hey ppl.....i'm really sorry.....i know i've broken my promise.......i had to updtae soon........ 1st my exams stopped me....... then the current track in mjht broke me down........ but now i'm all composed n back to normal.....n will be updating really soon!!!....... thanx for waiting so patiently for me!!....... do read n comment and this time i really promise that i'll update soon!!!........ and to compensate for my mistake...... this part is really long one!!!...... just for u all!!!....... thanx for reading my ff!!!!........ enjoy the long part-6...... love u all!!!.........
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Recap:- home coming haloween night to be held soon in the college......mayank as "nomad" invites nupur as "princestongirl818" to meet him in the dance.........mayank, sheena and gang come to nupur's cafe........mayank asks sheena for a break-up!!!!..........
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Part -6
Mayank suddenly put her arms around sheena's shoulders and turned towards her.....
M: sheena....we really need to talk privately.....
Sh: anything u're saying to me u can say infront of my friends....
M: okay!!!!.......i want a break-up!!
Sh: what????!!!!!!
Suhaani and gunjan together : what???
Samrat and benji together: what??
Sh: are u in love with somebody else??
M: i think so!!
Sheena looked shocked.....
Samrat n benji: what?? Who??
M: i don't know...
Mayank turned to sheena...
M: umm...we just can be....
Sh(pointing a finger at him): don't.....say the word 'friends'......
Mayank leaned a bit backwards.....
Sh (totally pissed off): now fortunately for u i'm gonna overlook this mental breakdown of urs...so just chill out....we're gonna get ready for the dance and i'll see u there....hmm?
She went away with her friends.....
Samrat and benji started laughing.....
S: oh well well well!!!....so shall we go???
M: u go...i'll come!!
They both also leave....they find nupur in the way and bid her...
S: good bye diner girl....!!
Nupur reached to their table with two glasses of lemon tea....
Mayank was almost getting up from the table!!!.....he saw her coming so put forward the money for the tea!!!
Nupur turned around and said-
N: don't worry bout that....
And went away without taking the money!!
Mayank sighed and looked down.....
She went away.......and reached the table which shilpa was wiping.....
Nupur place the glasses on the table......
Sh: u know those kids remind me of why i used to fight in school.....
Saying this she took away the glasses....and nupur did the further wiping....
Mayank left the diner and uday entered.....in full costume!!!!
U(loudly): have no fear!!!........zoro is here!!!
N: looked at him and smiled!!!
Uday suddenly started running to nupur....
U: and he got the keys who stands for saving.....(then looking at nupur).....u're not going to the dance u're supposed to are u??.....
N: uday....i'm not going......
Nupur raised the platform to enter the counter.....and uday tried to follow her but was asked to stay away frm the counter by shilpa.....
U: okay! Okay! Sorry.....what do u mean by u not going?? What about the cyber dude?
Shilpa: cyber dude??......is he talking bout the boy who's been sending u those love notes??
N: no u got that wrong.....those are not love notes.....they r e-mails.....
U: ooohhh!!!!.....(laughing)....
Shilpa: nupsi.....if a man has taken his time to write down his feelings for u, its a love note......keep that secret in miiiiiiind.....girl......
Shilpa said in a teasing tone......nupur smiling and blushing....both at the same time!!!!
U: and he wants to meet her tonight at the dance.....
Shilpa's smile grew wider.....
Sh: ......what are u still doing here???
N: i'm obeying orders....
U: oh nupur....that's u're true love!!!
N: so what?? True love has got to wait....!!!
Sh: oh girl!!...save out all that drama for the soap operas!!!!......u're going to the dance...
U(smiling widely, to shilpa): oh she's going to the dance girlfriend!!!!.....
Shilpa looked at uday.....
N: i can't go.....if dia finds out....she'll kill me!!! Then bring me back to clean up the mess!!!
Sh: if she wants to hurt u then she'll have to go through me!!
U (still in the hangover): u go ahead girlfriend....
shilpa, irritated by his repeated calling her 'girlfriend', turned towards uday with her eyes shortened and brows curved!!.......
Shilpa to Uday: call me girlfriend one more time!!!!
She said resting her right wrist on her hips....
U: okay! Sorry!!
Nupur smiled!!
Sh to N: nups ur dad didn't leave this earth wanting u to be unhappy!!!....its time for u to find ur own bliss!! Starting with this day!!
Shuklaji said from behind.....
Shk: nups.....u need to listen to shilpa.....hours u study, hours u work.....u need to take out time for ur self!!!
Another worker: y don't u go and freak out or whatever u kids do these days!!!
Nupur nodded slightly.....
N: u know, u guys r right!!......i never do anything for my self!!....
U: ya that's true!!
N: n i deserve to have some fun!!
Sh n others: ya that's right!!
N(putting down the wiping cloth): i'm gonna go to that dance!!!
Uday n all started cheering up!!!
N: n i'm gonna meet my true love and i'm gonna dance with him!!!
Sh: ya!! That's the spirit!!!....girl....very good....go ahead!!!
All started clapping!!!.......and nupur started smiling widely....and blushing simultaneously!!!!!
Suddenly her smile fainted.....
N: huh!!!....i can't go!!!.....
Sh: why???
N: i don't have a costume!!!!
Sh: hmm.....but u will!!!......r u coming zoro??
Shilpa asked pulling nupur with her!!!
Shilpa took her to a costume shop!!......
Just before they reached....the shopkeeper hung a 'closed' sign!!!
Shilpa went to him.....
Sh: hey!!adi.....nups needs a costume!!!.....
A: no no shilps....i'm closed for today!!
Sh: hey! Plzz let us in....i'll give u free breakfast for a week....
A(thinking for a while): make it a month!!!!
Shilpa smiled in her praise and they all entered the shop!!!
All became busy in searching a perfect costume for her!!!!
She tried on costume after another.....
uday also joined in and tried any accessory, that he found, that might suit him!!!.....
U(going through the stack): ummm....this one.....!!!!!!????
Shilpa refused it with a face!!!
A: aha!!......perfect!!!......
He pulled out a costume of a magician......which nupur tried!!!......
A(smiling widely): ........Olay!!!!
S(looking at him pathetically): no way!!!......
Then she changed into a witch's costume......
U(by then had worn a cap with a 'knife going cross through the head' stitched on it): u're killing me...!!!!!
Then she changed into a big soft toy piggy!!!....and danced shaking the bums!!!......this made everyone to burst out into laughter!!!!......
Then she tried a Hawaiian costume.....
U(wearing a spring up eye gear):.....aloha!!!!!.......
Shilpa looked first at uday then at adi!!!...
A: k I've got one!!....
and gave her a costume of a nun!!!......
and then into a soldier's armours!!!.......struggling with the lid of the helmet!!!!....
N(opening the lid, to shilpa): this is hopeless!!!........(n bang!!...the lid fell back).....
Shilpa leaned at the counter in helplessness......when she suddenly spotted a white eye mask!!
Sh: hey adi....just show me that mask!!!
He took it out and gave it to her....
A: but i don't have an outfit that goes with that!!!
Sh(adoring the mask): yeah but i do!!
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In front of shilpa's house....
Uday was waiting for nupur in his car.....
Inside shilpa's house....
Nupur was looking at a locket.... admiring it rather....
N: shilpa aunty....u do have an art of taking something simple and making it beautiful!!....
Shilpa entered the room with a large tin box in her hand!!!......
S(placing the box on the table): well u've seen nothing yet.....
They sat down on the sofa beside...
S: i had been saving this dress for my next attempt down the isle!!!.....
Nupur looked at her confused!!!!!.....
S(pausing her with her hand): hmmm.....long story!!!
She opened the lid of the box!!!....
Nupur was mesmerised by the dress!!!.......
N: umm....its.....its beautiful!!!......(after a pause).....aunty.....i can't wear that!!
Shilpa stopped smiling and turned towards her surprised!!...
S: yes u can!!!!.....n u will!!!!!......that dress has been in the box for so long.......it deserves a night out!!!!.....
Nupur was smiling widely!!!...
N(extremely happy n satisfied): let's go!!
S: aww its gonna look so good on u!!!
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ok guys that's for today!!.........
so nupur getting ready for the dance with the beautiful n famous cinderella costume........ (i'll give the description of the costume in the next part)........
its all like a dream for her.......
but do u think mayur will accept each other when they'll actually meet??? will they recognize each other n know the reality or will everything remain like a beautiful dream????.....
do tell me what do u think????.........
i'll really appreciate your comments!!!!......
Edited by prerna_agrawal - 15 years ago
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