww they had some cute moment on the walk....wow armaan is such a flirt

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