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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Nice FF.Plz update sooon.Can you please PM me when you update next.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys,
Thanks alot for your wonderful comments & suggestions.Here is another part.Hope you like it.

Episode 2

Modi's Mansion

Ab:-Guys jaldi aao.

(No one comes.)

Ab:-Yuvraj & Siddharth.Ab aa rahe ho ya nahi?

Y:-Hey,bro.What's up?

Ab😡:-Ceiling.

Y:-Bro.Why are you so angry?

Ab:-Mera choro aur Mr.gadget-freak ko bulao.

Y:-Aap toh aise bol rahe ho jaise ki main usse bulaonga aur who aa jaaye ga.

Ab😡:-Fine.Agar who mujhe aaj Sanjeevani mein nahi deegha time pe toh uske saare gadgets main phak doonga.Make sure he gets to know about it.Ab main chalta hoon.I have to report in Sanjeevani.Meet you there.Best of luck & be calm.

Y:-Thnx.Bye.

Ab:-Bye.

(He goes.)

Y:-Aaj toh tu gaya bete.

(He goes to a room)

Y:-Abbe uth.

Si🥱:-Kya hai?Sone de na.

Y:-Bro,bohat gusse mein the.

Si🥱:-Tell something new.

Y:-You want to know something new then let me tell you this.Bro,told me that if you don't report in Sanjeevani on time then you better say good-bye to your gadgets because they will meet in dustbin.

Si(suddenly wakes up,no actually jerks up):-WHAT???

Y;-Yes.Better be fast or gadgets(whistles)Bye.I have to go.

Si:-Wait for me.

Y:-Srry no time.Meet you in Sanjeevani.

Si:-OMG!

(He gets ready fast & goes to Sanjeevani.)

Malahotra's Mansion

Ni:-Guys,I am going.Meets you there.

T & Na;-Ok.

Ni:-Bye.Bst. of luck.

T & Na:-Thnx.Bye.

(She goes.Then after sometime T & Na both goes.)

Sanjeevani Hospital

A:-Tum locker room jao.

R(nervously):-Ok

A:-Sunno

R:-Hai

A:-Take this.

R:-Thnx

(It was riddhima's favorite chocolate.They give each other side hug.

A:-Bst. Of luck.Be calm & bye

R:-Thnx & bye.

(She goes to locker room & he goes to his cabin.)

On a road

Ni:-Isse abhi hi kharab hona tha.Ab toh main gayi.Aaj toh Hitler jaan se maar daali gi.Then?

(Oh!Ab toh main ek senior doctor hoon.Ab toh mujhe Hitler kuch nahi kha gi par mujhe apne interns ke liye ek accha examples banna hai.Suddenly)

Ab:-Hey Niki.

Ni:-Oh!Hi.Tum yaha?

Ab:-Kyu?Nahi aa sakta kya?

Ni:-Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.

Ab:-Kya hua?

Ni:-Woh car kharab ho gayi.

Ab:-Kuch nahi hota.

Ni:-Huh?

Ab:-Aur nahi toh kya.Ab tumhare saath kuch time spend karne ka mauka mil jaayega.

(NOTE:-They are not enemies.They are frnds but in heart they have started accepting there love for each other.)

Ni:-Matlab?

Ab:-matlab ki ab tum mere saath chalo gi.

Ni:-Par?

Ab:-Par,war nahi.You are coming & that's it.

Ni:-Ok

(She goes & sits)

Ab:-Aaj kafi khush lag rahi ho.kya baat hai?

Ni:-Woh, interns mein mere sisters bhi hai.

Ab:-Tumhare bhi?

Ni:-Tumhare bhi?Matlab?

Ab:-Mere brothers bhi.

Ni:-Wow!Milana ok

Ab:-Sure.tum bhi.

Ni:-Ok.

(They reach Sanjeevani.)

Edited by ankitajain94 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Heyyy that was nice update
Waiting for the first day of interns at sanjeevni
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
add me to ur pm list.
U take all character ......................................r u sure u handel all of them together
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i luvvvvvvvvvved AN!! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
HEY!!
i really like ur first 2 parts!!!! =)
pplllzzz continue soon!!!
and also add me to ur PM list
THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
plz continue soon
and pm me when ever u will update
ur ff is fantabulas
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Hey Ankita... just read first 2 parts... great start... plz add me 2 ur pm list.. update soon.. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Sounds Interesting....!!!!
Nice update.....
pls continue soon....
Pls do pm....
Edited by mjhtnupurmayank - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Srry Guys for being late.Due 2 some personal reason I could not update.Here is a promo
A:-U all have 2 reoprt 2 me.
I;-Yes***********************************************************************************
S:-Bro.is so stric here.
G:-Ya
R:-It's his work.
M:-Stop taking his side.
R;-But
S:-Stop it.
G;-Let's go for our duty.
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A:-So how was ur day.
S:-Thnx 2 u tiring.
A;-I only did my job.
M:-For God Sake stop speakimg Ridz lines.
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I hope u like this promo.
srry for delaying

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