New ff *UNEXPECTED LOVE*[Mayur]-upd8 part 14 pg 51 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
lovely part dude!!!
twas really awesummmmm!!!
i luvd it!!!
waise to mujhe bhi apne ff ki aage ki story nai pata!!! =P
anyways!! twas an xelent upd8!!
cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm... =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
loved it!!!
it's so awesome
just love this ff alot
plzz plzz continue very soon
ur an awesome writer
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
gr8 update, but is he kidnapping her?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
its nice yaar bt was too short
next time update soon n with a huge part
n btw what is the mayank' s plan wat he wants to do?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
wowowow i really love your parts 1 and 2 contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Nice update... pls add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
it was a very gud part,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wat is the plan yaar eagerly waiting,,,,,,, thanx for the pm......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Hey guyz,

Here's the 3rd part… hope u all like it…

As nupur sat inside the Porsche, with Mayank at her side, she just couldn't believe her luck. She had been pleased when he had apologized that morning. But this was totally unexpected. Unexpected was an understatement…THE MAYANK SHARMA never gave ANYONE a lift. Even gunjan did not come with him. She came in a chauffer driven limo, but not with him. Then why in the whole wide world was mayank giving HER a lift?? They had not even known each other 15 days ago & even after ignoring her for so long, he was giving HER a lift, where had the sudden chivalry come from??

Mayank glanced at nupur from the corner of his eye. She seemed to be lost in her thoughts. What was she thinking?? No doubt that she was thinking about what a weirdo he was.

Mayank pulled the car into an alley that was a lane away from her house.

Nupur looked up, the screeching of brakes and the sudden stop of the car pulling her out of her reverie. To her surprise she found that the car had stopped in an alley that was a short distance from her house. She turned to look at mayank with questioning eyes.

Mayank looked at her eyes, they were full of questions. He took a deep breath and started talking very fast. He had to make her understand.

He said, "nupur, you will go into ur house, pack ur bag with clothes for about 15 days and come back here. I will be waiting, now, hurry up & do as I say. Mind u, no one should come to know about you leaving. Now go,"

Nupur stared at him as if he had gone mad. Clothes for 15 days?? Without telling anyone?? Did he have any idea how worried her family would be?? What about collage?? What about the fact that people would think they had run away?? Where would they be going anyways?? What he HELL was happening??

She would be hurting so many people by running away. Causing them so much anxiety, so much pain, samrat, mom, dad, her friends… by going with mayank she would be hurting so many people…so what if she loved mayank, she loved her parents, brother and friends too. Suddenly, she was furious. How dare mayank tell her to run away with him?? How dare he assume that one sorry would dissolve all that she had suffered for the last 15 days?? How dare he order her about & expect her to obey him??

Mayank could read the anger in her eyes as she stared at him. He had expected her to be confused and surprised, but not angry. He had spoken in a type of commanding, arrogant voice that no one ever questioned, not even his father. He had that aura of someone who had authority and knew what to do with it.

Nupur spoke & each word struck him like a hammer blow. She was furious & no one ever messed with her when she was angry. EVER. Now, she made an effort to control her voice as she said with deliberate force,

"Why?? Why the hell should I agree to come with u?? Who the hell are u?? The prime minister of India?? How did u assume that u will tell me to accompany u & I will, just like a well-trained, faithful puppy?? If u did assume something like that, it is a grave misconception. I am not coming anywhere with you." She said as she opened the door to step out of the car.

Mayank knew that she was right but he did not have any alternative. If she did not come with him, his entire plan would go down the drain. In a defeated voice, he called out,

"Nupur wait."

His defeated & tired voice tore at nupur's heart. After all, she loved him. Warily, she turned to face him.

He looked at her with pleading eyes and said, " Please, I will explain everything to you at the right time. Plzzz if u care for ur family, u will come with me. Plzzz. Trust me."

Her heart melted. "Why nupur, WHY is it so hard for ur silly heart to resist him?? Why do u become so vulnerable to him??" she thought to herself as she nodded at him slowly and said softly, " wait, I will be back"

Without waiting for his reply, she turned around and walked to her house to pack her things. It was with a heavy heart that she surveyed her room before walking out of the empty house and heading towards mayank's waiting car…

She pushed her bag in the trunk and sat down beside him. She turned to him and looked at him with expectant eyes.

" Okay" she said, " begin ur explanation."

Mayank looked at her. Looked at her eyes. They were full of trust. Trust, underneath which he sensed a raving curiosity.

He said, " The explanation will come. What's the hurry??"

There, he thought, his first, totally disastrous attempt at flirting. Her giggle made him avert his eyes and flush as she recognized his failed attempt.

That lightened the atmosphere. Nupur relaxed into the plush leather seat of the car and looked out of the window. She still did not know where they were going, but she trusted him, unconditionally.

The landscape outside turned picturesque and beautiful as they exited mumbai. Nupur loved all forms of natural beauty. She lowered the window and turned off the ac. The wind whipped past her and made her hair fly out in all directions. That made it hard for mayank to concentrate. He put on a soft jazz number, trying to concentrate on the road and not on her.

Nupur looked at the music player playing some English music & made a face. She did not like English songs. Mayank looked at her through the corner of his eye and smiled. He put on some old Hindi songs in place of jazz. She looked at him, surprised. "How did u come to know that I love old Hindi songs?" she asked him.

He shrugged, "just an hunch"

Nupur loved long distance traveling, it made her feel free, it let her think when her thoughts were in a snarl, it made her want to sing. The rushing air brought a smile on her face.

Mayank looked at her smiling face & momentarily forgot about his plan.

50% of his plan was successfully over. The most important part had been to make nupur come with him. That had been difficult, but had had satisfactory results.

Day gave way to evening and mayank stopped at a resort. The got off and entered the comforting lights of the beautiful resort….

To be continued…

There, finished typing at last!!!

Hope u all really like it…

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Hi sweety
Gr8 part
I Loved it
I just cant wait to read the next part



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