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Posted: 15 years ago
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My version of scene after Mayank comes to meet Nupur......

Mayank comes to nupur's room through the window. Nupur is crying lying down on bed. She looks at their picture together where she is in his arms and they both are looking into each others eyes smiling. She says "kya hum kabhi saath honge mayank.....is tarah itne khush."

Mayank with pain in his eyes and choked throat says....."haan Nupur hum saath zaroor honge.....aise hi itne khush......"

Nupur is surprised listening to his voice and suddenly turns to see mayank standing by the window side. Tears start rolling down her cheek, she runs and hugs him tight. For that moment she had no fear.....as all she wanted was to be in his arms, where she felt secured. She knew he will take away all her pain, will make everything alright, she knew that's where she belongs.

He holds her as tight as he could. His eyes were teary and his pain was unbearable. He has felt this pain before, fear of loosing the love of his life has haunted him before but this time it was different. It was not them who had to make choices it was someone else who would be deciding their fate. Mayank Sharma who has always taken his own decisions and was always in control of things was now left at the mercy of someone he doesn't even know, for the most important and biggest decision of his life. For the first time in life he is scared to death. The very thought of not being with the girl who is in his arms right now is killing him.

He doesn't wanna look into her eyes as he knows he has to be her strength but right now he is feeling too weak. Nupur kept crying with her face buried in his chest. She is too choked to say a word.

He then gathers all the courage and pull her back gently and slowly. He looks into her eyes which are now swollen red and filled with tears. He wipes off her tears and gives her a smile. For a minute they just look into each others eyes. They both were scared, vulnerable, hurt, sad, doubtful yet all they could see was immense love. The only thing they needed to see to ride this storm. Finally, Mayank breaks the silence.

M - "Tum theek ho? "

N - (in a restless, panicked tone) "mayank .....mayank ab kya hoga.... bui....."

Before she could say anything further mayank keeps his finger on her lips. ....."shh.....shant ho jao nupur"

M - "Main jaanta hoon ye sab is tarah nahi hona chahiye tha. Par ab isse aage jo bhi hoga usmein hum saath hai. Main tumse bahot pyar karta hoon nupur aur tumhe khud se kabhi door nahi hone dunga. Trust me."

N - "Main bhi tumhare bina nahi rah sakti mayank par bui?"

M- "Bui abhi gusse mein hai. Unhe ye sab baatein is tarah achanak se pata chali hain......unhe kuch bhi samjhane mein waqt lagega. Par tab tak humein himmat rakhni hogi."

N- "woh mujhe tumse milne nahi dengi mayank aur fir tum yahan par kab tak rah paoge......bangluru mein tumhara college....aunty...."

M- "tum us sab ki chinta mat karo nupur. Ma ko maine sab bata diya hai. Woh jaldi hi yahan aa jaayengi tumhari bui se baat karne. Aur tum ye sochna bhi mat ki main tumhe is tarah yahan akela chod ke chala jaunga. Ye hamari zindagi ke baare mein hai......ye hamare baare mein hai......jab tak sab sort out nahi ho jaata main kahin nahi jaunga."

N- (Holds his hand, looking straight into his eyes)......"tum saath ho to mujhe kisi ka darr nahi hai Mayank...."

M- (He takes her hand in his both hands and kisses it) He looks at her smiles and says - " main hamesha tumhare saath hun Nupur.....hamesha"

N - she rests her head on his chest as she feels relaxed now. He caresses her hair and says to himself......"main nahi jaanta aage kya hone waala hai.....jaanta hoon ye sab asaan nahi hoga.....par tumhe khud se door nahi hone de sakta.....isliye kitni hi problems kyon na aayein we'll face it. Main tumhare saath hoon....yahin tumhare pass."

They both just stand there holding each other finding comfort in each other's presence.

Suddenly they hear some noise at the door. Nupur gets worried.

N- "Mayank koi aa raha hai"

M- " mujhe jaana hoga nupur.....is samay is tarah mera tumhare saath akele yahan hona theek nahi hai.....bui ne dekha to baat aur bigad sakti hai......tum ghabrana mat." He keeps his hand on her cheek sort of reassuring her that everything will be ok.

Mayank rushes out of the window. The door opens and it's bauji.
Edited by muskan19 - 15 years ago
annie07 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Amazing Muskan..............simple and sweet.............wish we get to see smthing like this.............a combination of urs and Divz OS.................i loved it................hope for once our thoughts match wid CVs..............🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
I loved it Muskan...you just gave me a small ray of hope that Mayank will be saved from another bad situation.... I hope Bauji doesn't see him...
And the scene and dialogues you have written are too perfect.... beautiful scene.... I wish we get this exact scene.... I pray for Mayank....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
You couldn't resist....😆...loved it....as usual it is about Mayank hain naa...just kidding....the characters are inseperanle in the sense one can't be with out the another... Loved reading it......when I imagined it it was very emotional ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
very nice..hope the CVs think similarly....I would love to see a scene like this....😃
Piya_2009 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Hey muskan

Amazing OS.......Loved every bit of it....
I wish cvs thought like you.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
wow! muski.....awesome OS dear! i wish i wish this kind of thing happens in the show too..........i sooooo wanna c that hug....., & the convo between them was also so apt for the situation........i hope we get a scene like that in the show as a Christmas gift..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Mayank and Nupur stood looking at each other, Nupur looked down and gazed at the ring on her finger, the ring which Mayank put on her.................and now their relationship was official.............she was on cloud nine...........now no one will separate them ever.............

Mayank's mom realised that they need some time alone so she spoke up............"mayank, nupur..............beta tum dono ek walk ke liye kyun nahin jaate..........and then asked Nupur's bauji........."aapko koi problem to nahin hai na........"

Nupur's dad smiled and said " nahin, problem kya hogi........Nupur jao beta......."

Mayank and Nupur came out...........and started walking in silence, next to each other...........they had lot of things to say, lots on their mind........but was still shaken .............it seemed that the time has went back to their post confession stage.............when they were still reeling in the fact that they were together.............the feelings were same, emotions a bit different............

Mayank, slowly held Nupur's hand..........she stopped and turned to look at him...............he smiled at er..........and next minute, she threw herself in his arms and started crying.........Mayank's own eyes became teary, as he held onto her tightly, never to let go again.........

After a while when she didnt stop..........he softly pulled out of the hug, and caressed her head...........and said " bas Nupur, ab to sab thik ho gaya hai na, ab kyun ro rahi ho.........."

Nupur slowly stopped cruing, but was still sad..........Mayank made her sit on a bench, and held her hand.....and said "Nupur main jaanta hun, pichle kuch din hamare liye tough the, par ab to hum saath hai na...........aur hamesha rahenge............aur aaj to hamari sagai bhi ho gayi............tum yehi chahti thi na..........hamesha se........."

Nupur looked at Mayank, with all the love in her eyes...........and said "haan, par tum to nahin chahte the na........i m sorry Mayank.........ye sab meri wajah se hua...........meri ek galti ki wajah se, hum alag ho sakte the........"

Mayank cupped her face in his hands and said " par hue to nahin........pata hai kyun............kyunki hamara pyar in sabse strong tha..........tumhara mujhpe vishwas sabse badhkar tha.......aur rahi baat sagai ki ti main sach mein khush hun Nupur, ab hum hamesha ke liye saath hain..............aur ek saath hi apne sapno ko pura kaenge, hai na...........".........

Nupur smiled and nodded.........and rested her head on his shoulder..........saying........."Mayank, main tumhare saath hun, jo bhi tum karoge thik hi hoga.........."........Mayank smiled and then teasingly dded........"wo to hai........lekin Nupur, shaadi hum 2016 mein hi karenge........."

Nupur looked at him.......and said "mayank tum bhi na, by god............"...........and then both burst out laughing..........

and sat their for a while, relishing their togetherness..........

Edited by annie07 - 15 years ago
Mou. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
annie..loved it.....🤗.....hope cvs think like u & do the same in the show...& yeah! i m with mayank...no MN shaadi till 2016.please!!!!!!!!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Hey annie ..... Nice OS...... Loved it....specially 2016 wala dialogue... and when mayank assured her that he is really happy with the engagement....

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