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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
very nice
thnxx 4 the pm..

thanks hun

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
sounds interesting
continue soon

thanks

will continue soon!

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#32

Originally posted by: Sneh-Jiwan
Great Love it honey !! Keep up the great work !! Appreciate !! You deserve this hun 👏

thanks sneh!

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

Nice character stretch Zoah

do pm me

when u update.

thanks rocking sis!

will defo pm u

Originally posted by: Senny
hey amazing work zoah, do pm me man. keep it up!

thanks senny

will defo pm u!

Originally posted by: humz_786
nice start plz add me 2 pm list

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#33

Originally posted by: maria_awan
nice dear do continue😉

thanks Di

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

👏
👏ohoooooooooooooooooooooo shonaaa.................ooooooooooooooooooooo
can't waittt shonaaaa😛
lagta hai jam ke mukabla hoga hoga😆
😆main aur hinnaaa diii
kya baat hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
👏ttoooo awsome👏
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also we r with nupsie our angel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳
shonaa now dooooooooooooooo start very soonnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't waittttttttttttttttttttttt
-sanam-

hey jaanu

thanks a ton yaar!

ya guna be tough competition lol

wil continue soon!

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#34

Originally posted by: tvgirl21
interesting continue soon.....
eagerly waiting
Ashna😳

thanks

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Originally posted by: sowmyap03
one more Mayur FF... grt...pls add me in ur pm list...

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Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha
another intersesting ff to read ....yay Pls pm me

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#35

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces
heyy nice one........ continue soon.............

thanks hun x

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Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic
Heyy Zoah, sounds good. do PM me :)

thanks Sonia

will defo pm u!

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
continue soon and pm me

thanks

will pm u!

Originally posted by: LUCYRIBEI
plzzz cont dear
sounds veryy interesting

plzz cont and add me in ur pm list okay

thx for the pm

love lucy

thanks hun

will continue soon and pm u!

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#36

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
hey i loved the intro......
do continue soon.........
and ya its obvious that u have to pm me.....

thanks mahi

will defo pm u!

Originally posted by: nikki028
new ff?gr8........plzz continue soon.......bt no sammy?😕
i alwz lov to c sammy as his best frnd or one among his best frnz...nywz mayur toh haina ismein.....toh i'l defo evn though i wishd kash sayank bhi hote.....nywz plz continue soooon

thanks Nikki

oh sorry hun but i wanted this to be little bit diffrent than the show thats y there is no sammy or gunjan or the rest of the gang!

will continue soon!

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A
wow!!!
cool intro dude!!!
cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)

thanks a lot huni

will continue soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

cool one do continue n PM me when u update

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#38

Part 1

This part is dedicated to

My girls (Hinna, Zoya, Rakhi Di, Praty, Sanu, Nabz, Mahi, Lina)

"Are you sure you won't have any problem? I mean you know what I mean", asked Nupur from other end of the phone.

She looks tensed and worried. Her eyes swallowed due to continually crying all night. She waited till morning to talk to talk to her friends. She could have ringed them at night, but she thought it was not appropriate to ring them at 3 am in the morning, so she waited till its 10 in the morning.

"Of course not man, even Hinna has no problem with it" replied Sanam, Nupur's best friend. She met Nupur and Hinna on msn while chatting online. After that the trio became best friends. Sanam and Hinna often visited Nupur and even Nupur used to go down London to meet the both.
"you positive na?" asked Nupur once again, which annoyed Hinna, who was listening to their convosation since last 15 mins and they were repeating the same thing. She could hear them as the phone was on the speaker. Finally getting irritated from the two, she picks up the reciever to talk to Nupur.

"Nupur, tomorrow 10am in the morning, I am coming to pick you up, be ready OK?" Hinna says in irritated rather funny tone, which made Sanam gigle

"OK Hinna, calm down. I will be waiting", replies Nupur.

"Look Nupur, mujhe nahin pata ki waha kya huwa jisse tune itna bada decision le liya, But honey, think twice before you take any step and don't get me wrong. I have no problem you coming here, living with me and Sanam, but it's all about your life", Hinna says with concern in her voice.

She very well knew that Nupur must have not take this decision in hurry, but still she wanted to confirm her.

"I will tell you everything once I come there, but trust me what I am doing is not wrong." Nupur replies emotionally, having tears in her eyes.

"Ok then, Don't worry about anything. We will pick you up tomorrow morning. Bye" saying Hinna placed the reciever on the phone and turns to Sanam, who is sitting on the leather couch wearing blue jeans and a plain white t shirt.

"What did she say?" asks Sanam to Hinna, who looks bit lost after talking to Nupur.

"Nothing really. She said she'll tell us everything when she comes here", Hinna replies.

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"Wake up you lazy fellow" Sonal shouts while entering Mayank's room. "I am sick of this habit of yours Mayank. Get up it's 11 o'clock, do you mind sleeping till this late?" Sonal complains while sitting besides his bed.

Sonal lives with Mayank since last 4 years. She came to UK, at her uncle's house, but her uncle kicked her out of the house in the middle of the night. It was Mayank who saved her and brought her with him at his house. Since then Sonal lives here. Mayank consideres her as his little sister.

"Please yaar, It's only 11 o'clock," then quickly removing the pillow from his face and sits back on the bed cursing himself. He looks dashing even in his night clothes. He gets out of the bed, moving towards the cupboard while talking rather shouting at Sonal.

"Couldn't you wake me up bit earlier than this? I am so going to be late for my enrolment", he turns to Sonal, who is dressed up smartly, wearing black trouser with white blouse. "Wow, everyone is ready except me, isn't that great?" saying he gets in the bathroom for a quick shower.

"Be quick. We are waiting in the car outside." shouts Sonal from outside.

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A lady enters Bhushan house, wearing black formal suit with her hair tied in a pony. She is Mrs. Sheena Bhushan, the mother of Nupur Bhushan. She is always cares about her business, kitty party. After the death of Nupur's father, Mrs Bhushan had to look afte everything, from business to family, but she took very good care of the business but could not do the same with family. Who was family anyway? only Nupur, her own daughter, her only family, but she didnt pay much attention towards her as much as a mother should. Though it was good thing that Nupur did not go on worng way fortunately.

"Nupur, Nupur", shouts Sheena from the downstairs on top of her lungs. Hearing her mother shouting, Nupur comes out of her room and goes to Sheena.

"Yes Mrs. Bhushan, did you just called me? I thought you would not remember my name, I am glad you did." Nupur says with no emotion in her tone neither on her face.

"Nupur, how many times do I have to tell you that I am your mother." Sheena replies annoying at the girl's reaction.

"Oh really? Do you remember that?" Nupur replies Sheena right on her face, with aggresive look on her face.

"Stop it Nupur! By the way forget this. What am I hearing? You are moving to London?" Sheena asks with agner on her face.

"I don't think I need to ask you about what I want to do? and anyway You got nothing to do with my life, nothing at all. I am going to London tomorrow, and I am not asking you, I am telling you remember that", Nupur says coldly before walking out of the house.

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So guyz

Here is the 1st Part

If you still want me to continue

Please comment!

Love ZoaH

Edited by Ansh_Arti - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

u updated!!! yay!!! interesting start...i loved the aggression in nupur...i dnt knw sort of pulled me towards it....and mayank is such lazy fella.....great part zoah...continue soon

edit: i just noticed that i'm the first one to comment....yay!!!....*kukuuu kukuuuu kukuuu* 🤣

Edited by zoya_me - 16 years ago